The Young Sorceress – Pantagria

youngsorceressformobileread1Pantagria is a character that I had a lot of fun writing in The Voyage of the Minotaur.  Then she didn’t appear again.  So when I got a chance to write her in The Young Sorceress, I was very pleased.  She’s showing up again in The Sorceress and her Lovers.

The idea for Pantagria comes from a story I wrote when I was in High School.  In that story, I had the same setting– the field of purple eyeball flowers– and the same kind of ethereal tone.  The genders were reverse though.  The person living in the field was a male and the visitor from the real world was female.  The character didn’t have a name then.  When I needed a magical setting for users of the magical drug to visit, I just pulled that setting and character out of the back of my brain.

Here is Pantagria with Yuah in The Young Sorceress.  I try to get at least one Shakespeare line somewhere in my stories.  This one is pretty easy to spot.

“Why are you here?”

On a large flat rock in the middle of an endless field of purple flowers, the two women faced each other.  They were both beautiful and they both stood naked beneath the warming rays of the noon day sun.  One was thin and pale, with dark hair and large expressive brown eyes.  The other was muscular, toned, and tan, her long blond hair cascaded down her shoulders, impossibly thick, almost to her waist; with wings that stretched twelve feet from tip to tip, covered in feathers as white as the clouds.

“Why are you here?” Pantagria repeated.

“I’m here because I’m ‘seeing’.”

“Then that brings us to an entirely different question.  Why are you seeing?”

“I don’t know.”

“You didn’t want Pantagruel.”

Yuah shivered at the memory.  “Who would want that monster?”

“He is what many women want.  He is who they come to see when they use the ‘see spice’.”

“How could anyone want that monster?”

“He is what your mind makes him.  In fact, he is a perfect reflection of what your mind makes him.  You see a monster.  Another woman sees a prince—a perfect prince.  But you didn’t come seeking perfection, did you?  You don’t even want perfection.  If you wanted perfection, you would have never wanted our Terrence, would you?”

“Don’t speak of him!”  Yuah’s hand became a claw with which she threatened to lash out.  “Don’t you dare say his name!”

 “I loved Terrence,” Pantagria hissed, her eyes taking an evil gleam.  “Forty thousand dressing maids with all their quantity of love could not equal my sum!”

“I am not a dressing maid.  I am Mrs. Terrence Lucius Virgil Dechantagne!  And you… You’re nothing!  Nothing!  You’re not even real!”  Yuah burst into a fit of tears.

Pantagria laughed in her face.

“You little fool.  He didn’t love you any more than he loved me.”

“You’re evil!” wailed Yuah.  “Why did you have to have him?  Why did you have to ruin him?  Why did you have to steal him away from me?”

“I didn’t go looking for him.  I couldn’t even if I wanted to.  He came to me.  He came to me just the way you have.”  Pantagria slowly circled the other woman.  “He came to me because he wanted something perfect.  It’s why all men come to me.  And it’s why women come to Pantagruel.  But not you.”  She stopped in front of Yuah.  “You don’t want either of us.  You don’t want something perfect.”

Yuah dropped her hands to her sides and sobbed uncontrollably.

“So, what do you want?”

“I don’t want… anything.”

“Then you have picked a particularly horrible way to commit suicide.”

Yuah’s shoulders shook.

“Stop your crying,” ordered Pantagria.  “Stop it!”

Grasping Yuah’s hair, Pantagria pulled her head up and slapped her across the face.

“Wake up.  Yuah wake up.”  Mrs. Colbshallow slapped Yuah gently across the cheek again.

Yuah struggled to lift her head and look around.  She was lying in the empty bath tub.  Her limbs were numb.

“I knew this tub was a bad idea,” said Mrs. Colbshallow.  “Cissy!  Get in here and bring a blanket! 

The reptilian arrived with a blanket, and wrapping it around Yuah, carried the woman upstairs to her bedroom.  Placing her on her bed, and throwing a quilt over her, Cissy crossed the room to the fireplace and struck a match, lighting the tinder that had already been arranged amid the kindling and fuel.  By the time she had turned around, Mrs. Colbshallow was handing Yuah a cup of steaming tea.

“What are you doing lying in the tub?” she asked.  “That room is too cold and you have a perfectly good bed right here.”

