The Voyage of the Minotaur – A Review is in!

Review by: Timothy Nix on Apr. 29, 2010 : (no rating)

This first book in a new series delivers a rich new world, magic and technology, and exciting well written battles. That would have been enough to pique my interest in this amazing book. However, the complex and fully formed characters brimming with passion, duty, loyalty, and human failings make one care about them and their lives. Toss in a few modern day dinosaurs, and there is something here for everyone. I am now anxiously awaiting the second book in the sseries. I highly recommend this book for fans of all genres.

Bambi Nix

New "His Robot Girlfriend" Review on Feedbooks

Here is the latest review of His Robot Girlfriend on Feedbooks. This one by Markos.

“His Robot Girlfriend” was thoroughly enjoyable. I found it titillating, but it never decended into the grotesque or vulgar. My wife is a 5th through 7th-grade French and Spanish teacher at a private school here in Fort Worth, Texas, and I laughed out loud at the first few chapters especially, where the classes are described.

I was intrigued at the particular version of near-future reality painted in words, which was nicely subliminal. One picks up that mankind was not able to completely arrest global warming, that certain things like food and clothing are anywhere from 100% to 200% higher, but interestingly, a sophisticated, humanlike robot is a mere $2700. (Forgive any minor inaccuracies. I just got done reading the book over the course of a couple of days). Fascinating!

I, too, was going to sheepishly submit a list of typos, but looks like that isn’t necessary.

Looking forward eagerly to reading your others. msm

Thanks a lot Markos. Glad you enjoyed it.

His Robot Girlfriend – Rated Nine Times on Goodreads

His Robot Girlfriend has been rated nine times on Goodreads. Everything from 2 to 5 stars. Aaron Eiche says:

A quick read, only a hundred or so pages. As the title suggests, it’s about a guy and his girlfriend, who is a robot. It’s not brilliant writing, but it is an enjoyable story and offers a glimpse into the future. It also pokes a bit of fun at the current age. I definitely recommend it.

And while I might have a disagreement with the “not brilliant writing part”, at least he recommends it in the end.

Now get to bed kiddies… Santa is already in the air!

rjbs forgot what he was saying

One of the more interesting references to myself and my writing I found here. This review of the new Sony PRS-300 Pocket Reader included a bit about His Robot Girlfriend. The text follows:

After a few months of slowly edging toward the prospect, yesterday I bought an ebook. It’s a Sony PRS-300, which is their new “pocket reader.” It’s about the same size as my flattened hand, just a little thinner than my iPhone, and about the same weight as a paperback. Right now, I have it loaded with just over a hundred books and stories, and it’s about one third full.

Yesterday I read several short stories and most of a novella, which I finished this morning. There are a lot of things it doesn’t do that a book does, and a lot of things that it doesn’t do that a “real computer” could do. Despite these shortcomings, I think it is a pretty nice little device, and I’m almost certain to keep it and use it frequently. Here are some high and low points.

It’s really light. I can hold it in one hand for a long time before my hand gets tired. Because it doesn’t have a spine, I don’t have to hold it open with my fingers, so my hand is much more relaxed. Because it doesn’t have pages, I can read it entirely with one hand, tapping the “next page” button with my thumb as I go. Doing anything more complicated than “next page” is hard with one hand, because I want to use my left hand in order to keep my (preferred) right hand free. Unfortunately, the controls are on the right of the unit, away from my grip. Lefties might like this layout more.

Turning pages takes just a fraction of a second longer than I’d like. If I’m racing through pages, it’s frustrated, but most of the time I don’t care. I think I’ll get used to it. The less frequent but more severe frustration is that when I think I’ve misunderstood some earlier point, flipping back through pages to scan them is incredibly slow compared to paper. Still, this doesn’t come up all that often.

I used to often think that I would dislike being unable to write on an electronic book’s pages, but in reality I hardly write on the pages of my print books. Instead, I take notes on the bookmarks that I use in them. That means I can see all my notes in one place, rather than by flipping through the book. I have a huge stockpile of bookmarks, so I don’t mind permanently associating bookmarks with books. This isn’t as simple with electronic books, because I don’t use a bookmark, but I always have a notepad with me, so I can take notes there.

