Astrid Maxxim and her Undersea Dome – Chapter 3 Excerpt

Astrid Maxxim 2Ten minutes later, the group arrived at Main Street and climbed aboard the monorail train that took them to school.  Rachel Carson High School was a beautiful high-tech, three-story structure with its own internal monorail station on the top floor.  The six young people stepped out of the train and started off toward their respective team rooms, where they could visit their lockers before class.

“Hello, Nerd,” said as voice behind Astrid, as she put her backpack on the top shelf in her locker.

She turned around to come face to face with her cousin Gloria.  She looked just as stunningly beautiful as she did on the hoverbike poster, but now she was wearing a Rachel Carson High blazer.

“What are you doing here?” asked Astrid.

“I’m going to school.  Gee, aren’t you supposed to be some kind of genius?  I would have thought that you could figure that out.”

“But you live in Socketburg and you can’t start school now anyway.  It’s April, for crying out loud.”

“I’m on an extended study program.  We have those at Tallulah Bankhead High.  Don’t feel bad, but I probably won’t see much of you because I’m a sophomore and you’re just a freshman.  Anyway, bye.”

Gloria walked off into the crowd of students, leaving Astrid standing open-mouthed in her wake.

Astrid Maxxim and her Undersea Dome – Chapter 1 Excerpt

Astrid Maxxim 2Shark!

Denise Brown tapped frantically on her friend Astrid’s shoulder to get her attention.  Astrid Maxxim’s focus, like the focus of her underwater camera, was fixed on the bright orange starfish, which rested on the top of the coral outcropping as if waiting for its picture to be taken.  Astrid snapped a photo before turning to see what was agitating her dive partner.  Denise pointed at the shark, and then to make sure that she was getting the message across, made a fin with her hand and put it on top of her head.  Astrid held up her fingers about an inch apart in the universal symbol for small.  Denise shook her head violently and shot up toward the surface.

In exasperation, Astrid blew out bubbles around her regulator, and then kicked her way back up to the surface of the Mediterranean.  She spat out her mouthpiece and pulled the dive mask up onto her forehead.

“We’ve got fifteen minutes left before we’re done,” she said.

“Shark!” shouted Denise, scrambling up the ladder that hung from the side of the small boat.

“Shark?” said Toby Bundersmith, who was waiting topside.  He threw aside his Batman comic and helped Denise up the ladder.  “That’s lucky.  I was hoping to see a shark when I was in the water, but I didn’t.”

“Come on, Denise,” called Astrid.  “I still haven’t got a picture of a lobster yet.”

“There is a shark!”

“It’s only a little one,” said Astrid.  “It is more afraid of you than you are of it.”

“That’s not possible,” said Denise.  “And it wasn’t little.  It was big—large, hefty, colossal, enormous, gigantic, mammoth, massive, oversized, tremendous, vast.”

Astrid tossed the camera up to Toby.  “It was little—tiny, inconsequential, miniscule, petite, teeny, undersized, microscopic, miniature, did I say miniature already, no? runty, bitty, wee.”

“Come on,” said Toby, holding his hand down for Astrid.  “I’m getting bored up here anyway.  Let’s go in and have lunch.”

“Hurry up and get in the boat before that shark gets you,” said Denise, helping Astrid up.

“Honestly,” said Astrid.  “It was the size of a dachshund.”

“I got bit by a wiener dog once and had to have five stitches,” replied Denise.  “He didn’t have shark’s teeth either, just regular dog teeth.”

Toby helped as the girls, one after the other, removed their scuba tanks and stowed them in the aft rack.  Then he went forward and took a seat behind the wheel.  As Astrid and Denise sat down, the big inboard engine roared to life.  Pulling back the throttle, Toby steered toward the dock in Cartagena as the two girls wrapped up in large, fluffy towels.

Astrid Maxxim was startlingly cute, with shoulder length strawberry blond hair and very large blue eyes.  Already a world famous inventor, she was enjoying the relative anonymity that Cartagena, Spain offered.  Denise had long blond hair and green eyes, and was a little on the skinny side.  At five foot five, the two girls were exactly the same height, and had been best friends since they were in diapers.  Toby Bundersmith was tall and muscular, with brown hair that hung down in bangs just above his hazel eyes.  He turned and gave Astrid a broad smile.

Astrid Maxxim at Diesel Ebooks

Dome3dAstrid Maxxim and her Undersea Dome is now available at Diesel Ebooks. Follow the link to find it for just 99 cents .  But remember, you can still get it FREE from Smashwords.  Just look back over the recent posts for details.  Diesel Ebooks is an ebook agnostic store.  You can get books for any device there, at competitive prices.

