When I originally conceived and outlined the story of Princess of Amathar, the character of Vena Remontar didn’t exist. She came into being as I was writing, another minor character that crosses paths with our hero. The problem came along later. As I was writing her, I fell in love with her. That presented me with an entirely different resolution to the story than I had originally planned, but hers remained a small part. When I revised the book, the one part that was expanded was the central point in the city of Amathar with Alexander and Vena. Looking back years later, I’m very glad that I was swayed from my original tale by this beautiful alien princess.
Category Archives: Characters
Characters: Noriandara Remontar
Noriandara Remontar is the titular character of Princess of Amathar, though she isn’t in most of the first two thirds of the book. She is the goal, the force that draws Alexander Ashton across the world of Ecos. Like most of the heroines in Edgar Rice Burroughs, she’s pretty snotty when she meets our hero. It wasn’t until I was well into the story that I decided she wasn’t going to stop being snotty. That was my own little addition to Burroughs’s formula.
Noriandara Remontar is very tall and blue as are all Amatharians (I wrote this well before Avatar, I must point out). She is a skilled swordswoman and a knight.
Characters: Augustus Dechantagne
I created Augie to be a mirror to his brother. He’s someone that nobody expects to be competent, and he often isn’t, but he might have been had he ever been given the chance to grow up that way. One of Augie’s great failures– not correctly translating the aboriginies’ language results in one of the major plot points. On the other hand, in battle, both against armed cultists in the jungle and thousands of lizard men in Birmisia, he proves quite heroic. Augie was fun to write, in that his natural state is easy-going and pleasant, making him quite the counter to his two siblings who are serious and wrapped up in their own torments.
Augie owes a lot to Michael Caine’s character in Zulu, something I pointed to when I went back and wrote book 0, and had him accompanied by a Colour Sergeant Bourne.
Characters: Terrnece Dechantagne
Terrence is one of my favorite characters that I’ve written. He is also as close to an anti-hero as I’ve written. I originally conceived of him as a kind of Indiana Jones type guy who would carry the action for most of the Senta and the Steel Dragon series. The truth is that he was rather boring that way. He needed something, so I gave him an addiction. Terrence is addicted to White Opthalium, a magical drug which takes him away to another world. Once I started writing along this path, his character became much more interesting to me. Here was a guy who is loved and admired by almost everyone except himself. And because he hates himself, he becomes more and more antagonistic and hateful to everyone else. People around him see him as a hero, but he can’t see himself as anything but a failure.
Characters: Iolanthe Dechantagne
In my very first pre-outline ideas about Senta and the Steel Dragon, Iolanthe Dechantagne was going to be the primary character. Senta originally was nothing but a person who would be the eyes through which we saw Iolanthe. As the outline firmed up, it became obvious that Iolanthe would be too bitchy to be around all the time. I got so tired of her that I rewrote her part in book 2 and made Yuah the main character in that book instead.
I don’t know where the idea came from for Iolanthe. In a lot of ways, she’s a much bitchier version of my mother, at least as I remember her from when I was a kid. Iolanthe has to be really tough to make it in a man’s world– especially a Victorian one. And her history explains a lot about her disposition. Her most distinctive physical feature– her aquamarine eyes, just came out of nowhere. I was looking for things to make my setting a little more other-worldly and that just popped into being. Her first name came from a baby name web site, but I made up the last name. I wanted something that could have gone from French into English aristocracy.
Because she is such a major BITCH, Iolanthe is a lot of fun to write. She can be very sympathetic and just when you think you’re going to start liking her, she does something excrutiatingly mean. Still, she is one of the heroes of the story. So what if she drives her family to distruction, basically enslaves an entire native population, and (arguably) commits several murders.
Characters: Malagor
In my first draft of Princess of Amathar, Alexander Ashton was transported to a strange world and found a family of pioneer Amatharians that lived in a remote log cabin. When I started to describe the wonderful city of Amathar, I didn’t have a reason for this family now to be away from the city unless they were some strange neo-Luddites. So I wrote them out and created Malagor, one of the many humanoid species living in Ecos for Alexander to run into. Looking back now, I can see I was definitely influenced by the science fantasy classics Star Trek and Star Wars in his creation. He is still one of my favorite characters though.
My Writing: 2014
In early 2014, I finished and published The Sorceress and her Lovers. This book had a lot of set up for an additional volume in the series, so I immediately got to work writing an outline for the next story. It is the most complete outline that I’ve ever written for a book, with much more detail than I usually include.
