Brechalon: Chapter Five, Part Three

Brechalon: Nils Chapman & Karl DruryIt was the first time that Nils Chapman had seen prisoner eighty-nine doing anything other than lying curled up in a fetal position.  Today she was sitting, cross-legged in the center of the room.  It was hot and muggy and he had to wipe the perspiration from his eyes in order to see her clearly.  She was muttering something, but he had to listen for a minute to make out just what it was.

“…nine hundred seventy four days.  One thousand nine hundred seventy four days.  One thousand nine hundred seventy four days.”

“Why are you counting the days?” he called to her through the small window in the armored door.

She locked eyes with him, but didn’t stop repeating her words.

“Are you hungry?” he asked.

She stopped.  “Yes.”

“Alright.  I’ll get you something.”

Chapman made his way down the stone corridor toward the south wing and the kitchen.  He hadn’t quite reached it, when he ran into Karl Drury going the other direction.  The other man wore his usual scowl and his shirt was soaked through with sweat.  He didn’t need to ask what the other man wanted.

“Why don’t you leave her alone?” said Chapman.

“Why don’t you piss off?” Drury replied and shoved him into the wall.

Chapman immediately leaned back toward Drury.

“I’m not afraid of you,” he growled, which was in fact not true at all.

“You’d better be,” the other man hissed, producing a knife from somewhere.  “I could gut you right now… or maybe I’ll do it tonight, while you’re asleep.”

“Tosser,” said Chapman, but he hurried away toward the kitchen.

Purposefully waiting a good half hour before returning to the north wing, Chapman unlocked the door after he was sure that his sadistic fellow guard had gone.  Prisoner eighty-nine was sprawled across the stone floor like a ragdoll.  It was no surprise that she had been raped, but the guard was shocked at how badly she had been beaten.  Apparently she was not nearly as acquiescent as she had been before.  Her eyes were open, but they stared at the ceiling, unmoving.

“I brought you a Roger’s Pie.”

He sat the wooden bowl containing the bun filled with meat and turnips next to her head.  Her eyes rolled around in her head then looked at him.  She sat up and snatched the pie from the bowl, stuffing it into her mouth.

“Have to keep my strength up,” she muttered with her mouth full.  “One thousand nine hundred seventy four days.”

“Why are you counting?”

She finished the pie, but didn’t reply to his question.

“Is your name Zurfina?”

Suddenly her eyes came alive, full of fire, of danger, and of power.

“Zurfina the Magnificent,” she said.

“Can I get you something else?”

“Why?” she asked, the now dangerous grey eyes narrowing.

“Um, I don’t know.”

“Bring me a knife!” she hissed.

“I can’t do that,” he said.  “Even if it wouldn’t get me sacked, you’d hurt yourself.”

He now saw that the woman had a series of slash marks up the length of both arms and on both thighs.

“You’re trying to kill yourself.”

“I promise I’m not going to kill myself,” she said.

Chapman turned to leave and stopped in his tracks.  Covering the entire wall of the cell all around the door were strange symbols, black against the grey of the stone.  Though they weren’t really letters and certainly weren’t from any language that he knew, there was something nevertheless familiar about them.  They seemed to swirl and move unnaturally, as if the wall was made not of stone but of rubber or something similarly malleable, and it was being manipulated from behind, creating waves and bulges.

“Kafira,” he swore, and then he jumped as he heard the woman stir behind him.  When he looked at her though, she was only getting to her feet, slowly.

“What is that?” he asked, afraid to look back at the wall and afraid to keep his back to it as well.

“That is Omris and Siris,” she replied cryptically.  “That is Juton and Treffia.  It is Worron and Tommulon.”

“I don’t know any of those words.”

She moved so close to him that her smell gagged him.  She stank of years of sweat and urine and filth, and something else.

“That’s your blood!”

“Tell no one about this,” she ordered.  “Tell no one.  Tell no one.”

He stepped quickly away and slammed the door shut, locking it behind him.  He ran down the corridor toward the south wing, and he didn’t look back.  Still, he could hear her voice behind him.