Yuah didn’t reply.  She simply sipped the tea, her eyes closed.

The Young Sorceress – Iolana Staff

youngsorceressformobileread1Iolana Staff appears as a baby in book 2 and a toddler in book 3.  In The Young Sorceress we get to see her as a precocious little girl.  As I was writing this, I was already thinking about what I was going to do with the character in the future, and indeed right now she is one of the main characters in The Sorceress and her Lovers.  In fact, in the first half of the book, she appears more than anyone else.  Here she is from book 4, getting little respect from her elders.

In the kitchen two more lizzies were cleaning but the crowd that she had expected was not there.  Just past the kitchen, Yuah almost ran into Mrs. Colbshallow.  The former cook now occupied a position in the household akin to a dear aunt.

“Shouldn’t they be preparing tea, Yadira?” she asked.

“It’s already on the table.  I was just about to summon everyone to the dining room.  How was your shopping trip?”

“Barely acceptable.”

Mrs. Colbshallow paused and peered over her glasses.  “Then I’m barely glad to hear it.”

Neither Iolanthe nor Radley were at home for tea.  Yuah had expected as much of course, since she had just seen the latter in town and seldom found the former at home during the day.  Mrs. Colbshallow was seated on one side of the table next to Iolanthe’s daughter Iolana.  Yuah, between her two children, sat opposite them.  Augie was now almost two and a half and had mastered the intricacies of family dining, though he had to sit on a stack of books to reach the table.  He looked so much like his father it made Yuah’s heart ache to look at him.

“Good afternoon Mama,” he said.  “Did you bring me a tin soldier?”

“Of course I did.  You may play with it after you eat.

“Mine?” asked Augie’s little sister Terra.

The girl was a less than a year younger than her brother.  She had a round little face framed by thick black hair and brown eyes.  She was unusually thin for a child her age.  This along with her pale skin and scratchy little voice made her mother constantly worried for her health, despite the best medical opinions which said she was completely fine.  She, like her brother, was quite advanced for her age.

“I brought you some blocks.”

The girl tipped her head back, opened her mouth, and shrieked.

“I want a soldier!”

“Girls don’t play with soldiers,” said Augie.

“I want a soldier!”

“No they don’t,” said Yuah, brushing the little girl’s hair.  “Boys play with soldiers because they grow up to be soldiers.”

 Terra shrieked again.

“What is it now?”

“I don’t want to be a block!”

“Quit crying!  You’re going to grow up to be a princess.”

“The warrior-priestesses of Ballar were soldiers,” offered Iolana from across the table.

“You be quiet,” snapped Yuah.  “I won’t have any of that nonsense in this house.  You’re five years old.  How come you talk like a college professor?  No man’s going to want to marry a know-it-all.”

Iolana slumped down in her chair.  Terra climbed out of her high-chair, still crying, and into the lap of the seventh diner, who was quietly sitting on the other side of her from Yuah.  Though many humans might not have been able to tell Cissy from the other lizzies in the Dechantagne home, she occupied a special place there.  She was slightly less than six feet in height, about average for members of her sex and species.  Her skin was smooth, without the mottling and scars of many of the reptilians.  Her face and the top of her head were a deep forest green which down her back, punctuated with darker stripes just below her shoulders.  Beneath her long powerful jaw, on her dewlap, and extending down her front, was a lighter, pale green.  Her chair had been modified so that she could sit without discomforting her long, powerful tail.  She reached out a scaly hand and picked up a cucumber sandwich, which she fed to the tiny human now curled up in her lap.  Terra was forced to stop crying to eat.

The Young Sorceress: Kieran Baxter

youngsorceressformobileread1The main part of writing The Young Sorceress, was squeezing in some additional background on characters who appeared in The Two Dragons, which I had already written.  One of the main characters was completely different.  I already knew what I wanted to write for Book 6: The Sorceress and her Lovers, so I used the opportunity to build some background for a character who would play a big part in that book– Kieran Baxter.  Up to that point, he had only appeared as a very minor character in book 1.  Here he is in book 4.

