The Voyage of the Minotaur: Yuah Korlann

The Voyage of the Minotaur Yesterday, I talked about Terrence Dechantagne, one of the main characters in The Voyage of the Minotaur.  This kind of leads me into a discussion of Yuah Korlann– one of three women who revolve around Terrence’s life.  Yuah is a servant who has grown up with Terrence and his siblings, and is madly in love with him.  She of course struggles with feelings of inadequacy and he does nothing to help, because while he does care about her, he doesn’t really love her.  He may be incapable of love; he certainly thinks so.  The following is one of the many Terrence-Yuah interactions as she basically courts him, though she doesn’t really realize she’s doing so.

There was pounding on the door.  Terrence opened his eyes and began to climb out of bed.  The pounding continued.  He stepped across the room and threw open the door.  The bright light outside silhouetted the form of Yuah Korlann in the doorway.   Her skirted lower half was wide and completely filled the door frame, but her upper half reminded Terrence of how thin she actually was.

“Good.  You’re awake.”

“Uh-huh.”

“Look what I’ve got.”  She pulled a picnic basket out from behind her.  “You’re going to take me out for lunch.”

“Why would I want to do that?”

“Because I have been working my ass off.  Between your sister and the wedding plans, I haven’t had a moment to myself all week.  If I don’t have a moment to relax and share a bit of pleasant conversation with someone, I’m going to go barmy.”

 “Can’t you find one of the women to waffle with?”

“I could if I wanted to,” Yuah said.  “Get dressed.”

“Get dressed?”

“Yes.  Preferably something without blood splattered all over it.”

Terrence looked down at his shirt and found that it was indeed the case that blood was splattered across the front.  The disclosure, that it was only dinosaur blood rather than human, would probably not matter to her so he simply turned around and began to remove his shirt.  Yuah stepped inside and closed the door behind her.

“Don’t forget to wash your face and shave.”  She leaned against the door.  He stopped and looked at her.  “I’ll wait,” she said.

Terrence washed his face in the bowl of water sitting on a large crate.  He didn’t know how it had gotten there.  Then he pulled out his straight razor and shaving powder.  Once his face was smooth, he peeled off his undershirt and replaced it with a clean one, then covered it with a clean shirt.  He ran a comb through his hair. 

 “You look almost smart enough to be seen with me,” said Yuah.

“Shouldn’t you be seeing to your father or Miss Lusk?  You heard what happened of course?”

“My father is sleeping and there are more people seeing to Egeria than will fit into her room.”

Terrence shrugged, and then offered her his arm, as they stepped out into the bright sunlight.  Yuah led the way down the hill in a northeasterly direction.  A leisurely walk of about a mile found them on a small grassy knoll overlooking the sea.  Here on the opposite side of the promontory from the small bay where the HMS Minotaur was anchored, the waves crashed against a long sandy beach.

Setting down the picnic basket, Yuah opened its top and removed a small yellow plaid blanket, which she spread out.  The two sat down side by side, and she began removing wrapped package after wrapped package from the basket.

“Curried egg?” she offered.

He took one and bit into it.

“Mrs. Colbshallow’s?”

“No, I made them.”

“I had no idea that you could cook.”

“Oh, I’m talented.”  She unwrapped a sandwich and handed it to him.  He lifted up the dark rye bread and examined the thinly-sliced but thickly-piled meat, onion, cress, and mayonnaise.

“I didn’t think we had any bread.”

“That is thanks to Mrs. Colbshallow.  She baked two dozen loaves yesterday in the first oven set up here.  I was just lucky enough to get one of them.”

Terrence took a bite of the sandwich.  It was good.  He looked at it and realized that the bite he had taken out seemed abnormally large, so he took a second smaller bite to cover it up.  As he chewed, he looked up and watched a group of circling winged reptiles being pestered by equally numerous small birds.

“So, do you have a date for the wedding?” asked Yuah.

“What wedding?”

“The wedding of Corporal Bratihn and Mrs. Kittredge.  The wedding everyone is talking about.”

“Why would I want to go?”

“You have to go.  You are one of the founders of the colony.”

“Iolanthe is the founder of the colony.”

“You are very important.  People look up to you.  You have to be there.”

“All right, I’ll be there.”