“One thousand nine hundred seventy four days.  One thousand nine hundred seventy four days.”

Brechalon: Chapter Five, Part Two

Brechalon: Nils Chapman & Karl DruryZeah sat on the step in the courtyard and sipped his tea.  It was hot and muggy and many might have preferred a cold beverage but the butler found tea soothing.  The courtyard sat towards the side rear of the house, separated from the street on the east side only by an eight-foot tall stone wall.  Though windows looked down onto it from all three stories on the other three sides, most of those rooms were not in use, so it was relatively private.  Nevertheless, the door behind him opened and young Saba stepped out.  Hopping down the steps, he sat down next to Zeah.

“Good morning, Mr. Korlann.”

“Good morning.”

The boy had a large brown glass bottle with a rubber stopper, which he pulled out with his teeth and spat onto the step.  Then he tilted the bottle back and took a great swig.

“You’ll pick that up in a minute, I trust,” said Zeah, indicating the stopper with a nod.

“Oh, yeah.  Sure.”

“What are you drinking?”

Saba held up the bottle and Zeah read the label.  Billingbow’s Sarsaparilla and Wintergreen Soda Water.

“Is it any good?”

“I love it.  Would you like a taste?”  The boy pointed the open mouth of the bottle at the man.

“Um, no, thank you.”

“Is Miss Dechantagne really going to move to Mallon?”

“Where did you hear that?” asked Zeah, looking at the boy.

“I overheard my mother talking to Yuah about it.”

“I think it best not to speculate what Miss Dechantagne might or might not do.”

“You’re afraid of her, huh?”

“Ah… afraid?  No, I’m not afraid of Miss Duh… Dechantagne.”

“Sure you are.  Don’t feel bad.  Everyone’s afraid of her.  I’m afraid of her.  I think Master Terrence is afraid of her.”

“I, um…”

“You know how you can tell that you’re afraid?”

“I’m not… um, how?”

“You only stutter when you’re nervous.”

“I duh… don’t stutter… and nuh… nervous is not the same thing as afraid.”

Saba took another swig of soda.  “Sure it is.  It’s just another word for it, like hart is just another word for horse.”

“They’re not the same thing at all.  A hart is a deer.”

“You know you shouldn’t be nervous.  It’s not like Miss Dechantagne is going fire you.”

“It’s not?”

“No.  She always says she’s going to fire somebody, but when was the last time you saw her really do it.”

“About five minutes ago,” said Zeah.

“Really?  Who’d she fire?”

“She dismissed Nora.”

“I don’t know anybody named Nora.”

“She was the girl I hired the other day.”

“Well, you see there,” said Saba, knowingly.  “She was new.  When was the last time Miss Dechantagne fired anyone that had been with the house for a while?”

“She dismissed Tilda yesterday.”

“Yeah, I miss her,” said Saba wistfully.  “So is Miss Dechantagne really going to move to Mallon?”

“Um, I think it’s best not to discuss this.  Why do you want to know?”

“Well, I was just thinking.  If she goes then I imagine that we would get to go with her.”

“Do you want to move to Mallon?” asked Zeah.

“Sure.  Who wouldn’t?”

“Um, I wouldn’t.”

“Sure you would.  It would be great.  It would be just like living in a Rikkard Banks Tatum novel.”

“Don’t all of his books involve monsters, chases, and narrow escapes from danger?”

“You bet,” the boy grinned.  “It’ll be the dog’s bullocks.”

Saba drained his bottle of Billingbow’s and stood up.

“Well, I guess I’d better get busy.  I’m supposed to wash the steam carriage.  Do you think I could drive it out of the motor shed?”

“No,” Zeah replied.  “You had best push it out.”

The boy’s grin disappeared.  He sighed and then walked across the courtyard to the motor shed.  Zeah reached down and picked up the rubber stopper that Saba had left, then stood up, stretched his back, and went up the steps and back into the house.

