Saba Colbshallow is an extremely important character to the story of Senta and the Steel Dragon.  I didn’t recognize his importance when I started writing.  More than any other character, he grew into the plot.  In book 0 and book 1, he is just a boy in the household of the Dechantagnes.  In book 2, he is a corporal in the militia.  Here in book 3, as we’ve already seen in the excerpt about Senta, he is a police constable.  Here, he’s chasing some up-to-no-good lizzies into the woods and almost becomes a victim of utahraptor attack.

Stepping lightly back down the gazebo steps, Saba continued on his rounds through the town.  As the only half illuminated, but nonetheless bright moon rose above the mountains in the distance he reached the dockside, where the S.S. Majestic was still moored.  Just as he had on that other night three weeks earlier, Saba saw a dozen lizardmen moving quietly through the darkness moving coffin sized crates from beside the ship.

Saba immediately dropped to the ground and crept to the closest building.  He was not going to lose them this time in the darkness.  He already knew which way they were going.  As quietly as he could, he moved away from the dock and passed down Eighth Avenue.  Then cutting south, he jogged through the apartment buildings and the small houses just beyond them.  Running now, he made his way west again, reaching the door in the Emergency Wall through which the reptiles would soon be passing.  He let himself through and locked it again, then hid behind some bushes thirty feet away.  He tucked his face inside his reefer jacket, trying to slow his breath without freezing his lungs.

He didn’t have long to wait.  In what seemed like complete silence, the door opened once again and lizardman after lizardman passed through, each pair carrying one of the long crates between them.  There were twelve aborigines in all carrying six crates.  The last two through stopped, sat down the box, closing and relocking the door.  Then they joined their comrades moving between the trees.  They walked southwest, through the less densely packed portion of the colony, and Saba stealthily followed them.  They passed right through the yard and right next to the burned out remains of Mrs. Yembrick’s home.

“Bastards,” said Saba, to himself.

The last two lizardmen stopped and looked around.  Saba quickly ducked behind one tree.  He suddenly wished he had a service revolver with him.  After a moment, he peered back around the tree.  The reptilians had evidently decided that they were unobserved and had continued on their way.  Saba had to move quickly so they wouldn’t get too far ahead of him.  He stayed far enough back though that they wouldn’t be able to hear the sounds of his footsteps.  At least he hoped they wouldn’t.  It was well known that a lizzie’s hearing was slightly less acute than that of a human being. 

The lizzies moved very quickly through the forest, far more quickly than Saba would have believed possible.  In fact, he had to strain to keep up.  He was determined not to be left behind though.  They left the town, continuing on in the same general direction, roughly parallel by the constable’s estimation to the railroad line.  Saba continued to follow for miles, realizing vaguely in the back of his mind that this was the furthest away from town he had ever ventured by himself and essentially unarmed.

Morning had to be approaching though there was still no light on the horizon.  The half moon had almost completed its arc across the sky and was about to once again hide itself, when Saba heard something behind him.  He stepped behind a large pine tree, so that the lizardmen wouldn’t see him.  Then he turned to look behind him.

“Kafira,” he said in a whisper that was nevertheless far louder than he had intended.

While he had been following the lizardmen, he had in turn been followed himself.  The massive form of a utahraptor could be seen moving through the trees, sniffing the air, and tilting its head from one side to the other to listen.  Unlike its cousin the velociraptor, the utahraptor was a large and frightening predator, with a mouth that could take off a human head.  Nowhere near as large as the tyrannosauruses that had once hunted the area of the peninsula, it was big enough.  Seven feet tall and twenty-five feet long, it was covered in bristle-like feathers ranging from turquoise around the head to bright green at the tail.  It was impossible to appreciate their beauty at night, and it was impossible to appreciate their beauty when the beast was hunting you in any case.

