The Two Dragons – Bessemer

The Two Dragons (New Cover)Considering the series is called Senta and the Steel Dragon, the steel dragon, especially in the early part of the series is a more minor character than some others.  As he grows, so does his importance to the story.  Bessemer, the Steel Dragon, plays a bigger part in The Two Dragons than he does the other books.  He is involved in quite a bit of action both at the beginning and the end of the story.  This scene is one that I had in my mind for months before I got to write it.

The deinonychus jumped up to its feet and whirled around, circling and hissing.  Zeah threw his hands up to make himself appear larger and made growling sounds.  The creature took two steps back and cocked its head to one side, listening to the man-thing’s unusual call.  After a moment it let out its own squawk.  There was an answering cry from the edge of the woods.  Zeah’s stomach sank and his loins tightened when he saw six more deinonychus rush out of the trees and run toward him.

Now it was Zeah’s turn to back up.  As he did so, he reached down and picked up Terra in one hand by the back of her dress.  He felt Augie and Iolana grab hold of the back of his jacket.  The foremost bird stood its ground and was joined by its fellows in scant seconds.  Zeah was about to yell for the children to run, and he intended to sell his life as dearly as possible to earn them their escape, when a giant shape dropped out of the air, landing directly atop the creatures.

The force of the impact knocked Zeah and Iolana from their feet and he dropped Terra into the sand.  Only Augie managed to stay upright.  They all found themselves in the massive shadow created by the wings of the steel dragon.  Zeah’s mind flashed back to eight years previous when an even larger dragon had saved him in a very similar way from a group of even larger predators.  The dragon’s two hind feet had crushed four of the deinonychus.  Two more were smashed beneath its right front hand.  A single unharmed bird made a run for the forest.  A flick of the long, supple, steel-colored tail mashed it into the beach.

Zeah picked himself back up, though his legs felt like they were made of rubber.  He reached down and pulled Iolana and Terra back to their feet as well.  All three children were sobbing, frightened by the attacking birds, though perhaps unaware of the real peril that had faced them. 

“Bessemer!” shouted Iolana, switching from one emotion to another as only an eight-year-old could.

She and the other children had known the steel dragon all their lives and took delight every time they encountered him.  Zeah had known Bessemer more than eight years, having first seen him when he was not much larger than a good-sized housecat.   He still felt about him the way he felt about the sorceress with whom the dragon lived—generally on good terms, but always wary.

“Hello children,” said the dragon.  His voice was deep and cultured, like a good Zaeri Imam or a guest lecturer at the university.  He picked up one of the squashed, bloody bodies of the deinonychus and tossed it whole into his large mouth.  Zeah speculated that the tyrranosaurus that had once chased him had a much larger mouth than the dragon did, though their overall body sizes were about the same.

“Do you have to do that in front of the children?” he asked sharply, as the dragon tossed a second deinonychus into his mouth.

“Oh, sorry.”  Bessemer raised his left wing to obscure his face as he ate a third and then a fourth bird.  “I’ve been flying.  You can’t imagine how hungry I get.”

“There’s sand stuck to those birds,” said Augie, wiping his face.  “You’re not eating sand, are you?”

“I imagine there is a bit of sand on them.  It used to bother me when I was your size.  I would wash and wash my food if it got on the sand.  It just doesn’t bother me anymore though.”

The dragon folded his wing back and lowered its face to get a better look at the children.  His face looked like the helmet of some primitive armor suit—smooth and shiny and for the most part expressionless.  He had four horns sticking back from the top of his head and a very small stub of horn on his nose.  They too added to the warlike visage.  Only his eyes and the thick whiskers on either side of his mouth hinted at the lively personality within.

“Let’s see.  I know you.”  The five and a half foot long head stopped in front of each of them in turn.  “Miss Iolana, how lovely to see you.  Young Augustus, you look well.  And who do we have here?  Terror?  Terrible?  Tyrranosaurus?”

“It’s –sob—Terra.”

“What’s the matter, Terra?  Did those ugly yet oddly scrumptious birds frighten you?”

“No, my –sob—hair got pulled!”

Zeah felt something squeezing his heart.

“I bet it didn’t hurt.  I bet it just tickled, like this.”