 

Brechalon: Chapter Five, Part One

Brechalon: Nils Chapman & Karl DruryChapter Five: Putting Plans in Motion

 Yuah knelt down and used the buttonhook to fasten the twenty-eight buttons on each of Iolanthe’s shoes.  As she fastened the last button, Yuah had to smile appreciatively.  These shoes cost more than she made in a year, but unlike most wealthy aristocratic women, Iolanthe paid a premium not because the shoes were encrusted with jewels, but because they were exceptionally well made, and they were very comfortable.

“What are you smiling at?” demanded Iolanthe.

“Nothing, Miss.  I would never smile in your presence.”

Iolanthe pursed her lips and narrowed her eyes.

“What do you think about moving to some faraway land, Yuah… say for instance Mallon?”

“I don’t know what you’re talking about,” Yuah feigned.

“Oh please.  I know you’re all a bunch of spies.  There is nothing that goes on in the house that you and your father and the cook don’t know about.”

“I’m just the servant, Miss.  You’re the mistress.”

“You’re cheeky too.  I would fire you in a minute if it weren’t that Augie is under the impression that you are his sister instead of me.”  Iolanthe stood up and brushed out her dress.  “Have you heard from him, by the way?”

“Yes, Miss.”  Yuah had gotten at least three letters from Augie since Iolanthe had last asked her.  He did indeed think of her as a sister, and she thought of him as a brother.  She sent him a letter for everyone she received.  They were the same age, two years younger than Iolanthe, and six years younger than Terrence, and had spent an enormous amount of time together as children.

“And?”

“Hmm?”

“And what did he say?” asked Iolanthe, pointedly.

“Oh.  He wrote mostly about the native…people.  Can you call them people?  They aren’t really people are they?”

“It matters little what you call them,” said Iolanthe as she crossed the room to the cheval glass.

“Well, he’s been talking to them and learning their language.  Isn’t that marvelous?  Imagine talking to reptiles.  And he writes about the creatures that live where he is.  It’s all quite amazing.”

“Amazing that he hasn’t managed to mess it all up.”

“Not at all,” replied Yuah, raising her chin defiantly.  “I think Master Augie is doing the family proud.”

“My family,” Iolanthe reminded her.

“Yes, Miss.”

“Still, he’s not the brother you would prefer to hear from, is he?”

Yuah’s face turned red.  “I don’t know what you’re talking about… Miss.”

“Returning to my previous topic.”  Iolanthe carefully placed her new hat atop her carefully coifed hair.  “Life would be different for you outside of Brechalon… in a colony, I mean.  Colonial life is different.  You wouldn’t be a servant any more.  In fact, you could probably afford servants of your own.  You might be quite an important part of the community.”

“Are you trying to tell me that in the colonies I might marry Terrence?”

“God no,” Iolanthe laughed musically.  “Perhaps we could marry you off to a tradesman.”

Brechalon: Chapter Four, Part Four

BrechalonMinutes before her brother had arrived in the parlor, Iolanthe had indeed been thinking over the past.  It was not the same tragedy that Terrence had been reliving though.  She knew that Terrence carried a scar from the murder of their mother, though she didn’t quite understand exactly what it was or how deep it cut.  She had her own, more recent scars—scars scarcely ten years old.

Iolanthe had continued to live in her father’s house near Shopton, long after her brothers had gone away to military school.  By her seventeenth year she had grown into a strikingly beautiful young lady.  Not one to stay in the brooding mansion, she spent her days happily riding across the countryside.  It was here that she met a young man named Jolon Bendrin.  At first, she found him attractive.  He certainly found her so.  They met several times and talked and she enjoyed his company.

Then one day, he changed.  They both attended a party at the Banner residence.  Afterwards they had walked in the garden.  Nothing seemed strange.  When he kissed her, she had let him.  But then he forced her down onto a stone bench and reached under her dress.  She only realized the danger of her situation when he put his hand over her mouth.  He raped her.  Then week after week, he did it again.  She tried to avoid him but she couldn’t.  He seemed to be everywhere.  What could she do?  She wasn’t strong enough to fight him off, and there was no male protector for her—her father was in a drunken stupor and her brothers were both away.  And who else could she tell, without disgracing herself?  When she turned eighteen, she left Mont Dechantagne, moving to Brech, and leaving her father to waste away by himself.