Astrid Maxxim now at Kobo Books

Dome3dIf you have a Kobo reading device or a Kobo app, you can now buy Astrid Maxxim and her Undersea Dome at Kobo books.  Follow the link to find it for 99 cents.  But remember, you can still get it at Smashwords for Free.  Check out the posting a few days ago.

Astrid Maxxim and her Undersea Dome at iBookstore

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Astrid Maxxim and her Undersea Dome is now available for iBooks.  Check it out now at your local iBookstore, using your favorite iDevice.

I’m pretty amazed at how quickly my book showed up on my iPad.  They really have streamlined the submission process between Smashwords and Apple.

Don’t forget though, you can still get a free copy of this book by following the directions from the post a little further down the page.  Thanks.

Previews Updated

Astrid Maxxim and the Antarctic Expedition

The Previews page has been updated.  With the completion and publication of Astrid Maxxim and her Undersea Dome, it moves to the Books page and makes room for Astrid Maxxim and the Antarctic Expedition, which is on schedule for 2014.

Teen inventor Astrid Maxxim makes a journey to the bottom of the planet on an expedition to uncover the secrets of a mysterious liquid lake far beneath the ice.  Meanwhile, troubles plague her friends and family as a hostile takeover threatens Maxxim Industries and Robot Valerie may face her greatest danger yet.

Click the Previews link at the top of the page to see what else is on the way.

A Good Backup is a Necessity

Dome3dAll this time (weeks) after replacing a failing computer with my new iMac, I thought I had backups of everything.  Then I find out that my book covers are gone.  I was able to download those that have been published.  Shaed Studios was good enough to send me copies of all the Astrid Maxxim covers they’ve made.  Other covers I’m going to need to recreate.  Sadly, in some cases I lost the artwork that I purchased for them.

One of the main reasons I bought a Mac was the Time Machine backup, so this never happens again.  Thankfully, I’ve found a great many other things I love about it too.  For instance, I purchased Parallels Desktop 8 (along with Windows 7), and now my iMac runs Windows programs far faster than my old machine did.

In any case, back up your stuff.  Always good advice.

See Ya’ Facebook

I’ve suspended my Facebook account.  I didn’t go the whole way and delete it, but I suspended it.  I’m going to let it go a month or two and see if I really want to delete it, but right now I’m leaning that way.

I just hate Facebook.  I guess the real reason is obvious.  Facebook is for connecting with people and I really don’t want to connect with them– at least not the way Facebook does it.  People I know and respect either have no Facebook account, or do have one and never post.  Meanwhile my “friends” that I haven’t seen since grade school or in-laws that I see far too much anyway are constantly posting inane quotes, “Jesus loves you because” posters, neoconservative revisionist history, or internet legends so old that Snopes just laughs at it.

On Facebook, every comment, every opinion is equal.  Well, that’s not quite true.  On Facebook, if you have lots of “likes” then your opinion is worthwhile.  If a million people “like” a stupid thing, it’s still a stupid thing.

Animal Farm Audio Book

The latest in “This Week in Audiobooks”, a free Animal Farm by George Orwell.

Brechalon: Chapter Four, Part One

Brechalon: Nils Chapman & Karl DruryChapter Four: Memories

Nils Chapman looked through the small window in the armored door at prisoner eighty-nine.  The warden was once again away from the island and Chapman was happy to note that Karl Drury was gone as well.  Chapman had spent the previous weeks trying to find out anything he could about the lone occupant of Schwarztogrube’s north wing.  He didn’t know why, but he felt compelled to find out all he could about her.  The prison didn’t have any open records and asking the warden would have invited dismissal, so he had quizzed the other guards and the south wing prisoners.  From the former, he hadn’t gotten much—only that she was an extremely dangerous, extremely powerful magic-user.  From one of the latter though he had gotten a name—Zurfina.

“Zurfina,” he called out.  “Is that your name?  Is that who you are?”

Slowly, very slowly, the head came up until he could see the two grey eyes peering from between the dirty, blond hair like the eyes of a tiger looking out of the jungle—filled with hatred.

“Are you Zurfina?”

Slowly the fire in the eyes died, and the eyes turned glassy.  Then the head dropped back down.  Though he called to her several more times, prisoner eighty-nine gave no more indication that she heard or understood.  Eventually he gave up and made his way back to the south wing, so he didn’t hear the words that came from the cracked lips.

