The Voyage of the Minotaur – Bessemer

The Voyage of the Minotaur Bessemer is the steel dragon of the series Senta and the Steel Dragon.  He is of course named for Henry Bessemer, the real life inventor of the Bessemer process for making steel.  Like Senta, Bessemer changes quite a bit during the series.  In book 0, he’s literally an egg.  In book 1: The Voyage of the Minotaur, he is newly hatched and by the end of the book, has grown to a little bigger than the average house cat.  He speaks only a few words, his first two being “Fina” for Zurfina, and “Pet,” his and Zurfina’s nickname for Senta.  Still, he manages to add a little fun and adventure to the story.  I really enjoy when Senta uses him as her baby doll.  This scene was also my chance to start to define exactly what a dragon in this book could do.

They walked out onto the deck together and stood for a moment by the railing.  The warmth of the sun on his skin reminded Terrence of the sun on his body in that other place—the place where Pantagria awaited him.  Something startled him as it leapt up onto the railing next to him.  Judging by the shocked squeak that Yuah let out, she was just as surprised as he was.  Terrence thought at first that it was a sea bird or one of the large flying reptiles common in the skies above Greater Brechalon, but it was Zurfina’s small steel dragon.

“Gawp!” it said.

The steel dragon was a magnificent little creature.  About four feet long from the tip of its snout to the small barb at the end of its tale, it was completely covered in scales that were perfectly meshed together.  All four of its feet had grasping claws that enabled it to crouch on the railing and keep its balance despite the rolling sway of the ship.  Its head was just as covered by its armor as any other part of its body, but it had the beginnings of horns growing from the top and sides of its face, though they looked less like horns than they did metal spikes.  Something that Terrence had not noticed before was the dozen or so cat-like whiskers around the little dragon’s long, thin snout.  Its wings, which were folded neatly on its back, were also covered with shiny steel scales, far too heavy to carry the creature in flight.  They were however as beautiful as the rest of the beast.  This would have been a terrifying monster indeed, had it been ten times its size, and had it not been wearing a baby bonnet.

“Baby!” called a child’s voice and Zurfina’s young ward ran toward them.

“Gawp!”  The dragon said.  It leaped over the railing of the ship, opening its wings and soaring into the sky, disproving Terrence’s assumption that the beast was too heavy to be supported by the air.  It flew several hundred feet up, circled, and suddenly dived down into the sea.

“Baby!” called the girl again, looking over the side at the waves.

The dragon shot back out of the ocean and beat its wings forcefully until it once again reached the ship’s deck.  It settled down about twenty feet away.  Its sharp teeth now held a small silver fish with golden fins—Terrence thought it was a perch, though he was no fisherman.  The large reptiles that roamed above the seas near home often scooped up fish from the ocean then maneuvered them into position so that they could swallow them whole.  The little steel dragon again defied Terrence’s expectations, by setting the fish on deck, placing its front right foot on it, and then ripping off the fish’s head and chewing it before swallowing.

The girl ran over and grabbed the dragon by the neck with her hands, and pressed her face to the side of its face.  For its part, the dragon didn’t seem to mind.  It simply pulled away, bent down, and took another bite of the fish.  This time the soggy baby bonnet that the creature wore, slipped down over its eyes.  The girl pulled it back into place and gave the dragon another hug.

“Do you think that’s safe?” asked Yuah.

Terrence grunted noncommittally.  “Let’s go on back.  I’m starving.”

The Dark and Forbidding Land – Senta and Zurfina

The Dark and Forbidding LandSpeaking of Senta Bly (as I was yesterday)… I’m reading The Dark and Forbidding Land, and doing a little editing here.  One of the key elements in the series is the dynamic between Senta and Zurfina.  These two characters become more and more alike during the course of the plot, until they almost really change places.  One of my favorite little hints of this is in The Dark and Forbidding Land— in two different parts.  Both characters arrive in the Pfennig Store where they find a wooden toy pony…

In Chapter One:

Senta wandered over to look at the toy counter.  It was a small twenty-four inch square counter divided into six-inch square compartments, each with a different type of toy.  There were rubber bouncing balls, toy guns, tin soldiers, doll sized teacups with saucers, and wooden ponies with yarn tails.  Senta picked one up and made a horse noise by blowing air between her lips.