Immediately reaching for a tree branch, Saba hauled himself up and climbed as quickly as he could.  The utahraptor reached the tree only seconds after he had reached a safe height.  Whether the beast rightly belonged to the bird or dinosaur family didn’t matter much to the constable.  That it could eat him; that’s what mattered.  It reached up its three-foot-long head to snap at him with frightening, serrated teeth.  It was only just below his feet.  Had it managed to get hold of him, it would have been able to finish him off in four or five bites.

The monster didn’t bellow or squawk; it merely licked its lips and looked longingly at him.  Saba climbed a bit higher.  He looked to the southwest for the aborigines he had been following, but they were gone.  The utahraptor waited at the base of the tree until well into the next morning, and only left when a herd of small, graceful parksosaurus caught its attention.  Climbing down, Saba retraced his steps back to town, happy to be alive but angry that once again he had lost the trail of the lizardmen.  They were up to something but he didn’t know what.  If he wasn’t going to be able to follow them wherever they were going, perhaps an investigation of where they had been would be illuminating.

When I first began thinking of Senta and the Steel Dragon, I pictured Egeria Lusk as being based on Ada Lovelace, the programmer of Babage’s steam powered computer (which was the basis for the Result Mechanism).  When I got to writing though, I instead based her mostly on my Aunt Mary (in personality, not in looks), to whom I dedicated The Drache Girl.

Spoiler Alert

She has appears to a greater or lesser degree in all the books (though only mentioned in book 0).  Here she meets with Yuah and Honor Hertling, discussing Professor Calliere and Zeah.  This is a great time to feature her because I’m just about to write her into The Sorceress and her Lovers.

“My God!” said Yuah, as she stepped into the house.  “Look at this place.”

Yuah had been in Egeria’s house before, but that was some time ago, and since then her father’s fiancé had substantially redecorated.  The front door opened into a foyer, with a large arched walkway into the parlor.  Both rooms were exquisitely decorated with hand-carved wooden moldings, golden drapes, and beaded chandeliers.  Of course, those had been in place before.  Now birch and cherry wood chairs and marble-topped accent tables were spaced around the parlor, which was dominated by a beautiful grand piano, the open lid of which was graced with a painting of angels in the clouds.  On the wall above the piano was an eight foot tall painting of the same angels in different poses.  Vases full of cut flowers, white and yellow predominating, were everywhere.

“You didn’t have all this when I was last here.” wondered Yuah.

“No, I’ve purchased most of this from Mirsanna over the past two years,” replied Egeria.  “I’ve done quite well here, writing programs for the Result Mechanism, along with a bit of free-lance inventing.  Unfortunately it makes me suspect, in light of the accusations against Mercy.”

“You don’t think he’s guilty?” wondered Honor.

“Yes.  I do.  I don’t think he would have killed himself if he weren’t.”

“So you’ve heard.”

“I think everyone in the colony has heard.  It would be big news, even if he wasn’t married to Iolanthe.”

Egeria leaned her head to one side, arched her brow, and said to Yuah.  “I’m not a traitor.  I had nothing to do with the programs Mercy created for the Freedonians.”

“I didn’t think you were,” said Yuah.

“I just thought it needed to be said.  Please come in and sit down.”

Yuah and Honor sat down on the parlor couch, which was as comfortable as it was beautiful.  Egeria sat in a matching chair.  A lizardman wearing a simple white apron with lacy edges carried in a tray with an antique teapot, three antique cups, and three small matching plates carefully stacked with butter biscuits.  It sat down the tray and poured the tea.

“Thank you, Chunny,” said Egeria.

“You were expecting us?” asked Yuah.

“I thought that Honor would be by this morning.  You my dear are a surprise—a pleasant one.”

“Well thank you for having us,” said Honor.

“It is definitely my pleasure.  I don’t have very many visitors.”

“Really?”  Yuah was surprised.  “You’re one of the best known and best liked people in town.”

“That’s kind of you to say.  Of course I would expect nothing less of someone who is practically my daughter.”