I wouldn’t mind a larger reading area with smaller controls, but it’s not a huge issue. At a font size that is easy to read, a page holds enough content that I don’t get frustrated by the tiny page turn delay. I think that’s all that really matters. Instant page turning will be nice someday, but for now I can live without it easily.

The menus are weird, but there isn’t much to select through, so it isn’t a big problem. Mostly you find the book you want and read it. There is a facility for grouping books into folders (“collections”) but you can only create them through the annoying Sony software. I’m pretty sure I can create them easily myself. They’re very simple entries in an XML file. I’ve found some code to do it, but the code is gross, so I’ll probably rewrite it and publish a library. Apart from collections and first time registration of the device (which is optional), it looks like I can avoid Sony’s software, so this is not a big deal.

There are a few other things that I think I’d like, which I know the Kindle has. A dictionary would be nice, but it would be hard to use without a keyboard or touch screen. The same goes for anywhere access to Wikipedia. All of Wikipedia’s article content is only about five gigs, which would be easy to access without network access, if you were willing to pay for the storage and perform regular synchronization. Still, without a good means to say what you want, it would be pretty tough to use.

In a sense, though, Wikipedia is probably better omitted. I want to read books on my reader, and Wikipedia is just a distraction. It’s a very fun distraction, but I’m better off without it in this context. Anyway, I have my iPhone, too. Putting a full keyboard would just encourage further distraction, possibly even perverse and terrifying hackery. My main reason to want a keyboard is to run Frotz to play interactive fiction, which seems like a fantastic use of an ebook. I would be able to do this on Kindle, but in the end I decided that if I can barely find time to play any int-fiction at home, I’m not likely to do so on the go. Anyway, I’d still need paper and pen to draw maps.

So, given that I have this device that I think is a pretty decent (and affordable) piece of hardware for reading, is there enough stuff to read? I think there is. Sony has the eBook Store for paid access to for-pay content. It might be an okay content source, but I’m not likely to find out. Using it requires that I use their horrible Sony Reader software, which I’d rather not do. I can’t buy books in my web browser, for some presumably awful reason. This is particularly frustrating, because it means I can’t access the “millions” of free public domain books offered by Google Books. So, what’s a bibliophile to do?

For now, my big source of books is Feedbooks, which has tons of public domain and original books and stories in lots of formats, including EPUB. I downloaded a lot of things I’ve been meaning to read as well as a number of random novels or short stories by self-published authors.

The most substantial thing I’ve read on the PRS-300 so far is His Robot Girlfriend by Wesley Allison. It was about a hundred pages and a decent read. Like a lot of self-published works it needed a lot more editing and internal consistency. On one hand, the totally inconsistent economics of the book drove me nuts. On the other, it’s pretty refreshing to read the work of authors who might never get onto the best seller list. Feedbooks and similar sites can act like the YouTube of writing. If you can write it and upload it, anybody can go read it.

The impression I’ve gotten is that Sony’s take on the ebook is more conducive to this kind of commons for content development, but I’m not entirely sure how right I am. I think at worst Amazon isn’t as bad as I think, which would not be too bad to learn.

So, to sum up: the price was pretty good, the device is enjoyable to read, and the only things I really don’t like are all related to Sony’s lousy software, which I can mostly avoid — and which hopefully they’ll fix over time. (I’m not holding my breath.)

I think I’m going to be happy with this.

His Robot Girlfriend – Review at This Last Post

It was suggested to me that I google my books every so often and see what’s out there. I did, and I found this review of His Robot Girlfriend at This Last Post. It was a nice review despite the mispelling of my name in the title. The text follows. You can see the original here.