A long forked tongue shot out of the dragon’s mouth and flicked around the girl’s chin.  The unpleasant thought that Bessemer was tasting his granddaughter popped into Zeah’s head, but the little girl squealed with delight and ran foreward to grab a handfull of whiskers.

“Terra, get back,” said Zeah.

“She’s fine,” said Bessemer.

“I uh… I wouldn’t want her to get under your feet.”

The dragon made a dismissive gesture with his hand that was an exact copy of the one that Zeah had so often seen Zurfina and her apprentice Senta make. 

“The birds seem to have injured you, Mayor.”  Bessemer tilted his head sideways as Terra tugged in earnest at the whiskers.

Zeah looked down at himself.  There was a clean rip right through the breast of his jacket and his shirt.  He felt his chest and looked at his hand to find a thin smear of blood.

“It’s just a scratch.”

“You’re going to need a tailor though.”

“Yes.”

“You seemed to have dropped your shoes too.”

The shoes, Zeah’s and the children’s were strewn here and there on the sand.  Zeah picked up all eight.  While he did, he listened to the children and the dragon.

“Are you going to eat the rest of those birds?” wondered Augie.  “Only my mother says you shouldn’t waste food because there are starving children in Enclep.”

“That’s what I hear,” said Bessemer, gobbling down the rest of his prey.

“Hey, put your wing down.  I can’t see you eat them.”

“Are they good?” asked Terra, in a squeaky voice.

“Not bad.”

“Can I eat one?”

“I think your mouth is way too small.”

“I don’t believe I thanked you for saving us,” said Zeah, his arms now full of shoes.

“Not to worry.  Perfectly understandable.”

“But still, thank you.”

“You’re welcome,” Bessemer flicked out his tongue.  “Nothing else frightening in the area—if you wanted to finish your walk.”

“No, we’ve walked enough.”

“Well then, toodle-pip everyone.”  One second the steel dragon was standing on the sand and the next it was hundreds of feet in the air.  It made a quick circle around them and then sailed off to the west.

“I want to be a dragon when I grow up,” said Terra.

Princess of Amathar – $6.79 in Paperback

Princess of AmatharMysteriously transported to the artificial hollow world of Ecos, Earth man Alexander Ashton finds himself in the middle of a millennium-long war between the reptilian Zoasians and the humanoid Amatharians.  Adopted by the Amatharians, Ashton must conform to a society based on honor and altruism, ruled by Knights whose power comes from the curious energy forms known as “souls” which inhabit their supernaturally powerful swords, and rife with its own peculiarities and prejudices.  When the Princess of Amathar, whom Ashton has longed for since first seeing her, is captured by the Zoasians, he must cross an alien world, battle monstrous creatures, and face unknown dangers to save her.  Princess of Amathar is a sword-swinging novel of high adventure in the tradition of Edgar Rice Burroughs.  It is the story a strange world filled with alien races, aerial battleships, swords and energy weapons, amazing adventures and horrible dangers, and the man who must face them all for the love of a woman he has never met.

Princess of Amathar is a sword-swinging science fiction story of high adventure and is available for $2.99 in ebook format wherever fine ebooks are sold.  You can purchase this book in paperback for $6.79 by following this link.

The Two Dragons – Senta Bly

The Two Dragons (New Cover)The Two Dragons was the end point of Senta’s original character arc.  It was for her a story of transformation.  Right from the beginning, I wanted to show that something was very different in her life than it was when she was 12 in The Drache Girl.  In that book, she was a popular character around town and everybody was pretty friendly with her.  By The Two Dragons, people were afraid of her.  I think you can see that pretty clearly in this excerpt from the beginning of the book.

The Church of the Apostles was a stately stone structure—no less imposing for the fact that it wasn’t yet complete.  On the first day of Septurary 1907, the church was filled to overflowing as the citizens of Port Dechantagne, dressed in their finest, celebrated a wedding that was the social event of the season.  Mother Linton, the High Priest of Kafira in Birmisia stood at the pulpit, unwilling to relinquish her position to anyone.  Behind her and to her right however, owing to the era of tolerance now in full flower, was the Zaeri Imam Mr. Francis Clipers.  The wedding party members were arrayed across the chancel.  The matron of honor, Mrs. Yuah Dechantagne, and the four bridesmaids Miss Hero Hertling, Miss Gabrielle Bassett, Miss Dutty Speel, and Miss Laila Melroy wore shimmering gowns of teal trimmed with white lace.  The groomsmen, Mr. Paxton Brown, Mr. Leopold Ghent, Mr. Isaak Wissinger, and Mr. Efrain Rochambeau were all dressed in black tails, though the Best Man Inspector Saba Colbshallow wore his blue police uniform.  In the center of the group was the groom.  Zeah Korlann unlike the building around him, could not be described as stately, though even in his days as a household servant, he had been dignified.  After nine years as mayor of Port Dechantagne, he had gained a kind of gravitas.  As the string quartet struck the first chords of Kafira’s Marriage he, like everyone else in the church, turned his attention to the back of the aisle where the bride appeared.