Yuah reflexively rolled her eyes.  “You’re only a biscuit older than I am.”

“Yes, but I am engaged to your father.”

“Have you decided upon a wedding date?” interrupted Honor.

“Not yet.”  Egeria’s face betrayed nothing, as she poured the tea and then handed a teacup to each of her guests.

“Is that because you have chosen not to set a date, or because Yuah’s father hasn’t?”

“I am ready at any time,” said Egeria.  “But I’m putting no pressure on Zeah.  He needs to be ready too.  As you know, we had a previous date set, but it wasn’t right for him.”

“Why is he hesitant?”

Egeria’s laughter was light.

“He has always been hesitant.”

“Why do you think he hesitates?”

Egeria looked thoughtful, but didn’t say anything.

“Is it because you are a Kafirite?” continued Honor.

“He knew I was a Kafirite when we met.  Anyone would.”

“How is that?” asked Honor, stopping her teacup only inches from her lips.

“Because of my name.”

Honor looked on blankly.

“Egeria was the name of one of Kafira Kristos’s apostles,” said Yuah.  “One of the more important ones.”

“Yes, she along with Fantin the Elder was very important in spreading the gospel of Kafira across Sumir.”

“I’m surprised that you are so well versed in Kafirite theology,” said Honor to Yuah.

“I did grow up in a Kafirite household,” Yuah replied.

When all is said and done, the character who has the most interesting and varied story arc in Senta and the Steel Dragon is Yuah.  She starts out at the bottom, rises to the very top, and then topples down far lower than she started.  Book 3, The Drache Girl really is the pivotal point for her progression.  In addition, Yuah is just one of my favorites ( I guess I say that about all of them).  Here she brings a newly healed Terrence home to see his house and his son for the first time.

After a few minute’s walk, they could see the massive façade of the Dechantagne house peaking through the trees.  Yuah stopped and pointed to it.

“Does it look like you thought it would?”

“Yes, I suppose it does.  It looks warm.  Everything here looks better than I thought it would.”

“What did you expect it to look like?”

“I don’t know.  Savage, I guess.  Not civilized.”  He looked down at her.  “That’s a nice dress.”

“Thank you.”

“It looks expensive.”

“Oh, it is.  We can hardly afford it.”

“That’s not what I meant.  I’ve never seen you in an expensive dress or a fancy dress.

“You haven’t seen me at all since before our wedding day.  The last time you saw me I was your servant, not your wife.”

“You look exactly the same as I remember you though.  Except you’re not flat-chested anymore.”

She slapped him on the arm, and they shared the first laugh together in a long time.  It might be, she reflected, the first laugh that they had ever shared together.  It lasted only a moment though, because his new blue eyes suddenly went cold.  Yuah turned to see what he was looking at.  Two lizardmen crossed the street at the intersection just in front of their home.  They were carrying a large steamer trunk.

“They’re everywhere here,” he said.

“There aren’t any more of them than there were nine months ago, when you left.”

“I didn’t have to look at them then.”

Yuah took Terrence’s hand and led him the last fifty yards to their home.  The gardens were covered with snow now, the reflecting pool frozen over, and the fountain empty of water.  They reached the bottom of the steps and Yuah squealed as Terrence suddenly scooped her up and carried her to the top of the steps.  Once there however, he stopped and unsmilingly set her back down as the door was opened for them by a particularly large lizardman with a yellow ribbon sporting a gold medallion around his neck.

“You remember Tisson,” said Yuah.

Terrence nodded briskly, and then stepped inside.  She followed.  In the parlor Mrs. Godwin was sitting in the rocking chair with Augie in her arms.  She slowly rocked back and forth and hummed.  With a smile, she lifted up the baby for Yuah to take.  Yuah cradled the child in her arms, gazing with love down into his chubby pink face.

“Here he is,” she said, turning to present her son to her husband.

“He looks like you.”

“Don’t be daft,” she replied.  “He’s your bleeding doppelganger.”

