The sun was low in the sky over Bangdorf, igniting gold fire on the spires of the Kaiserlicher Palast and the tall, thin, single tower of the Kirche Unserer Heiligen Mutter. The red and white roofs of the many other buildings were less striking but no less beautiful. Senta Bly pulled a wayward blond curl back behind her ear as she stared out the large window on the twelfth floor of the Kanalgeschäfts Hotel, as she often did at this time of day. She had been in Bangdorf for a fortnight after six months of touring much of Sumir. She thought Bangdorf was the most beautiful city that she had ever seen. Smaller than Brech and much newer, it was laid out with wide streets and broad, lush parks. If it had been anywhere else in the world, she could have seen herself staying there.
She swiftly turned and walked down the hallway to the door of the Imperial suite and opening it, stepped inside. The large parlor was empty, so she continued on into the master bedroom. Reclining on the bed, wearing nothing but his slacks and a white undershirt, was her companion Kieran Baxter. Retrieving a lit cigarette from the ashtray on the nightstand, he took a long drag and blew out a thick stream of smoke.
“Dress shopping again?” he asked.
“Yes.” She spun around. “Does this dress make my bottom look big?”
“Huge.”
“Good. This is the latest thing in lady’s undergarments. It’s called a table-top bustle.”
“I can see why.” He took a last puff from the cigarette, before mashing it into the ashtray. “I could lay out a seven course meal on your ass.”
“Don’t say ‘ass’,” Senta hissed. “It’s uncouth.”
Baxter shrugged, then spun his legs off the bed and sat up. He cared little for ladies’ fashions. Senta on the other hand, spent a great deal of time shopping. This particular dress, newly in from Mirsanna, had a high collar in front, though it was cut low in the back. Gold, trimmed with black brocade, it had puffs of black lace at the wrists.
“Are we going out tonight?” asked Baxter.
“Of course. We only have four more days.”
“I’d better get dressed then, hadn’t I?”
A sudden loud “gawp” could be heard through the side door. Senta quickly crossed the room and opened the door to reveal a large closet. Curled up into a neat circle, just inside the door, was a dragon. No bigger than a medium sized dog, the beast was covered with coral tinted metallic scales. Its long thin snout was resting on its forearms. Its long whip-like tail, tipped with a spade-shaped barb, was wrapped around its body.
“Poor baby,” said Senta, leaning down and reaching out a hand to the little coral dragon. “Did the bad man lock you up in the closet all day?”
A thin forked tongue quickly licked the woman’s fingers, and then suddenly the mouth full of needle sharp teeth bit down upon the fleshy part of her hand.
“Ouch! You horrible little twonk!”
“You shouldn’t say ‘twonk’,” said Baxter dryly. “It’s uncouth. And that’s why she’s been locked up all day.”
“She hasn’t been out in forever,” said Senta, pausing to lick the blood off her hand. “She has so much pent up energy.”
“Indeed.”
“Come along, Pet,” she said, scooping up the dragon into her arms.
The little beast allowed itself to be cuddled for just a moment before slithering up her sleeve and taking a spot on her shoulder. The sorceress crossed the room and opened the doors to the balcony.
“Go on,” said Senta. “Fly, but be back by morning.”
The little dragon shot into the sky with so much force, it sent her staggering backwards several steps. Once inside again, she shut the doors. Baxter was now in the closet putting on a newly starched white shirt. Senta walked up behind him and snaked her arms around his waist.
“You do look handsome when you get dressed up.”
“Thank you.” He unfastened his pants and tucked in the shirt tail. “I worry about letting her out. We’ve already had two shooting attempts. It seems careless to chance a third.”
“Yes, but both of those times they were trying to shoot me,” Senta pointed out. “I doubt anyone will even notice her and I don’t think a bullet would permanently harm her anyway. I’m much more concerned about her growth. By this age, Bessemer was nearly the size of a pony.”
“Maybe the females are just smaller, or maybe her kind of dragon doesn’t grow as big.”
“Maybe, maybe. That’s why I’ve decided to spend tomorrow at the library.”
“I thought we were taking the river cruise tomorrow.” He turned around so that she could tie the bowtie he had just wrapped around his neck.
“You can still go.”