In Chapter Six:

Zurfina turned and slowly made her way through the aisles directly toward the two lizzies, who continued to stand like great reptilian statues where they were.  She stepped around Cissy and stood between them to look down at the toy counter.  She picked up one of the strange four-legged creatures made of wood with yarn tails and made a noise by blowing air through her lips.  It seemed as though she hardly realized the lizzies were even there, but then she looked Cissy directly in the eye.  Cissy stared back at those strange human grey and white eyes, and before she could stop herself, she spoke.

The Voyage of the Minotaur – Senta Bly

The Voyage of the Minotaur One of the best things about writing the series Senta and the Steel Dragon is that Senta is really a different character in each book.  She starts at age 8 in book 1 (age 6 in book 0), and progresses to age 17 in book 5.  In The Voyage of the Minotaur, she really is kind of a goofy little kid.  One would hardly suspect from this book, were it not for the title of the series, that she was the main character.  Still, she has several great scenes in the story.  Arguably the best is this one, in which she encounters Mr. Maalik Murty.

She didn’t know how long she lay there, but eventually she had the feeling that someone else was there with her.  She opened her eyes to see a pasty-faced man with a very round face and horn-rimmed glasses looking down at her.  His hair was slicked down and oily looking and he had a pinched expression on his face that made his mouth look unnaturally small.  She looked at him for several moments and he looked back and blinked several times.

“Hello,” said Senta.

“Hello,” he replied.  “Are you all right?”

“I don’t know.”

The man smiled without showing his teeth.  His smile reached from his chin to the middle of his nose.  His eyes, magnified by glasses, stayed the same.  He had no facial hair or sideburns, but he had several small cuts on his face as if he had injured himself while shaving.  His suit was charcoal colored, and slightly shabby; something that Senta wouldn’t have noticed a few weeks before.

“Do you want to try getting up?” he asked.

“All right.”

Senta sat up and immediately threw up at the man’s feet.  Most of the vomit splattered across the wooden deck, though a bit of it ended up on his shoes and pants cuffs.

“Gawp,” said the dragon within his carrier.

The man’s mouth twitched to one side, but all he said was, “Feeling better?”

Senta nodded.

“Good,” he said.  “We should get you somewhere where you can get washed up.  Do you know how to get to your cabin from here?”

“No.”

“Then, I’ll take you to my cabin.”

“Um, I don’t know.”

“You wouldn’t want anyone to see you with vomit all over your shoes, would you?”

Senta looked down and, sure enough, she had gotten vomit on her own shoes too.  The man took her by the hand and pulled her to her feet.  She was still pretty wobbly.  He began to walk slowly along the deck, pulling her along with him. 

“Gawp,” said the dragon, louder.

They went in the doorway just behind the one through which Senta had exited, and walked down the corridor.  Senta started to feel a little better.  At the end of the hallway, a set of narrow steps led down to the lower deck.  Senta didn’t really want to go down, but the pasty-faced man had her hand firmly in his.

“Senta!”

Senta and the man both turned to see Miss Lusk walking down the hallway toward them.  Though she was the shortest of the women that had been at the dinner party that evening, Miss Lusk was almost the exact same height as the oily-haired man.  Her hat, which was a large straw affair covered in pink chiffon with a flower accent, made her seem a bit taller than him.

“Where are you going, Senta?” asked Miss Lusk.

“We were just going to get her cleaned up,” said the man.  “The poor thing got sick on deck and lost her dinner.”

“Good evening, Mr. Murty,”

“Good evening, Miss Lusk.”

