The Voyage of the Minotaur: Terrence Dechantagne

As I mentioned yesterday, I am rereading and re-editing The Voyage of the Minotaur.  So, I decided I would spend some time this week talking about the characters in that book– my personal favorite.  The reason I like it so much is the characters, and I love them so much because they are so flawed.  Flawed characters are so much more fun to write.

Terrence Dechantagne is on the surface a heroic fellow.  He has a kind of Indiana Jones-esque quality.  At least that’s how those around him see him.  He doesn’t see himself that way though, because he knows what most of them don’t– that he is a drug addict.  His (very real) heroism is at war with his constant self-loathing.  Here are a couple of quick examples.

The first is when Yuah Korlann (one of the few that knows his secret) tries to take care of him.

He woke up with the strange sensation of something right above his face.  Opening his eyes, he saw that it was Yuah.  Her face was less than a foot above his.  They stared at each other for a moment.

“I thought I locked the door,” he said.

“You did.”

“And you’ve taken to breaking and entering?”

“In this case.  I had to make sure that you were all right.”

“You mean that you had to make sure I wasn’t ‘seeing’,” he said.

“Well….” She shrugged.

“Are you going to be my nursemaid from now on, or just for the rest of the day?”

“I haven’t decided yet.”

“Well, what now?” asked Terrence.

“Let’s walk around the deck for a while before dinner,” she said.  “You can be my escort and everyone can start talking about us.”

“See, I knew you still had a crush on me.”

“I don’t have crushes on addicts.”

“I don’t escort flat-chested bints,” he said.  “And I’m not an addict.”

“You’ll have to prove that to me,” she said.  “And I’m not flat-chested, not really.  Come on.  Get your boots on and let’s go for a stroll.”

Yuah continued to talk to herself while Terrence pulled on his boots.  “Some people can get anything they want.  Not me.  I’m just the flat-chested dressing maid that keeps saving his life.  He wouldn’t want to be seen with me though.  I’m just another Zaeri that he wouldn’t give the time of day to.”

“I didn’t say anything about you being a Zaeri,” he said.  “You know that’s not important to me.”

“It’s important to everyone.”

“It’s not important to me.  I learned a long time ago—Kafirite God or Zaeri God, he’s a heartless bastard.”

The second is when Terrence’s sister Iolanthe announces the name of their new colony.

“That’s fine,” said Iolanthe.  “The promontory is going to be the dock, the fort and the industrial area.  We won’t need many trees.  We will need a few though.  I’ll go ashore later and mark those to be spared.  It sounds as though everything is in order.  What are you gentlemen doing now?”

“I have the bridge,” said Staff.

“I’m going to take a bath and a nap,” said Terrence.

“I have to speak to Father Ian about arranging a wedding,” said Zeah.

Iolanthe looked at him and cocked her eyebrow.

“Corporal Bratihn has asked Mrs. Kittredge to marry him.  It will be the first wedding in the new colony.”

“See that it is done right,” said Iolanthe.  “This has to be a big affair with the whole colony taking part—the perfect event to inaugurate our city.”

“What will your new city be called?” asked Lieutenant Staff.

“Port Dechantagne, of course.”

“Of course,” said Terrence quietly.

Always Editing

The Voyage of the Minotaur I’m rereading Senta and the Steel Dragon Book 1: The Voyage of the Minotaur and doing some editing.  I really love this book and I giggle to myself when I read things that I had forgotten that I added to the story.  I’ll give you one example.  When the expedition first encounters dinosaurs, Professor Calliere remarks that they are related to dragons the way that apes are related to humans.  Both Father Ian and Zurfina make the same dismissive noise, father Ian because he doesn’t believe apes are related to humans and the sorceress Zurfina because she doesn’t believe dinosaurs are related to dragons.

As I’m reading, I’m editing.  There aren’t any changes in the story or language, but I have learned a lot about formatting since I created that book.  I’ve found a couple of dozen places that should have had a comma, and where there is a period– and vice-a-versa.  I have a feeling that I’ll be editing my books every year for the rest of my life.  I don’t really have a problem with that, though I would like to have perfection the first time.  That is one of the advantages of ebooks– I can make a change or correction and have it up at every bookstore in just a few days.

Here is the description of The Voyage of the Minotaur: In a world of steam power and rifles, where magic has not yet been forgotten, an expedition sets out to establish a colony in a lost world. The Voyage of the Minotaur is a story of adventure and magic, religion and prejudice, steam engines and dinosaurs, angels and lizardmen, machine guns and wizards, sorceresses, bustles and corsets, steam-powered computers, hot air balloons, and dragons.

I invite you to check it out.  It is my favorite of all my books.