“Yes, I guess he is.  Poor lad.”

Holding the baby with one hand, Yuah took Terrence by the other and led him upstairs to the nursery.  She sat him in the rocking chair and placed Augie in his lap.  She pulled the small folding rocker from the corner and sat next to him.  They rocked back in forth in silence for more than an hour.  When Augie woke up, she nursed him, and when he was full and satisfied, she handed him back to his father, and he looked up with fascination at the strange man holding him. 

Yuah had finished getting her dress back on, and Terrence was holding Augie, when Iolanthe walked into the room, practically filling it with her green dress and her presence.

Iolanthe was a major character in book 0 and book 1, and we see much of the story from her eyes in those books.  In book 2: The Dark and Forbidding Land, she is much less in evidence as we see the world through Yuah’s eyes instead.  In book 3: The Drache Girl, we are still seeing the world from Yuah’s point of view, but Iolanthe is present much more and is much more central to the various plot lines.  Here she and Yuah meet Radley Staff upon his return to Port Dechantagne.

A second later, around the corner stepped Iolanthe Dechantagne and Yuah Korlann.  Iolanthe Calliere and Yuah Dechantagne, Staff mentally corrected himself.  Iolanthe was wearing a green velvet dress with at least seven ornately ruffled layers, and a white lace collar with a black bow.  Yuah wore a gold dress with a broad band of blue at the knees and a waterfall of lace draping from the shoulders and down over the bustle.  Both women wore hats covered in flowers that matched each of their dresses and carried matching muffs.  The two women saw Staff at the same moment and both stopped dead in their tracks.

“Radley,” gasped Iolanthe.

Then the three of them stood silently gaping at each other.  At last Yuah stepped forward.

“Mr. Staff, how lovely to see you again,” she said, removing one hand from her muff and offering it to him.

“Mrs. Dechantagne, you look more lovely that I remember.”

“Oh, pish-posh.  I’m getting to be an old lady.”

“That, madam, is sacrilege.”

She smiled.

Iolanthe still stood where she was.  Her face had gone from the pale of alabaster to the pale of ash.  Her mouth was agape, and she looked as though she was unable to breathe.  Staff stepped forward, taking her right wrist in his hands, pulling her hand from her muff, and enfolding it in his own.

“Mrs.… It’s very nice to see you again.”

“Commander Staff,” said Iolanthe, at last, taking an audible breath.  “I didn’t realize you were in the country.”

“I had always planned to return.”

Iolanthe bit her lip.

“I’m here on business,” he said, releasing her hand and turning back to Yuah.  “I just spoke to your father and he was very helpful in offering me advice on how to get everything off the ground now that I’m here.”

“He does excel at giving advice,” conceded Yuah.  “What business will you be running?”

“Coal.”

“Oh?”

“Yes, I have some very wealthy backers and a complete staff ready to go to work.  I will need the colonial governor’s office for all the permits and tax papers and what not, but I’m sure you may offer me some insight into the governor’s state of mind.”

“I… Oh, I….permits…”  Iolanthe swayed just for a moment.  Yuah took her by the shoulder and held her upright.

“I’m sure that my sister-in-law will be able to offer you all the assistance that you need.  What do you require first?”

“Your father has pointed me in the direction of an office building with apartments, though I may need somewhere to live until I secure it.”

“Well, that’s easily settled,” said Yuah.  “You simply must come and stay at the Dechantagne home.”

Iolanthe moved with what seemed like hesitation toward the front steps of the temporary city hall and sat down on the wooden planks so hard that it appeared she might fall back.

“The Dechantagne home,” said Staff.  “Your home, you mean?”

“Yes.  Well, technically it’s Terrence’s home because he is head of the household, but we all live there—me and my son and Iolanthe’s family, the servants—and a few extended family members.”

“Are you sure you would have room for me?”

“Oh, there are plenty of rooms.  You will scarcely be noticed at all.  And you would be more than welcome.”

