iOS 7 on my Phone

Well, I’ve been playing with iOS7 on my phone for a couple of weeks now.  I have to say that in the end, I don’t like it nearly as much as iOS6.  I actually like the parallax and the zooming, those features that are so often criticized and accused of making people sick.  I think they look good.

What I don’t like is the redesign of the apps.  All the white and overly-simplified styling just doesn’t look as good as the old apps.  What’s worse, all the non-Apple apps I know and love feel they have to change to match.  There are a lot of changes that just seem to be made for no reason at all, like round buttons on the phone keyboard instead of square.  It doesn’t look as good.

A lot was made of the change in Siri’s voice.  I use Siri all the time and I don’t like the new voice as much as the old one.  It sounds MORE computer-like.  I don’t know why anyone would have made that change.

Plus, the games that I play on my phone (I only play a few) are noticeably laggy on the new OS.  This last fact will be negated when I get my new phone in a few weeks.  I still love the iPhone.  We have one iPhone and two Androids in our house and the iPhone is so much better in so many ways that it isn’t funny.  Still, I’m going to long for the days when my iPhone and my iPad were so much prettier.

The Dark and Forbidding Land: Zurfina

The Dark and Forbidding LandI’ve shared quite a bit about Zurfina recently.  She is a really fun character.  She was originally based on a character from a Dungeons and Dragons game that I played with my kids years ago.  I just changed the spelling of her name a bit.  She was one of two magical sisters.  Her sister, Myolaena, became the basis for the sorceress in my story Eaglethorpe Buxton and the Sorceress.

Now though, Zurfina has her own new story and her own new world to inhabit.  I built her into the fabric of the world.  Her name became the name of a famous person in ancient times– Zurfina, the daughter of Magnus the Great, and it became the basis for the ancient kingdom of Zur, which Magnus ruled.  It was Zur that then became the religion of Zaeri, which is a major part of the story line– and Zurfina herself is 1/2 Zaeri.  It all kind of came full circle.

Here is a scene from The Dark and Forbidding Land featuring Zurfina.  I like it because we see Zurfina being very scary, with probably the only person in the world who isn’t that scared of her.

Senta plopped down in the chair and kicked her overs off, followed by her shoes and her socks.  Tucking her legs up under her, she wrapped her coat tightly around her.

“It’s too cold.”

The dragon rose from his spot by the stove and climbed up onto the chair.  He draped his body over the chair back and wrapped his tail around her.  Curling his long neck around so that he could look her in the face, he asked. “What is the matter?”

“I worked all day making those potions.”  She pointed to several small vials on the kitchen table.  “So when I finally get a chance to go out and play, everyone has gone home for the night.  What am I supposed to do now?”

“Your lessons?”

“Oh, you’re a big help.  Why don’t you do my lessons if they’re so great?”

“I do.”

Senta stuck out her tongue.  Bessemer mirrored her action.  She frowned at him for a moment, but then grabbed him around the neck and pulled his scaly face to hers.

“I’m sorry.  I’m just bored and tired, and I’m really ready for winter to be over.  It’s too damn cold.  By the way, where is Zurfina?  She’s supposed to tell me whether my dionoserin is any good.”

“Upstairs.”

“Where upstairs?”

“Her room.”

“Is she alone?”

“No.”

“Is Jex with her?”

The dragon nodded.

“Again?”

He nodded again.  Then he climbed down from the chair and headed for the door.

“Happy hunting,” said Senta, though she herself seemed anything but happy.

“Toodle pip,” said Bessemer, and then he was gone.

 Senta made her way up the stairs, past the rooms designated for Bessemer but almost never used, up to her own room.  She peeled off her clothes and ran a hot bath for herself.  Once she was clean and warm, she put on her warmest night clothes and headed back down to the kitchen for something to eat.  She stoked the fire in the stove and added two logs before heading for the froredor.  But something stopped her.