“By myself?”
“I doubt you’ll suffer from a lack of female companionship.”
“You wouldn’t mind?” he asked. “If I were to take the cruise with a lovely Freedonian girl?”
“As long as I don’t see you, you’ll both probably survive,” said Senta. “Just remember, the women here are desperate for you lot.”
“And whose fault is that?”
“It’s not mine,” said Senta. “Everybody seems to forget that. I had nothing to do with that bit. Now put your jacket on and let’s go.”
“Don’t you want to see the baby?” he asked.
“Yes, of course.”
Baxter put on his jacket as he crossed room, stepped out into the parlor, and opened the nursery door. Senta followed.
“Bringen sie das kind ins wohnzimmer, bitte fraulein.”
Two women stepped out into the parlor. Both were quite young. The first was a dark-haired beauty with flashing eyes, dressed in a simple black and brown dress. The other, who carried a sleeping baby wrapped in pink blankets, was blond and blue-eyed, with a colorful floral-patterned dress.
“She looks just precious when she’s asleep, doesn’t she?” said Senta, as she took the child from the other blonde.
“She is precious,” said Baxter. “You should spend more time with her.”
“She’s being well cared for by Miss Lorvann and Miss Müller. And I spend much more time with her than my mother ever spent with me at this age, I can tell you that.”
“She ist a gute child,” said the brunette.
“And how is your baby, Miss Lorvann?”
“He ist einen big boy soon,” she replied.
“Of course he is. That’s why you were able to take on my little pet. I counted myself very lucky to find a wet nurse here in Bangdorf. She is sucking?”
Miss Lorvann blushed to be part of such a conversation in front of a man, but Baxter was already heading back to the bedroom to get his shoes.
“Ja, she eat gute.”
“And you are happy with her progress, Miss Müller.”
The blonde stared uncomprehendingly.
“Das baby ist gut?”
“Ja, Ja,” the young woman assured. “Sie weint kaum überhaupt.”
Senta looked at the cherubic face just visible within the swirl of blankets. A tiny curl of blond hair swept down just above the closed eyes. A cute little button nose was just set off by the tiny pursed lips. She handed the child back to the nurse.
“We will be back before nine,” she said. “Vor neun.”
Baxter returned, wearing highly polished shoes, as the two young women retreated to the nursery. The former navy officer cut quite a figure when he was dressed. Offering Senta his arm, he led her from the suite, down the hallway to the elevator. The operator opened the door for them and then threw the switch, sending the tiny conveyance downward.
“So what is the venue for this evening?” asked Baxter.
“Just dinner.”
“No opera? No ballet?”
“I’m tired of all that, honestly,” said Senta. “How many times can you enjoy chubby Freedonian women acting out fairy tales? The concierge gave me directions to a little place that’s supposed to be famous among the locals.”
“Did you order a car?”
“No, it’s close enough that we can walk.”
They strolled along the wide avenue, around the block, to a small building that looked like it could have come right out of one of the fairy tales to which the sorceress had been alluding. It was a small, two-story affair with heavy shutters open on either side of the windows and an ornately carved oak door. Baxter pulled open the portal and they entered to find a cozy interior, lit primarily by flickering candles. Seven or eight patrons, all but one of them women, sat at small square tables, being served by a pair of buxom blondes in light cotton blouses and green, heavy wool skirts. Senta chose a table in the corner and waited until Baxter pulled out her chair. Once they were both seated, one of the blondes appeared beside them.
“Gute nacht.”
“Was ist… um, besonderes?” Senta tripped over the unfamiliar Freedonian term.
“You are Brechs, Ja?” asked the waitress. “I can speak Brech very gute.”
“Excellent,” said the sorceress. “What do you recommend for dinner tonight?”
“We have a gute dinner. I bring you cheeses and then chicken soup. It is very gute, everyone says. Then I bring you roast beef or the fish, you choose. And potatoes Kasselburg, sour kraut, and fresh baked bread. Of course for dessert, you have strudel.”
“That sounds perfect,” said Baxter. “Roast beef for me, and a beer.”
“Yes, the same,” said Senta, and then when the waitress had gone, “Imagine serving cheese before the meal.”