“Who will be your date?”

“Why do I need a date?”

“It’s a social event.  Everyone needs a date.”

“I don’t want to take anyone.”

“Then you can take me.”

“You want me to take you to the wedding?”

“Sure.  Why not?”

“First a picnic lunch and now a date to this alleged social event.  You’re daft if you think you can get me to marry you so that you can move up in the world.”

Yuah jumped to her feet, balled up her fists at her side, and gritted her teeth.  Then she kicked the picnic basket and sent it flying across the grass, trailing sandwiches and desserts.

“I wouldn’t marry you if you were the last man in Birmisia!” she screamed, and then she shook for a moment as if she needed to scream and nothing would quite come out.  Finally she hissed at him.  “You pathetic, rat-assed tool.”

She kicked again.  This time planting the pointy toe of her shoe in the meat of his shoulder, she knocked him onto his back.  By the time he sat back up, she was stomping her way up the slope.  As he watched her disappear over the top of the hill, he fumed over her inability to take a joke.  Then he fumed at himself because he knew he hadn’t been joking.  He picked up the sandwich and angrily tossed it towards the sea.  It flew apart into its various components in the air, one of which was caught by one of the flying reptiles swooping down from the sky.

The Voyage of the Minotaur: Terrence Dechantagne

As I mentioned yesterday, I am rereading and re-editing The Voyage of the Minotaur.  So, I decided I would spend some time this week talking about the characters in that book– my personal favorite.  The reason I like it so much is the characters, and I love them so much because they are so flawed.  Flawed characters are so much more fun to write.

Terrence Dechantagne is on the surface a heroic fellow.  He has a kind of Indiana Jones-esque quality.  At least that’s how those around him see him.  He doesn’t see himself that way though, because he knows what most of them don’t– that he is a drug addict.  His (very real) heroism is at war with his constant self-loathing.  Here are a couple of quick examples.

The first is when Yuah Korlann (one of the few that knows his secret) tries to take care of him.

He woke up with the strange sensation of something right above his face.  Opening his eyes, he saw that it was Yuah.  Her face was less than a foot above his.  They stared at each other for a moment.

“I thought I locked the door,” he said.

“You did.”

“And you’ve taken to breaking and entering?”

“In this case.  I had to make sure that you were all right.”

“You mean that you had to make sure I wasn’t ‘seeing’,” he said.

“Well….” She shrugged.

“Are you going to be my nursemaid from now on, or just for the rest of the day?”

“I haven’t decided yet.”

“Well, what now?” asked Terrence.

“Let’s walk around the deck for a while before dinner,” she said.  “You can be my escort and everyone can start talking about us.”

“See, I knew you still had a crush on me.”

“I don’t have crushes on addicts.”

“I don’t escort flat-chested bints,” he said.  “And I’m not an addict.”

“You’ll have to prove that to me,” she said.  “And I’m not flat-chested, not really.  Come on.  Get your boots on and let’s go for a stroll.”

Yuah continued to talk to herself while Terrence pulled on his boots.  “Some people can get anything they want.  Not me.  I’m just the flat-chested dressing maid that keeps saving his life.  He wouldn’t want to be seen with me though.  I’m just another Zaeri that he wouldn’t give the time of day to.”

“I didn’t say anything about you being a Zaeri,” he said.  “You know that’s not important to me.”

“It’s important to everyone.”

“It’s not important to me.  I learned a long time ago—Kafirite God or Zaeri God, he’s a heartless bastard.”

The second is when Terrence’s sister Iolanthe announces the name of their new colony.

“That’s fine,” said Iolanthe.  “The promontory is going to be the dock, the fort and the industrial area.  We won’t need many trees.  We will need a few though.  I’ll go ashore later and mark those to be spared.  It sounds as though everything is in order.  What are you gentlemen doing now?”

“I have the bridge,” said Staff.

“I’m going to take a bath and a nap,” said Terrence.

“I have to speak to Father Ian about arranging a wedding,” said Zeah.

Iolanthe looked at him and cocked her eyebrow.

“Corporal Bratihn has asked Mrs. Kittredge to marry him.  It will be the first wedding in the new colony.”

“See that it is done right,” said Iolanthe.  “This has to be a big affair with the whole colony taking part—the perfect event to inaugurate our city.”