At this, Iolanthe could simply take no more.  Her strangely beautiful aquamarine eyes rolled up into her head and she flopped back so hard that her skull smacked against the wall of the building, knocking her seemingly unconscious.  Then she rolled over and off the steps to land face first in the snowdrift just to the right of the door.

Both Yuah and Staff rushed over to help her.  Staff rolled her body over and lifted her at the shoulders.  Yuah brushed the snow from her face.

“I should take her to see the doctor.  Her corset is probably just too tight, but you never know.”  Yuah suddenly remembered that she was speaking to a man and covered her mouth with her hand.  “I mean… oh bloody hell, I don’t know what I mean.”

Zurfina is always a fun character to write.  She plays a smaller role in this book than she did in the first three (including book 0) because she takes off about halfway through.  We don’t find out where she went until book for, those chapters in which she appears for the most part taking place during book this story.  Of course, she always manages an entrance, even when she’s not a big part of the scene, such as this time with Senta and Hero.

The home of Zurfina the Magnificent and of course of Senta, her apprentice, sat less than three hundred yards west of the town square.  It had a fenced in yard of six acres with many large trees.  The little winding walkway through the natural pines and maples, made the yard seem like a quiet little forest.  There were a few houses in the area, though none were located on lots touching the sorceress’s.  Neighbors usually referred to Zurfina’s house as a “tower”, though it was in actuality just a small building, no larger in floor area than most other homes, but rising to five stories.  The ground floor was a kitchen, dining area, and storage rooms.  The first floor up was the living room and Bessemer’s chamber.  The second floor up was a bedroom and playroom for Senta.  Above that was Zurfina’s bedroom and boudoir.  The very top story was the sorceress’s private study, in which none were allowed.

Senta opened the heavily-carved pine door and led the others inside.  The ground floor, like the others was mostly one big room, with particular areas set aside by room dividers.  Bessemer immediately shot over to a pile of fluffy pillows in the corner of the dining area, turned around three times, then curled up into a ball that seemed impossibly small.  Senta carried the large loaf of bread to the pantry and opening the door, placed it inside.  She closed the door then looked around the room.

 “I know that book is down here somewhere.”

Every flat area in the room was covered with dirty dishes, books, stacks of papers, clothing, full and empty bottles and cans, and jars of preserved foods.

“We should stay here and clean up,” said Hero.

“When Zurfina finally comes down, she can just magic it clean.”

“Can’t you magic it clean?”

“Hmm.”  Senta raised an eyebrow.

“Never mind.  I don’t want you turning me into a ham sandwich by accident.”

“If you turn into a ham sandwich our deal about my not eating you is off,” said the dragon from the corner, without opening his eyes.

Suddenly Zurfina walked down the stairs in the center of the room.  She had a pale green plaster smeared across her face, including her eyelids, which were closed, but she didn’t seem to need to see to know where she was going.  She made every step on the stairs without the least hesitation.  Her hair was wet and mussed, but the girls could clearly see the bald spot over her right ear.  The pale green plaster on her face was the only thing that she was wearing.  Her naked body was on display with her constellation of two-inch star tattoos, one above each breast, one around her naval, and one on each hip bone.  Still with closed eyes, the sorceress reached the froredor, a magical ice box, opened it, and took out a carrot.  She bit the tip of the carrot as she turned around and walked back to the staircase.  The girls could now see the fourteen inch moon tattooed at the top of her back, and the eight inch flaming sun in the small of her back.

As soon as Zurfina had disappeared into the ceiling passage up to the next floor, both girls burst out laughing.

“Is that you, Senta?” called Zurfina’s voice from above.

“Yes!”  Senta called back.

“Clean up down there!”

Hero and Senta both burst out laughing again.