No cloud could have aspired to the whiteness of Egeria Lusk’s wedding gown.  The bodice was tight but simple and it blossomed out at the waist to a truly remarkable expanse at the hemline, the train following twenty feet behind her.  Though the dress was strapless and shoulderless, it had long, gauzy sleeves, split on the outside and held together by a series of small white bows.  She defied convention by not wearing a veil, but had a mass of tiny white flowers arranged within her brilliant red hair, which was swept up into a complex Mirsannan twist.  She slowly walked up the center aisle, unattended, in time to the music, arriving before the alter to join her beaming bridegroom.  Mother Linton began the litany.

Senta Bly sat in the third row on the groom’s side.  She wore a dress of deep purple silk, gathered together in bunches so that if fell in pleats.  With thin straps over bare shoulders and no sleeves, it showed off her tall, lithe body to best advantage.  It was completely unadorned with brocade, beading, or fringe and didn’t even have a bow over the bustle, though none could tell that with her seated.  No one else sat on the pew with her despite the fact that every other seat in the building was taken, and more than sixty people stood across the narthex.  It might have been that her disappointment at not being invited as part of the wedding party caused an unpleasant expression to sit upon her countenance, or it might have been something else entirely.

As Mother Linton approached the portion of the service in which she explained the duties of a husband and wife, Hero turned around and waved two gloved fingers discreetly to Senta, who returned the gesture.  She smiled, but her hurt feelings didn’t go away.  They had hung on for six weeks now.  She had known Egeria Lusk for more than eight years.  They got on well too.  She was closer to her than Gabrielle Bassett or that Speel girl, or even Hero.  Senta was a good friend of Mayor Korlann too.  It had to be the mayor’s daughter Mrs. Dechantagne.  The woman had hardly spoken to Senta in five years, and then only a few terse words.   This was all the more strange since they had been quite friendly before.  Senta didn’t know precisely what the problem was; only that it had something to do with Mrs. Dechantagne’s husband Terrence, who had been killed in a lizzie attack.  Occupied with such thoughts, Senta realized that she had lost track of the ceremony, when the priest began asking the bride and groom if they would each take the other.

The entire congregation seemed to hold their breath when Mayor Korlann was asked if he took “this woman”.  It was not as if he had bolted from the alter on some previous occasion, but the wedding had been postponed at least twice, and at more than eight years, this was one of the longer engagements.  The tall grey-haired gentleman pulled through however with a hearty “I will,” and as the string quartet began the Ode to Celebration, the couple moved quickly down the aisle and out of the church.  Forty or fifty pairs of old shoes were tossed into the aisle as they passed for good luck. The congregation all stood, cheering and applauding.

Senta stood too, though she didn’t rush to follow the newlyweds out, as did much of the congregation.  She gazed around at the splendor of the new religious center of the colony.  It was her first time visiting.  It was even larger than the Great Church of the Holy Savior in Brech.  Others were looking at the ornately carved trim, the stained-glass windows, and the marble statuary too, but far more were observing Senta.  At six feet tall, she was literally head and shoulders above every other woman there and many of the men.  Her long blond hair framed an oval face with distinctive cheekbones, large expressive eyes, a broad mouth with voluptuous lips, and a strong chin.  She would never have been called pretty; rather she was beautiful in the classical sense of the word, like the women that artists created to portray personifications of freedom or grace or nobility.

Hero bounced toward her.  Though the two of them had been nearly the same height when they were twelve years old, Hero had stopped growing six inches before Senta had.  With incredibly thick, naturally curly, long black hair and doe eyes, Hero had more than her fair share of admirers.  She was so popular in fact that several young men sidled up to her even here.  As Senta noticed them, they took a step back in unison.