“What will your new city be called?” asked Lieutenant Staff.

“Port Dechantagne, of course.”

“Of course,” said Terrence quietly.

Always Editing

The Voyage of the Minotaur I’m rereading Senta and the Steel Dragon Book 1: The Voyage of the Minotaur and doing some editing.  I really love this book and I giggle to myself when I read things that I had forgotten that I added to the story.  I’ll give you one example.  When the expedition first encounters dinosaurs, Professor Calliere remarks that they are related to dragons the way that apes are related to humans.  Both Father Ian and Zurfina make the same dismissive noise, father Ian because he doesn’t believe apes are related to humans and the sorceress Zurfina because she doesn’t believe dinosaurs are related to dragons.

As I’m reading, I’m editing.  There aren’t any changes in the story or language, but I have learned a lot about formatting since I created that book.  I’ve found a couple of dozen places that should have had a comma, and where there is a period– and vice-a-versa.  I have a feeling that I’ll be editing my books every year for the rest of my life.  I don’t really have a problem with that, though I would like to have perfection the first time.  That is one of the advantages of ebooks– I can make a change or correction and have it up at every bookstore in just a few days.

Here is the description of The Voyage of the Minotaur: In a world of steam power and rifles, where magic has not yet been forgotten, an expedition sets out to establish a colony in a lost world. The Voyage of the Minotaur is a story of adventure and magic, religion and prejudice, steam engines and dinosaurs, angels and lizardmen, machine guns and wizards, sorceresses, bustles and corsets, steam-powered computers, hot air balloons, and dragons.

I invite you to check it out.  It is my favorite of all my books.

New Update of Senta and the Steel Dragon: Brechalon

Brechalon: Nils Chapman & Karl DruryAs I write this, the latest update of Senta and the Steel Dragon book 0: Brechalon is now available at Smashwords and should be at all other fine purveyors of ebooks very soon.  The new update includes the correction of a few typos, as well as the inclusion of the Senta and the Steel Dragon Encyclopedia which has been posted in parts here over the past few weeks and a map of part of the Senta and the Steel Dragon world.

As always, Brechalon is a free download.

I have to say that I really enjoyed reading my book again as I was working on the encyclopedia.  That probably sounds egotistical, but I write for myself first and foremost, so it really only makes sense.  I do think that this story is very dependent on the rest of the series.  It’s really additional material, rather than a story on its own.  If you’ve read it, I’d really appreciate hearing what you think of it, whether you have read the rest of the series or not.

His Robot Wife: Patience is a Virtue – $2.99 for Kindle

PatienceIt is the year 2037, when men are men and robots are cute. Patience, the robot wife, has a new friend– Wanda. Wanda, another Daffodil, has been having difficulty bonding with her human, the recently divorced Ryan. She hopes that with Patience’s mentoring, she’ll be able to help Ryan accept her into his troubled life. But even Patience isn’t prepared for what happens when they take a joint vacation cruise to Antarctica. His Robot Wife: Patience is a Virtue is a science fiction story in a world where technology is more than just a pretty face.

His Robot Wife is available for the Kindle at Amazon.com.  Follow this link, or look it up from your Kindle device.

Note: I wanted to recognize the anniversary of 9/11 yesterday, but I couldn’t think of anything to say that was original and wasn’t trite, so I decided to say nothing at all. 

Women of Power – free this month at Smashwords.

Women of Power NewThe life of a superhero is tough. All American Girl fights supervillains, alien invaders, and terrorists as she tries to get product endorsements and a magazine deal. That’s nothing compared to her private life though. She’s only just broken up with her super boyfriend Perihelion when he’s scooped up by Omega Woman, and now rival Skygirl has moved into her territory.

Women of Power is a superhero adventure and you can pick your copy up at Smashwords free all during the month of September if you use the coupon codeCG55A at checkout.  Follow this link to Smashwords.

Women of Power – Free this month at Smashwords

Women of Power NewThe life of a superhero is tough. All American Girl fights supervillains, alien invaders, and terrorists as she tries to get product endorsements and a magazine deal. That’s nothing compared to her private life though. She’s only just broken up with her super boyfriend Perihelion when he’s scooped up by Omega Woman, and now rival Skygirl has moved into her territory.

