Motivations: The Voyage of the Minotaur

The Voyage of the Minotaur was actually the second novel that I wrote– sort of.  As I mentioned the other day, it was originally the first part of a very long novel– almost 400,00 words, about 850 pages.  I was almost done with this book before I even had a working title, but settled on The Steel Dragon, and this of course later became Senta and the Steel Dragon.  The three parts were originally called– Expedition, Colony, Dominion.

After the book was done and had gone through editing, I decided that it was just too big and had to be split into three parts.  So part one became The Voyage of the Minotaur.

Several things influenced me to devise this story.  A friend had encouraged me to self-publish Princess of Amathar, and the success of that book, minor though it was, encouraged me to write a second.  Lord of the Rings had just come out and so I was already thinking of a three part fantasy story.  I had also just read Stephen King’s Dark Tower series, and remembered his notes about it being his Lord of the Rings.  Finally, I had recently watched James Michener’s Hawaii.  Putting this all together with several non-fiction books I had recently read about colonial imperialism (particularly Britain in Africa), and I came up with the story outline for Senta and the Steel Dragon.

I wanted a story that told about colonialism over a long period– in this case about ten years.  I had thought about how badly native people were treated by the colonial powers and wondered just how much worse it would have been if those natives were an entirely different species.  I already had a world map that I had created a few years earlier when I had toyed with the idea of writing a role-playing setting.  All of this went into the mix.  I also used the setting I had created twenty years before for a few fantasy vignettes I had written– the otherworldly place that people visit when they use the magic drug opthalium.  Throwing all this into the mix, I just started writing.  It took 14 months to write the drafts for what became three books.

Smashwords Summer Winter Sale

It is that time of year again– time for the Smashwords Summer/Winter sale.  All through the month of July, there are great deals on ebooks at Smashwords.  Some of my books are there on sale and some are free, so if your collection isn’t complete, now is the time to stop by.  Here’s what is on special this month.

Astrid Maxxim and her Amazing Hoverbike (Reg. $.99) Free

Princess of Amathar (Reg. $2.99) Free

Voyage of the Minotaur (Reg. $2.99) Free

The Dark and Forbidding Land (Reg. $2.99) $1.50

The Drache Girl (Reg. $2.99) $2.24

And as always His Robot Girlfriend, Eaglethorpe Buxton and the Elven Princess, Eaglethorpe Buxton and the Sorceress, and Brechalon are free.

Find links to all these books here.

The Voyage of the Minotaur: $1.99 for a limited time at Sony and Amazon

The Voyage of the Minotaur is available for a limited time at Amazon (Kindle) and the Sony Ebook Store for $1.99.  That’s $1.00 off its regular price.

Check the price before purchasing because I’m not sure how long this price will be available.  (Like I said– limited.)

On the other hand, if you purchase it for $2.99, I get an extra 70 cents, so thanks.  And I certainly hope you think its worth $3 when you read it.  Writing it was the (mentally) toughest but most rewarding 14 months I think I’ve ever spent.

The Drache Girl: Dot Shrubb

Dot is one of my favorite accomplishments.  The character wasn’t in my original outline for Senta and the Steel Dragon.  She was created on the fly because Eamon Shrubb needed a wife.  Even so, I managed to come up with what I think a memorable character.  I think she is based a little bit on a woman I met twice many years ago, the wife of a coworker, who, like Dot, was a redhead and was deaf.

He arrived back at the police station office to find Dot Shrubb in a pretty pink dress that highlighted her copper-colored hair.  She was a thin, but pretty girl, of seventeen who had arrived in Port Dechantagne a year ago, without any family, and had stolen the heart of Eamon Shrubb the first time he laid eyes upon her.

“Saba,” she said, in the nasal voice of someone who has been deaf all their life.

“Looking for Eamon?” he asked, keeping his face toward her, so that she could read his lips.

She nodded.

“You two were fighting again.”

She punched the palm of her left hand with her right fist.

“What about?”

She hesitated for a moment, and then made a rocking baby motion with her arms folded.

“You’re expecting?”

“Huh?”

“Baby.  You’re going to have a baby?”

She nodded, smiling.

“Then why were you fighting?  Doesn’t he want a baby?”

“Name,” she said.

“Kafira,” Saba muttered.

At that moment, Eamon opened the office door.  He paused about halfway inside, looking at his wife the way a munitions expert looks at a bomb that didn’t go off as intended.  She looked at the floor.  After a moment, the constable stepped inside.