Baxter was the latest of His Majesty’s ships to take this duty.  She was a battle sloop and though larger than wooden sailing ships of old bearing the same designation, she was one of the smaller vessels in the Royal Navy.  It was Baxter’s opinion that she was too small for her current assignment, though he would never have admitted such.  At 990 tons, she was just exactly 250 feet long and drew a beam of 36 feet.  With a single machinegun and no ship to ship weapons, she had to rely on her speed to get her 93 crewmen to safety—no match for a frigate and certainly not a cruiser.  Her three anti-airship guns could take on any dirigible, but while her two depth charge throwers and two torpedo tubes made her a menace to a submersible, Freedonian unterseeboots usually traveled in packs.

This day had been like every other one of the past three weeks.  The Snowflake had circled one of the smaller Mulliens, looking for any sign of Freedonian or Mirsannan influence and generally ignoring any ships from Enclep.  In this case there had been none.  There was nothing to distinguish this particular island from the hundreds of others in the area.  It didn’t even have a name on the charts.  It was large enough to have a couple of peaks, no doubt volcanic, though if they were active there was no sign of it.  Thick tropical forests grew right up the edge of the beach all the way around.  There was no sign of even the most rudimentary civilized life.  There was in fact no sign of human life what-so-ever.

Baxter stood along the aft railing and watched the sun dip below the waves.  He felt the comforting thrum of the twin steam turbines beneath his feet.  Relaxing here before retiring had become his nightly routine, something of which his steward was well aware.

“Tea Captain?” asked the sailor, holding a cup for him.

“Thank you.”  Baxter took a sip and sighed.

It was at that moment that he saw them and for a split second he thought they were simply the last bits of light reflecting off the waves.  They weren’t.  They were two torpedoes and they hit at almost the same instant not fifty feet forward from where he stood.  Suddenly he was flying through the air.  Then he was underwater, struggling to breathe.  Just as he reached the surface, something crashed into the waves two feet away, creating a huge splash.  Baxter turned in the water, looking for the Snowflake.  He found her just in time to see a tremendous blast rip the ship apart as the cold seawater hit the steaming boilers.

Baxter swam toward the ship, but it disappeared below the waves long before he was able to close half the distance.  As the thought that his first command was now gone registered in his brain, so for the first time did the fact that he himself was in serious trouble.  He was already exhausted and though he knew there was land close by, he had lost all sense of direction and no longer had the light in which to see it.  He was wearing his boots and they were filled with water, dragging him down.  He thought about removing them, but didn’t think he could stay afloat while he did so.  Debris was floating all around, but most of it was tiny.  He grabbed the first thing he saw floating that was larger than he was and pulled his body onto it, grinning mirthlessly when he realized it was part of a lifeboat.

Holding on for his life, Baxter spent the night being tossed about like a cork.  He was sure that he hadn’t fallen asleep.  He couldn’t have.  Yet sunrise appeared far sooner than it should have.  As it did so, it framed the shape of the island that Snowflake had circumnavigated the day before.  It looked less than a mile away.  There was nothing else to do but make for it.  Finally able to remove his boots, Baxter tied them by the shoelaces to the single metal cleat on the remains of the lifeboat.  Then lying on his stomach, he kicked with his feet toward land.

The Young Sorceress: Radley Staff

youngsorceressformobileread1Radley Staff is a very important character in The Drache Girl.  I think I had originally pictured him only as a minor character (it’s been so long ago that I forget), be he became a major character in that book.  While he is less so in The Young Sorceress, he still gets plenty to do.  Here he rousts Lizzietown searching for saboteurs.

It was early in the morning, and those residents of Lizzietown who were awake, were moving slowly as their bodies warmed up.  From the north, a line of uniformed humans made their way down the street, stopping and snapping to in crisp formation.  Six uniformed constables, still wearing their blue jackets, but having replaced their blue trousers with khaki pants and shin high boots, were in front of the formation.  The other forty men wore khaki uniforms and pith helmets.  All except the two at the front of the column carried B1898 magazine-fed bolt-action .30 caliber service rifles.  Radley Staff carried a naval service sword, though a revolver rested in the holster at his belt.  Fifteen year old sorceress Senta Bly carried nothing that could be construed as a weapon. 

“All right, where are they?” Staff asked the girl.

“Uuthanum,” she said, raising her hand.