Bessemer is the character that changes the most in the first few books.  After all, he’s an egg in Book 0: Brechalon.  In Book 1: The Dark and Forbidding Land, he starts to play a real part in the story, but he only says about a dozen words in the whole book.  In The Drache Girl, he’s reached the point, where he is the equal (or more) than the human characters in the story.  He still plays an inferior role to Senta, as he does here when he shows up at the end of Senta’s magical duel with Wizard Bassington.

“Let’s not play that game,” said Bassington.  “Let’s play something a little better suited to our unique abilities.”

He held out his hand, waist high, palm down and said.  “Maiius Uuthanum nejor.”

Red smoke rose up from the ground just below his hand.  It swirled and coalesced into a shape.  The shape became a wolf.  Its red eyes seemed to glow and the hair on its back and shoulders stood up as it bared its dripping fangs and snarled at Senta.  She held out her own hand, palm pointed down.

“Maiius Uuthanum,” she said.

Green smoke rose from the ground below her hand, swirling around in a little cloud, finally billowing away to reveal a velociraptor with bright green and red feathers.

“A bird?” said Bassington, derisively.

The wolf lunged forward, snapping its teeth.  The velociraptor clamped its long jaw shut on the wolf’s snout, and grasped its head in its front claws.  The huge curved claw on the velociraptor’s hind foot slid down the canine’s belly, slicing it open and spilling steaming entrails out onto the gravel.  A moment later, in a swirl of multihued smoke, both creatures disappeared again.

“Prestus Uuthanum,” said Bassington, placing his right palm on his chest, and casting a spell of protection on his own body.

“Uuthanum uusteros pestor,” said Senta, spreading her arms out wide.  She seemed to split down the center as she stepped both right and left at the same time.  Where there had been one twelve-year-old girl a moment ago, there were now four twelve-year-old girls who looked exactly the same.

The wizard waved his hand and said.  “Ariana Uuthanum sembor.”  All four Sentas found themselves stuck in a mass of giant, sticky spider webs.

One of the blond girls fell down.  One of them pulled vainly at the webbing.  The third picked up a rock from the ground and threw it with all of her might at Bassington hitting him just above the temple.  The fourth waved her hand, saying the magic word “uuthanum”, and dispelling the webs.  The girl who had pulled at the webbing helped the fallen girl stand up, and then the two of them merged together.  The other two girls merged into her, and once again, there was only one Senta.

“Uuthanum uusteros vadia,” said Bassington and he disappeared.

Senta stood there for a moment, and then out of the corner of her eye, she saw several pieces of gravel shift on the ground to her left.  She pointed her finger in the direction.

“Uuthanum Regnum,” she said.

A ray of colorful, sparkling light sprayed from her fingertip in the direction she pointed.  Bassington cried out in surprise and reappeared, though he didn’t seem to suffer any ill effects of the spell, which usually left its victims covered in painful rashes.

“Erros Uuthanum tijiia,” he said.

A huge spectral hand, more than five feet across, appeared in the air in front of Senta.  The middle finger was bent back beneath the thumb, and then flicked Senta in the chest.  She fell backwards onto her bottom, crunching her bustle, and sliding several feet across the gravel road.  She struggled to suck in a breath.

“Time to say ‘uncle’, don’t you think?”  Bassington crossed his arms.

Senta tilted her head back and at last managed to pull some air into her lungs.  The wizard waited.

“Well?” he said, finally.

“The sky is purple,” said Senta.  “My dress is orange, and my dragon is going to bite your head off.”

Bassington stared for only a moment at Senta’s blue dress, before diving out of the way, just as Bessemer landed with a huge whomp right where he had been standing.

“Maiius Uuthanum nejor paj!” shouted Bassington, pointing toward the dragon, and then turned and ran north up the road as fast as he could.