“You nesh berk,” said Saba.  Eamon looked at him in surprise.  “You take your wife home and see to her.  I may not have two and a half months experience being married, but even I know you don’t fight with a woman who’s expecting.”

“She wanted to name the baby Yadira.”

“What’s wrong with that?” demanded Saba.

“Come on!  That’s the worst name in the world.”

“My mother’s name,” said Dot.

“That happens to be my mother’s name, too,” said Saba.

“Oh, yeah.  I forgot about that,” said Eamon.

“It’s not like Eamon’s a brilliant name.”

“I don’t want to name it Eamon either.  If it’s a boy I want to name it Darsham, and if it’s a girl I want to name it Daria.”

“Darsham Shrubb?  Why don’t you just name it ‘kick my ass on the way to school’ and have done with it.”

Eamon ballooned his cheeks out and rolled his eyes back to think for a moment.  “It doesn’t sound that good when you put it all together, does it?”

“Here’s my advice, Mr. I’ve-been-married-two-and-a-half-months.  Take the rest of the day off and take your wife home.  Make her a cup of tea and rub her feet.  Then let her decide what to name the baby.  You can go get a kitten from Mrs. Gyffington, and name it Darsham, or Daria, or whatever the bloody hell you want to name it.”

“That’s right,” said Dot, taking Eamon by the arm.  Then she said, “Rub my feet,” leading Saba to believe that she had missed most of what he had said.

“You don’t mind if I take the afternoon?” asked Eamon.  He turned his head slightly, so that his lips were not visible to his wife.  “If I rub her feet, she’ll be all rumpy-pumpy.”

“Go!”

The two left the office, arm in arm.  As soon as they were gone, Saba stepped back through the supply room and into cell number one.  Setting his helmet beside the cot, he lay down and took a nap.

The Drache Girl: Franka Rocanna

The introduction of the character Franka Rocanna in The Drache Girl is really set up for what happens to the character in The Two Dragons.  I have liked the name Franka since seeing Run Lola Run starring Franka Potenta (who also starred in The Bourne Identity and whom they killed off completely ruining the rest of the series for me).  I think someday I’ll give the name to another character.

The cuckoo clock on the office wall at M&S Coal had never struck Radley Staff as looking particularly professional.  Mrs. Fandice had purchased it when funds for an office clock had been appropriated, and as no one else seemed to mind it, Staff had said nothing.  It was so ornate that it took him a moment to read the hands.  It was six forty five.  He had just come down to the office from the apartments above and had not expected to find anyone at work yet.  But Mr. Buttermore, Mrs. Fandice, and Miss Vanita were already at their desks.  Miss Rocanna was putting her wrap back on.

“Going out, Miss Rocanna?” he asked.

“I thought I would go around the corner and bring back muffins for the office.”

“What a splendid idea,” said Buttermore.

“Hold a moment, I’ll go with you,” said Staff.

He took his coat from the peg and threw it on and then opened the door for Miss Rocanna.  She nodded and stepped through the portal and Staff followed her.  It was still cool and fog hung in patches throughout the town.  The Pfennig store and Mrs. Bratihn’s dress shop were easy enough to see, but the houses in the other direction were just large shapes in the mist.

Staff offered his elbow and Miss Rocanna took it.  Together they walked around the corner and into the square.  It was early, but activity associated with business had already begun for the day.  Mrs. Bratihn walked across the square from the south toward her dress shop.  Mr. Parnorsham was already inside the Pfennig Store, at that moment cleaning the inside of the shop window.  Aalwijn Finkler stepped out the door of the bakery to shake out a rug.

There was a steam carriage parked at the edge of the square, just next to the gate in the emergency wall.  A woman in a bright blue dress with a large flower-covered hat sat at the steering wheel.  From his angle, Staff couldn’t tell if it was Iolanthe or Yuah.  Mother Linton stood at the side of the vehicle and carried on a conversation with the woman—whoever it was.  Staff watched carefully, and though he couldn’t discern the identity of the driver, it became obvious that the discussion between her and the priest was becoming heated.  He felt a jerk on his arm as Miss Rocanna stopped.

“I don’t care to be ignored.”

“Sorry.  I was just trying to see if that was the Governor.”

“It is.”

“How can you tell?  It could be Mrs. Dechantagne.”

“No.  It’s the Governor.  You can tell by her posture.”

“Pop pop pop,” rang out to the east.

“Those are gunshots,” said Staff, looking off in that direction.