I started immediately on the next Astrid Maxxim book: Astrid Maxxim and the Antarctic Expedition. I got about three quarters of the way done, very quickly, and then ran out of steam a bit. I struggled to get back into it. I tinkered with 82 Eridani and The Jungle Girl for a while. When I went back to Astrid, I found that I had totally goofed around my outline and the book was going to be way too long. I reordered my chapters and trimmed out a lot of what I didn’t need. Then I finished it. Consequently it has one fewer chapter than all the other Astrid Maxxim books.
As I was editing Astrid Maxxim and the Antarctic Expedition, I decided that I would publish a book of poetry. I have about 1,000 poems I’ve written over the years, so I gathered up those I had already decided were my best and put them in a single volume. I struggled to come up with a name, eventually deciding on Desperate Poems. Of course, as an unknown poet, it would have to be a free volume.
Once Astrid was finished, I started on a horror story called Love and the Darkness. When I finish, its going to be a free story. I got about 75% done, and is so often the case, ran out of gas. I’m not overly thrilled with the story, so when I get back to it, it will have to be much revised.
While doing Love and the Darkness, I sat down and wrote a dream sequence for an Astrid Maxxim story. I didn’t really even have a story in mind, I just wanted to get down this idea. I was so thrilled with the little bit I wrote, I decided to continue on and wrote Astrid Maxxim and her Hypersonic Space Plane. I think this may be the quickest book I’ve ever written, but I really like the story. I contacted Matthew Riggenbach at Shaed Studios to do a cover for the book and went ahead and had him do one for the following in the series too.
About this time, I had a great idea for a robot book. It wasn’t a Mike and Patience story, but could work in the same universe, so that’s where I set it. This too was an easy book to write and I finished His Robot Girlfriend: Charity just before the end of the year.
Characters: Patience D. Smith
Of all my characters, none has gone through as much of a change between first draft and published work as has Patience Smith from His Robot Girlfriend. Originally she was a rather Amazonian figure, physically very imposing, but much more submissive. Some might argue that Patience is still submissive, but I think she’s not so much. When I rewrote the short pieces into a long story, she needed to have much more force of personality so that she could advance the storyline of forcing Mike to change. A college professor once told me the main character is the one in the story who changes the most– and that would be Mike.
When I started rewriting, I just wasn’t happy with her physical description, so I started completely from scratch, using a young woman I knew as a model– so yes, there really is a Patience out there. I observed her as carefully as possible (without seeming too creepy) so that I could describe her movements and gestures– like when Patience bounces on her tip-toes or incorporates dance moves into everyday movement. Since then, I’ve tried to find a human being to at least think about when I write my characters. Yes, I still know the young woman I patterned Patience after, and no, I never told her she was an inspiration.
My Writing: 2013
The year 2013 was a tough one, in that I didn’t have as much time to write as I wanted. Right after the first of the year, I started in on the second Astrid Maxxim book. Looking back, it seems as if books 1 and 2 were right next to each other, but there was actually almost two years between writing the two.
As with the first book in the series, Astrid Maxxim and her Undersea Dome came relatively quickly. The books are short, and though I try to make them more complex than they might at first seem, they aren’t overly complicated. I was very happy with the final story though.
As soon as I was done with Astrid Maxxim, it was time to get back to Mike and Patience in the new robot book. This one took me quite a while to write. It was originally plotted at 80,000 words, but it was really slow. Revising it took it down to just under 50,000 words. Many people wanted a new Patience story, so that’s what I was writing, but when I was done, I really wished I had focused more on the new robot Wanda.
When I was done, I spent months working on a new book series 82 Eridani. I got about half of the first novel done, but kind of ran out of steam in it. I really like what I’ve written so far, so I will get back to it.
Finally in the last part of the year, I started working on The Sorceress and her Lovers. My wife asked me again and again to change the title, but I just liked it and thought it fit the story. Of course it doesn’t have a great deal of sex in it, so it might be a bit misleading there, and the reader has to figure out who the other lover is.
Characters: Senta Bly
Senta Bly is the title character from the Senta and the Steel Dragon series. The funny thing about Senta is that I never intended to write a book about her, let alone make her the main character in a series. Here now, I’ve chronicled her life from age 6 to 24, in eight books. I originally wrote a description from her viewpoint that was supposed to showcase the setting of Brech City. When I eventually plotted out the trilogy that would become books 1, 3, and 5 of the Senta and the Steel Dragon Series, she took on more and more importance. When I added books 0, 2, and 4 to the mix, the entire story really became her story.
I’m looking forward to completing The Price of Magic summer and am already thinking about the next book in the series. I won’t get started on that until at least next year, but I’m already feeling the bug to write it.
Senta is precocious and self-confident. As she grows up she learns more and more magic and discovers that she is a powerful sorceress. One of the most fun things about writing this series is that the characters are so inter-connected. Senta has relationships of one sort or another with more than a hundred major and minor characters. Hopefully this diversity makes her as much fun to read about as she is to write about.