Red smoke erupted just in front of Bessemer.  As it dissipated, it revealed a huge shaggy man-like creature, covered in white hair and more than seven feet tall.  Senta had never seen a gharhast ape before except in books, but she recognized one now that she saw it.  The ape bared a set of incredibly long fangs, and yelling out a tremendous roar, jumped onto the dragon.  Two very human looking hands grabbed the dragon around the neck as the ape attempted to dig its fangs into Bessemer’s neck.  The steel colored scales remained impenetrable, though a startled look was visible in the dragon’s eyes.

“Bugger all,” he said.

But then his serpentine tail whipped out, wrapping itself around the ape’s waist.  With one hand, Bessemer pushed the vicious anthropoid an arm’s length away.  Then with one quick motion, he bit off the ape’s head, chewed it several times, and then swallowed.  Blood spurted up from the creature’s severed neck like a fountain.

“Eww,” said Senta.

Then suddenly, as she had expected, the ape’s body burst into smoke and disappeared, leaving the steel dragon holding a few stray wisps in his hand.

“Oh my,” said Bessemer.

“What is it?”

“I think the part I ate turned to smoke too.”

Senta got to her feet and looked down the road.  Smedley Bassington was nowhere to be seen.  She felt the back of her dress.  Her bustle was hanging lopsidedly to the right.

“Kafira in a hand basket!  I can’t afford a new bustle.”

“That was pretty exciting,” said Bessemer.  “I’ve never seen a real magic duel before.”

“Sure you have.”

“Well, I don’t remember it.”

“How long were you watching, then?”

“Since the beginning.”

“And you didn’t bother to help me until just now?”

“Well, I figured that you would win.”

“How do you figure?  I’m just a kid.”

“Come on,” said the dragon.  “We both know you’re no ordinary kid.”

Well, it’s a new month, so it’s time to talk about a new book.  The Drache Girl, book 3 of the Senta and the Steel Dragon series was actually the second book of that series to be written back in 2008.  It remains my favorite book of the series.  I think that is mainly because I enjoyed writing about the characters at that age.  Senta and her friends are twelve, and I based a lot of their interactions on things that were going on with the twelve-year-olds in my class.

I remember one day, one of my little blond girls came to class with scratches all over her forehead and nose.  Her little brother had put gravel on her face while she was asleep and then pounded on it with a rubber mallet!  That week, I wrote that Senta fell down, while running down the road, and got bits of gravel imbedded into her face.

Twelve years of age is a really special time.  Most kids have reached the peak of childish confidence and haven’t yet been overtaken by teen angst or adult dread.  Of course some are ahead and some are behind in their social and emotional development.  They think they know everything, but they know virtually nothing.  Or course, some are ahead and some are behind in that too.

I think you can see much of this phase in Senta, when you read The Drache Girl.  She’s much more confident than she is in The Voyage of the Minotaur, even bossing Zurfina around.  She still considers Bessemer to be her personal baby doll, as we see when he is accidentally shot by hunters.

Suddenly he heard gunfire erupting from directly in front of him.  One, two shots.  Then a pause.  Then one, two, three, four, five, six, pause.  He looked up above the trees and saw a flash of steel shoot across the sky.

“Oh, bloody hell!” he shouted and ran at top speed in the direction of the gunfire.  That he carried no other weapon than a heavy truncheon worried him not a bit.  Two men with military issue service rifles, but wearing expensive hunting clothes, stood in the middle of the gravel road.

“Guns down!” yelled Saba, as he skidded to a stop in front of them.  “Drop your guns now!”

“See here chap,” said the first man, his accent labeling him as plainly as if he had worn a placard that he was from Old Town Brech.  He must have been very new to the colony, because Saba made it a custom to get to know everyone, and neither of these men he recognized.

“We’re doing nothing illegal,” said the second man.  “Just shooting some pests.”

“What exactly were you shooting?”

“We heard from some of the neighbors that these velocipedes….”

“Velociraptors,” Saba corrected.

“Yes, them.  They’ve been a menace lately, to the point of endangering the local children.”

“Quite,” said the first man.  “We went out to put a few down and found a small group digging right into those garbage bins.  We shot a few and killed two, I think, but one took off and flew into the trees.”