* * * * *

Iolanthe took another sip of iced tea and looked at her brother sitting across from her.  No, there was no point in living in the past.  One must look toward the future.  There was a great deal to do.  But there was always the possibility that Jolon Bendrin might come to Brech.  What would she do then?

Brechalon: Chapter Four, Part Three

BrechalonTerrence had no idea what day it was.  At least he knew it was Pentuary.  Oh, yes.  He knew that.  It was starting to get hot and nobody wanted to spend their days indoors.  That was where he had spent most of the last week though—holed up in to the back part of the house “seeing.”  During that time he had very little food and almost no real sleep.  He looked at the collection of tiny bottles in the wooden case.  He had already finished one and all but finished another.  He tucked the box under the bed and left the room, carefully locking the door behind him.  The empty hallway and the stuffy air gave him a strange sense of déjà vu.

* * * * *

It had been Pentuary too when it happened, sixteen years before.  Iolanthe, Augie, Yuah, and Dorah were sitting in a circle on the floor around Master Akalos, who was making them recite the names of the books in the Modest Scriptures.  That two of them were the children of aristocrats and two were the children of servants made no difference to Master Akalos.  That three of them were Kafirites and one of them was a Zaeri did, and the tutor gained a perverse delight in drilling them on the set of scriptures that the Zaeri did not believe in.  Terrence, who was watching from beyond the door, could see the queer laughter hiding behind the man’s eyes.  Both twelve year olds, Terrence and Enoch, had finished their lessons for the day.  Enoch had hurried off to his chores in the stable, while Terrence had made himself a sandwich.

He leaned against the doorframe and took a bite.  From this location he could see both the other children at their studies through the door and the carriage sitting in front of the house through the open window.  His mother’s friend, Simon Mudgett, was visiting again.  His carriage was out front, the horses still harnessed.  He squeezed the last two or three bites together into his mouth.

“Julien, Wind, March, Magic, Raina, Egeria, Dallarians, Zaeri…” the four children recited, almost together.  Iolanthe missed Raina and went right from Magic to Egeria.  Yuah was determined to recite the loudest.  Augie was moving his mouth without actually saying anything at all.  All of them were casting envious glances at the scant breeze blowing in through the window.

Then Terrence saw a movement out of the corner of his eye.  It was his father down the hallway.  Quickly heading down the hall after him, Terrence saw the shotgun in his father’s hand.  This was a great opportunity.  Terrence liked shooting as much as any boy.  But his father was going the wrong way.  He was headed up the stairs.  Had he already been shooting?  Was he going to clean his shotgun now?

Terrence followed, now just a few feet behind his father, and as the elder Dechantagne opened the door to his wife’s bedroom, Terrence followed right on in.  Then it was as if everything was in slow motion.  Terrence’s mother was in bed, the bedclothes covering only the bottom half of her naked body.  Next to her was Simon Mudgett.

With agonizing slowness, Lucius Dechantagne raised the shotgun to his shoulder and fired.  A red spray blossomed from the bare chest of Iphigenia Dechantagne, covering the bed in blood.  A second shotgun blast hit the bed just to her left, but Mudgett was already on the floor running for the window.  The snap of the shotgun being opened was drowned out by the crash as he broke the glass from the already open pane, crashing through and falling naked and bloodied from the sloped roof to the grounds below.   Terrence’s father snapped the weapon shut again, having replaced the two shells.  He walked to the window, only to find nothing to shoot at.  He turned around to find his wife, her mouth and eyes wide open as she gurgled a few last dying breaths and his twelve year old son, his face gone white, staring at each other.  He shot his wife once more in the chest, turned and gave the boy a long look, and then turned back and shot her in the head, leaving a corpse that no longer at all resembled a living human being.