“They do have some very good cheeses though. In fact, all the food here is good. I think I’ve gained five pounds since we’ve been here.”
“Ten,” said Senta. “You really are becoming hideous. But don’t worry. That’s just how I want you—fat enough that other women will find you unattractive, but not so fat that I’ll find you disgusting.”
The waitress returned and sat down a platter containing at least a dozen small wheels of cheese, which Baxter now stared at as though it was a platter of poisonous snakes. Senta smiled to herself and carved off a piece of one of the creamier varieties and brought it to her mouth. Neither of them finished their meals hungry. After large hunks of roast beef covered in thick brown gravy and creamy seasoned potatoes, they both felt satisfied and sedate.
Baxter picked up the tall glass of dark beer and sipped it.
“They’re watching you, you know,” he said.
Turning slightly, Senta could see the two blondes peering out from the kitchen.
“No, they’re not. They’re watching you, and with you being so ugly and all. I told you they were desperate.”
“How can you tell?”
“Watch.”
Senta raised her arm out straight in front of her over the table, palm down. Flipping her hand over, a flame sprang up in her palm. Within two or three seconds, the flame had coalesced into a humanoid figure, eight or nine inches tall, which immediately began pirouetting and spinning in a miniature ballet, all without leaving Senta’s hand. Baxter wasn’t paying the little dancing flame any attention. He had seen the trick before. He was watching the waitresses, who looked so much alike he decided that they must actually be twins. They started at the appearance of magic and their gazes shifted just enough for him to realized that they had previously been in fact, looking at him.
“Maybe you could take one of them on the river cruise with you.”
“Maybe both of them,” he replied. “It seems a shame to break up a set.”
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The Sorceress and her Lovers – Minor Characters Part III
Here are a few more minor characters from Senta and the Steel Dragon Book 6: The Sorceress and her Lovers.
Kenda: Another of Hsrandtuss’s wives, Kendra at one time lived in Port Dechantagne and worked as a guide for hunters, as seen in The Dark and Forbidding Land.
Kayden: The lizzie majordomo of the Dechantagne-Staff household.
Benny and Hero Markham: Senta’s childhood friend has grown up into a married woman with several children, including her daughter named Senta.
Walter and Warden Charmley: The twins, who have appeared numerous times in the earlier books, notably as small boys in The Drache Girl, have grown up and started their own dinosaur ranch.
Talli Archer and Questa Hardt: Talli and Questa are two members of Sherree Glieberman’s clique. Questa’s father is Birmisian and her mother is from Mirsanna.
Little Senta: There are many children in Port Dechantagne named Senta– not surprising after Senta’s defeat of the dragon Hissussisthiss. This one is special though because she is the daughter of the sorceress herself.
Sirris: Still another of Hsrandtuss’s wives ( I think I’ve covered them all now). She comes originally from the village of Tserich.
Risty: The lizzie butler in the Colbshallow home, Risty is always ready to drop a cold Billingbow’s Soda Water into his master’s hand.
Gabrielle Bassett and Dutty Morris: Two young women of the Birmisian upper crust, have been mentioned in several books and were seen at the Accord Day party in The Two Dragons. They became friends with Hero and Senta in their early twenties.
Chutturonoth: There are several notable warriors among Hsrandtuss’s tribe, but Chutturonoth is right there in the heat of the action on several occasions.
Bessemer the Steel Dragon: I wouldn’t call Bessemer as minor character. He is one of the two title characters of the series, after all. Even in The Two Dragons where he plays a huge part, he is seldom “on scene.” The same is true here, though he has at least one scene with each of the other important characters.
The Sorceress and her Lovers – Minor Characters Part II
Here are a few more minor characters from The Sorceress and her Lovers.
Peter Sallow: Last seen in The Dark and Forbidding Land as an apprentice of the great wizard Bassington, Peter has grown up quite a bit since then.
Dovie Likliter: A new arrival to Birmisia, along with her mother and brothers, Dovie become friends with Iolana Staff.
Wenda Lanier: An arrival to Birmisia as a preteen in The Drache Girl, Wenda has grown up to become what many consider to be the most beautiful woman in the colony.