The Two Dragons: Chapter Three Excerpt

Zeah had often wondered at the vagaries of fate which had colluded to make him the grandfather of anyone named Augustus Dechantagne.  Having served as the head butler for the Dechantagne family for most of his life, he had known two previous individuals of that name and had known of many more.  That he might find himself connected in any way other than as a servant to any one of them would have surprised him, but now he found himself related by blood to all of them.  The first Augustus Dechantagne that Zeah had personally known had been Iolanthe’s grandfather.  He was a stuffy, heavy-set old gentleman with grey sideboards and a sour look on his face—no doubt attributable to a series of ailments from gout to cancer of the stomach.  The second Augustus Dechantagne, whose name now adorned one of several city parks, had been Iolanthe’s younger brother.  A happy and friendly young man, he had never been too far away from a pretty girl or an open bottle, and had been gifted with the good fortune to die heroically in battle while he was still young, well-thought of, and handsome.  And now here was Zeah’s own grandchild—Augustus Marek Virgil Dechantagne, a precocious boy who looked so much like his father that his mother sometimes burst into tears just looking at him.  It was odd, Zeah thought, that though he had been a servant of the other two Augustus Dechantagnes, it was this one to whom he found it most difficult to say no.

“The woods” was a strip of land along the coast east of the promontory which had been left in a more or less natural state.  Fine homes on large estates, such as the one Zeah had acquired by marrying Egeria, could be found to the west, even larger and more majestic mansions, such as the Governor’s were found to the south, and a large neighborhood of smaller homes, mostly belonging to Zaeri refugees from Freedonia stood to the east, but the woods remained a kind of nature preserve between.  And to the children’s eyes it was a mysterious forest primeval.  Zeah had taken the children on a walk through the trees many times, teaching them to identify the trees by the shape of their leaves and needles; and the birds by their call.  The woods were full of cormorants, snipes, rails, and wrens, and near the coastal edge: godwits, grebes, puffins, and pelicans.  There were also the peculiar birds which made Birmisia so strange: microraptors, caudipteryx, buitreraptors, bambiraptors, meilong, and mahakala.  There were velociraptors too, but as long as they weren’t hunting in a pack, adult humans at least were safe.

Zeah led the children along the path in a line, until they reached an area with large exposed tree roots, when he picked up and carried Terra.  Augie and Iolana followed hand in hand.  The sun filtered through the tops of the trees, creating a patchwork of sunlight across the forest floor.  They marched along until they came to the edge of the woods and to the beach just beyond.  Here Zeah set his granddaughter back down.

Unlike the coast to the west of the peninsula which was rocky, the beach here was a strip of remarkably white sand fifteen to twenty feet wide.  The children all took off their shoes so that they could feel the sand between their toes as they walked, and after a few steps, Zeah did the same.  It wasn’t long before Augie had found a shell, and then a sand dollar.  Then they were all scurrying down the beach, collecting treasures as they went.  All three children soon had their arms full, though Terra managed to drop more than she held onto.

All three children were so engrossed in their beachcombing that the rest of the world was forgotten.  It had been a long time since Zeah had been a child though, and for him the rest of the world was omnipresent.  So when a figure stepped out from among the trees a hundred yards ahead, he saw it immediately.  It was a bird, but not a skittish little beast like those they had seen along the way.  It was a deinonychus, the larger cousin of the velociraptor.  It was almost man-sized though it walked with its nose near the ground.  Even bent over, it was taller than Zeah’s waist and more than seven feet from the front of its teeth-filled mouth to the tip of its tufted tail.  It was covered in brown feathers.  Deinonychus were common, but seldom came this close to town anymore.  This one was beachcombing, and it had found what it would surely consider treasures.

“Children,” snapped Zeah, in a forceful voice he seldom used.  “To me, now!”

Iolana moved toward him without stopping to think about it.  Augie looked up at his grandfather in surprise.  Little Terra looked up, but not at Zeah.  She looked up to see the deinonychus as its head snapped to look in the direction of the man’s voice.  She let out a little squeak.  Children learned early on in Port Dechantagne the large, many-toothed birds such as the velociraptor, deinonychus, and utahraptor were not to be trifled with.

The deinonychus took only a second to recognize its prey.  It would not have attempted a grown man, unless starving.  But the young ones of any warm-blooded species were a common quarry, and two of the three youngsters seemed to have strayed beyond the protective radius of the adult.  With a quick hop to bring it up to its full speed, it ran across the sand on legs that would have looked like giant chicken legs, were it not for the awful five inch sickle claws pointing up.  The middle sized child moved toward the adult, leaving the youngest alone on the beach.  The deinonychus zeroed in on her.

