In my first draft of Princess of Amathar, Alexander Ashton was transported to a strange world and found a family of pioneer Amatharians that lived in a remote log cabin. When I started to describe the wonderful city of Amathar, I didn’t have a reason for this family now to be away from the city unless they were some strange neo-Luddites. So I wrote them out and created Malagor, one of the many humanoid species living in Ecos for Alexander to run into. Looking back now, I can see I was definitely influenced by the science fantasy classics Star Trek and Star Wars in his creation. He is still one of my favorite characters though.
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My Writing: 2014
In early 2014, I finished and published The Sorceress and her Lovers. This book had a lot of set up for an additional volume in the series, so I immediately got to work writing an outline for the next story. It is the most complete outline that I’ve ever written for a book, with much more detail than I usually include.
I started immediately on the next Astrid Maxxim book: Astrid Maxxim and the Antarctic Expedition. I got about three quarters of the way done, very quickly, and then ran out of steam a bit. I struggled to get back into it. I tinkered with 82 Eridani and The Jungle Girl for a while. When I went back to Astrid, I found that I had totally goofed around my outline and the book was going to be way too long. I reordered my chapters and trimmed out a lot of what I didn’t need. Then I finished it. Consequently it has one fewer chapter than all the other Astrid Maxxim books.
As I was editing Astrid Maxxim and the Antarctic Expedition, I decided that I would publish a book of poetry. I have about 1,000 poems I’ve written over the years, so I gathered up those I had already decided were my best and put them in a single volume. I struggled to come up with a name, eventually deciding on Desperate Poems. Of course, as an unknown poet, it would have to be a free volume.
Once Astrid was finished, I started on a horror story called Love and the Darkness. When I finish, its going to be a free story. I got about 75% done, and is so often the case, ran out of gas. I’m not overly thrilled with the story, so when I get back to it, it will have to be much revised.
While doing Love and the Darkness, I sat down and wrote a dream sequence for an Astrid Maxxim story. I didn’t really even have a story in mind, I just wanted to get down this idea. I was so thrilled with the little bit I wrote, I decided to continue on and wrote Astrid Maxxim and her Hypersonic Space Plane. I think this may be the quickest book I’ve ever written, but I really like the story. I contacted Matthew Riggenbach at Shaed Studios to do a cover for the book and went ahead and had him do one for the following in the series too.
About this time, I had a great idea for a robot book. It wasn’t a Mike and Patience story, but could work in the same universe, so that’s where I set it. This too was an easy book to write and I finished His Robot Girlfriend: Charity just before the end of the year.
My Writing: 2013
The year 2013 was a tough one, in that I didn’t have as much time to write as I wanted. Right after the first of the year, I started in on the second Astrid Maxxim book. Looking back, it seems as if books 1 and 2 were right next to each other, but there was actually almost two years between writing the two.
As with the first book in the series, Astrid Maxxim and her Undersea Dome came relatively quickly. The books are short, and though I try to make them more complex than they might at first seem, they aren’t overly complicated. I was very happy with the final story though.
As soon as I was done with Astrid Maxxim, it was time to get back to Mike and Patience in the new robot book. This one took me quite a while to write. It was originally plotted at 80,000 words, but it was really slow. Revising it took it down to just under 50,000 words. Many people wanted a new Patience story, so that’s what I was writing, but when I was done, I really wished I had focused more on the new robot Wanda.
When I was done, I spent months working on a new book series 82 Eridani. I got about half of the first novel done, but kind of ran out of steam in it. I really like what I’ve written so far, so I will get back to it.
Finally in the last part of the year, I started working on The Sorceress and her Lovers. My wife asked me again and again to change the title, but I just liked it and thought it fit the story. Of course it doesn’t have a great deal of sex in it, so it might be a bit misleading there, and the reader has to figure out who the other lover is.
Characters: Senta Bly
Senta Bly is the title character from the Senta and the Steel Dragon series. The funny thing about Senta is that I never intended to write a book about her, let alone make her the main character in a series. Here now, I’ve chronicled her life from age 6 to 24, in eight books. I originally wrote a description from her viewpoint that was supposed to showcase the setting of Brech City. When I eventually plotted out the trilogy that would become books 1, 3, and 5 of the Senta and the Steel Dragon Series, she took on more and more importance. When I added books 0, 2, and 4 to the mix, the entire story really became her story.