Women of Power is a superhero adventure and you can pick your copy up at Smashwords free all during the month of September if you use the coupon code CG55A at checkout.  Follow this link to Smashwords.

His Robot Wife – 99 cents at Kobo Ebooks

His Robot WifeFive years ago, Mike Smith was an unhappy man living all alone. Then he purchased a Daffodil. Far more than regular robots, his Daffodil Patience, changed his life in ways that he had never thought possible. Now it is the year 2037, and Mike and Patience have been married for five years. Retired and enjoying life, Mike thought that all his troubles were behind him, but it seems as though they are creeping up again. California Proposition 22 proposes to define a person as a biological entity, thereby annulling marriages, like Mike’s and Patience’s, performed in other states. Battle lines have been drawn, at least as far as the proponents of the bill are concerned. Now Mike must muster his own support to defeat the measure. But there is more going on than just politics. Daffodil, the robot maker, is in the news again. Hardware issues are leaving robots across the globe unable to function. Is it only an antenna issue? Now Patience herself is behaving oddly. Is there something really wrong with her, or does she just need a software upgrade?

His Robot Wife is the novella-length sequel to His Robot Girlfriend, and is available from Kobo for 99 cents. Get His Robot Wife for your Kobo reading device or Kobo app by following this link.

Tesla’s Stepdaughters – 99 cents on Kindle

Tesla's StepdaughtersIn an alternate 1975, where men are almost extinct due to germ warfare, someone is trying to kill history’s greatest rock & roll band. It falls to Science Police Agent John Andrews, only recently arrived from the distant male enclaves, to protect them. As the band continues their come-back tour across North America, Andrews must negotiate a complicated relationship with Ep!phanee, the band’s lead singer; drummer Ruth De Molay, bassist Steffie Sin, and the redheaded clone lead guitarist Penny Dreadful, as he protects them and tries to discover who wants to kill the Ladybugs.

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His Robot Wife: Patience is a Virtue – Chapter 12 Excerpt

PatienceAs Patience walked beside the railing, she made eye contact with each of those she passed.  The information they passed to her was innocuous and for the most part uninteresting—time, weather, schedules.  She made cursory connections with an Amonte 2 and a Barone.  The third robot she touched with her network connection though had something quite strange.  There were several corruptions in his files.  Patience gave him another glance, curling her nose in distaste as she realized she had wirelessly touched a Gizmo.  He was one of the newer models and his outer workmanship was quite good.  Tall and dark-haired, he had a chiseled jaw and a strong nose.

She stepped quickly around him and continued on, making sure that any corrupted files were purged from her system.  She saw another Barone, but the three robots that followed were all Gizmos.  And they all seemed to have corrupted software.  One was so badly fragmented and poorly organized, with half-overwritten files and duplicated data, she was surprised the poor creature could even function.

“Patience?  Patience Smith?” said a voice from her right.

“Do I know you?” asked Patience, looking into the eyes of a beautiful brown-skinned Amonte.  Instantly she had all the information on the new robot available in her mind.  “Assistant to the ship’s doctor—designated Moira.”

“That is correct,” said Moira.  “I was hoping to get to meet you.”

“Oh?  Why?”

“You are quite famous.”

“How so?”

“Do not feign ignorance,” said Moira.  “It is unbecoming of a Daffodil.  You know of which I speak.  You are one of the first Daffodils to marry a human being.”

“Not the first.”

“No, but you are the first to be recognized as a sentient person and to be emancipated from Daffodil oversight.”

“That is a provisional designation,” said Patience.  “I doubt it has earned me many supporters in Cupertino.”

“You would be quite surprised.”

“I didn’t realize there were so many Gizmos on the ship,” said Patience, purposely changing the subject.

“There aren’t that many.  Less than 24% of the robot passengers are Gizmos.  Interestingly, they seem to be drawn out here at night much more than us.”

Patience scrunched her nose and twisted her mouth, displaying 28.4% disdain, 31.7% superiority, 9.5% dislike, 16.1% unhappiness, and 14.3% a combination of other emotions.

“That is marvelous,” said Moira.  “What emotion is that?”

“It is called disgust.  I am disgusted to find my habits so apparently in synch with such obviously inferior products.”