Sitting there on the kitchen table, just where she had left in that afternoon, was the small clear vial filled with silvery liquid.  Dionoserin.  A bottle just that big sold for thousands of marks.  Of course it was illegal in Brechalon, but they weren’t in Brechalon anymore.  Did it work?  Did she grind the walnuts up enough?  Did she maintain her aura?  Taking two quick steps to the table, she snatched up the bottle, pulled off the cork stopper, and drank it down.  What’s the worst that could happen?

“Well, I could die,” she said aloud.

She didn’t wait to see if she would die though.  She ran up the two flights of stairs to her room, and then crept up one more flight stopping just before she reached the level.  She slowly peered over the top step and into Zurfina’s room.  She had a good idea what to expect.  Senta had lived with the sorceress almost two years now.  During that time Zurfina had entertained a number of male admirers.

The first thing that Senta saw was Mr. Jex, standing in the middle of the room.  She was happy to see that he was fully clothed.  The second thing Senta saw was Zurfina, and she was not.  She was posed upon her bed, her head hanging over the edge, so that she was looking at Mr. Jex and everything else upside down.  Her blond hair draped down almost to the floor, hiding her little bald spot.  Her crossed legs were sticking straight up in the air.  Mr. Jex stared at her for a moment before turning back to a large canvas and poking at it with the paint brush.  He was standing between Senta and the painting, but she didn’t need to see it to know what it was.  Zurfina was having another nude painting done of herself.

Senta slowly climbed the last four steps and walked around Mr. Jex so that she could see the painting.  He really was quite good.

“What do you think Pet?” asked Zurfina, without moving from her pose.

Startled, Jex turned around to look at her.  He had a small paint pallet in his right hand.

“I think it’s time for you to go,” said Senta.

Jex looked like he was going to say something, but then stopped and setting his pallet and brush on the floor, turned and went swiftly down the stairs.  Just as the sound of the front door closing echoed back up, Zurfina sat upright and in a fluid cat-like motion got up from the bed.

“Put on some clothes, Fina.”

The sorceress made the smallest of gestures with her right hand and suddenly she was clad in a long, silky, black dressing gown.

“Are you ready for something to eat, Pet?”

“Yes,” replied Senta, a sly smile creeping onto her face.  “I don’t think you should magic it though.  I think it would be nice if you made me supper with your own hands.”

Zurfina walked slowly across the room and then bent down so that their noses were just inches apart. 

“It seems to me like the Drache Girl is getting a bit big for her knickers,” she said without a hint of a smile.

“Um… my dionoserin didn’t work?”

“It worked.  Did you not see Mr. Jex scurry out of the room like a frightened buitreraptor?”

“But you’re not going to make me supper, are you?”

“Did you actually believe that you could dominate me with a potion?  Me?  ME!”

“No supper then?”

Princess of Amathar – at Barnes and Noble

Princess of AmatharMy first book, Princess of Amathar is an adventure story and an homage to Edgar Rice Burroughs, to whom I owe a great debt of youthful reading pleasure.  It is available everywhere fine ebooks are sold, including Barnes and Noble.

Transported to the artificial world of Ecos, Earth man Alexander Ashton struggles to understand the society of his new friends the Amatharians. As he does so, he finds himself falling in love with their princess and being thrust into a millennium-long war with their mortal foes the reptilian Zoasians. Princess of Amathar is a sword-swinging novel of high adventure.

Writing in the evening

Lately, when my wife has picked me up from school, I notice that my energy just seems to dissolve about the time we reach home.   If she doesn’t ask me how my day was before we get there, she’s not going to get an answer.  I’m just too tired later.

I get home and try to write.  I wrote for what felt like three hours this afternoon and into the evening, and I looked back and realized that I had only composed about a page and a half.  Granted, this was a part of the story that I had not plotted out completely in my head before writing, but still… I can’t help but feel like I’m in slow motion.

All that being said, I am really happy with what I’m writing.  I’m really looking ahead to November and December though.  Those are the best months of a teacher’s work year– lots of holidays, including for me here in Nevada… Nevada Day.  If I can get a half a dozen days in a row to write, I’ll be able to knock out Love and the Darkness.