“One thousand nine hundred sixty eight days.  One thousand nine hundred sixty eight days.  One thousand nine …”

One thousand nine hundred sixty eight days before, Zurfina the Magnificent had been moving through the throngs of people in Marcourt Station.  She was not dressed as the other women in the station, or anywhere else in the United Kingdom of Greater Brechalon.  High-heeled leather boots and leather pants matched the spiked leather collar around her neck and the fingerless black leather gloves on her hands.  The black leather corset, worn as a shirt, left her white shoulders bare as it did the two-inch star tattoo above each breast.  No one noticed the bizarrely clad figure though.  Zurfina was a master of obfuscation.  To everyone else at the station, she seemed nothing but a non-descript brunette in a brown dress with an appropriately large bustle.  To almost everyone else.

Zurfina had her ticket on the B511 out of Brech to Flander on the southern coast, where she had already arranged to meet a boat that would take her to a ship bound for Mirsanna.  There was no way that she could stay in Brechalon any longer.  The government had refused to accept her independence.  They would have her join the military or they would see her destroyed.  They had already sent a dozen wizards and two sorcerers against her.  But Zurfina was the greatest practitioner of sorcery in the Kingdom and was more than a match for any wizard.

A man in a brown suit stepped out from behind a pillar.  To the other people in the station, he seemed nothing out of the ordinary, but to Zurfina he glowed bright yellow and was surrounded by a sparkling halo.  She didn’t wait for him to cast a spell.  She pointed her hand toward him and spat out an incantation.

“Intior uuthanum err.”

Immediately the man doubled over, wracked with uncontrollable cackling laughter.  But before Zurfina could smile appreciatively, she was thrown from her feet as the world around her exploded in flames.  She had been hit in the back by a fireball, and only the fact that she had previously shielded herself prevented her from becoming a human candle, as four or five innocent bystanders around her now did.  Rolling to her feet and turning around, she found that she faced not one, but four wizards.  The one who had evidently cast the fireball was preparing another spell, while the other three were casting their own.  Her shield protected her from the lightning bolt, and the attempt to charm her, but one of the four magic missiles hit her, burning her shoulder as though it had been dipped in lava.

“Uuthanum uastus corakathum paj–  Prestus Uuthanum.”  Zurfina ducked into a side alcove as one of the wizards turned to stone and her own shield was replenished.  Several more magical bolts struck the stone wall across from her, creating small burnt holes.  Peering quickly around the corner, she saw the four wizards just where she left them, the three trying to use their petrified comrade as cover.  Looking in the other direction, she saw that the wizard cursed with laughter had recovered and he had been joined by two more.

Seven wizards—well, six.  That was a lot of magical firepower.  But then Zurfina looked across the station platform.  Directly opposite her was the open door of a train; not the B511, but a train bound for somewhere else.  If she could reach it, she could get away.  She glanced quickly around the corner again.  The smell of burnt bodies mixed with thick black smoke in the air, but though there was plenty of the former, there was not enough of the latter for Zurfina’s taste.

“Uuthanum,” she said, and a thick fog began to fill the station platform.

“Maiius uuthanum nejor paj.”  The three wizards to her right suddenly faced a dog the size of a draft horse, snarling and foaming at the mouth, and they felt their spells were better aimed at it than any blond sorceress.

Turning to her left, Zurfina cast another spell.  “Uuthanum uastus carakathum nit.”

The cement that formed the other end of the platform turned to mud.  The petrified wizard, deprived of his secure foundation toppled over onto one of his comrades crushing him, while the other two struggled to pull themselves from the muck.  Zurfina shot out of the alcove and ran toward the train.  She had almost made it, when Wizard Bassington stepped into the open doorway in front of her.

She stopped right there in the open, unbalanced, unsure now whether to run left or right or back the way that she had come.  She felt uncomfortably like an animal caught on the road in the headlamps of an oncoming steam carriage.  Bassington didn’t move.  He stared at her with his beady eyes.  His eyes went wide though when Zurfina reached up to snatch something out of the air.  Normal, non-magical people couldn’t see them, but he could—the glamours that orbited her head were spells cast earlier, awaiting the moment when she needed them.

She crushed the glamour and pointed her hand at the spot where Bassington stood, just as he dived away.  The entryway where the wizard had been, and the passenger coaches on either side of him exploded, lifting much of the train up off the track as metal and wood shrapnel and human body parts flew in every direction.  The flash knocked Zurfina herself back onto the cement and sent her sliding across the pavement and into the far wall.  Before she could get up, she was hit with a dozen bolts of magical fire, some but not all of them deflected by her magic shield.  It was a spell of weakening, followed by one of sleep though that finally dropped her head unconscious to the ground.  The last thing she saw was Bassington’s hobnail boots walking toward her.  That was one thousand nine hundred sixty eight days ago.