Sherree Glieberman, arriving on the same ship as Wenda Lanier, Sherree was last seen at the Accord Day party in The Two Dragons. She is now the leader of the colony’s mean girls, and Iolana’s nemesis.
Zeah and Egeria Korlann: The Korlann’s are now happily married, having finally ended their seemingly interminable courtship in The Two Dragons.
Augie and Terra Dechantagne: Still both young children, Augie and his sister Terra appear more in this book than any of the previous volumes.
Wizard Cameron and Wizard Winton: Two more police wizards, both have been in Port Dechantagne for a few years as the story begins. That doesn’t mean they’re trusted.
The Coral Dragon: The little dragon that Senta got as an egg in The Young Sorceress and hatched in The Two Dragons travels the world with her mistress. She doesn’t get along well with all her fellow travelers.
Pantagria: Back with a vengeance– literally.
Szakhandu: Another of Hsrandtuss’s wives with some peculiar ideas about how lizzies should be living.
The Sorceress and her Lovers – Minor Characters
Here are some of the minor characters found in Senta and the Steel Dragon Book 6: The Sorceress and her Lovers.
Sszaxxanna & Ssu: Two of Hsrandtuss’s wives, both appeared in The Young Sorceress.
Tokkenoht: Tokkenoht is a new character. Another of Hsrandtuss’s wives, she is also a witch-doctor.
Esther: Esther is a female lizzie raised in a human household. The fact that this particular household is the Dechantagne’s will probably mess her up even more.
Radley and Iolanthe Staff: Major characters in several of the books, the Staffs appears in this book as part of their daughter Iolana’s storyline. Being a pivotal character, Iolanthe also plays a part in several other story lines.
Maro and Geert McCoort: Senta’s two cousins are making quite a show around Port Dechantagne, since their arrival in The Two Dragons.
Willa and Ascan Tice: A young Zaeri brother and sister, both appear briefly in earlier volumes. Willa has now become a close friend of Iolanthe.
DeeDee Colbshallow: In The Two Dragons, the Saba’s wife Loana was pregnant. Their little girl is now about three years old and has her father wrapped around her finger, as little girls are wont to do.
Loana Colbshallow: Speaking of Loana, she is exasperating her husband even more.
Eamon and Dot Shrubb: Police Sergeant Shrubb and his wife now have a thriving family. The also have newly arrived relatives from the Brech homeland.
Wizard Bell: One of three new wizards hired by the Port Dechantagne police department, Wizard Bell faces some distrust from those who have faced wizards before, including from his boss Chief Inspector Colbshallow.
The Sorceress and her Lovers – Main Characters
It’s less than a month until The Sorceress and her Lovers comes out, so it’s time to start talking about it. As with the other Senta and the Steel Dragon books, this one rotates between several characters and tells the story from their viewpoints.
Senta Bly: Taking place just after the events in the epilog of The Two Dragons (about three years after the events in the bulk of that book), now a 21-year-old sorceress, traveling Freedonia and Brechalon with her new companion Kieran Baxter. For her, this is a story of going home, both in the sense of rediscovering where she comes from in Brechalon and the journey back to where she has grown up in Birmisia. Baxter is her constant companion and these chapters tell his story as much as hers.
Hsrandtuss: Hsrandtuss is a lizard man chief, last seen in The Young Sorceress. Like Senta, Hsrandtuss is making a journey from his old home to a new land in the east, taking along with him the entire population of his village as well as many other lizzies from nearby. Hsrandtuss’s story is one of dealing with a society in flux, as the lizardmen must deal with ideas seeping in from the human colony.
Iolana Dechantagne Staff: Now eleven years old, Iolana has grown up living in a house at the center of colonial politics. She is extremely intelligent and precocious in some regards, but still a little girl in other ways. Like many preteens, she has to deal with peers who alternately ignore her or try to make her life hell. All this while living wrapped up in the Dechantagne family secrets.
Saba Colbshallow: Saba has his job as Chief Inspector of Police to keep him busy, but he’s cut off from one woman in his life and becoming more an more annoyed at the other. Of course there are many things to keep him busy– crime and terror plots being only the beginning.