* * * * *

Terrence walked into the parlor to find it surprisingly cool.  Iolanthe was there sipping an iced beverage.  The outside of the tall glass was covered with beads of condensation.  She looked up casually, but narrowed her eyes at his appearance.

“What have you been doing?” she asked.

“What are you drinking?”

“Iced tea.”

“Really?  Is it any good?”

“Very refreshing.  Would you like one?”

He nodded, taking a nearby chair, and she waved to a servant standing in the doorway, who then hurried off after the drink.

“What have you been doing, I ask again?”

“Reminiscing.”

“I have been as well.”  She gestured to the family scrapbook on the divan next to her.

“You should burn that.”

“We can’t do that.  But you are right, dear brother.  We should stop looking to the past.  Our future begins now.”

“If you say so, Iolanthe.”

Brechalon: Chapter Four, Part Two

Brechalon: Nils Chapman & Karl DruryTwo thousand twenty one days ago, Zurfina ducked into her lodgings on Prince Tybalt Boulevard.  She had a second-degree burn on her thigh and blood ran down her arm from a bullet wound just above her elbow.  She bolted the door then staggered across the room to the dresser.  Opening the top drawer, she pulled out a brown bottle of healing draught and splashed a generous amount onto first the bullet hole and then the burn.  Finally she took a large swig.  She turned quickly, raising her hand as the door opened.  But she lowered her arm again when Smedley Bassington entered.

“I locked the door,” she said, taking another swig from the brown bottle.

“Are you alright?”

“A fat lot you care, you bloody bastard.”

“It’s not my fault,” he almost whined.  “I told you what would happen.  It’s not too late.  Go with me to the Ministry of War.  One word and it will be over.  Everything can go back to the way it was.”

“Not the way it was,” she spat.  “I wasn’t the Ministry’s lapdog before.  That was you.”

“Zurfina…”

“Uuthanum,” she threw a quick gesture in his direction, which turned into a knife in the air.

“Uuthanum,” he said, sending the knife in an arc around the room and back at her.  In midair it turned into badminton shuttlecock.

“Uuthanum,” she sent it back to him again, now transformed into a squirming serpent.

“Uuthanum.”  As it sailed at her again, the snake became a rose.

Zurfina snatched it from the air and winced as the long pointed thorns bit her hand.  “Son of a bitch!”

“You can’t get away,” said Bassington.

“No?”  Zurfina gestured and was gone, leaving the wizard alone in the room.

That was two thousand twenty one days ago.

* * * * *

Two thousand nine hundred and seven days ago, Zurfina reclined across the park bench and took a deep breath, savoring the smell of the white rose that Smedley held to her nose.  She shifted slightly, nestling her head more comfortably in his lap.  A light breeze was whipping around her and as she looked up into the sky.  She could see clouds floating by at a surprisingly quick pace.

“You haven’t given me an answer,” said Smedley.

“An answer to what?”

“An answer to the most important question in my life.”

“And what might that question be?”

“Infuriating woman,” Smedley snapped.  “You know what question.  You haven’t yet told me whether you’ll marry me.  In antediluvian times, I’d simply have hit you over the head with a club and pulled you by the hair back to my cave.”

“Yes, well.”  Zurfina’s charcoal-lined, grey eyes slowly rose to meet his.  “Then I would wait until you were asleep and slice your throat with my stone knife.”

A slight shiver ran through Smedley’s body that made her smile, but he didn’t look away.

“So?”

“So what?” she purred.

“Will you marry me?”

“I believe I will have you.  Yes.”

“Thank you,” he beamed.  “You’ve made me the happiest man in Brech.”

“Not yet, but soon.” she replied, reaching under her head and stroking the crotch of his trousers.  “After all, just because I must wait to have you, doesn’t mean that you must wait to have me.”

“What a tart.”

That was two thousand nine hundred and seven days ago.

* * * * *

“One thousand nine hundred sixty eight days.  One thousand nine hundred sixty eight days.”  Zurfina pressed her face against the cold stone of the cell.  “Bloody bastard.”