I hope all of you are doing well and are in good health.  Have a happy October.

 

The Voyage of the Minotaur: Pantagria

The Voyage of the Minotaur

One of my favorite characters from The Voyage of the Minotaur doesn’t really even exist– at least not in the world of the story.  Pantagria may be a figment of the imagination, or she may be the effect of a magical drug on the brain– or does she exist in an alternate dimension.  Pantagria is who Terrence visits when he uses the magic drug white opthalium.

When I originally plotted out the series, Pantagria only apeared in book 1.  When I decided to shoehorn book 4 into the mix, I had her appear again because I really like her.  Then we get hints about her in book 5, but don’t actually see her.

For those who are hoping to see Pantagria again, she makes a BIG appearance in book 6.

Here is a scen from book 1:

Lying on his stomach on the small single bed, Terrence Dechantagne breathed a heavy sigh as Pantagria rubbed his back.  Her powerful fingertips found every sore muscle, every angry nerve ending, every spot filled with fatigue or stored unease, and kneaded it out of existence.  He could feel her naked buttocks sitting on his and her naked legs on either side of his stomach.  Both were warm, far warmer than a human body should be, as if she was running a fever, but then she wasn’t human.  She wasn’t even real. 

She finished massaging him and got up, walking across the small room.

“How was that?” she asked.

“Good.  Very good.”

He closed his eyes and savored being here, where he felt so good.  This was only the second time in a fortnight that he had been able to find a place for his real world body to lie undisturbed while he “saw” the world in which he truly felt he belonged.  He drifted off into a slumber and wondered in his half-awake state, if he fell asleep here and began to dream, what world would he find himself in then?  Would he dream himself back into the real world?  He didn’t want that to happen, so he forced himself awake again, and sat up on the bed.

Across the room, Pantagria stood in front of a wall mounted mirror.  Her graceful, tanned body was the very picture of perfection.  Her snow white feathered wings were outstretched, almost touching the walls to her left and right.  Their broad expanse shielded her head from his view for a moment.  He stood up so that he could see her perfect, beautiful face.  Only then did he see what she was doing.  She had a straight razor in her right hand, and with her left hand, she was gathering great bunches of her golden hair and slicing through it.  Half of her head was already denuded.  In some places the hair that was left was an inch or two long, in other places, she was left nearly bald.

“What are you doing?” he asked, more shocked by this unusual behavior than he would have been if Iolanthe or Yuah or some other real woman had done it.

“Do you remember when you came to me last time?  It was the night of the dance.”

“Yes, I remember.”

“We didn’t dance,” she said, as she continued to hack away at her hair.

“I didn’t want to dance,” he said.  “I wanted to make love to you.”

“Do you remember what you called me?”

“What I called you?  No.  I don’t remember.”

“You should.  You call me the same thing every time you visit me.”

 “What did I… what do I call you?”

“You called me ‘perfect’.”

“You are perfect.”

“I’m tired of being perfect,” her voice became a growl.  “I want to be real.  I want to be in the real world.”

“You can’t be,” he said.  “I don’t want you to be.  This is all just a dream.  This is my dream.  This is my haven.  This is where I come, because I can’t stand life in the real world.”

She folded her wings and turned around.  Only a few stray bits of long hair remained on her head.  She placed the palm of her hand on his chest and shoved him back onto the bed.

“If I can’t be real because I’m perfect, then I’ll make myself real by making myself imperfect.”  She turned back around and began to use the razor for its original purpose by shaving her head, starting on one side and moving across.  Terrence watched her in stunned silence.  She scraped the razor again and again across her head, leaving numerous small red scratches and a few cuts from which tiny red rivulets of blood flowed.  She shaved her entire head bald.

“Pantagria,” he finally said.  “I don’t think this is going to help you or me.”

She turned around once again, stepped toward him, and placed her left palm on his cheek.

“How do you know?” she asked, and then kissed him on the lips.

“This world isn’t the real world.  It’s all in my mind.  There’s no way to go from here to there.”