“If you listen to me very, and I do mean very, carefully,” said Saba.  “I just might be able to save your lives.  Lay your rifles down on the ground.”

“But I don’t under….”

“Do it!”

The men leaned over and carefully placed their weapons on the white gravel road.

“Nobody told you velociraptors don’t fly?”

A loud whomp made all three men jump, and they found themselves standing next to a pony-sized reptile with twenty foot wings, and more importantly a mouth open large enough to swallow a human head.  Steel scales reflected the light from the winter morning sky like shields and swords on a forgotten battlefield.  The steel dragon let out a huge roar, rending the air with a noise that must have been heard all over Port Dechantagne.  Little puffs of smoke flew out of his mouth at the two men as well as bits of saliva which burst into little sparks in the air.

“They bloody shot me!”  The dragon’s four word sentence disintegrated into another roar of rage.

One of the hunters started to bend over for his rifle.  Saba stepped on the gun and put his hand on the man’s shoulder.

“Let me see your injury, Bessemer,” he said.  The dragon folded its left wing, and held out the right wing showing an ugly lead mark on a shiny steel scale about midway between the first joint and the shoulder.

“It doesn’t look that bad,” said Saba.  “And you know this was an accident.  They were trying to knock off some velociraptors.”

“So was I,” said Bessemer.  “I didn’t expect it would get me shot!”

“It was an accident, honest and truly,” said the first hunter, shaking a little.  “Maybe we can make it up to you.”

“There was a time,” said Bessemer.  “When the only acceptable payment for this type of transgression was a virgin given at midnight on the full moon.”  Then he burst out laughing.  “Of course I didn’t mean you, Saba.”

The two hunters laughed, a bit nervously, along with the dragon, happy that the anger he had arrived with seemed to be going away.

“Well, no harm then,” said one.

“You daft fools,” said Saba, looking down the road.  “He’s the least one of your problems.”

By this time, neighbors from six or seven close by houses had come out to see what all the shooting and roaring was about.  Saba saw it first, because he had been watching and knew just what to look for—a black and white streak was racing down the road toward them.  And it was coming up quickly, headed directly for the two hunters.  Saba reached out and caught it as it zipped by him, all spitfire and claws.

“Settle down girl,” he said, holding Senta around the waist and lifting her feet, which were still running, off the ground.  She kicked and hissed for another moment and then stopped.  He set her down.  She stuck out her index finger at the two men.  Saba grabbed her by the wrist.  “None of that.”

He turned to the two men.  “You’d best be on your way home, in case the big one comes along.”

“The big one?”

“I’ll boil your giblets,” hissed the girl.

“Bloody hell, man.  Did you not bother to find out about where you were going to be living?  You’ve already got Zurfina’s dragon and Zurfina’s apprentice after you.  Do you want to wait around for Zurfina herself?”

Both the men turned the color of porridge.  “The sorceress?” asked one.

“Yep.”

“We’ll… We’ll just head home, then.”  The two men bent down and picked up their rifles and scurried away at a quick walk, glancing nervously over their shoulders as they went.

“Run now!” yelled Senta after them.  “I’ll find you and then…”

“Little girls do not go around threatening people,” said Saba, turning her by the shoulders to face him.  “It’s not even nine o’clock.  You should wait till at least noon before boiling people’s giblets.  Trust me, I know.  My mother’s a cook.”

She stuck out her lip.  “I’m not a little girl.”

“Of course you’re not.  You’re a very frightening sorceress, with a very nice hairstyle, I might add.”

“Thanks.”  She blushed for just a moment and then broke away from his hands to rush over to the dragon, throwing her arms around his thick serpentine neck.  “Are you all right, baby?”

The dragon’s voice, which normally put one in mind of a young man, went high and weak and pathetic sounding.  “I’ve got an owie on my wing.”

“And you just let them go,” growled the girl, looking at Saba.