Brechalon: Chapter Four, Part One

Brechalon: Nils Chapman & Karl DruryChapter Four: Memories

Nils Chapman looked through the small window in the armored door at prisoner eighty-nine.  The warden was once again away from the island and Chapman was happy to note that Karl Drury was gone as well.  Chapman had spent the previous weeks trying to find out anything he could about the lone occupant of Schwarztogrube’s north wing.  He didn’t know why, but he felt compelled to find out all he could about her.  The prison didn’t have any open records and asking the warden would have invited dismissal, so he had quizzed the other guards and the south wing prisoners.  From the former, he hadn’t gotten much—only that she was an extremely dangerous, extremely powerful magic-user.  From one of the latter though he had gotten a name—Zurfina.

“Zurfina,” he called out.  “Is that your name?  Is that who you are?”

Slowly, very slowly, the head came up until he could see the two grey eyes peering from between the dirty, blond hair like the eyes of a tiger looking out of the jungle—filled with hatred.

“Are you Zurfina?”

Slowly the fire in the eyes died, and the eyes turned glassy.  Then the head dropped back down.  Though he called to her several more times, prisoner eighty-nine gave no more indication that she heard or understood.  Eventually he gave up and made his way back to the south wing, so he didn’t hear the words that came from the cracked lips.

“One thousand nine hundred sixty eight days.  One thousand nine hundred sixty eight days.  One thousand nine …”

One thousand nine hundred sixty eight days before, Zurfina the Magnificent had been moving through the throngs of people in Marcourt Station.  She was not dressed as the other women in the station, or anywhere else in the United Kingdom of Greater Brechalon.  High-heeled leather boots and leather pants matched the spiked leather collar around her neck and the fingerless black leather gloves on her hands.  The black leather corset, worn as a shirt, left her white shoulders bare as it did the two-inch star tattoo above each breast.  No one noticed the bizarrely clad figure though.  Zurfina was a master of obfuscation.  To everyone else at the station, she seemed nothing but a non-descript brunette in a brown dress with an appropriately large bustle.  To almost everyone else.

Zurfina had her ticket on the B511 out of Brech to Flander on the southern coast, where she had already arranged to meet a boat that would take her to a ship bound for Mirsanna.  There was no way that she could stay in Brechalon any longer.  The government had refused to accept her independence.  They would have her join the military or they would see her destroyed.  They had already sent a dozen wizards and two sorcerers against her.  But Zurfina was the greatest practitioner of sorcery in the Kingdom and was more than a match for any wizard.

A man in a brown suit stepped out from behind a pillar.  To the other people in the station, he seemed nothing out of the ordinary, but to Zurfina he glowed bright yellow and was surrounded by a sparkling halo.  She didn’t wait for him to cast a spell.  She pointed her hand toward him and spat out an incantation.

“Intior uuthanum err.”

Immediately the man doubled over, wracked with uncontrollable cackling laughter.  But before Zurfina could smile appreciatively, she was thrown from her feet as the world around her exploded in flames.  She had been hit in the back by a fireball, and only the fact that she had previously shielded herself prevented her from becoming a human candle, as four or five innocent bystanders around her now did.  Rolling to her feet and turning around, she found that she faced not one, but four wizards.  The one who had evidently cast the fireball was preparing another spell, while the other three were casting their own.  Her shield protected her from the lightning bolt, and the attempt to charm her, but one of the four magic missiles hit her, burning her shoulder as though it had been dipped in lava.

“Uuthanum uastus corakathum paj–  Prestus Uuthanum.”  Zurfina ducked into a side alcove as one of the wizards turned to stone and her own shield was replenished.  Several more magical bolts struck the stone wall across from her, creating small burnt holes.  Peering quickly around the corner, she saw the four wizards just where she left them, the three trying to use their petrified comrade as cover.  Looking in the other direction, she saw that the wizard cursed with laughter had recovered and he had been joined by two more.