“It was very kind of you to help out with a sick child.”

“Oh, it was nothing,” he replied.  They stood looking at each other for a very long moment.  Senta looked from one to the other.

“Well, we’ll go on and get the child cleaned up,” said Mr. Murty.

“I think I should take it from here.”

“Oh?”

“I’m sure it wouldn’t be appropriate for you to take the child below.”

“Wouldn’t be appropriate?” he asked.  “Why not?”

“Taking care of children isn’t a man’s job.”  Miss Lusk took Senta’s other hand and pulled until the child had both arms stretched out in either direction.

“I really don’t mind.  I love children,” said Mr. Murty.

“You’ll make quite a father one day, I’m sure.”

“Let me take her.”

“I’ll take care of her,” said Miss Lusk.  “I am a woman.”

“Yes, I keep forgetting,” said Mr. Murty, letting go of Senta’s hand.  “Um, what with your, um, mathematics skills and all.”

“Good night, Mr. Murty!” Miss Lusk hurried down the hall with the girl in tow.

The Voyage of the Minotaur – Iolanthe Dechantagne

The Voyage of the Minotaur One of the primary characters in The Voyage of the Minotaur is Iolanthe Dechantagne.  She is the driving force behind the expedition to start a new colony, and she is very clearly the dominant sibling, basically ordering her brothers around.  She’s always fun to write because she really is horribly bitchy.  She’s one of my favorites, though readers often love to hate her.  They frequently comment on her mistreatment of Yuah and Augie, but they often ignore the fact that on several occasions she commits, if not murder, well, certainly some pretty ruthless acts of violence.  Here is one example:

Iolanthe released the brake and pressed down with her foot on the forward accelerator.  The carriage slowly rolled forward.  The steam built up, and soon the vehicle had returned to its former vigor.  She tried to drive around the block of the Great Church of the Holy Savior, and get back onto the main road to return to the Old City, but the roads in this area did not seem to follow the normal grid pattern.  And there seemed to be nowhere to turn around.  After half an hour of trying to negotiate the unfathomable maze, she found herself at a dead end.  She pulled the brake lever and sat trying to figure out at which turn she should have made a left, and how to get back to that point.

Suddenly a figure approached the left side of her carriage.  It was a dirty man, wearing dirty clothes, with a dirty bald head, and a big dirty nose.  He stepped in close to her and ran his eyes down the length of her form.  Another similarly dressed man stepped up behind him. 

“Well, this is nice, ain’t it?” said the second man.  “We can have us a little fun.”

“Yeah, fun” said the first man, pulling a long, thin knife from his belt.

“Careful though,” said the second man.  “She might have a little pistol in her handbag.”

“Does you have a little pistol in your handbag, dearie?” the first man asked.  He casually waved the knife in his right hand, as he pawed at her ankle with his left.  Then he stopped when he heard the sound of two hammers being cocked, and looked up into the twin twelve gauge barrels.

“I don’t carry a handbag,” said Iolanthe, pulling the shotgun to her shoulder.  She pulled the first trigger, disintegrating the head of the first man, and sending a fountain of viscous remains over everything within twenty feet.  The second man had no time to react before the second barrel was fired at him.  He was far enough away however, that though he was killed, people who had known him would still be able to identify his body.

Iolanthe pushed the lever, opening the shotgun’s breach with her thumb, and tilted the weapon so that the two used shells dropped out onto the carriage floor.  She opened the glove compartment and pulled out the two replacement shells, stuffed them into the shotgun, and snapped the breach closed.  She then returned the still smoking weapon to its place behind the seat.  Reaching back into the glove compartment, she pulled out one of the handkerchiefs and wiped some of the blood and jellied brains from her face. 

Looking down at herself in disgust, she said.  “I’ll never be able to wear this dress again.”