“Wasn’t that a lovely ceremony?” asked Hero.

“It seemed very nice from down here.”

“Don’t be cross.  Benny and Shemar both invited us to ride in their steam carriages to the reception.  Who do you want to go with?”

Senta rolled her eyes.  “Quite frankly I’d rather take the trolley.”

“Are you sure?  Benny’s car is brand new and candy apple red.”

Senta looked over Hero’s shoulder at Benny Markham, who was puffing himself up with pride.  She liked Benny, Shemar too for that matter, but she wasn’t too fond of steam carriages.

“Do as you wish.  I’m taking the trolley.”

When Senta stepped out of the pew, all four of the young men who were waiting jumped to get out of her way.  And though most of the congregation had by that time already exited the church, those that remained quickly cleared the aisle for her.  She heard Hero behind her.

“Sorry boys.  You can give me a ride later.”  A moment later, her friend was at her right elbow.

“Isn’t this dress beautiful?” asked Hero, as they stepped out of the church into the bright sunshine.  “I couldn’t believe it when Egeria had me try it on and then she said I could keep it.”

“What else would she do with it?”

“Well, she could keep it.  I bet we’re about the same size.”

“Egeria Lusk is probably one of three women on the continent who have more dresses than I do.  She doesn’t need another one.”

“Egeria Korlann,” Hero corrected.

“Egeria Korlann,” Senta agreed.

“What do you suppose they’re going to do with all those shoes?”

“Throw them away, of course.  People only throw old shoes at weddings—ones they were going to throw away anyhow.  Why?”

“It just seems kind of wasteful.”

By this time they had traversed the twenty-four great stone steps down from the front door of the Church of the Apostles to the street level.  Crowds of people were milling around on the sidewalk and on the front lawn, despite the signs warning to stay off the grass.  Both sides of Terrence Dechantagne Boulevard were lined with steam carriages—more than Senta remembered ever having seen at one time.  The bright summer sun reflected off of their bonnets and the cobblestone that lined all four lanes of the street. 

“I wish that I had brought my parasol,” said Hero, looking up at the sky.  “If we’re out her very long, we might get a tan.”

Senta held out her hand.  “Sieor uuthanum sembia,” she said.  Two parasols appeared in her palm, one teal and one purple.  She handed the teal one to Hero.

“Hey, that’s nice.  Where did you get these?”

“Created them.”

“They’re really pretty.”

“Minor creation.  It’s not that powerful a spell really.”

“But these have lace,” marveled Hero, as she spread her parasol open.  “It has a complex opening mechanism and the spokes are made from bamboo.”

“That’s why it will only last a few hours.”

“Oh.”

“It’s just as well.  We don’t want to destroy the economy for makers of parasols.  Look, let’s get down to the trolley stop.”

The trolley was coming.  Terrence Dechantagne Boulevard had been built in an area set aside early on for expansion of the transportation system.  It served as the spine of Port Dechantagne, consisting of two northbound lanes and two southbound lanes, separated by a twenty foot wide grassy median through which the trolley tracks ran.  Marching along this grassy sward, pulling a green and yellow trolley car was a monstrous three-horned beast.  The triceratops was easily as large as the trolley car that it pulled, even though it was only about ten years old.  It showed little interest in either the steam carriages or the pedestrians, but moved purposefully toward the marked ground at the trolley stop, where it had learned it would be rewarded with tasty shrubs and tree seedlings.

Senta and Hero walked down the cement sidewalk to the edge of the road, across the red brick lanes of the street, to the small awning over four bench seats that served as the stop.  The trolley had already halted and the conductor was feeding the triceratops by the time they arrived.  Senta stepped around behind the conductor and stroked the dinosaur just behind the nose horn.

“Careful,” said the conductor, as he turned around.  “She doesn’t often bite but… oh… sorry.”

“How are you today, Harriet?” Senta spoke to the triceratops.  It seemed to take no notice.

She and Hero climbed up the steps and into the trolley car.  Senta dropped two pfennigs into the glass box.  Then she sat down next to her friend just behind the driver’s position.  More and more people stepped up into the car, filling in the seats from the back forward.  By the time the conductor had finished feeding Harriet and had climbed back inside, all of the seats with the exception of the two next to Senta had been filled, and eight people stood holding on to the handrail.