A small blue ball of light rose from her hand and started toward the ramshackle houses.

“Two by two,” called Staff.  “Double time, march!”

His orders were repeated by the sergeant halfway back in the column.  The soldiers started off in a jog, two by two, into Lizzietown.  Staff held his sword close to his chest and the soldiers behind him carried their rifles the same way.  The little blue light flew above and in front of them at exactly the same speed they moved.

The smell of panic rose from the lizzies.  Some came out of their doorways to see what was happening, only to be shoved back by the soldiers.  Anything in the way of the march, whether it was a cart or wagon or a lizzie was knocked aside by a booted kick or a rifle butt.  Senta jogged along beside Staff.  He slammed a large lizzie out of the way with his shoulder, rather like a rugby player.

Lizzietown held several hundred houses, but it didn’t take long for the soldiers to reach their destination.  The little blue ball of light rose high up into the air and burst, raining down fine blue dust which then glowed brightly as it coated six nearby shacks.

“Squads one and two, encircle positions!” shouted Staff.  “Squads three and four, turn out those huts!”

Eight soldiers stormed through the doorways of the lizzie houses and began shoving lizzies and their possessions out onto the ground.  Four policemen waited outside the doorways, examining items and pushing the reptilians down onto their faces.  The other eighteen soldiers that made up squads one and two had formed a blockade around the six huts, keeping any on the inside from getting out, and any on the outside from getting in.  There seemed to be few lizzies outside the circle who wanted to do anything other than get as far away from the area as possible.

Several lizzies appeared in the doorways of the other four houses.

“Kaetarrnaya  eesousztekh!” shouted Staff.

Most of the lizzies popped back inside.  One who didn’t had rifle butts smashed into his face by two soldiers who rushed forward from the line.  One lizzie made the mistake of stepping outside while holding an obsidian encrusted wooden sword.  He was cut down by at least five rifle bullets, even though he had made no move to raise the weapon.  The rifle shots were the signal to all the lizzies outside the perimeter of human soldiers to get away and get away as fast as they could.  Senta suddenly realized it was a signal for something else as well.

“Uh oh,” she said, stepping over to the doorway where the dead lizzie was making a large bloody puddle in the dirt.

“Get back here,” hissed Staff, but his attention was pulled away from her.

“We have contraband!” called one of the constables.

The Young Sorceress: Hero Hertling

youngsorceressformobileread1Hero is a character who is a lot of fun to write.  She remains pretty much normal– a dull brown next to Senta’s gold.  She doesn’t really have a story arc of her own, at least until book 5 (and beyond).  She’s there strictly in a supporting role.  Here she is doing just that in The Young Sorceress.

Hero had been Senta’s best friend for more than five years now.  While they had once been nearly the same height, Hero was now noticeably shorter than the young sorceress.  She was in fact, quite a bit shorter now than her own twin.  Other than height though, Hertzal and Hero looked very much alike.  They both had large expressive eyes.  They both had thick dark hair, Hero’s long and naturally curly, Hertzal’s short and razor cut above the ears.

“Senta!” squealed Hero, hopping two steps across the tiny room to give her friend a great hug.  “What are you doing here?”

Hertzal smiled happily.  He had never spoken as long as the sorceress had known him, but he had his own ways of making himself understood.

“I’m taking you all to dinner at Finkler’s.”

“We haven’t decided for sure…” started Honor.

“That’s ace,” said Hero.  “We could smell Mrs. Finkler’s stew all over the square.  Oh, here’s your thread, Honor.”

She handed her sister a small cloth bag.

“Well, I suppose I should get my shawl,” said Honor.  “You two bundle up.  It’s still warm out, but it will be quite cool when we come home.”

She cast an eye in Senta’s direction.

“This is surprisingly warm,” said the sorceress, gesturing to her own unusual clothing.

The four of them walked west down First Avenue toward the square.  The three teens carried on an animated conversation, oblivious to almost anything else.  The eldest of the group carried a kerosene lantern in one hand and a lizzie sword in one hand.  The flat weapon looked a lot like a cricket bat, but was encrusted around the edges with small, very sharp pieces of obsidian.