The Voyage of the Minotaur: Terrence Dechantagne

As I mentioned yesterday, I am rereading and re-editing The Voyage of the Minotaur.  So, I decided I would spend some time this week talking about the characters in that book– my personal favorite.  The reason I like it so much is the characters, and I love them so much because they are so flawed.  Flawed characters are so much more fun to write.

Terrence Dechantagne is on the surface a heroic fellow.  He has a kind of Indiana Jones-esque quality.  At least that’s how those around him see him.  He doesn’t see himself that way though, because he knows what most of them don’t– that he is a drug addict.  His (very real) heroism is at war with his constant self-loathing.  Here are a couple of quick examples.

The first is when Yuah Korlann (one of the few that knows his secret) tries to take care of him.

He woke up with the strange sensation of something right above his face.  Opening his eyes, he saw that it was Yuah.  Her face was less than a foot above his.  They stared at each other for a moment.

“I thought I locked the door,” he said.

“You did.”

“And you’ve taken to breaking and entering?”

“In this case.  I had to make sure that you were all right.”

“You mean that you had to make sure I wasn’t ‘seeing’,” he said.

“Well….” She shrugged.

“Are you going to be my nursemaid from now on, or just for the rest of the day?”

“I haven’t decided yet.”

“Well, what now?” asked Terrence.

“Let’s walk around the deck for a while before dinner,” she said.  “You can be my escort and everyone can start talking about us.”

“See, I knew you still had a crush on me.”

“I don’t have crushes on addicts.”

“I don’t escort flat-chested bints,” he said.  “And I’m not an addict.”

“You’ll have to prove that to me,” she said.  “And I’m not flat-chested, not really.  Come on.  Get your boots on and let’s go for a stroll.”

Yuah continued to talk to herself while Terrence pulled on his boots.  “Some people can get anything they want.  Not me.  I’m just the flat-chested dressing maid that keeps saving his life.  He wouldn’t want to be seen with me though.  I’m just another Zaeri that he wouldn’t give the time of day to.”

“I didn’t say anything about you being a Zaeri,” he said.  “You know that’s not important to me.”

“It’s important to everyone.”

“It’s not important to me.  I learned a long time ago—Kafirite God or Zaeri God, he’s a heartless bastard.”

The second is when Terrence’s sister Iolanthe announces the name of their new colony.

“That’s fine,” said Iolanthe.  “The promontory is going to be the dock, the fort and the industrial area.  We won’t need many trees.  We will need a few though.  I’ll go ashore later and mark those to be spared.  It sounds as though everything is in order.  What are you gentlemen doing now?”

“I have the bridge,” said Staff.

“I’m going to take a bath and a nap,” said Terrence.

“I have to speak to Father Ian about arranging a wedding,” said Zeah.

Iolanthe looked at him and cocked her eyebrow.

“Corporal Bratihn has asked Mrs. Kittredge to marry him.  It will be the first wedding in the new colony.”

“See that it is done right,” said Iolanthe.  “This has to be a big affair with the whole colony taking part—the perfect event to inaugurate our city.”

“What will your new city be called?” asked Lieutenant Staff.

“Port Dechantagne, of course.”

“Of course,” said Terrence quietly.

Well, crap!

IMG_1749The first two weeks of school are over and I haven’t written anything at all– except lesson plans.  I was hoping to keep up a little bit, but getting started with the school year has really taken everything that I have.  Well, now that I’ve got everything rolling, maybe….

There is so much to do, including getting two weeks ahead with lesson plans and keeping tabs on everything as department chairman.  Add to that meetings– lots and lots of meetings.  Well anyway.  That’s just the way things are.  No sense whining about it.  I’m just looking forward to getting at least a little writing done now.

Nope.  Still not done with the draft of Love and the Darkness.  If I get a chance to just do it, I can whip it out in no time.  We’ll see.

Author Interview at Smashwords

Smashwords has a new author interview feature and you can find my author interview by following this link.