“Did everyone pay their pfennig?” asked the driver.  A few people nodded, but most ignored the question.  Only about half the passengers had in fact dropped a coin into the container.  Picking up a small crop, he whacked the triceratops on the rear end, and it jerked the trolley into motion.  Then he rang the bell.

A tall young man in a grey business suit jumped up onto the running board and swung into the cab after the vehicle had already started moving.  The conductor flashed him a look of annoyance, but didn’t say anything.  Truth be told, people frequently jumped onto the trolley at the last minute and it wasn’t unheard of for people to leap on while it was moving at full speed, though one or two serious injuries had been caused by just such action.  The young man brushed his sandy hair back and spied the two empty seats next to the girls.  Smiling, he looked down at Senta.

“How lucky can you get?” he said.  “An empty seat next to the two prettiest young ladies in town.  Do you mind if I sit here?”

“You are welcome sir,” said Hero.

The young man sat down next to Senta, a bit closer to her than she thought strictly necessary.  As the trolley moved along, it rocked slightly from left to right.  She looked down to see the young man’s knee touching hers.  When he saw her looking, he grinned roguishly rather than apologizing.

“You two must have come from that wedding.  Who was getting married?  I heard it was the city magistrate or something.”

“I’m guessing you’re a new arrival,” said Senta.

“That’s right.  Been here just two weeks.  My name is Oswald, by the way, Oswald Delks.”

“Oswald Delks?  Not the famous Oswald Delks?”

“I didn’t know there was a famous Oswald Delks.”

“There isn’t.  My name is Senta.”

“Senta?” he said, the blood starting to drain from his face.  “The um suh… sorceress?”

“Yes.  That’s me.”

“I’m… pleased to meet you.”  He scooted back so that he was half in his original seat and half in the other empty seat.

“I’m Hero Hertling by the way,” said Hero, poking her head around Senta.  “So why have you come to Port Dechantagne Mr. Delks?”

“I’ve um, just moved here to live with my aunt and uncle.  My uncle has a shop here, but now he’s looking to retire and needs somebody to take over the family business.”

“The Parnorshams are your aunt and uncle?” wondered Hero.  “Aren’t they a little old?”

“Actually Uncle Herb is my mother’s uncle.  Say, did you just read my mind?”

“I don’t do that,” said Hero, nodding toward Senta, who just glared at Delks.  “We’ve been shopping at Parnorsham’s for years.”

The trolley quickly slowed down and came to a stop.

“Well, I suppose this is my stop.”  Delks started to stand.

“Sit down,” Senta ordered.  “This isn’t your stop.”

“You did read my mind.”

“I’m not interested in short stories.”

“We know where the store is,” said Hero.

“Well, um.”

“We know where the Parnorshams live too.”

Though Oswald Delks didn’t exit the trolley, about half the people on board did.  More people, though not as many as had gotten off, climbed in, and the triceratops began pulling again.  The conductor rang the bell.

“How old are you, Mr. Delks?” asked Hero.

“Do you want to trade places with me?” Senta asked her.

“Do you mind?”

Senta stood up and waited while Hero slid over into her just vacated seat.  Then the sorceress carefully sat down in the seat closest to the conductor.  Delks apparently preferred the change in seating arrangement too, as a bit more color came back to his face.

“I just turned twenty-one last month.”

“And do you have your own steam carriage?”

“Not yet, but as soon as I get my own place, I’m going to order one.”

Senta paid no more attention to Hero and her new friend, instead occupying herself by looking out of the window.  They were passing through the heart of Port Dechantagne.  New buildings had gone up at a tremendous rate over the past five years and many of them were here between the Church of the Apostles and the train station.  Dozens of apartment buildings, between eight and ten stories high, rose into the sky.  They weren’t pressed tightly together like the tenements back in Brech, but were separated by empty lots, most still filled with pine and maple trees.  There were fewer steam carriages to be seen, but many more pedestrians here than there had been to the south.