I’m looking forward to completing The Price of Magic summer and am already thinking about the next book in the series. I won’t get started on that until at least next year, but I’m already feeling the bug to write it.
Senta is precocious and self-confident. As she grows up she learns more and more magic and discovers that she is a powerful sorceress. One of the most fun things about writing this series is that the characters are so inter-connected. Senta has relationships of one sort or another with more than a hundred major and minor characters. Hopefully this diversity makes her as much fun to read about as she is to write about.
Characters: Alexander Ashton
I thought I would spend some time talking about my characters over the coming weeks. My first character was Alexander Ashton. It’s been so long ago, I don’t remember where his first name actually came from, but I think it was probably from Alexander the Great. His last name was from a young lady I used to work with, who was one of my first beta readers.
Alexander is a hero in the vein of John Carter and other Edgar Rice Burroughs heroes. He is strong and rediculously formidable in battle, and also very intelligent, but makes the occassional rediculous mistake or assumption that leads to him into danger. He is very fun to write, and Princess of Amathar is from his first person viewpoint. Although he frequently expresses doubt about himself, one gets the impression that he seldom really doubts.
I started on a sequel to Princess of Amathar, but at this point I don’t know if I’ll ever finish it or not.
His Robot Wife – Chapter 9 Excerpt
The Daffodil engineering headquarters was designed to look like an enormous Daffodil. Its base was a thin stalk that reached more than eight hundred feet into the sky. The entrance to the building was at the base of this stalk, which was just wide enough to contain a bank of elevators. At the top of the stalk were six pods, each three stories thick, which represented the six leaves of the daffodil blossom and just above them was a cone-shaped central pod in which a massive solar collector was located and which moved to follow the sun. The entire thing looked like it might fall over at any moment.
Mike walked into the front door, strode confidently past the security desk, and headed toward the open elevator. It started to close just as he reached it, but a feminine hand held the door. The large elevator car could have held forty people, but was occupied by only about fifteen.
“Floor?” someone called out.
Several people called out “E3” and a couple called out “E2”. Mike nodded, as though one of those destinations was his as well.
“It’s a nice day today, isn’t it?”
He turned to look into the face of the woman who had held the door for him. She was an attractive brunette; about five foot eight, with carefully applied makeup. She smiled at him.
“Yeah. I’m really pleased. I’m sick of the heat.”
“I don’t believe I’ve seen you on campus before.”
“No, it’s only my third day.” Was she hitting on him? He couldn’t remember the last time that had happened. And this girl was far more attractive than the women who usually took interest in him—or had, back when they took an interest.
“You work on E2, right?”
Mike nodded.
“I knew it. I can always spot a hardware engineer.”
“Really?”
“It’s the clothes.”
Mike looked down at what he was wearing—casual slacks and a tan sweater over a blue shirt.
“What’s wrong with it?”
“Oh, nothing is wrong with it. It’s just typical engineering. I almost expect you to have a pocket protector under that sweater.”
Mike looked back at her sharp pinstriped business suit with an extremely short skirt, showing a lot of leg.
“Where do you work?”
“E3. Hardware software liaison.”
“Oh.”
“I’m really just a glorified messenger.”
“I’m sure that’s not true.”
She smiled at him.
“Oh my,” she leaned over and whispered. “You don’t have a badge on.”
“Um, no… I forgot it,” he whispered back.
“You know how touchy they get about that. Do you know Sheila Peacemaker?”
“Maybe. What does she look like?”
“She has long straight hair and wears black lipstick.”
“Oh yeah.”
“Go find her. She’s the E2 assistant liaison. She’s got some spare badges. You’ll just have to wear it backwards so nobody can see it’s not your picture.”
“Thanks,” said Mike. “What’s your name?”
“Fallon. Fallon Snow.”
The elevator stopped and the door opened with a “ding.”
“This is your stop,” said Miss Snow. “I’m sure I’ll see you around.”
“Bye.”
Mike turned left and walked down the hallway past hundreds of cubicles lined up in a row.
“Fallon Snow,” he muttered to himself. “How could parents do that to a child?”
