Coming Soon to Barnes and Noble

Smashwords has shipped their first 843 book titles to Barnes and Noble http://www.bn.com/. Among the those books are “His Robot Girlfriend”, “Princess of Amathar”, and “Women of Power”. Hopefully you will be seeing them available at bn.com soon. And hopefully bn.com will open up their site to more ebook formats than the limited number they have now.

Princess of Amathar – Chapter 6 Excerpt


Many times on our journey I pressed the knight to tell me about his city. On these occasions he would simply smile, and say that I would have to see it for myself. Of course my personal interests were constantly being drawn to the subject of his sister. I didn’t want to arouse Norar Remontar’s ire by accidentally disgracing her somehow, and truth be told, I was somewhat embarrassed by my single-minded desire to see this woman again. Of course being no fool, he saw through my efforts to artificially generalize the subject, but played along with me anyway. It seemed that in Amatharian society, both the men and the women were able to become knights and pursue careers in any field. The culture was a matrilineal one. The Amatharians passed on their family name from mother to daughter, but even more important than the family name, were the family crests, and these were passed from elder family members, to those children, grandchildren, and even nephews and nieces, who managed to achieve knighthood. Norar Remontar and a cousin had received their crests from an uncle who was a war hero. His sister inherited her crest from her grandfather.

We crossed planes and hills and valleys and an occasional mountain range, and must have been some thousands of miles from the sight of the airship battle when we reached the edge of an immense forest. It stretched to the left and right as far as the eye could see. Of course as with all things of this scale, when we came up close to the edge of the woodland, we found that it was not one great forest, but a vast area of connected forests with small glens and meadows scattered here and there. We plunged into this new terrain and continued on our way.

The first several hundred miles of the forest land was lightly wooded. There were a great many open areas and we found many fruits and vegetables along the way to supplement our hunting. As the miles went on by though, we left the lightly wooded areas behind us, and entered an increasingly dark and forbidding landscape. It was the kind of forest that one might find in an old black and white horror movie, or one of those fantasy novels with pointed-eared goblins peaking out from behind large oak trees. In this densely wooded country, hunting became more difficult, but because of the urgency of our quest, we could not take any more time than was absolutely necessary in any one location. So it was that when once more we had to make camp, for the first time, we sat looking at one another over an empty spot on the ground where our food might normally be found roasting on a spit above a small camp fire.

“This is most discouraging to me,” said Malagor. “It is not right for a Malagor to go without food.”

“At least we have water,” said Norar Remontar. “I am surprised that we have been able to stay as well fed as we have. Before this trip I had been hunting only three or four times with my uncle, and I mean no disrespect when I say that Alexander seems to be as unskilled as I am in this arena.”

“He has led a soft life,” explained Malagor. “I am guessing that even though you have done little hunting, your life has not been soft. You are a warrior.”

“You are mistaken my friend,” the Amatharian replied. “My life has not been a hard one. We in Amathar live well, and I as the son of a Kurar Ka have lived too well. I have never wanted. All my life I was provided for, was given everything that I desired, and was tutored by masters in every subject.

“When I reached manhood I set out to explore the distant lands of Ecos by signing on to my uncle’s trading group. As a warrior and then a swordsman, I was required to fight pirates and monsters, and I did so without fear. I proved myself in battle, at least my soul thought that I had. I went to the Garden of Souls and I found my soul. Then on my first mission as a knight, in my first confrontation with the enemy of my people, I lose my ship and my sister.”

“That wasn’t your fault,” I interjected quickly. “It was a tremendous battle and you fought bravely.”

“It was my duty to protect my sister,” said the knight. “She was conveying an important diplomatic mission for our grandfather. Beside, she is my sister.” He lay down and then rolled over so that his back was facing Malagor and myself.

Malagor looked at me, nodded, and lay down. There was a chill in the air, and the sky was becoming overcast, so much so that I almost imagined that the sun was going down. Of course it remained directly above, as always, but it did grow rather dark. I began to wish that we had built a fire, despite the fact that we had nothing to cook over it. I leaned back and prepared for my turn at watch. I was very tired though, and after a moments reflection, as I have just recounted, that the thick green canopy above, in combination with the storm clouds rolling in provided almost enough darkness to remind one of night time, I fell into a state of half sleep.
The first thing that aroused me from my slumber was a low growl coming from Malagor. I rolled over and looked at him. He was trussed up tightly in some kind of white netting, and he obviously didn’t like it. Suddenly I was knocked back onto my back by something large and black and hairy. I stared, horror-struck at a big black spider, fully fifty pounds, and with a body fully three feet across, sitting astride my chest. With the strength of my earth-born muscles combined with a great rush of adrenaline, I thrust the creature away from me. It was quite an impressive push, for it flew a about twenty feet and crashed with a splat into the bole of a large tree. I stood up, but before I could draw my sword or do anything else, I found myself being wrapped by strands of sticky white netting, and I looked to find a dozen more of the spiders encircling me and coating me with webbing silk. Scant seconds later I fell down onto my side, completely incased, with the exception of my head, in a silk cocoon.

My position on the ground put me face to face with Norar Remontar, and he looked at me and shook his head.

“You fell asleep.”

“Yes,” I replied.

“You were supposed to be on guard.”

“Yes.”