And here there were lizzies—almost as numerous as the humans.  Just beyond the apartments was Lizzietown, the portion of Port Dechantagne where the aborigines made their home.  In the last two years in particular, more and more of the lizardmen of Birmisia had given up their daily commute to work in the city and had built their own homes there.  Unable by law to own their own land within the city limits, they rented it from a number of human landlords and built small, square wooden homes very much like the ones in which they had lived in their distant villages.  As Senta watched, she saw an adult lizzie with two juveniles.  Looking like two upright alligators, the curious little creatures were tied to the adult by ropes around their necks.  They strained at the bonds, giving much more the impression of pets than offspring.

“Funny little blighters aren’t they?” asked Oswald Delks, bringing Senta’s mind for a moment back into the trolley car.

Harriet made two more stops, the second at the First Avenue intersection along the southern edge of Town Square.  The conductor climbed out of the vehicle and began feeding the triceratops from a large green bin filled with tree shoots and shrubbery.  Even as he was pulling plants from the box and letting the dinosaur chomp them from his hand, a pair of lizzies were lugging huge bales of similar herbage to refill the bin.

“This should be your stop,” Hero told Delks, pointing first to the eastern side of Town Square and then west down First Avenue.  “The Pfennig Store is right over there, and your aunt and uncle are straight down that way.”

“Thanks.”  He smiled broadly at her, then stood up and stepped out the door.

“What a wanker,” said Senta.

His Robot Wife – $4.50 in Paperback

His Robot WifeFive years ago, Mike Smith was an unhappy man living all alone.  Then he purchased a Daffodil.  Far more than regular robots, his Daffodil Patience, changed his life in ways that he had never thought possible.  Now it is the year 2037, and Mike and Patience have been married for five years.  Retired and enjoying life, Mike thought that all his troubles were behind him, but it seems as though they are creeping up again.  California Proposition 22 proposes to define a person as a biological entity, thereby annulling marriages, like Mike’s and Patience’s, performed in other states.  Battle lines have been drawn, at least as far as the proponents of the bill are concerned.  Now Mike must muster his own support to defeat the measure.  But there is more going on than just politics.  Daffodil, the robot maker, is in the news again.  Hardware issues are leaving robots across the globe unable to function.  Is it only an antenna issue?  Now Patience herself is behaving oddly.  Is there something really wrong with her, or does she just need a software upgrade?

His Robot Wife is the sequel to His Robot Girlfriend and is a science fiction story set in the near future.  Available for 99 cents in ebook form wherever fine ebooks are sold, you can pick up a paperback edition of this book by following this link.

 

His Robot Girlfriend – $4.99 in Paperback

His Robot GirlfriendMike Smith’s life was crap, living all alone, years after his wife had died and his children had grown up and moved away. Then he saw the commercial for the Daffodil. Far more than other robots, the Daffodil could become anything and everything he wanted it to be. Mike’s life is about to change.

His Robot Girlfriend is a science fiction story set in the near future.  It is available in ebook format free wherever fine ebooks are found.  You can purchase a paperback edition of this book for $4.99 by following this link.

New Year’s Resolutions

I’ve never really been one to make New Year’s Resolutions.  It never seemed very profitable.  People make them with either no intention to adhere to them or they intend to but then fail to adhere to them.  Usually people tend to make resolutions about their health, their family, or their job.

I’ve been working on eating healthier and losing weight since 10-3-13.  Not a long time, I’ll admit, but enough to start a trend.  I’m keeping track with an app for my iPad called MyFitnessPal.  In three months, I’ve only lost six pounds, but I feel like I’m eating better.  I’m using a fitbit bracelet to keep track of my activity and have been trying to move more.  It’s been hard with my bad knee, but just losing 6 pounds and walking and riding my stationary bike seem to have helped it, so losing more weight and getting more active must be a good idea.

I’m a pretty good family man.  My kids both love me and I love them.  My wife really likes me, even after 28 years of marriage.  Lately she’s been getting weepy because I’m “so wonderful”.  She thinks I’m a better husband than I am.  I’m okay.

I work hard at my job.  I’ve been doing it for 20 years now and it gets harder every day, but I do my best.  Very seldom does a day go by that I don’t see a former student who tells me I was their favorite or at least “one of their favorite” teacher(s).  I’m starting school in a couple of weeks to learn to do it even better.  So there you go.

So, I’m making some resolutions for my second career as a writer/publisher.  Here we go.