The Two Dragons: Chapter Two Excerpt

It was late into the night when Senta at last entered her front door into a darkened room.  She closed the door behind her and headed toward the stairs to the upper four levels of the dwelling.  She had just put her foot on the bottom step when Zurfina spoke from a darkened corner.

“How was dinner?”

“It was fine,” said Senta, turning to face her mistress.

“Good.”  Zurfina stood up from the chair in the corner and stepped forward into the moonlight streaming in through the window.  Senta wasn’t surprised to see that she was traipsing around the house naked.  She looked appreciatively at Zurfina’s form, seemingly untouched by age.  But then apparently Zurfina wasn’t really all that old.  Senta had often imagined that she was hundreds or even thousands of years old, protected by magic from the degradation of time.  But if Bassington was right, and Zurfina had been a young adult when they had met, she couldn’t be much over forty—maybe not even forty.

“I’m not as young as he thinks,” said the elder sorceress.  “Nor as old as you think.”

“Don’t read my mind, Fina.”

“Did he put doubts into your head, Pet?”

“He put questions in my head.”

“Go on then.  Ask your questions.”

“You’re not mad that I let Smedley loose?”

“Pish-posh.  If I hadn’t expected him to get loose sooner or later, I wouldn’t have left him bound by anything as flimsy as a rope.”

“Were you in love with him?”

“Yes,” replied Zurfina matter-of-factly.

“He’s kind of ugly.”

“That’s not a question.”

“What did you see in him, then?”

“It’s generally been my observation that women will accept one of four things in a man—if he has more than one, then all the better: looks, sexual prowess, power, or wealth.”

“Which did he have?” wondered Senta.

“More than one.”

Senta paused, and then rolled her eyes.

“Don’t ask the question if you don’t want to know the answer, Pet.”

“How did you escape Schwarztogrube?”

“Don’t ask the question if you don’t want to know the answer.”

“It must have been epic magic.”

Zurfina’s face turned hard.  “It wasn’t magic.  There was no magic at all in that place.  I had to use the most mundane means at my disposal.”

“What did you have to do?”

“Things…disgusting things… with disgusting men.  Of course, what I did to the place afterwards… that was epic magic.  You would have loved it, Pet.  It was more exciting than the falling star I brought down on Suusthek; more beautiful too.”

“What was it?”

“It was wild magic.  I don’t really know what else to call it.  It almost killed me too, but it was worth it.  Someday I’m going to use that spell again.”

Senta took a deep breath.  “Don’t you worry that you might unleash magical forces that even you can’t control?”

Zurfina waved dismissively.

“I miss Bessemer,” said Senta.

“That too is not a question.”

“Do you know where he is?”

“No.”

“He’s been gone for months.”

“He’ll be home soon,” said Zurfina.

“You’re sure?”

“Of course.  I have a feeling for such things.  Now, was there anything you wanted to tell me?”

The Young Sorceress and The Two Dragons Now at Kobo

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The Drache Girl: Loana Hewison

A group of twenty two minor characters arrive with Radley Staff and Terrence Dechantagne from Birmisia in The Drache Girl.  Of those, undboubtedly the most important to the rest of the series is Loana Hewison.  I always found it funny that as I was working on the book, my wife always disliked Loana.  I’ll admit I wouldn’t want to be married to her, but she does fill her role in the story.

Mrs. Fandice pulled Staff away from the Rutans to introduce him to her niece.  Loana Hewison looked so completely unlike Mrs. Fandice that anyone would have questioned whether they were related and sure enough, it seemed that their connection was only through marriage. 

“Aunt Rosalyn is my mother’s sister-in-law, that is to say her brother’s wife,” said Miss Hewison, who was without a doubt the most beautiful woman in the room.  Statuesque and striking, she wore a brilliant peach colored dinner gown.  Her long hair was arranged in a very complex style, with each strand seemingly a different shade from very light blond to coppery red.  As Staff spoke to her, he realized that not only was her hair multihued, but so were her eyes.  One eye was deep brown and the other eye was hazel.

“When my Uncle Henri passed on, my parents sent me to live with Aunt Rosalyn,” the young woman continued.  “And when she had the chance to go to Birmisia, well, I just had to join her.  It’s so exciting.  Imagine—a whole new world.”

“I hope you like it as much when we get there,” said Staff.  “You will easily be one of the most beautiful women on the continent.”  At which point, Mrs. Fandice steered her niece away to another part of the room.

The Two Dragons: Chapter One Except

“Wasn’t that a lovely ceremony?” asked Hero.