There was a short line at the bakery, as the eating establishment featured only seven tables, three on the inside, and four on the outside.  When Senta and her friends joined the queue though, it became much shorter.  They could hear several people whispering “the Drache Girl” as they suddenly decided to eat at either the new beanery or Café Ada.

“It seems like a lot of people are afraid of you,” said Hero to Senta, as they took one of the outdoor tables.

“Well, that’s just good sense,” Senta replied.

One person that was apparently not afraid was the waitress.

“Well, if it isn’t three of the four biggest trouble makers in town,” she said, setting down a pot of tea and four cups.  “Hello Honor.”

“Shouldn’t you be at home with your kids?” asked Senta.

Gaylene Finkler made a face.  She was the wife of restaurateur Aalwijn Finkler, not to mention sister of Senta’s boyfriend, Graham.  Though she was only seventeen, she was already the mother of two.  Her eyes looked tired as she ran a hand through her sandy hair. 

“I had to get out.  Ma is taking care of the kids.  Another five minutes in the house and I would have taken an axe to everyone in it, and that includes your boyfriend.”

“Maybe you should have a rest instead of working,” offered Honor.

“We’re short of help.  Besides, when I’m here I get a chance to waffle with my friends.”  She waved a hand to Dutty Speel at another table, and who waved back.  “So what do you want?”

“How about some lovely stew?” said Senta.

“Right.  Stew.  Fresh bread.  Relish platter.  Anything else?”

“How about four Billingbow’s?”

“Just water for me,” said Honor.

“Got it,” said Gaylene; then she was off.

“Say, is that Zurfina over there?” asked Hero.

The Young Sorceress: Eamon Shrubb

youngsorceressformobileread1Lovable police constable Eamon Shrubb returns in The Young Sorceress.  He makes a great side-kick for Saba Colbshallow, and is constantly needling him about his relationship with all the powerful women of the colony.  My favorite recurring line of his is “Violators call me Police Constable Shrubb.”  Here he uses it on Senta.

Senta stepped out of the store with the candy in one hand and the soda water in the other.  Turning to the right, she passed the dress shop, heading for the opening in the Emergency Wall.  She hadn’t gone too far when she practically walked into two young men.  They were both at least six feet tall and broad shouldered, and when they stood next to each other they completely blocked the entire walkway.  The young sorceress was momentarily startled.  She couldn’t remember the last time anyone had blocked her path.

“What have we here,” said one of the young men to the other.

He looked to be nearly twenty.  His hair was long and messy, but he was not bad looking otherwise.  His friend though had a nasty leer on his face that looked like it never went away—that and a red scar across his chin.  They were both well-muscled and wore the clothing of merchant seamen.  That explained a lot.

“Looks like a little bird got out of her nest.”

Senta stuck the end of the licorice into her mouth and yanked on it till a piece broke off.  The men didn’t seem to notice her nonchalance.

“Maybe she could show us what they do for fun in this God forsaken country,” continued the second man.  “Could you do that honey?  Could you show us some fun?”

Senta took another bite of licorice.

“You know it’s not even tea time, right?” she asked.  “Don’t hoodlums usually wait until nightfall before assaulting young women?  Aren’t you worried about the coppers getting after you?”

“I don’t see any coppers, do you?” asked the man.

“As a matter of fact, I do.  He’s right over there.”

The two men looked across the square and indeed a uniformed police constable was striding swiftly toward them.  He was much larger than even the sailors and he carried a heavy wooden truncheon in one hand.  The two men quickly stepped around Senta and disappeared down the alley between shops.

“Hello Eamon,” said Senta when Police Constable Shrubb stopped on the spot so recently vacated by the two hoodlums.

“Violators call me PC Shrubb.”

“What?”

“Miss Senta Bly, I have a warrant for your arrest.”

“You have a what now?”

“A warrant.  Mr. Eden Buttermore has sworn out a complaint against you for attacking him at the bakery café.”

“I didn’t do any such thing.”

“There are sworn statements from six witnesses.”

“Six, huh?”

“That’s right.  Now come along quietly lass, and I won’t have to put you in the cuffs.”

“Now Eamon, you know that if I wanted to attack someone, he’d be in no condition to swear out a complaint.”

She raised her hand and the constable stepped back, but the sorceress just took another bite of licorice.