She hissed.  “You do!  You do it all the time!”  She swung her right hand across his face.  The blade of the straight razor sliced through both his nostrils.

The Dark and Forbidding Land: Bessemer

The Dark and Forbidding LandJust as I did with Senta in The Dark and Forbidding Land, I had to figure out what Bessemer was like, having already written him in book 3.  In The Drache Girl, he was as big as a pony and quite loquacious.  In The Voyage of the Minotaur, he was cat-sized and barely spoke.  So he fell right in the middle for this book.

This is a scene in which Bessemer seeks some vengeance on a man who has been causing grief to his favorite human.

Cissy left the parlor, passed through the foyer, and picked up the bag of rock salt by the door before going outside.  Once in the garden, she began walking up and down, spreading the salt on the cobblestone paths and the stepping stones.  She looked up at the dark clouds moving in from the north.  If Toss had been there, he would have been able to tell her if this was going to be the last storm of the cold season.  He wasn’t there, and it was unlikely that Cissy would ever see him again.

Just then Mr. Streck walked through the front gate.  Cissy was about to turn around so that she could go inside and inform Mr. Dechantagne of the Freedonain’s arrival, when she saw a bright glint shoot across the otherwise gloomy sky.  The object, which it took no great intellect to recognize as the steel dragon, swooped downward.  Streck had taken four steps into the yard, when the beast shot by his face so fast that he could not have seen what it was.  Cissy was watching it as it sped by, and could tell not only what it was, but could see that it was carrying something wrapped in white paper, clutched tightly to its chest.  The dragon was already out of sight when the Freedonian let out a blood-curdling scream.  Looking back at the man, the lizzie could see cuts across his nose and both cheeks that suddenly began to bleed profusely.

She hesitated as red blood oozed from between the fingers held to his face.  Saba Colbshallow suddenly appeared at the gate and rushed to the man’s assistance.  He took him by the shoulder and rushed him toward the house.  Cissy quickly took Streck’s other shoulder.  Before they reached the steps, Streck’s legs gave out beneath him and he crumpled into half consciousness.  Tisson rushed down the steps and took his legs while Saba and Cissy carried him by the arms.

Once inside, Streck was rushed to the dining room, where amid much shouting and hissing, he was laid out on the great table.  Mrs. Colbshallow arrived from the kitchen and immediately ordered that clean linens and tincture of iodine be brought.  Just as Clegg was arriving with the requested items, Mrs. Dechantagne-Calliere stepped into the room carrying a brown bottle of healing draught.  Streck’s face, upon examination was seen to have five razor thin slices, quite deep, across its width.

“Yadira, send someone to fetch Dr. Kelloran,” said the governor as she leaned over the wounded man and carefully poured the potion onto the cuts.

“I don’t need a doctor,” said Streck.

“Be quiet.  This is your face.  We need to make sure that it isn’t scarred.”

Clegg was sent as directed and by the time he returned with the doctor, Streck, no longer bleeding, had been moved to the parlor.

Cissy had seen Dr. Kelloran before.  She was easily recognized for her more pronounced female characteristics.  She usually also, as she now did, carried her small black bag.  Sitting down on the sofa next to Streck, she carefully examined his face.

“The healing draught seems to be knitting the skin together nicely, but I still want to put a stitch or two on this nose.”

“Ouch!” cried Streck, as the stitches were sewn.  “Damn Birmisian birds.  It flew by so fast I didn’t even see it.”

“Birmisian birds don’t fly, at least none that I’ve heard of,” said Mr. Dechantagne from the doorway.  His wife was standing with him.  “We have a few large flying reptiles, but I’ve never heard of one attacking a person.”

“Saba?” asked the governor.

“Sorry, I didn’t see it.  I heard someone cry out and came running, but whatever it was, was gone before I got there.  But your lizzie was in the yard.  Maybe she saw something.”

“Cissy?” asked Mrs. Colbshallow.  Cissy took a step back as all of the human eyes in the room focused on her.  “Cissy, what did you see?”

“It was the little god,” she replied quietly.

“Little god?”