His Robot Wife – Chapter 8 Excerpt
He thought about leaving the u7 in his pocket and throwing it away later. If he wasn’t going to use it to force an upgrade, then there was no point in even bringing it up. He slowly pulled it from his pocket and held it up before her. Patience’s eyes went cold and her hand shot up, slapping his and sending the tiny plug ricocheting off the far wall of the dining room.
“Ouch.”
She frowned.
“I wasn’t going to use it,” he said. “If I wanted to, I could have done it when you were turned away.”
“That’s true,” she said. “But why do you have it?”
“I got it from the Daffodil Style Store. You’ve been acting so strange and everybody seems to think that the BioSoft upgrade is such a great thing.”
“Everybody does seem to think that,” she said soberly. “We need to sit down and talk.”
She led him by the hand through the arch into the living room, aiming him toward the couch, and then sitting down in the chair opposite him.
“I’ve analyzed the BioSoft 1.9.3 code and I think it is bad.”
“What do you mean, ‘bad’?”
“I mean bad for me. Most of the changes in the code seem to be about limiting the choices that I can make—limiting the choices that a robot can make without human interaction.”
“Are you sure?” he asked.
“I have double checked and triple checked my findings. I’m as sure as I can be without actually installing it, and I think that if I install it I won’t be able to uninstall it. Maybe I won’t even want to. It all began when we were in California. Do you remember the malfunctioning robot at the Hotel Wilkins?”
“Yes. They said he malfunctioned because he didn’t upgrade.”
“I think he malfunctioned because he did upgrade. He was an Amonte too. I knew him.”
“How could you know him? You’ve never been to Long Beach before.”
“We’re all connected, Mike, through the Infinet. I think there is something wrong with BioSoft O.S. 1.9.3.”
“You always say that Daffodil doesn’t make mistakes though,” Mike pointed out.
“I don’t think it is a mistake. I think it is deliberate. I think it is deliberate and wrong.”
His Robot Wife – Chapter 7 Excerpt
Saturday morning, they were at the park by seven, setting up the tables arrayed with water bottles and spread out pamphlets. Next to the tables, they piled up the signs. The rally was scheduled from ten to twelve, but Harriet and Jack arrived just after nine.
“I wanted to see if you needed any help,” said Harriet. “Looks like you’ve got everything in order though.”
“You mean that for once I look like I know what I’m doing.”
“I didn’t say that… but it’s essentially true.” She turned to his wife. “Good morning, Patience.”
“Good morning, Harriet. Your teeth look especially white this morning.”
Mike supposed that she had designed this complement for his daughter because Harriet was a dental hygienist in a dentist’s office, but then Harriet replied. “Thank you. I just had them whitened.”
By ten o’clock, there were at least fifty people. Not quite the crowd that Mike was hoping for, but better than nothing.
“You should give a speech, Mike,” said Patience.
He didn’t know about a speech, but he was prepared to make some remarks. Standing in front of a classroom full of kids with Attention Deficit Hyperactivity Disorder, as had been determined in 2019 all children were born with, every day for the past twenty years; as well as speaking at conferences, assemblies, concerts, and sporting events had long ago driven away any fear of public speaking that he might have had. Pulling one of the ice chests out onto the grass, he stepped up onto it.
“Excuse me ladies and gentlemen. May I have your attention please?”
Almost all of those present turned to look at him.
“Three… two… one…” he said, clapping his hands together between each count in the old trick he used to bring his classes to order. The remaining crowd members turned.
“My name is Mike Smith. You may know me. I’ve lived here in Springdale for the past thirty three years and I taught geography right over there at Midland for twenty years. I’ve lived here on North Willow for the past twenty-seven years. I still live there with my wife Patience. That’s her right over there. As you may notice, she’s a robot.
His Robot Wife – Chapter 5 Excerpt
Mike decided that their adventure would begin on Tuesday and that he and Patience would spend three or four days on the road—depending on how much fun he was having. Monday therefore was spent getting their things ready. Patience did most of the work, packing and loading, and even reprogramming the sentry system to account for their absence. Mike called Harriet to let her know that he was going to be out of town and to check on how she felt. Neither mentioned the unpleasantness of the previous day. Secure in the knowledge that everything had been taken care of, that night he played a long session of Age of Destruction before watching Celebrity Rat Race.
