Update – His Robot Girlfriend Revision

I finished the revision of His Robot Girlfriend, though I haven’t yet listened to it being read aloud.  I already posted the updated version to Smashwords.  The great thing about Smashwords is that you can post multiple revisions.  When I finish listening, then I’ll post new versions on Feedbooks and the other sites.  The main reason I went ahead and sent the half measure, is that I am getting tired of reading comments about all the typos.  I found and fixed about a dozen typos, but an entire page where the quotation marks have been replaced with @– that’s not a typo.  That’s a problem somewhere in the conversion process from .doc to .epub.  Thankfully, Smashwords’ conversion software is much improved of late.  Also I fixed something that was bothering me.  I finally got all the regular (non-tilty) quotation marks replaced with smart quotation marks (the ones where the begin quote is different than then end quote).  I also made a few text changes so that a few points were more clear– not many.  I’d say I change, deleted, or added maybe fifty sentences.  I’ll let you know when I’ve uploaded the final second edition version, should anyone out there be interested.

Updates

The corrected and updated edition of The Voyage of the Minotaur has been sent and approved by Smashwords.  It should be in all the ebookstores in the coming weeks.

Now I’ve started working on the corrected and updated version of His Robot Girlfriend.  I’m not sure how long this will take.  I am going through three steps on this.  The first step is to reformat the manuscript to better display on eReaders.  I’ve already done that.  The second is to go through a revision reading pass.  Third is to listen to it read by Text2Go.  I still have to do steps two and three.

I’ve already started His Robot Wife.  I’m well into chapter two (of 10), but I think I’ll slow down and focus a little more on His Robot Girlfriend, not only because I hate having a book out there with typos, but because rereading the first book might help me in writing the second.

Fixing the Holes

Now that I have Text2Go, to read my manuscripts to me (which helps me find oodles of typos) I’m going to go back and double check all the manuscripts that I created before I had it.  I used Text2Go with:

Tesla’s Stepdaughters
Brechalon
The Dark and Forbidding Land
and The Drache Girl

I’m reviewing The Voyage of the Minotaur now, and as soon as I’m done, I’ll do:
His Robot Girlfriend
Princess of Amathar
Eaglethorpe Buxton and The Sorceress
and Eaglethorpe Buxton and the Elven Princess

When I’m done with that, I have to get the following paper books out:
Tesla’s Stepdaughters – Digest Edition
The Voyage of the Minotaur – Trade Paperback
The Dark and Forbidding Land – Trade Paperback
and The Drache Girl – Paperback

Only when I get all this done, can I get back to writing.  Would I rather be writing?  Sure, but as a self-publishing author, I’m also the publisher.  I’ll let you know right here as each of these projects are completed.

The Dark and Forbidding Land Chapters that Weren’t

I had several chapters planned in this book that for one reason or another were never written, or were given different names.  Here are some of them.

Potion Calamity
I had a thought about Senta taking her potion and having some strange side-effect.  Instead, she takes the one potion which doesn’t work and one which does.  The one that doesn’t work has no effect at all.

The Dinner Party
Logistics made it so that I never got all the characters that I wanted together for a dinner party.  Instead, they had a tea party, which became chapter 15.

Birthday
I was going to have the book last long enough to include Senta’s birthday, but it would have been stretching the timeline too long.  So Senta’s birthday ended up just being a mention in the epilog.
No, I Mean Really Powerful Magic
This chapter became unnecessary when, as I wrote, Senta’s spells became more powerful than I had originally planned.

The Hunt
I decided to cut this chapter.  Instead, the hunters had to turn back before the hunt.

Pack Hunters
This chapter just got a title change.  It became The Day of the Daggers.

A Prosperous Colony
I cut this chapter which was originally planned to show the extent of Port Dechantagne.  I felt I covered that enough in the earlier chapters.

Punishment Follows Swift
This was another title change.  It became The Book.

Conflict in the Motor Shed
I had originally envisioned this to take up a whole chapter.  Instead, it became the end of What Happened on the Third– only a small part of a chapter.

Updates

Here are some updates on the writing front:

The Dark and Forbidding Land: Senta and the Steel Dragons book 2.  I am more than halfway through the second draft.  After that I will begin editing.  I’m still planning on having the ebook done about the first of August.  I have to listen to it being read to me with Text2Go, to catch any lasts typos.

The Drache Girl: Senta and the Steel Dragon book 3.  Yes, I have decided to change the title.  There is already a book called The Sorceress’s Apprentice and then of course the new movie The Sorceror’s Apprentice.  I prefer to save any confusion or trademark problems and go with this new title.  I’ll have to do a quick revision pass, to make sure there’s no conflicts between book 2 and book 3 (which was written before 2) and then an editing pass with Text2Go.  So figure about August 20th for the ebook.

His Robot Wife.  With the popularity of His Robot Girlfriend, it just seems stupid not to push this to the front burner.  Tentatively the ebook should be available about early December.  No, I haven’t started writing yet, but I have a good outline.  Speaking of which, I was getting a little bummed by a few one and two star reviews on iBooks, until I saw 47 people gave 1 star to the Bible!