The Scarecrow

It’s not often somebody combines a decent game app, a very clever marketing campaign, and a brilliant little film– though people try often enough.  This is one great little video, but what really makes it is Fiona Apple’s hauntingly beautiful rendition of Pure Imagination– one of my all time favorite songs.  Check it out.

Women of Power – Free Ebook

Women of Power NewThe life of a superhero is tough. All American Girl fights supervillains, alien invaders, and terrorists as she tries to get product endorsements and a magazine deal. That’s nothing compared to her private life though. She’s only just broken up with her super boyfriend Perihelion when he’s scooped up by Omega Woman, and now rival Skygirl has moved into her territory.

Women of Power is a superhero adventure and you can pick your copy up at Smashwords free all during the month of September if you use the coupon codeCG55A at checkout.  Follow this link to Smashwords.

New Update of Senta and the Steel Dragon: Brechalon

Brechalon: Nils Chapman & Karl DruryAs I write this, the latest update of Senta and the Steel Dragon book 0: Brechalon is now available at Smashwords and should be at all other fine purveyors of ebooks very soon.  The new update includes the correction of a few typos, as well as the inclusion of the Senta and the Steel Dragon Encyclopedia which has been posted in parts here over the past few weeks and a map of part of the Senta and the Steel Dragon world.

As always, Brechalon is a free download.

I have to say that I really enjoyed reading my book again as I was working on the encyclopedia.  That probably sounds egotistical, but I write for myself first and foremost, so it really only makes sense.  I do think that this story is very dependent on the rest of the series.  It’s really additional material, rather than a story on its own.  If you’ve read it, I’d really appreciate hearing what you think of it, whether you have read the rest of the series or not.

Princess of Amathar – $2.99 at Kobo Books

Princess of AmatharTransported to the artificial world of Ecos, Earth man Alexander Ashton struggles to understand the society of his new friends the Amatharians. As he does so, he finds himself falling in love with their princess and being thrust into a millennium-long war with their mortal foes the reptilian Zoasians. Princess of Amathar is a sword-swinging novel of high adventure.

Find Princess of Amathar wherever fine ebooks are sold, or follow this link to Kobo Ebooks.

The Voyage of the Minotaur – $2.99 on the Sony Reader

The Voyage of the Minotaur In a world of steam power and rifles, where magic has not yet been forgotten, an expedition sets out to establish a colony in a lost world. The Voyage of the Minotaur is a story of adventure and magic, religion and prejudice, steam engines and dinosaurs, angels and lizardmen, machine guns and wizards, sorceresses, bustles and corsets, steam-powered computers, hot air balloons, and dragons.

The Voyage of the Minotaur is book 1 in the Senta and the Steel Dragon series and can be yours on your Sony Reader or Sony Reader App by following this link.

The Many Adventures of Eaglethorpe Buxton $2.99 at Diesel Books

Eaglethorpe Buxton MiniEaglethorpe Buxton, famed adventurer and story-teller, friend to those in need of a friend and guardian to those in need of a guardian. He is a liar and braggart, not to be trusted, especially around pies. Who are we to believe? Buxton himself leads us through The Many Adventures of Eaglethorpe Buxton. This volume includes the previously published Eaglethorpe Buxton and the Elven Princess in which our hero comes to the aid of… a poor orphan? An elven princess? And Eaglethorpe Buxton and the Sorceress. When the sorceress, subject of Eaglethorpe’s play arrives with fire in her eyes, the hapless story-teller must pretend to be his good friend Ellwood. Will he pull off this charade and survive? And what happens when the real Ellwood shows up? One can never tell, especially when Eaglethorpe tells the story. Plus thrill to three all new Eaglethorpe stories. In Eaglethorpe Buxton and the Queen of Aerithraine, our hero is back in his homeland, just in time to stop a mysterious murder, meet the Queen, solve the mystery of his best friend, and face off against a zombie apocalypse! In Eaglethorpe Buxton and the Amazons, our hero and his new friend Percival Thorndyke tramp through the horrible, stinking, insect-infested land of Ennedi in search of treasure. Eaglethorpe must deal with man-hating Amazons, jungle-dwelling goblins, vicious centaurs, the dreaded and feared frog-bear, and a companion who seems determined to get himself killed. In Eaglethorpe Buxton and the Day of the Night of the Werewolf, the famed story-teller is sent to hunt down an unusual werewolf and manages to run into practically everyone he has ever met along the way. The Many Adventures of Eaglethorpe Buxton is a farcical fantasy of heroic proportions, sure to elicit more giggles than gasps.

Get the ebook by following this link to Diesel Ebooks, or look for it wherever fine ebooks are sold.