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Update: Love and the Darkness

Love and the DarknessI’m a little over halfway through the draft of Love and the Darkness.  That means that there are less than ten thousand words left, since it is plotted out at 20,000.  I’m finding it harder and harder to write right now, and it’s not because of this particular story.  It’s because school is getting closer and closer– two more days off as I write this.  Hopefully by the time you read this though,  I will have finished those 10K words and have it on the release schedule.

When the book is ready, there will be a release date several weeks after the announcement.  I’ll be using Smashwords’ new preorder system.  That will let me get it all arranged and yet give me time enough make sure that it is properly finished.  I was really upset with myself about His Robot Wife: Patience is a Virtue.  I was in such a hurry to get it out that I sent it with errors.  I’m not going to let that happen again.  Professionalism– that’s my new watchword this year for school and its going to be the same with my writing.  Readers deserve nothing less.

Unlike my other stories, Love and the Darkness has essentially one main character.  This is at the same time easier and more difficult to write.  You can stay in the mind of one character, which is nice.  But characters can get inside your head too and when that happens, it’s nice to be able to switch to a different one.  My character in Love and the Darkness is Charles Bentley Howard.  He’s sort of a wealthy, nerdy character, and so his first name is a tip of the hat to Charles Dexter Ward, the H.P. Lovecraft character, though this is not really a Lovecraftian horror story.

All the characters in Love and the Darkness either interact with Charles Bentley Howard, or they are related to him– or both.  There are several female characters, and I have had trouble with their names from the beginning.  I have already changed several of them and I don’t think I have the final versions yet.  Whatever they finally end up, watch this space for a release announcement.  As I mentioned before, Love and the Darkness will be a free ebook.

Finally Caught Up

I’ve been off work for a month now and I’ve only just caught up with my planned quota of writing for the year to date.  And I haven’t been fooling around either.  I’ve been writing, editing, revising, and doing all the associated activities every day.  I really feel pretty good about what I’ve gotten done.  I feel bad that I was so far behind.  School was a bear last year.  Sadly, I don’t expect it to be any easier this coming year, so I have to a get as much done as I can in the month I have remaining.

Ideally, I will have another book done by the time I go back to school.  Barring that, at least I want to be close to finishing one.  My goal is five books a year, but I’ve only met that goal once, in 2010.  In 2011, I only finished 4 and in 2012, only 3.  So far this year it’s 2, and I don’t want to finish with just two.  After all, it’s the difference between having 153 books and 72 books written by the time I’m 80.  Edgar Rice Burroughs wrote over 80 books.  H. Rider Haggard wrote over 100.  I’d like to beat them in quantity if nothing else.  Of course Asimov wrote some ungodly number of books- I don’t know exactly but over 400.  Plus he wrote I, Robot; Foundation, and at least one book of dirty limericks (I had a copy when I was a kid).  Respect.

Utah Shakespearean Festival

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I spent Wednesday at the Utah Shakespearean Festival in Cedar City.  Along with my wife and me, were my lovely daughter and my equally lovely son (both pictured).  We keep thinking that this will be the last family trip that we all four go on, but the kids just don’t seem to get tired of us.  They keep asking to come along. I guess I can keep taking them until I’m 80.  Then they’re going to have to take me.

We saw Love’s Labour’s Lost, not my favorite play by Shakespeare, but then his worst is still pretty damn good.  It was well-done and we all enjoyed it.  It was just a day trip– up and back.  In previous years, we’ve gone up for several days at a time and have seen 4 or 5 plays in a trip.  I’m too old (and fat) for that kind of thing now.  Plus I had to get back home and get to work!

For those friendly readers out there, take note:  I really love Shakespeare, thanks most probably to my professor at UNLV.  There is at least one Shakespeare reference in almost all of my books.  Some, like both Astrid Maxxim books, have a chapter named for a  play.  Some, like Senta and the Steel Dragon, have some Shakespearean dialog.  And some, like Eaglethorpe Buxton, are filled with Shakespeare rip-offs!