1.  I will finish at least 3 books this year.

I finished 5 books in 2010, 4 in 2011, 3 in 2012, and only 2 in 2013.  I don’t like the trend. If it continues, I’ll finish one book in 2014 and die in 2015.

2. I will write an average of 10 pages per day.

Last year’s goal was 8 pages a day– a goal that I more than met.  So this seems good.

3. I will publish a paperback edition for all of my books.

This really isn’t a big deal.  I never sell any paperbacks.  But I seem to have lots of friends and family who are neo-luddites and don’t own a kindle or an iPad.  So I can just give them one of my paperback books when they express an interest.  Of course some of them can’t read, so what can I do about that?

4. I will improve my ebooks.

I will make new editions of all my current ebooks that have hyperlinked tables of contents, and I will work harder to see that all editions of my books are as error free as any published anywhere.

I think that’s it.  Good luck to all, and have a very healthy, happy, and prosperous 2014.

The Two Dragons

The Two Dragons (New Cover)Over the next few weeks I’m going to be going over The Two Dragons, book 5 in the Senta and the Steel Dragon series.  The Two Dragons saw more revision than any of the other books.  This was because, as I have mentioned before, I wrote books 1, 3, and 5 to be a single book.  When I realized this was too big, I also decided that I would write two more books to go between them, as well as a free prequel.  So after writing books 1, 3, and 5 I wrote book 0, then published book0, and then published book 1.

Then I wrote book 2 and published that.  I went back and revised book 3 and then published it.  Then I wrote and published book 4, and finally got back to book 5, almost three years after I had originally written it.  I had to take into account all the things I had written in books 2 and 4 and makes sure they weren’t contradicted.

Of course I needed titles for the individual books.  When they were the parts of a single story called The Steel Dragon, they were labeled Expedition, Colony, and Dominion.  There were several variations before I settled on the final titles.  The Two Dragons is of course a nod to The Two Towers by J.R.R. Tolkien.

Finally I had written a long epilog that told what happened to every character for the rest of their lives.  By the time that I had finished book 5, I had figured out that I might want to write more of the series.  So the epilog was taken off and and entirely new end chapter was added.  Incidentally two HUGE things were added that hadn’t been there before, both of which play a prominent part in book 6.

The Hobbit – Not a Review

My son and I went and saw The Hobbit: The Desolation of Smaug this week.  Both of us are very big Tolkien fans and big fans of Peter Jackson’s vision of Lord of the Rings.  After watching the first film of The Hobbit, we weren’t expecting to this one to be great, so we weren’t too disappointed.

(Spoiler Alert)

I enjoyed the movie more than my son did.  There was a lot of padding added to the story, but as it was mostly stuff that was actually going on off the screen, as it were, in the book, I didn’t have too much problem with it.  I was more bothered by the stuff that was taken out.  The long conversations between Smaug and Bilbo turned into one soliloquy by the dragon.  On the other hand, there was one scene which just make my son really angry.  It involved a wheel barrow and a river of gold.

(End Spoiler Alert)

Anyway, it’s great that somebody finally made a film of The Hobbit.  However, if you’re not a fan of Middle Earth, this isn’t the place to start.

The Young Sorceress – Benny Markham and Shemar Morris

youngsorceressformobileread1When I was writing The Young Sorceress, I needed a couple of young men to tag along with Senta.  I looked through the characters that I had appearing before and after and picked two mostly at random.  Since I had already written what happens to everyone for the rest of their lives, I knew that one of these two young men had a fairly important future.  It wasn’t until recently though, that I realized I was going to be writing it in The Sorceress and her Lovers.  Here are Benny, Shemar, and Senta in The Young Sorceress.

The small train, consisting only of a locomotive and a caboose, stopped at the end of the spur line and deposited its passengers—a blond teenage sorceress and two teenage boys carrying rifles.  The girl was dressed in black leather.  The two young men wore khaki explorer clothes and pith helmets.  All three had high boots, proof against the thick and thorny brush.  On the southeast edge of the great forest through which the train had journeyed, more than a hundred miles from Port Dechantagne, the landscape grew hilly and rugged.

“I really don’t think you two should be out here,” said Senta.  “I can do just fine on my own.”

“It’s not safe out here for you either,” replied Shemar Morris.  “I know you can do magic and all, but Graham says you were almost eaten by dinosaurs on a couple of occasions.”