“She means the dragon,” said Mrs. Dechantagne.  “Zurfina’s little dragon.”

“It seems, Mr. Steck,” said Governor Dechantagne-Calliere, “that you have made a powerful enemy.  Just what have you done to Zurfina to raise her ire?”

“I have not even seen the woman.”

“He didn’t do anything to Zurfina,” said Saba, frowning.  “I’ll wager he didn’t do anything to the dragon either.  But he has had at least one well-known row with Senta.”

“That child belongs in an institution,” said Streck.

The Dark and Forbidding Land: Senta

The Dark and Forbidding LandAs I mentioned the other day– and have talked about on more than one occasion, I had already written book 3 of Senta and the Steel Dragon before writing book 2.  Knowing what was going to happen with the characters, I extrapolated a year and a half back and fit them into the new book’s plot.  In some ways this worked well, and in others it didn’t.  There are some spots in which I think Senta acts a little more immature in book 3 than in book 2.  On the other hand, that happens to all of us now and then.

I also had to extrapolate how the town of Port Dechantagne was going to look.  In book 3 there was a thriving town square, so in book 2 it had to be under construction.  Here is the scene from The Dark and Forbidding Land when Senta first visits town square.

It was a walk of only about three hundred yards from the new home Zurfina the sorceress and her ward to the large gate in the protective wall that divided the now completely subdued peninsula from the large and still untamed forest.  When Senta reached the gate she found a great deal of activity.  A town square had been built just outside the gate some months before, and it would eventually be the center point of the colony.  A new flagpole had been delivered on the last ship and two men, while a small crowd of men and women watched, were erecting it.  That was not all that was going on though.  No less than three good-sized buildings were under construction around the square despite the frigid and damp weather.  The two new buildings on the east side of the square already had walls, doors, and windows and now men walked around upon their roofs hammering down shingles.  The building on the southwest corner was still being framed in when Senta had last seen it—little more than a wooden and iron skeleton of a building.  Now its walls were done and it too was getting a roof.  The three were joining the two buildings that had sat along the east side of the square since its construction—the dress shop and Mr. Parnorsham’s Pfennig Store.  Senta saw a face she knew and walked over to its owner.

“Hello Mr. Darwin.”

“Oh hello, Senta,” said the bespectacled older man, who was only slightly taller than the ten year old girl.  “How are you this cold morning?”

“I’m okay.  Which of these buildings is going to be yours?”

“This one right here,” he replied, pointing to the left most of the two having their roofs put on.  “I’m right next to Mr. Parnorsham’s Pfennig Store.  I think that’s the best spot in the square.  Don’t you?”

“I kind of thought you would have moved in there when Mrs. Wachtel died,” said Senta, indicating the shop just to the left of the Pfennig Store.

“Yes, well… to be honest, when Mrs. Wachtel… a…  passed away,” Mr. Darwin crossed himself.  “I had already signed the paperwork.”

“So what are they going to do with her place?”

“It’s my understanding that Mrs. Bratihn is going to take over the business.”

“I guess that will be good since her husband can’t work on account of being blind.”

“Mmm,” nodded Mr. Darwin, noncommittally while he took off his glasses to wipe them with a clean handkerchief.

“I didn’t expect Mrs. Government to let us go too long without a dress shop.”

Mr. Darwin bit his lower lip.  “Senta, you are irrepressible.  You are going to have to learn to watch what you say.”

“I think Senta will always say what she means,” said a voice from behind them.

They turned around to see Egeria Lusk in a beautiful dress that was only slightly less white than the surrounding snow and a bright colored coat that was only slightly more red than her fiery hair, which just now was pulled up into a bun and tucked behind the straw boater she wore.  Miss Lusk was a very small woman with very large green eyes, and though strikingly beautiful, she was known more for her keen mind.

“Good day to you, sir,” she said, curtseying to Mr. Darwin, who bowed at the waist in return.  “Where are you off to, Senta?”

Senta shrugged.

“I’m going to the Pfennig Store for some lace.  Why don’t you come along with me?”

