The second draft of The Sorceress and her Lovers is done. It’s now ready for some editing.
I mentioned that the first draft was 82,309 words. The second draft is 82,688. It doesn’t seem like much difference, but I probably removed 2,000 words and added 2.400.
Here is a sneak peak at the chapter titles of the book:
- Bangdorf
- The God of the Sky
- Iolana
- The Bomb
- Peter
- The Creature Beneath the Fortress
- A Friendly Word
- An Adventure
- The Champion
- Angel and Demon
- Yessonarah
- The Hunt
- Zoantheria
- The King
- Chief Inspector Saba Colbshallow
- Friends and Relatives
- Tea
- The Machine
- Seifer Caldell
- Power
- Life in Birmisia Colony