Wesley Allison’s His Robot Girlfriend is a futuristic science fiction romance novel eBook. I downloaded it through Stanza from their online catalog under Feedbooks, but I provided the link also. The story is about a lonely teacher named Mike Smith who purchases a robot to be his companion from the Daffodil company. His wife had died and his children had moved away. There is some descriptions of sex between Mike Smith and the Robot but it’s not that intense. I found the sex and the clothes shopping thing in the novel to be a bit disturbing, but I got over it because it enhances that companionship thing that Smith was looking for. The author Allison tried to add a little action in there but for the most part during the pace of the novel was the slow and the same. I read ‘Girlfriend’ in a week because I found it really interesting, the ending was sort of a twist, but I had expected something like it would happen. I couldn’t put it down I’d recommend this novel for people who are into the Science-Fiction genre. If you’ve read this book or want to comment I would love to see other ideas.

His Robot Girlfriend – 3 Star Review

3 Star Review by C. Alan Loewen

See the original here.

Man buys robot. Man falls in love with robot. They live happily ever after.
There are two types of books: character-driven and plot-driven. Allison’s His Robot Girlfriend is an example of the former.

Much of nothing happens in the story. There is a hint of intrigue, an aroma of conflict, a lot of sensuality referred to but not, thank heaven, described blow-by-blow which would make this simply bad porn. Basically the first sentence of the review is the novella in its entirety.
The dialogue is written well, which is a plus for works put out into free domain. The character of Mike Smith is rather well fleshed out though Patience remains … well, a robot and doesn’t have much of a personality as she is basically a Gal Friday with sexual services attached. The settings are intriguing. It is interesting to see what of our culture the author believes will survive in the near future, and and as credit to the author’s craft, I did read the novella in its entirety.

However, reviewers are as varied as wildflowers in a meadow. Personally, I like a strong, well-crafted plot with intriguing lines of conflict, no matter how subtle or blatant they may be. If you like just character vignettes and what people may do in the privacy of their homes with a novel toy, then this might just be your five-star story.

Book Reviews

Now that I’ve read more than thirty books on my Sony Reader, I guess it’s time to start throwing out my two cents worth. I’m going to call these mini-reviews, because I don’t have the inclination to go too in-depth. One thing that I’m not going to tell you is that a book is no good. I will tell you if I don’t like it, but you may have opinions contradictory to mine.

Redchapel – A Review

Red Chapel
by Mike Resnick
2003

Available as an eBook only.

$1.29 at Fictionwise.com in multiple formats.
$1.03 at Amazon.com for Kindle only.

Redchapel is an alternate history story that proposes that young Theodore Roosevelt, prior to the Spanish-American war but after his ranching days in the Dakotas, visits London in time to take on the murder mystery of all time– Jack the Ripper. This novella has been nominated for several awards, including the prestigious Hugo Award.

Redchapel is descriptive, and well-paced. It is easy to visualize the foggy streets of Whitechapel as London bobbies, blowing their whistles, chase after Saucy Jack. The British characters were well-written and believable and the plot, though not overly complex, made sense. Even more important to me was that Theodore Roosevelt was done well. I’ve read numerous biographies and several of Roosevelt’s own books, including Letters to his Children, and while many writers get a passable Roosevelt, few hit him as dead on as Resnick. Of course this is a young Roosevelt, not quite as complex as he might have been later in life. But still, nicely done.

I enjoyed this story, though it didn’t last long. Be aware. At only 11,624 words, this is a single day’s read– a couple of days if you only read on the train. On the plus side, Resnick has at least one more Roosevelt alternate history.

Cissy the Iguana Reviews: Twilight


This is my first book review and the first vampire book I’ve ever read. Being a vegetarian, I find vampires icky. Well, here goes. Descriptions of forest: good. Descriptions of humidity: good. Descriptions of cold weather: bad, bad, bad. No sun: bad, bad, bad.

I give Twilight: 1 Mustard Green (Not recommended for Iguanas).

Not Yet Ready to Review

I’ve tried my hand at a few tentative reviews, but I’m not yet ready. If I’m going to post reviews, I want them to be good. With that in mind, I’ve purchased The Slippery Art of Book Reviewing, in ebook format of course. Once I’ve read it, I’ll be ready to post a review of 1901 by Robert Conroy, which I just finished. In the meantime, I have a guest reviewer lined up. Happy Reading!