Mixed Reviews

I just got my feedback from the Amazon novel contest and it was a mixed bag.  Two reviewer gave me feedback on my excerpt.  There were some things they liked and some they didn’t (most of which I had already fixed in a later revision anyway), but one urged me to consult my dictionary (which I do on a daily basis).  She gave me two examples and one was true– I had mispelled a word into another word, one that I didn’t want to use.  The other example though showed that she should have used the dictionary.

It’s very hard to get a manuscript ready and people spend years and years going over theirs again and again to get it just right, sometimes hiring editors who argue over what to change.  So even though this whole episode puts me in kind of a funk, that doesn’t mean I won’t have another book ready for next year’s contest.  It’s going to be The Jungle Girl.

Senta and the Steel Dragon: Setting Part 2

My novel The Voyage of the Minotaur and the subsequent books in the Senta and the Steel Dragon series are set in an alternate world based very loosely on our own Victorian/Edwardian age. I wrote a bit before about how I came up with the map. Let me now tell you a bit about how I came up with the concept. Originally I was thinking of creating a role-playing game setting. I had seen a few Steampunk campaigns, but none of them really fell in line with what I would have wanted to create. I want my campaigns to be unique. I invisioned a world that was so large that the age of exploration would have taken longer, and it would only be in the nineteenth century when people from Sumir (my Europe equivalent) would venture forth to discover the world. In the distant lands would be primitive tribes and savage civilizations. They would not be human, but other forms of intelligent life. The lower forms of life would match as well. There would be a continent with reptilian people and dinosaurs. There would be a continent with insectoid intelligences and giant monster insects. When the story came to me, and the world became the setting for the story rather than for a role-playing game, I kept the reptilians and dinosaurs and pushed everything else to the back burner.

Tesla’s Stepdaughters Update

I just finished Chapter Eight of Tesla’s Stepdaughters. I’ve been working on it for sixteen days and I’m almost halfway completed with the first draft. I’ve plotted it to have twenty, though this is subject to change.

New Story

I decided to set aside Senta and the Steel Dragon Book 2: The Dark and Forbidding Land for a while, despite the fact that I am well into chapter 12. It seems silly to work on a story that at the very earliest won’t be published until a year and a half from now. But rather than start again on any of my half completed tales, I’ve started a new one. I’m already almost done with chapter 2 (it will be 20 chapters long as plotted). It is a steam-punk story and it is based on ideas I got while playing many hours of Rock Band 2. More on this later.

His Robot Girlfriend Setting: Prices


Several people have commented on the economics of His Robot Girlfriend. What I did was to take the current prices of items and multiply increase them by 4 percent per year to get a price in 2032. Of course I was a bit surprised at what some women pay for shoes and clothes, but that’s how I got the prices. The exception was the price of robots, which I figured would have dropped.

I got this idea from a price list from 1959 that listed a loaf of bread at 20 cents, a new Cadillac at $5,000, a new house at $13,000, but a black and white 19″ TV at $500.

His Robot Girlfriend – 20,000 Downloads

His Robot Girlfriend has topped 20,000 downloads! Yay!

Princess of Amathar Names

Princess of Amathar has only one human character. All the rest are aliens of one type or another. One alien character is Malagor. He is a rather wolf-like fellow and the name just seemed to fit. For the Amatharians, I created long complex names that would look good, but would be difficult to pronounce aloud. I wanted them to sound vaguely french, because my main character had described their language as sounding that way. So my Amatharians became Norar Remontar, Vena Remontar, and the title character Noriandara Remontar. For the only human, my main character, I needed a name that implied heroic exploits and also to fit in with a plot twist, it needed to begin with the letter A. Alexander was a natural fit, though I don’t remember if I decided upon this before or after I wrote a major college paper on Alexander the Great. For a long time he didn’t have a last name, but I finally named him after a young lady I was working with (as I worked my way through college) whose last name was Ashton. So Alexander Ashton was born.

Re-editing His Robot Girlfriend

I am hard at work on the re-edit of His Robot Girlfriend. Thanks to Andy Berdan who sent me a list of corrections to be made. I’ve found a few more and I’m only through chapter three. As soon as I’m done, I’ll be updating those files at all the downloading sites as well as sending a new copy of the manuscript to Lulu for those purchasing the paperback or hardback.

Senta and the Steel Dragon Book 0: Brechalon

As I write this (SundayDec. 6th at 4PM) I have just finished the first draft of Senta and the Steel Dragon Book 0: Brechalon. I am going to put it aside for a bit before I try to do a revision. That way it won’t be so easy to skip over things that need to be changed. My planned publication date is February 3, 2010.
Next up: a re-edit of His Robot Girlfriend.

Writing Princess of Amathar

My first novel was Princess of Amathar. I originally thought up the story when I was a teenager. It was not a particularly brilliant plot, but was like the adventure stories that I enjoyed reading at the time. I wrote the first chapter several times over the years, but never got much farther. Writing a novel is really hard if you haven’t done it before. Just continuing takes a great deal of will power. About the time I started college, I made my last attempt to begin the book. I expanded the beginning while writing other things (mostly fanfic, which thankfully because no one ever heard of the internet in those days, never saw the light of day). I worked at it sporatically for years. After I got my first job teaching Junior High English, I began to share my writing with my students as I encouraged them to write, and they in turn encouraged me to keep going. It still took a long time. Then, when I was about 75% done, I began to share my writing with some of my teacher friends. With their feedback, I finally managed to finish. It was about eight years from start to finish, and this was only 93,000 words. Four fellow teachers helped me revise the book. When that was done, I was so proud that I immediately sent it off to a dozen book publishers. I recieved a dozen rejection letters. I stuck the manuscript away and forgot about writing for a while. Then one day I mentioned my book to a coworker, who suggested I check out Lulu and self-publish Princess of Amathar, if just for myself and my friends, family, and students. I did. I self-published it. Then a funny thing happened. I felt like I could write another novel and a new story just popped into my head.