Cissy
Yesterday I talked about the character named Cissy that appears in Senta and the Steel Dragon. We also have a fourteen year old iguana named Cissy at our house. People often ask me if I named the character after the iguana. No, I actually named the iguana after the character. Here is Cissy sittin on my unmade bed. Note the iguana shaped pillow near her tail.
The Two Dragons: Cissy
Cissy is one of the characters in Senta and the Steel Dragon. She is easily the most important non-human character. Her part in the original story arc of Senta and the Steel Dragon was relatively small. She appeared in book 3 and then her story culminated in book 5. When I went back and added what became books 0, 2, and 4, her story became much bigger and I think richer.
Here Cissy runs into Saba Colbshallow while both are shopping at the pfennig store.
The bell above the door clanged once again, this time as a lizardman entered. It was carrying a large hatbox tied with a red silk bow. There were quite a few variations from individual to individual among the reptilians. This aborigine had a face of deep forest green that continued down and was punctuated with darker strips just below the shoulder. Saba immediately recognized by the shorter stature, just under six feet, and the lighter belly coloring, a pale green, that this was a female. Only a few seconds later he recognized who the lizardman was.
“Hello Cissy.”
“Hello Sada,” she replied.
“What do you need, lizzie?” asked Delks in a rather snotty tone.
“Dillingdow’s,”
“Huh?”
“She wants Billingbow’s,” translated Saba. “A six pack?”
Cissy nodded.
Delks raised an eyebrow, and then walked to the back of the store once again, returning with yet another wooden carrier containing six bottles of the popular soda water.
“I didn’t know you lot drank this,” he said. “That will be three marks.”
“That should be one mark thirty two P,” said Saba.
“I can charge whatever I want.”
Cissy set three one mark notes on the counter and picked up the six-pack in her clawed fist. She headed back out the front door, pausing just long enough on her way out to hiss “Asshole.”
“If you’re going to start skinning the natives,” said Saba to the proprietor. “You might not want to start with the governor’s own lizzie.”
Walking outside, Saba found Cissy tilting one of the bottles into her long, many-toothed mouth.
“I like to let mine cool down in the ice box.”
“I know. I see you drink. Cold drink not good to lizzies. I get thirsty. I like Dillingdow’s.”
“Did you pick that up for Mrs. Dechantagne?” he asked, indicating the hatbox.
“No. This is Cissy’s hat. You like to see it?”
He nodded. She carefully untied the red silk ribbon and opened the box, withdrawing a broad-brimmed lady’s hat, made of plaid material, decorated with artificial blue and pink roses and a large green feather. Carefully balancing it on her head, Cissy tied it below her chin with a thick strand of blue lace.
“It looks very nice on you,” said Saba.
“I wear it to shrine, like all the fine ladies.”
“You go to shrine regularly?”
“Yes. I Zaeri now. You Kafirite?”
“Yes, that’s right.”
“Kafira die for hoonan souls. I think not for lizzie souls.”
Saba nodded thoughtfully, and then turned to set his two six-packs into the passenger seat of the steam carriage. He didn’t know much about the lizzie religion, or if there was one now that he thought about it. It was not surprising that Mother Linton was not interested in converting the locals to Kafira, but it seemed like someone would want to. He wanted to ask Cissy who had told her about the Zaeri faith, but when he turned back around, she was already gone.
No Changes for Brechalon After All
Well, the other day I announced that I was going to change the Senta and the Steel Dragon series, by making Brechalon part of book 2 and offering The Voyage of the Minotaur as a series starter. The idea was that I could offer it for 99 cents, or maybe even for free, encouraging people to read it and the subsequent books. I forgot about the big A problem.
Amazon doesn’t let authors sell books for $0, unless they become exclusive to Amazon. I don’t want to do that. They also prohibit an author from selling a book at Amazon when they sell it cheaper somewhere else (perfectly understandable). Anyway, I couldn’t offer The Voyage of the Minotaur elsewhere for $0 and at Amazon for say, $.99.
So, Brechalon stays as it is. I probably will still lower the price of The Voyage of the Minotaur, at least experimentally, to 99 cents. I may go ahead and attach Brechalon to The Dark and Forbidding Land, but I’m going to leave it available where it is for free. Incidentally, Amazon’s rules about free books are why Brechalon can’t be found at Amazon.
