Update: The Sorceress and her Lovers

The Sorceress and her LoversOkay.  That’s it.  The first draft is complete.  I’ll be in a better position to say when it will be finished and available after I complete a couple of revision passes, but it looks like the end of April or beginning of May.  I’ll keep you updated.

The first draft is 82,309 words.  This was quite a bit shorter than originally plotted, but I combined quite a few things as I went.  The original outline was for a 100,000 word story.  Of course as I revise, some parts may be added and others removed, so it will be interesting (maybe only to me) to see what the final length is.

I thought I would look and compare it to the lengths of my other books.  Here they are:

Princess of Amathar                                                                                94,000 words

His Robot Girlfriend                                                                                 40,000 words

Eaglethorpe Buxton and the Elven Princess                                        19,000 words

Eaglethorpe Buxton and the Sorceress                                                 19,000 words

Senta and the Steel Dragon Book 0: Brechalon                                    50,000 words

Senta and the Steel Dragon Book 1: The Voyage of the Minotaur     110,000 words

Tesla’s Stepdaughters                                                                             44,000 words

Senta and the Steel Dragon Book 2: The Dark and Forbidding Land  70,000 words

Senta and the Steel Dragon Book 3: The Drache Girl                        105,000 words

His Robot Wife                                                                                          29,000 words

Women of Power                                                                                     35,000 words

Blood Trade                                                                                              49,000 words

Astrid Maxxim and her Amazing Hoverbike                                         31,000 words

Senta and the Steel Dragon Book 4: The Young Sorceress                 66,000 words

Senta and the Steel Dragon Book 5: The Two Dragons                     105,000 words

The Many Adventures of Eaglethorpe Buxton                                   103,000 words

Astrid Maxxim and her Undersea Dome                                                30,000 words

His Robot Wife: Patience is a Virtue                                                         49,000 words

This and That

IMG_2066I have been posting some little cartoons I’ve created with my Pop! Vinyl figures collection and a program for the Mac called Comic Life 3.  I hope you’ve gotten a chuckle out of one or two of them.

I started collecting Pop! Vinyl figures (meaning I bought one) at Comicon last year.  I just recently bought a second and it kind of spiraled out of control from there.  I bought more to commemorate our trip to Disneyland and my wife and kids started buying them for me. I had been looking for something to do with Comic Life 3 for a while, because it’s a cool program.

Anyway, we went to Disneyland about two weeks ago.  We had a great time.  My wife, my son, my daughter, and I stayed at the Grand California Hotel which is actually inside California Adventures.  It was expensive, but really, really nice.  I’m 54 years old and this was the first time I’d ever valet parked my car or called for a bellman– we usually travel on the cheap.  This trip was pretty great, though I’m paying for it with pain in my knee.  Seven miles of walking per day is hard if you have no cartilage between your bones.

I started my post-grad courses at Southern Utah University this week.  I think I can handle it, but it’s going to be a lot of time spent online.  Thankfully that’s where I spend most of my time anyway.

Finally, I’ve finished the first draft of The Sorceress and her Lovers, and I’m busy working on the second.  I’ll post it as soon as I’m done.  In the meantime, I’ll finish with the characters from The Two Dragons.  Thanks to everyone for their support and encouragement.

The Two Dragons– Radley Staff

The Two Dragons (New Cover)Radley Staff is a character in Senta and the Steel Dragon.  In book 5 of the series, The Two Dragons, he has a big part to play, as he leads an expedition, including Senta, to the distant lizardman city-state of Tsahloose.  This is one small part of that journey.

The landscape had changed as the altitude increased.  Thick forests of redwood, maple, and aspens had given way to stunted cedar trees and large bushes sticking out from between massive and strangely square boulders stacked in odd piles here and there as though a giant had set them up like blocks and then kicked them over.  The twelve members of the expedition moved easily enough on foot through the uneven terrain.  Unlike the plains they had passed through the day before, which had been filled with great herds of horned triceratops, giant sauropods, and packs of vicious dinosaur predators, here there seemed to be little animal life.  A single telmatosaurus, full grown but only fifteen feet long, wandered between bushes munching on conifer needles.  Several long-nosed white-furred opossums were startled from their hiding places as the column of men and women passed by.  A squat-bodied furry creature halfway between a bear and a dog barked at them from the top of a rock and then ran over the hill and out of site.