His Robot Wife: Patience is a Virtue – $2.99 for Kindle

PatienceIt is the year 2037, when men are men and robots are cute. Patience, the robot wife, has a new friend– Wanda. Wanda, another Daffodil, has been having difficulty bonding with her human, the recently divorced Ryan. She hopes that with Patience’s mentoring, she’ll be able to help Ryan accept her into his troubled life. But even Patience isn’t prepared for what happens when they take a joint vacation cruise to Antarctica. His Robot Wife: Patience is a Virtue is a science fiction story in a world where technology is more than just a pretty face.

His Robot Wife is available for the Kindle at Amazon.com.  Follow this link, or look it up from your Kindle device.

Note: I wanted to recognize the anniversary of 9/11 yesterday, but I couldn’t think of anything to say that was original and wasn’t trite, so I decided to say nothing at all. 

The World of Senta and the Steel Dragon: X-Z

The Two DragonsXygia: About -2650, tribes from central Sumir migrated to the land of Argrathia, interbreeding with the remaining Argrathian stock.  Bringing new farming techniques, they prospered and formed a complex society.  By -2000 Xygia was a powerful empire.  By -1000 it had grown to cover most of eastern Sumir.  By year 0, most of Xygia was conquered by Magnus the Great.  After the death of Magnus in year 7, Xygia again became an independent kingdom, although Zaeri had become the dominant faith.  In year 9, Kafira Kristos began teaching in Xygia.  In year 13, she was tried for heresy and crucified.  Almost immediately her small cult expanded into a religion.  In 16, Kafirism became the dominant religion in Xygia.

Year: A year consists of 375 days.  The yearly calendar established by King Magnus the Great, consists of twelve 30 day months and one 15 day month.  The months are, in order: Restuary, Festuary, Treuary, Quaduary, Pentuary, Sexuary, Septuary, Octuary, Novuary, Decius, Magnius, Kafirius, and Hamonth (Half Month).

Year in Hell, A: A Year in Hell by Abban Keiman tells the story of a midshipman in the Brech navy.

Zaer, Kingdom of: The Kingdom of Zaer was one of the successor states of Magnus the Great’s Zur Empire.   Kafirism became the official religion of Zaer in year 129, and for 300 years, some of the worst persecution of ethnic Zaeri occurred there.  Zaer and neighboring Mirsa combined in 1744 to become modern Mirsanna.

Zaeri: The Zaeri religion began in ancient Zaerphon as an offshoot of the Ballar Pantheon.  In Neo-Zaerphon, Zaeri became a monotheistic religion and over the next two thousand years, spread over northwest Sumir.  One of the new converts to Zaeri was the Kingdom of Archero, where great works based on Zaeri themes were created.  This inspired King Marius of Zur to conquer Archero and to adopt Zaeri as the official religion.  When his grandson, Magnus the Great, conquered the known world, he spread Zaeri religion across the continent.  But in year 16, a variation of Zaeri, Kafirism, rose to replace the original church.  By modern times, Kafirites dominate the world.  Fewer than 5% of humans are Zaeri adherents.  Modern Zaeri worship in shrines, relatively small and unobtrusive houses of worship, and are led by a religious teacher called an Imam.

Zaeritown: The portion of any city that it predominantly Zaeri in population, the term Zaeritown may be fairly innocuous as in its use in Birmisia, or it may refer to ghettos as in Freedonia.

Zaerphon: A huge empire built from the ashes of Ballar, ruled by the priest-kings of the god Jormah (who had been a sky deity of the Ballar pantheon).  Over the course of 700 years from -2600 to -1900, the Zaeri (worshippers of Jormah) gradually became a monotheistic religion.

Zeets: A derogatory term for those of the Zaeri faith or ethnicity.

Zur, Empire of the: The most important ancient civilization, Zur was founded by migrants from the northern coast of Sumir.  From about -1100 until -180, Zur remained a small empire, copying the culture of the Olgons and the Zaerphon.  In -180, King Marius began expanding, conquering Archero (converting to Zaeri) and defeating the Tu-Riven.  When Marius died in -19, his grandson Magnus succeeded him and began a great journey of conquest around the continent.  When he completed, his “unification of the world,” Magnus declared a new birth of civilization, established a new calendar, and spread the Zaeri religion across the known world.  When Magnus died in year 7, his empire split into eight successor states.

Zurelendsviertel: A Zaeri ghetto in the Freedonian city of Gartow, Zurelendsviertel was home to as many as 100,000 ethnic Zaeri crowded together at gunpoint by order of King Klaus II.  Many thousands died of starvation, while others were murdered by Freedonian soldiers.