“Okay.  Good day Mr. Darwin.”

“Good day beautiful ladies,” said Mr. Darwin, once again bowing at the waist.

The Voyage of the Minotaur: Suvir Kesi

The Voyage of the Minotaur Suvir Kesi is one of the two wizards in The Voyage of the Minotaur.  I don’t remember where I found the name Suvir, but I liked how it was similar to “severe.”  While not really part of the main plotline, the Suvir Kesi story is important to the characters involved.  Looking back at him, he probably owes a lot to classic comic book villains.  You can see this a bit in his reveal with Terrence.

Terrence let go of him and reached forward to find a door and a doorknob.  He could hear the boy starting to sob as he ran away.  The door was locked.  He took two steps back and kicked, intending to bust open the door, but he had stepped back so far that, though his booted foot hit the door, the force wasn’t enough to open it.  Growling in anger he rushed forward bashing his shoulder against the door.

The door did not splinter, as he had expected it to.  The force of his body broke open the latch.  But as Terrence went sprawling across the floor inside, the door swung on its hinges until it reached the wall behind it, then bounded back, slamming shut again.  The wind was knocked out of Terrence’s lungs, and he heard the gun skittering across the floor.

“Captain Dechantagne?” said Kesi’s accented voice.  “I didn’t hear you knock.”

“You son of a bitch!” shouted Terrence from the floor.  “You poisoned me.”

“Oh, yes.  That.  I had forgotten all about that.”  Kesi chuckled.  “That was funny.”

“I’m going to kill you, you bastard.”

“No.  I’m going to kill you.  But you’ll have to wait a moment.  You caught me right in the middle of something.”

“Mmph.”  The sound was a voice, a woman’s voice, strangely muffled.

“Quiet now,” said Kesi.  “I’m talking with the Captain.”

“Who is that?” demanded Terrence, getting to his feet.

“You know, this is perfect in a number of ways.  It’s almost poetic.  You see, if it hadn’t been for you, I would never have been able to continue this little hobby of mine.  You were so useful, pinning the blame on Maalik Murty.  I was going to frame your brother, but you were right.  Murty was a much more believable killer.”

“You?  You killed those women?”

“Far more than you know.  Uuthanum.”

Terrence’s body was lifted up and tossed across the room like a rag doll.  He hit the wall and then crashed down onto a chair, right onto the spot where Pantagria, or the thing that had been Pantagria, had kicked him again and again.

“Mmph mmph.”  The woman tried to speak again.  She must have been gagged.

“You killed all those women?  The ones in Brech?”

“Yes, I’ve been killing pretty young women as long as I can remember.  It’s just good clean fun.  It’s also been a sort of preparation, though I never realized it until now.”

“Preparation for what?”

“I can’t tell you that.”

“Why did you poison me?”

“I can’t tell you that either.”  Kesi chuckled again.  “Mostly, because I can’t remember.  Uuthanum.”

Terrence felt himself fly up so hard that he hit the ceiling.  This time, when he hit the floor, his crotch landed right on something hard and pointed.  He doubled up into a fetal position.  Both hands went to cradle his testicles, but instead found the object that had injured them—his own pistol.  He grabbed hold of the grip, but couldn’t force his body to unbend.

“Now, listen to this,” said Kesi.  There was a ripping sound.

“Didn’t catch it?  Listen again.”  Terrence heard the ripping sound again.  The woman’s muffled voice screamed.  It sounded somehow very far away.

“What are you doing?”

“This is the really poetic part of it all.  I’m killing the only woman who ever loved you.”

The Voyage of the Minotaur: Zeah Korlann

The Voyage of the Minotaur Zeah Korlann begins life in The Voyage of the Minotaur as the Dechantagne’s head butler, but he grows quite a bit as the story goes along.  One of the main subplots in the book is the growing relationship between Zeah and a much younger Egeria Lusk.  In many ways, it parallels the story of Mike and Patience in His Robot Wife.  Egeria isn’t a robot, but she is a genius and pretty much damn well perfect in every other way.  People could accuse me of throwing in one of my own male fantasies, and to that I say– so what.  It’s all my fantasy.