“It seemed very nice from down here.”

“Don’t be cross.  Benny and Shemar both invited us to ride in their steam carriages to the reception.  Who do you want to go with?”

Senta rolled her eyes.  “Quite frankly I’d rather take the trolley.”

“Are you sure?  Benny’s car is brand new and candy apple red.”

Senta looked over Hero’s shoulder at Benny Markham, who was puffing himself up with pride.  She liked Benny, Shemar too for that matter, but she wasn’t too fond of steam carriages.

“Do as you wish.  I’m taking the trolley.”

When Senta stepped out of the pew, all four of the young men who were waiting jumped to get out of her way.  And though most of the congregation had by that time already exited the church, those that remained quickly cleared the aisle for her.  She heard Hero behind her.

“Sorry boys.  You can give me a ride later.”  A moment later, her friend was at her right elbow.

“Isn’t this dress beautiful?” asked Hero, as they stepped out of the church into the bright sunshine.  “I couldn’t believe it when Egeria had me try it on and then she said I could keep it.”

“What else would she do with it?”

“Well, she could keep it.  I bet we’re about the same size.”

“Egeria Lusk is probably one of three women on the continent who have more dresses than I do.  She doesn’t need another one.”

“Egeria Korlann,” Hero corrected.

“Egeria Korlann,” Senta agreed.

“What do you suppose they’re going to do with all those shoes?”

“Throw them away, of course.  People only throw old shoes at weddings—ones they were going to throw away anyhow.  Why?”

“It just seems kind of wasteful.”

By this time they had traversed the twenty four great stone steps down from the front door of the Church of the Apostles to the street level.  Crowds of people were milling around on the sidewalk and on the front lawn, despite the signs warning to stay off the grass.  Both sides of Terrence Dechantagne Boulevard were lined with steam carriages—more than Senta remembered ever having seen at one time.  The bright summer sun reflected off of their bonnets and the cobblestone that lined all four lanes of the street.

“I wish that I had brought my parasol,” said Hero, looking up at the sky.  “If we’re out her very long, we might get a tan.”

Senta held out her hand.  “Sieor uuthanum sembia,” she said.  Two parasols appeared in her palm, one teal and one purple.  She handed the teal one to Hero.

“Hey, that’s nice.  Where did you get these?”

“Created them.”

“They’re really pretty.”

“Minor creation.  It’s not that powerful a spell really.”

“But these have lace,” marveled Hero, as she spread her parasol open.  “It has a complex opening mechanism and the spokes are made from bamboo.”

“That’s why it will only last a few hours.”

“Oh.”

“It’s just as well.  We don’t want to destroy the economy for makers of parasols.  Look, let’s get down to the trolley stop.”

The trolley was coming.  Terrence Dechantagne Boulevard had been built in an area set aside early on for expansion of the transportation system.  It served as the spine of Port Dechantagne, consisting of two northbound lanes and two southbound lanes, separated by a twenty foot wide grassy median through which the trolley tracks ran.  Marching along this grassy sward, pulling a green and yellow trolley car was a monstrous three-horned beast.  The triceratops was easily as large as the trolley car that it pulled, even though it was only about ten years old.  It showed little interest in either the steam carriages or the pedestrians, but moved purposefully toward the marked ground at the trolley stop, where it had learned it would be rewarded with tasty shrubs and tree seedlings.

Senta and Hero walked down the cement sidewalk to the edge of the road, across the red brick lanes of the street, to the small awning over four bench seats that served as the stop.  The trolley had already halted and the conductor was feeding the triceratops by the time they arrived.  Senta stepped around behind the conductor and stroked the dinosaur just behind the nose horn.

“Careful,” said the conductor, as he turned around.  “She doesn’t often bite but… oh… sorry.”

“How are you today, Harriet?” Senta spoke to the triceratops.  It seemed to take no notice.

She and Hero climbed up the steps and into the trolley car.  Senta dropped two pfennigs into the glass box.  Then she sat down next to her friend just behind the driver’s position.  More and more people stepped up into the car, filling in the seats from the back forward.  By the time the conductor had finished feeding Harriet and had climbed back inside, all of the seats with the exception of the two next to Senta had been filled, and eight people stood holding on to the handrail.

“Did everyone pay their pfennig?” asked the driver.  A few people nodded, but most ignored the question.  Only about half the passengers had in fact dropped a coin into the container.  Picking up a small crop, he whacked the triceratops on the rear end, and it jerked the trolley into motion.  Then he rang the bell.