“Let’s get going,” said Benny Markham, his eyes constantly scanning the area.  “I’m really of no mind to run into a tyrannosaurus.”

“Not likely to see one around here,” replied his friend, “at least according to Colonel Mormont.”

“That’s good.”

“Much more likely to run into a gorgosaurus.”

“Yeah?  What are they like?”

“They’re like short tyrannosauruses,” said Senta.

“That’s just ace.  How about we get a move on?  I’m getting paid a flat rate, not by the hour.”

Senta reached into the air just above her head and grabbed something floating there which only she could see.  It was a glamour—a spell stored for use at a later time.  The spell was scrying magic that would lead her hopefully to a large coal deposit.  The time to use the spell had come.  She crushed the gemlike object between her thumb and forefinger and watched as tiny sparkles spread through the air like fairy dust, gradually drifting into an arrow shape that pointed almost due west.

“This way,” she pronounced.

They crossed over a series of small hills which on their far side looked out over a vast open plain.  Hundreds of monstrous creatures roamed across it.  The vast majority of them were of a type that had the same basic shape as the iguanodons found near the coast, but were a solid deep brown in color and had very different forefeet.

“What does Mormont say about those?” asked Benny.

Shemar pulled out a small leather bound copy of the book that almost all Birmisian residents now carried.  He opened it and read.  “Gryposaurus.  Large herds, very fast, eats grass and shrubbery.”  He stuck the book back in his pocket.  “Bunch of triceratops over there.  Oh, and look.”

Four grey and green striped predators stalked along the edge of the massive herd.  They were very much the same shape as the tryrannosaurs known from the coast, though much shorter and with a lighter build.

“Let’s skirt over that way,” said Benny.  “I’ll feel better if we can keep those paralititans between us and the gorgosaurs.”

“They’re not paralititans.  They’re sauroposeidons.”

“Yeah, all right.  I see than now.  Let’s just keep moving.”

“So have you got a girlfriend yet, Shemar?” asked Senta.

“I’m keeping my options open.”

“He’s too afraid to ask a girl out,” said Benny, still watching the dinosaurs.

“I have my eye on a few.”

“Like who?” asked Senta.

“Why do you want to know?”

“Just wondering.”

“I don’t want it getting around that I might be interested in one.  Then what if I wanted to ask a different one out?”

“Don’t worry,” said Senta.  “I don’t talk to any of those other girls anyway.”

“Well, I kind of like Gabby Bassett.  She has nice eyes.”

Just as he spoke, Shemar kicked a loose rock which went rolling downhill.  A two foot long rodent, heretofore unnoticed, jumped startled from its hiding place, and scurried across Benny’s boots, and then out of sight.  Benny jumped completely off the ground, landed off balance, and dropped his rifle.

“Kafira damn it!” he shouted.  “Can we pay attention to what we’re doing?”

“Uuthanum beithbechnoth!” shouted Senta, aiming her hand in the boy’s direction. 

A bolt of bright orange energy shot from her hand and just past his head, quickly followed by a second and a third.  Benny stood shaking where he was for a moment and then turned around.  Lying dead ten paces behind him was the body of a beautiful red feathered creature.  It was an achillobator, twenty feet long and weighing over a thousand pounds.  It was every inch as large and ferocious as the utahraptors they were all familiar with.

“Kafira Kristos,” Benny muttered, crossing himself.

“Dutty Speel is nice,” continued Shemar.  “But did you ever notice that her eyes are kind of spaced too far apart?”

Conversations with Myself

I don’t know if other writers do this, but I frequently find myself having conversations with myself about things that are going on in my life.  Sometimes I’m rehashing events that happened, and sometimes I’m philosophizing on the nature of things.  Then I take this conversations and give them to a couple of characters in one of my stories.  There’s some of this in all my books, especially His Robot Girlfriend and The Many Adventures of Eaglethorpe Buxton.  But probably the most influenced by these conversations is Princess of Amathar.  Part of that is because I wrote it over a long period of time, so there are conversations that I had with myself about money, relationships, family, prestige, power, pets, telecommunications, and a whole bunch of other stuff.

In the shower this morning I had just such a conversation with myself about the nature of belief.  I think it will be in The Young Sorceress, probably as a conversation between Iolana Staff and her father, although her mother may be involved too.