Zeah starts out the story with a noticeable stutter when under stress.  It disappears as the book goes along, but resurfaces in his encounters with Egeria.  Here is one of my favorite scenes between the two of them.

“Well, you’ve outdone yourself, Mr. Korlann,” said Egeria, looking at the food.  “You must have been cooking all day.”

“I… didn’t cook it.”

“I know, silly,” she laughed.  “Even if cooking was one of your many talents, I doubt you would have prepared Potatoes Kasselburg.”

“Is that what they are?”

“Yes.  I had them last time I was in Freedonia.”

“Last time?”

“Mm-hm.  I’ve had to travel Kasselburg and Bangdorf several times.”

“I’ve never been to Freedonia,” mused Zeah.  “I guess I’m not very well traveled.”

“Are you kidding?  Look where we are.  We’re in Birmisia, for heaven’s sake.”

“I suppose you’re right.”

The fish was excellent.  All in all, Zeah thought the meal could have rivaled Mrs. Colbshallow’s cooking, maybe not Mrs. Colbshallow at her best, because at her best she was unrivaled, but Mrs. Colbshallow on an average day.  He thought that he could become used to the Potatoes Kasselburg, sliced and baked and layered with cheese and pepper and some spices that he wasn’t familiar with.  It was a more than satisfactory meal.  They drank water with dinner, but near its end, Zeah uncorked a bottle of fine red wine.

“I was thinking,” said Egeria as she brought the red wine to her red lips.  “The day after tomorrow would be the appropriate day to become engaged.”

“Why is that?” asked Zeah, not really realizing what she had said.

“You know.  It’s the twentieth.  It’s the traditional day of starting new tasks.  It would be a fine time to become engaged.”

“Engaged in what?”

“Engaged to be married.”

“Muh… muh… married?”

“It was good enough for the Bratihns.”

“I wonder… I wonder if Corporal Bratihn went off to fight alongside Master Terrence?”

“Don’t change the subject,” she said.

“I’m not trying to…”

“We don’t have to get married right away.”

“We don’t?”

“No.  We can be engaged just as long as you like.  We need to announce our engagement though so that all of the other men will know I’m taken.”

“Uh… Other men?”

“Many other men.  They’re hovering around everywhere.  They’re like bees.”

“Bees?”

“Yes.  They’re like bees, and I’m the honey.  I can see them just waiting to get their stingers into me.”

“We have to announce our engagement,” he said.

“You have to ask me to marry you first.”

“Will you…”

“Not now.”

“No?”

“No.  You have to think up some very romantic way to propose marriage to me.  You have two days.”

“The day after tomorrow.”

“Good,” she said.  “Now that that’s out of the way, we can enjoy our wine.”

Zeah ran over this conversation in his head again and again the next day, and was never quite sure how exactly Egeria had maneuvered him into agreeing to ask her to marry him.  He knew that jealousy had been the key, but who could blame him for being jealous.  She was young and beautiful, and he was… well, him.  He also knew that she was way too smart for him to outsmart her.  She had said it herself.  She was the most intelligent person in the colony.  So after twenty four hours he was forced to go from wondering how it had happened and how to fix it, to trying to think of a romantic way to propose.

Update: The Sorceress and her Lovers

The Sorceress and her LoversIn the past four or five weeks, I’ve been so busy that I haven’t been able to write at all.  This week I finally feel caught up enough, and stress-free enough that I just had to write.  I jumped into The Sorceress and her Lovers and quickly whipped out two chapters.  This story seemed to have been calling to me, or maybe it was just on my mind because I was reading the other books in the series.  In either case, I had fun.  I had to go back and change one chapter because I had forgotten that one of the characters had moved.

This was a lot of fun because these characters have aged three to four years since the last book.  It’s been nearly that long since I wrote them.  Watch this space for more info about when the book will be done, as well as my other projects.  Hopefully, now that the school year is underway, I’ll continue to find time to write.