The Two Dragons: Ivo & Femke Kane
Ivo and Femke Kane are two characters in Senta and the Steel Dragon. They first appear in book 3: The Drache Girl. They are a husband and wife pair of engineers that come to Birmisia to work for the coal company. Although there are hints in book 3, we don’t really learn all that much about them until The Two Dragons, in which we learn they have an unusual relationship.
Senta, who had taken a bath upon her return from the great plaza earlier in the day, took another. The rectangular tub was just over seven feet long and five feet wide, which by human standards made it quite spacious. Its depth however was what made it remarkable. Though she was an even six feet tall, Senta could not touch the bottom even on her tip-toes, without dunking her head. Four square stone spouts provided a continuous flow of water into the tub, which spilled over the top and ran down to a drain cut with four long grooves from a one foot square piece of stone.
After the bath, Senta returned to her room dressed in her large fluffy housecoat. She sat down on her sleeping mat and thought about opening Matter and the Elements once more, but just couldn’t face it. Instead she reached into her bag and pulled out a well-worn copy of Intruder by Anarosa Freedman. It was a relatively easy matter to find the racy parts, as the corners of the pages had become dog-eared with rereading.
“Well, what are we priming ourselves up for?” asked Mrs. Kane, when she entered a few minutes later.
“Just reading a bit.”
“So I see. You’ve had an exciting day.” Mrs. Kane sat down cross-legged next to Senta. “You know I’ve always thought that you were a remarkable young woman,” she said, placing her hand on Senta’s shoulder.
“Thanks…”
“I’ve thought that you might be someone I would like to get to know better.”
“Okay…”
“My husband and I have an agreement. He’s free to pursue other women, as am I.”
“As you are what?”
“Free to pursue other women.”
Senta stared uncomprehending for a moment. Then recognition kicked her in the side of the head just above the ear.
“Eww!”
“Now don’t be that way,” said Mrs. Kane. “The love between two women can be a beautiful thing.”
“I’ve got all the loving women that I need,” said Senta. “What’s more, I have a loving man.”
“That’s what I’m trying to tell you, dear. You don’t really need one of those.”
“There we must agree to disagree.” Senta lifted the woman’s hand from her shoulder and set it aside.
“Pity,” said Mrs. Kane, moving to her own sleeping mat. “If you change your mind, you know where to find me.”
“Yes, I’m sure I could navigate thirty-three inches if needed.”
Senta put away her lamp, though it had not yet grown dark enough in the room to need it, and her book, and curled up under her blanket. It had been an eventful day and despite feeling vaguely more nervous about Mrs. Kane’s proximity than she had before, she was soon asleep.
Changes for Brechalon
I’m making a change in my book lineup. I’ve been thinking about this for a long time. It has to do with series starters, and specifically with Brechalon. His Robot Girlfriend, for instance, is a good series starter for the rest of the series. People download and read His Robot Girlfriend and like it, and so they may purchase the other books. I never envisioned Brechalon as a series starter. I always thought of it as an extra for readers of The Voyage of the Minotaur. Because I thought of it as sort of an add-on, I eventually decided to offer it free. Now however, because it is free, it gets downloaded and people read it to decide if they want to buy the rest of the series. I don’t think it represents the series very well. The characters, especially Senta, don’t grow much in this story. You could say that’s understandable, considering she’s a child of six in the story, but it’s not what readers picking up a cheap read want. I think The Voyage of the Minotaur is a much better starter for the series. It was always intended to be the first book read.
Here’s what I’m going to do. I’m pulling Brechalon from the ebookstores. It will still be available at Smashwords. I’m adding Brechalon onto the The Dark and Forbidding Land, which is the shortest of the series and as it’s number two in the series, it maintains Brechalon’s position as something to be read after reading The Voyage of the Minotaur. Since Minotaur is now officially, and obviously, the first book, I’m going to lower the price. Hopefully this will encourage more people to buy the book and then read the rest of the series. Already well over 60% of readers of Minotaur purchase The Dark and Forbidding Land. As a publisher, the idea here is short-term loss and long-term gain. Since I’m not really a publisher, but an author, I really just want my books read. Everything should be in place for the arrival of book 6 in the series The Sorceress and her Lovers, in just over one month.