“Now you have killed us. These are Pell.”

“We’re not dead yet,” I offered.

“You will be soon.” A grotesque, high-pitched, squeaking voice said.

Something New


Well, I was quite busy at work on Knights of Amathar, when I got sidetracked and began writing something completely different. I have had an idea for a fantasy novel for some time about a story-teller and a queen. But I’m not writing that either. I started on the sequel to that story! I got a piece of artwork to use on a cover and the story just gelled and I started writing up a storm. At this point I don’t know if I’m going to finish it before going back to Knights of Amathar, but I’ll let you know. The new story is Eaglethorpe Buxton and the Elven Princess. I wonder if I’ll ever get around to writing Eaglthorpe Buxton and the Queen. In the coming weeks, I’ll give you an excerpt of the story.

What to write? What to write?

I’m pounding through chapter two of Knights of Amathar right now, but I’m already thinking about what should be next on my book list. I have several ideas, and while one might be more appealing to me right now, I’ll probably change my mind by the time I finish my current project. Here are my current ideas:

A novel that takes place between the second and third books of The Steel Dragon, turning the trilogy into a… series with four books in it.

A novel that does the same thing, only takes place after The Two Dragons (making the new book the fourth book in the series. I would have to remove the epilog at the end of the two dragons that tells what happens to all the characters for the rest of their lives.

A novel that takes place in the world of The Steel Dragon, but with all new characters– a family that is split up and travels around the world.

A novel about a shipwrecked sailor (Yes, I just read Robinson Crusoe) taking place in the world of The Steel Dragon.

Enough Steel Dragon for you?

A science fiction novel about a merchant starship captain– romance/adventure.

A sci-fi conspiracy comedy– can’t say anything more than that at the moment.

A story about archaologists in the far future opening a time capsule from the twentieth century.

A fantasy story about people from different eras of earth brought to a magical realm.

A swords & sorcery novel about a warrior and a bard and a queen.

A sci-fi horror story about a starship crew who finds unspeakable horror on a dead world.

A story about children who can cross dimensions.

Well, there you go. When I get to the end of my current work, I’ll let you know which if any of these I decide to work on next.

Writing Again


I’m feeling good. I’m writing again. It’s been months since I’ve been able to sit down and work on my latest novel. I don’t know why. I’ve just been in a funk. But I am writing now. I’ve almost finished chapter 9 (of 10). I’m really hoping to finish the book over the next week. Woo-Hoo!

What does the dragon have to do with anything? Nothing. But I bought non-exclusive rights to the image on Dreamstime.com so I might as well use it. Right?

Image © 2008 Oleh Zaporozhets | Dreamstime.com

Would Be, Could Be, Maybe

I’m changing my masthead a bit, specifically the subtitle of the City of Amathar Blog. If you noticed before, it was “The Daily Adventures of a Teacher and Would-be Novelist”. Well, I’m going to a more positive place and changing it to “The Daily Adventures of a Teacher / Novelist”. After all, I’ve written four novels (soon to be five). I could call it “The Daily Adventures of a Teacher and Would Be, Could Be, Maybe Published Author”, but that’s a bit verbose, eh?”

Writer’s Block? Writer’s Fatigue and Writer’s Fugue

Writer’s block? Not really. What I have is writer’s fatigue and writer’s fugue. I’m just so tired by the time I get home after a day in the classroom, I don’t feel like doing anything as mentally strenuous as writing. Plus, I’m just not very motivated right now. When people are reading your writing and giving you feedback, it’s easy to stay motivated. I was writing up a storm this time last year. Now, waiting for replies from agents and publishers, I just can’t seem to get into it. I have only about a chapter and a half left of the first draft of His Robot Girlfriend, so I should be able to whip it out. Maybe next week.

Editing Eternally

Editing is a big job. I finished the draft of The Steel Dragon last February, went through several revisions, and then set about trying to edit it. I made corrections all through the spring and summer, I had ten other people read it and edit for me, and I am still finding errors to fix. Having others edit really helped, as when you read your own material you don’t read it as closely since you know what you’ve written. Still, it’s a big job and one that has to be done. I was working on still one more editing pass the other day after school when a young lady came by my classroom to see me. She asked me how many times I had gone through my book. When I replied that it was probably at least twenty times, she asked “How can you read your own book twenty times?” I replied that if I wasn’t willing to read it, how could I expect others to.

Pimping Your Book

A great article about marketing and advertising your book is now up on the Swivet Blog. Check it out here.

Down the Right Side of the Blog

I intend that this blog will be my public face as a writer. Hopefully, as I see more of my books published, they will be displayed down the right side of the page. For now, I have the various versions of my one published work– Princess of Amathar, as well as some nifty little extras to fill the space. None of these is original, as they appear on many blogs, but I still think they’re neat.
I’m finding more and more blogs that I like to read on a regular basis. “From Other Great Blogs” lists links to some of the more interesting headlines that I have found.
As a History teacher, I’m pleased to have “This Day in History” on my page.
“Useless Knowledge” has some useless and some not so useless bits of information. I have noted a few that were incorrect bits of common mythology as well. The champagne glass was not based on Marie Antoinette’s breast.
“National Geographic Pictures” and “NASA Picture of the Day” are both very cool.
My favorite is probably the “Quotation of the Day”.