“Well, let’s get going,” she said.  “I don’t want to spend all day at the police station.”

It was a twenty minute walk to the new police station and court house which sat alone in a forested lot just east of the train depot.  It had been built of sharp red brick almost two years before, with white stonework at the corners and above the windows and doors.  It was a square five story building.  On the arch above the door was carved in large letters “POLICE” and just below it, the police motto “punishment follows swift on guilt.”  The colony now boasted half a dozen police constables, but only one was present in the main office.  When Senta entered the front door just ahead of Eamon, the young PC jumped up, knocking his chair over.  The girl sat her empty soda bottle on the counter and smiled at him.

“Take it easy lad,” said Eamon.  “Just toss me the key.”

“Oh hey!  You’re not tossing me in the clinker!”

“Only until the Justice of the Peace can get here.”

“Um,” said the young constable.  “He’s already here.  He’s upstairs in his office.”

“Fine then.”  Eamon led the way to the elevator.

The Young Sorceress: Graham Dokkins

youngsorceressformobileread1Graham Dokkins is one character who really gets a demotion in The Young Sorceress.  After showcasing him so much in book 2 and book 3, it feels kind of strange that he is in the background in book 4 so much.  There really isn’t much place for him though.  I think you really see who Graham is in the parts in which he appears.  Here he comes to the rescue of Harriet the Triceratops.

After arranging for the rental of the warehouse, Senta started back the way she had come.  The trolley was right where she had left it, but now there was some kind of kerfuffle going on.  It was difficult to see just what it was as a crowd had gathered around, but the honking cries echoing between the buildings made it clear that Harriet was unhappy.

“Hey give-over!” said Senta, pushing her way past two men.

As soon as others began noticing who she was, a path parted before her, revealing an angry triceratops struggling against the harness that attached her to the trolley.  Harriet had already turned to one side, pulling the wheels from the rails and now several men were pulling at ropes tied around her horns.  The great boney frill surrounding her head was flushed bright red.

“Hey! Knock that off, you wankers!” shouted a familiar voice from across the crowd.  “Those horns aren’t for yankin’ on.”

Senta looked to see her boyfriend Graham pushing past several new arrivals.  He was about the same age that she was, though the dungarees and heavy shirt made him look older.  He was almost a head shorter than Senta, with unkempt brown hair and a freckled face that was usually smiling, but which right now was twisted into a snarl.  He jumped forward and pulled the rope away from the hands of one of the men and moved toward the dinosaur, murmuring soothing words.  Harriet was in no mood now to be comforted though, and took a bite at him with her great beaked mouth.

“Teiius Uuthanum,” said Senta, spreading her hands toward the enraged dinosaur.

Almost immediately Harriet stopped twisting and pulling on the ropes, and two seconds later her massive head slumped as she closed her eyes.  She remained standing, but slept, even giving a single honking snore.

“Those horns aren’t for pulling on!” Graham shouted again at the men.  “They’re for display!  They’ll break off!”

He threw the rope on the ground and stomped away.  Senta hurried after him, catching up about halfway down the hill.

“Graham,” she called.

He half turned and scowled at her and then continued on.

“Hey!”

She ran after him and grasping him by the shoulder, turned him around.

“What gives?” she asked.

“Oh, you want to see me now?”

“What are you talking about?”

“We were supposed to meet last evening.  I was going to buy you dinner at the new restaurant.   I’ve been saving for weeks.  Any of this sound familiar?  Instead I ate beef in a boot by myself.”

“Beef in a boot?  You mean filet de boeuf en croute?  Seems like I should be the one who is angry.  All I had was a sandwich.”

“Hardly my fault,” said Graham.  “I had to eat mine alone with all the people in Café Ada watching me.”

“It couldn’t have been that bad.  Your brother-in-law took care of you, didn’t he?”

“More like he took pity on me, just like everyone else did for the poor tosser that got himself stood up by his girl.”

“I’m sorry, all right?  I had a thing with Zurfina.  You have to make allowances.”

“I make all kinds of allowances, but even I can only take so much.”

“I will make it up to you,” said Senta.  “We’ll go on a pic-nic together tomorrow.  You still have roast beef left over, don’t you?”