Seven wizards—well, six.  That was a lot of magical firepower.  But then Zurfina looked across the station platform.  Directly opposite her was the open door of a train; not the B511, but a train bound for somewhere else.  If she could reach it, she could get away.  She glanced quickly around the corner again.  The smell of burnt bodies mixed with thick black smoke in the air, but though there was plenty of the former, there was not enough of the latter for Zurfina’s taste.

“Uuthanum,” she said, and a thick fog began to fill the station platform.

“Maiius uuthanum nejor paj.”  The three wizards to her right suddenly faced a dog the size of a draft horse, snarling and foaming at the mouth, and they felt their spells were better aimed at it than any blond sorceress.

Turning to her left, Zurfina cast another spell.  “Uuthanum uastus carakathum nit.”

The cement that formed the other end of the platform turned to mud.  The petrified wizard, deprived of his secure foundation toppled over onto one of his comrades crushing him, while the other two struggled to pull themselves from the muck.  Zurfina shot out of the alcove and ran toward the train.  She had almost made it, when Wizard Bassington stepped into the open doorway in front of her.

She stopped right there in the open, unbalanced, unsure now whether to run left or right or back the way that she had come.  She felt uncomfortably like an animal caught on the road in the headlamps of an oncoming steam carriage.  Bassington didn’t move.  He stared at her with his beady eyes.  His eyes went wide though when Zurfina reached up to snatch something out of the air.  Normal, non-magical people couldn’t see them, but he could—the glamours that orbited her head were spells cast earlier, awaiting the moment when she needed them.

She crushed the glamour and pointed her hand at the spot where Bassington stood, just as he dived away.  The entryway where the wizard had been, and the passenger coaches on either side of him exploded, lifting much of the train up off the track as metal and wood shrapnel and human body parts flew in every direction.  The flash knocked Zurfina herself back onto the cement and sent her sliding across the pavement and into the far wall.  Before she could get up, she was hit with a dozen bolts of magical fire, some but not all of them deflected by her magic shield.  It was a spell of weakening, followed by one of sleep though that finally dropped her head unconscious to the ground.  The last thing she saw was Bassington’s hobnail boots walking toward her.  That was one thousand nine hundred sixty eight days ago.

Brechalon Updated

Brechalon: Nils Chapman & Karl Drury

As of March 30, Brechalon has been updated with a new edit on Smashwords.  It should be available by this time everywhere.  The new edit is labeled Revision 3-28-13.  Remember, wherever you download it from, it’s free.

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Brechalon Notes

Brechalon: Nils Chapman & Karl Drury

While I was reading through Brechalon, I began updating the (ironically incomplete) complete list of characters from Senta and the Steel Dragon.  I included every character with a name and in Brechalon, came up with 65 people.  Fifteen are only mentioned, usually because they are long-dead historical figures.

What surprised me is that only only five of the 50 appearing characters get killed in the course of this book.  Fear not.  Many others get killed in later volumes.

There are a few characters who appear only in book 0, and that seems like sort of a waste.  I think I might resurrect a few in The Sorceress and her Lovers.  I’ve already pulled several lizzies, that I had never intended to use again, from earlier books.  I like to bring characters back like that.  It seems to me to add a little realism to the story, especially when you have a relatively limited setting, like a colony across the sea from the rest of the civilized world.

Update: The Sorceress and her Lovers

The Sorceress and her Lovers

I’m still working on book one of Senta and the God of the Sky.  I’ve expanded on the two chapters I’ve written, but haven’t finished either one.  Instead, I’ve started chapter three.

The main character for chapter three is Iolana Dechantagne Staff, Iolanthe’s daughter.  This is a great choice for me, because I get to bring some of the older characters back into the mix.

It also occurs to me that where I had Iolanthe, Terrence, and Augie as a sort of trinity in The Voyage of the Minotaur, I now have Iolana, Terra, and Augie though these characters have very different personalities from their elders.

Of course, going back and rereading Brechalon has helped a lot with inspiration for this story.  The rest of that story is coming up right here over the next couple of weeks.