Radley Staff stopped to look back at the line of people following him and make sure that there were no stragglers.  The formation remained tight, which was a miracle considering the diversity of the party members.  Behind Staff was Amoz Croffut, a veteran soldier only recently retired from the militia, or the Colonial Guard as it was now officially known.  He had already proven more than once on this trip that he could spot danger.  Third was Senta, the tall, thin, blond, seventeen year old sorceress.  Next came Taddeus Vever, sweating and puffing as he marched along on his short legs.  Vever was a jeweler by trade, a sedentary job that gave him little time to exercise, so he was horribly out of shape.  He didn’t complain though.  Unlike Paxton Brown, who followed closely behind Vever and whose constant protests had long since worn thin.  The man was supposed to be a scholar of lizzie behavior, and Staff had chosen him over several other naturalists for that reason.  Now he was beginning to regret his decision.  Behind him was the husband and wife duo of engineers, Ivo and Femke Kane.  They looked at each other and smiled, apparently enjoying Brown’s discomfort.  They were followed by Isaak Wissinger the writer.  Arriving from Freedonia two years before to join relatives, Wissinger had already published several well-known works of fiction and non-fiction.  He was on this journey for his keen ear and understanding of language, though he spoke the hissing tongue of the lizzies less well than some of the others.  He was followed by Lawrence Bratihn, the head of trade for Birmisia Colony, as well as the only person in Port Dechantagne besides Senta who had been in a lizzie city before.  Occupying the tenth spot in line was Edin Buttermore.  Buttermore was in much better shape than he had been when he arrived in Mallon.  Now though, he was struggling under a pack filled with a good seventy pounds of photographic equipment.  Pulling up the rear were Bertrand Werthimer and Woodrow Manring.  Both were accomplished soldiers, though they like Croffut and Bratihn for that matter, no longer wore uniforms.  All members of the party, excepting only Senta, wore khaki shirt and khaki trousers tucked into high boots.  Senta wore black leather pants and a black and red leather corset that left her shoulders covered only by her long blond hair.

Staff let Croffut pass him and took up a spot beside the girl.

“I should have had you change into your khakis.”

“I didn’t bring any.  Zurfina packed for me.”

“Black is too hot for a journey.”

“Do I look hot?”

“No.  You look remarkably comfortable.  But there is the question of camouflage.  You stand out.”

“I’m supposed to stand out.”

“All right.  Are your spells ready?”

She grinned at him.  “You’ve worked with wizards in the navy, eh?”

“Yes.”

“I’m not a wizard.  My spells are always ready.”

“Potent too, from what I understand.  It’s been a couple of years since I’ve actually seen you do magic.”

“How is married life?” she asked, changing the subject.  “I would think it would be hard being married to the governor.”

“It’s good.  It’s a bit like being in the navy.  If you don’t mind taking orders, it’s a good life.”

“Say there, Senta,” said Vever catching up to the other two.  “Is it magic that you’re not exhausted like I am?”

“Yes, it’s magic,” replied Staff.  “It’s the magic of youth.  She has twice the energy that either of us has and half as much idea what to do with it.”

Goodbye Sony Ebooks

For Sale: PRS-505 Sony ReaderA little over a week ago, Sony announced that it was closing its ebook stores for the U.S. and Canada.  I felt a great deal of nostalgic pain about it.  I was introduced to ebooks when I purchased a Sony reader back in 2008.  It was at that point that I started trying to get my (back then, one) book published in ebook form.  I still have a great fondness for Sony Reader products.

I want to thank those readers who picked up my books first at the Sony Ebook Store.  My books will continue to be available for Sony ebook readers at Kobo and Smashwords, as well as other fine ebook sellers.