Women of Power, Knights of Amathar, Nova Dancer
I have about three chapters done of each of these, so it’s only a matter of which do I want to work on first.  Right now, this would be the order, but that may change.

August 12, 2010
One month from today marks the second anniversary of the City of Amathar Blog.  Check back on that day for specials on all my ebooks, a contest, and more.  Remember, that day only.

Tesla’s Stepdaughters – Chapter 7 Excerpt

After breakfast, Andrews ordered a cab which drove them to a large park a short distance away. Atlanta was a beautiful city with white buildings and blue skies, a stark contrast to the smoky and black cities of the north. The city park was filled with trees and fountains, with a winding path wandering through them and eventually circling around to where it began. Just beyond the path was the playground with ten or twelve children spinning on the merry-go-round, sliding down the metal slide only to run around and back up to slide down again, or swinging in singles or pairs. Andrews watched for a moment, all the time it took to determine that all the children were girls.

“Shall we take a stroll around?”

Ruth nodded.

They slowly made the circuit of the park, enjoying the sun on their skin.

“This is kind of strange,” said Ruth.

“What is?”

“I haven’t seen any black faces since we arrived in Atlanta—not in the airport, not at the hotel, and not here at the park.”

“I hadn’t noticed.”

“Well, you wouldn’t, would you? In Chicago, maybe one in ten women was of African descent. Even in New York…”

“Well, there are black people in this region, right? They didn’t all move north during the Great War?”

“A lot of them did move, enough for historians to call it the Great Migration anyway. But yes, there should still be some here.”

They had just about completed the circuit and were approaching the playground again, when Andrews saw two Atlanta police officers walking across the grass toward them. Placing his hand on Ruth’s lower back, he altered their course slightly toward them. Both officers were women, wearing blue uniforms with six pointed stars and leather-billed eight point caps.

“Hold it right there, ladies,” said one of the cops, lazily laying a hand on her sidearm.

Andrews moved his hand to Ruth’s stomach and gently moved her behind him.

“Science Police,” he said, loudly.

The two officers stopped, their eyes opening, though whether startled by the tone of his voice or by the statement of his affiliation, it was impossible to say.

“Do you have some identification to that effect… um, sir?” asked the one who had spoken before in a pronounced southern accent.

Andrews carefully withdrew his wallet from his right breast pocket, and holding it open so that both the picture ID and the badge were in clear view, he stepped toward them.

“Alright, Agent Andrews. We were just checking out a call.”

“A call about what?”

“A citizen reported two suspicious-looking people in the park.”

“Suspicious-looking because they thought I was a woman dressed like a man, or because of her color?”

The officer looked like she had something foul in her mouth. She said. “The colored women usually frequent the park on the other side of the train tracks.”

“The other side of the tracks… how… cliché. Segregation is illegal. The Science Council outlawed it in 1963.”

“We don’t work for your Science Council…” the other officer started, but was silenced when the first raised her hand.

“There’s no segregation here. They just usually spend their time at the other park. You have a nice day now.” She turned and started back toward the black and white Packard beside the road. Her partner stood for just a minute, as though she wanted to say something else, then she too headed back toward the cruiser.

@#$%&*!

Word 2007 For Dummies

I wrote the second half of chapter fourteen today for Senta and the Steel Dragon Book 2: The Dark and Forbidding Land… and apparently forgot to SAVE IT!!!  I went back to the file to find it just as it had been before I started typing earlier– with the first half of the chapter and a few second half notes.  Of course if could have been some kind of time warp/dimensional shift, but if that were the case, I wouldn’t remember that I wrote it would I.

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Tesla’s Stepdaughters

Here’s Steffie Sinn, the fourth musician character from Tesla’s Stepdaughters, courtesy of the Rock Band 2 game.  I think my plan right now is to start the revision on this book when school ends.  I’m not planning on teaching this summer, but instead devoting my time to Grad School and writing.  We’ll see how long the revision takes, but you should see the ebook of Tesla’s Stepdaughters out by September.

What am I working on?

Now that I’ve finished the rough draft of Tesla’s Stepdaughters, what am I writing?  Well, I have several projects that I’ve already started.

The Dark and Forbidding Land
Book 2 of Senta and the Steel Dragon
More than half finished, I’m going to finish it this summer.

Knights of Amathar
The sequel to Princess of Amathar
Four chapters done.

Nova Dancer
Science-fiction space story.
Well into the second chapter.

Women of Power
Superhero adventure story.
Right at the end of chapter three.

I’m not tired of any of these stories and I plan to get back on them eventually.  Senta 2, for instance, I have set myself a deadline on.  However, following my usual form, I have started a new story, as I mentioned the other day.  This one is an adventure in the Edgar Rice Burroughs/H. Rider Haggard tradition, and I’m tentatively calling it The Jungle Girl.  I’m playing around with chapter one right now, which features Teddy Roosevelt as a supporting character.