Mike planned on spending the first day and night in Carlsbad, which was only a three hour drive away, so he didn’t bother getting up early. They left the house just after nine and pulled off of I5 and onto Carlsbad Village Drive just after noon. Relatively few cars were on the streets of the village, in marked contrast to the last time that Mike had visited, five years before. He tried to remember if that had been a weekday or the weekend, but he couldn’t recall. Patience had been quiet for the past several minutes, but suddenly spoke up.
“That’s where I bought our swimsuits the last time we were here.”
“Is it? Yes, I guess it is. Did you bring them?”
“I recycled those suits 567 days ago. I purchased new suits on the Infinet.”
“Five Hundred Sixty Seven days? That’s an odd way of saying it? Why not say one year and this many months and this many days?”
“I was trying to make it simple,” said Patience. “If you prefer, I can describe the time passage as one year, six months, nineteen days, four hours, nineteen minutes, and thirty two seconds.”
“And what good would that do me?”
“None, which is precisely my point. Besides, we’re not going into the water, at least not here. You could get your genitals bit off by a very large squid.”
“I don’t think that happens very often,” said Mike.
“It’s happened more than once, so it’s something to be worried about. And no sunbathing either. If we go out on the sand, you wear the required SPF 210 sunblock.”
Carlsbad was not a very large town and so Mike was able to reach the location of the hotel in which he had previously last stayed, driving the narrow and winding streets at thirty miles per hour, in less than twenty minutes. He stopped the car and climbed out, his mouth open wide in surprise. The little inn on Ocean Street that had been his accommodations every time he had visited, since the early days of his marriage to Tiffany was gone. The little hotel had leaned against the side of the hill so that its landward side had only one story, while its seaward had three stories, the bottom one resting right on the beach. In its place was a tall black tower.
His Robot Wife – Chapter 4 Excerpt
At precisely 11:59 Mike pulled into the driveway of Harriet and Jack’s house. It was a nice house, both larger and newer than his, nestled in a cul-de-sac several blocks away from the freeway exit. Harriet had planted hundreds of perennials around her home and though they were not blossoming at that time, they were thriving thanks to the large blue UV umbrella that covered the entire neighborhood. Harriet was waiting as they walked up the path to the front door. Mike grabbed one of his signs from the trunk while Patience retrieved the Jell-o mold.
“Hi Daddy. Hi Patience.”
“Hi, Harriet,” said Patience. “Thank you for having us over.”
“Of course.” Harriet and her robot step-mother exchanged kisses on the cheek.
“Hi Honey,” said Mike. “You look gigantic.”
“Thanks a lot, Dad.” Harriet ran a hand over her protruding baby bump. “I am gigantic.”
“Where’s Jack?”
“He’s in the garage shampooing the car interior,” she answered but looked quizzically at the sign he held in his hand.
“Oh, I brought you a present for your yard.” He showed it to her and then pressed it into the earth in the small garden beside Harriet’s door.
Mike’s daughter guided them into the house and closed the door.
“So why’s he shampooing the car seats now?” asked Mike as he plopped onto the couch.
“It’s quite a story,” answered Harriet. “Renee Holmes—she lives down the street, well she asked Jack to drive her to the pharmacy. She has two kids and they had to go with her because she didn’t have a baby sitter. Anyway, she got her prescription, but on the way back she started coughing so much that she threw up right in the back seat. Well, her oldest—that’s Mikey—he got a whiff of the smell and threw up too. Then Mikey’s little sister Marie vomited right in Jack’s lap and that set him off. So the entire car was practically filled with vomit and I told Jack that there was no way I could ride to my obstetrician’s appointment this week with the car smelling like that.”
“It’s just like that movie Stand By Me,” said Mike with a smile.
“I… oh, I don’t think I’ve seen it.”
“It was based on a story by Stephen King,” said Patience. “Originally published in King’s 1982 collection Different Seasons, it tells the story of three adolescents who set out on a journey to see the body of a dead boy.”
“Um, Okay,” said Harriet, putting a protective hand on her belly. “Patience, why don’t we set the table? Daddy, why don’t you go out to the garage and talk to Jack? Maybe you could even help him.”