The boy nodded.

“Good.  We can eat it cold.  I’ll pack tea and biscuits and we’ll have a nice day in the park.”

“All right,” said Graham begrudgingly.  “I’ll pick you up at your house—eleven sharp.”

“I’ll be ready,” promised Senta.

The Young Sorceress: Saba Colbshallow

youngsorceressformobileread1Saba Colbshallow’s part in The Young Sorceress is mostly official, in that he is fulfilling his job as a Police Inspector.  He still has his moments with Senta, of course.  All that plays into the larger story going on in the series.  Here Saba and his wife have Senta to tea.

“Senta!”

The young sorceress turned to see Saba Colbshallow walking toward her, only then realizing that she was right in front of his house.  The Colbshallow home was a large, beautiful red brick house sitting back from the road in the shade of large pines and maples on a large fenced estate.  A team of lizzies was busy planting apple trees, which the young police sergeant had apparently been supervising.

“Hey Saba.”

“I was just getting ready to run your birthday gift over to you.”

“You got me a present too?”

“Loana and I got you a present.  Now we can give it to your in person.  She’s just getting ready for tea in the garden.  Come join us.”

“Who’s living in your old house then?” asked Senta.

The small A-frame house, which had been Saba’s first home and stood on the corner of the property, looked like a storage shed next to the newly finished home.  But Senta could see through the window that someone was moving about inside. 

“I’m renting it.”

“I assumed that, since I can see someone has moved in.  I suppose you can use the rent money to lavish your wife with imported fruit trees.  So just who is it that you have living here?”

“It’s Mr. Clipers, the Zaeri Imam.”

“And that’s not making your wife crazy?”

“Of course not.  She hasn’t been around many Zaeri, but now that she’s here, she’s become more cosmopolitan.  Talking of which, when I first saw you I thought you were one of the Zaeri girls on her way home.”

“Oh?  How’s that?”

“With your brown and white dress.  It’s just the sort of thing they would wear.  Anyway, come on back.  Loana will be so excited you’re here.”

Loana was in fact, not excited to see Senta there, though she covered it well.  With a quick admonition to the lizzies to keep working, Saba had led Senta to the garden behind the house.  Here a white wrought iron table had been set for tea.  Two matching chairs were in place, but Saba had quickly added a third.  He was pulling out the chair for the young sorceress just as his wife stepped out of the garden door followed by a lizzie carrying a tray of food.

“I didn’t know you had invited a guest,” said the new Mrs. Colbshallow, a smile tightly affixed to her mouth.

“I just saw her walking down the road,” explained Saba.  “Knowing how much you wanted to get together with her, I thought this was the perfect opportunity.”

“Yes indeed.”

Loana took the tray from the lizzie and sat it on the table, smoothed out her dress, and then waited for her husband to pull out a chair for her.  He did and then sat down himself.  Loana was wearing a lovely dress, pink with black brocade and a low neckline which was trimmed with a dozen large bows.  It displayed her charms nicely.  Loana was as perfect a beauty as could be found in all of Birmisia.  Her chin, her nose, her waist—each of these might have been found in an encyclopedia showing the perfect version of that body part.  Her hair was unusual, arranged in a very complex style, with each strand seemingly a different shade from very light blond to coppery red.  Her eyes were also multihued, one deep brown and the other hazel.

“I made plenty of food.  My Saba always has a healthy appetite.”  Senta thought she perhaps placed a little too much emphasis on the possessive.

“Your garden is lovely,” she said.

“Thank you.  It takes so much effort and it’s hard to keep up on a police sergeant’s salary.  Tomato?”

Sliced tomatoes were only the beginning of a lovely tea.  There was asparagus soup, turnip pasties, and a salad of mint, orange slices, and nettles.  Though not the overabundance that Loana seemed to hint at, there was enough for the three diners.

“So Senta,” said Loana.  “I understand there was some sort of disturbance at Finkler’s yesterday.”

“Oh?”

“How come I didn’t hear anything about it?” asked Saba.

“I’m sure that it was nothing that would involve the police,” continued Loana.  “Just a bit of shouting between two young women over a young man.”

“People are crazy,” said Senta.

“Yes they are,” agreed Loana.  “Some people hinted that you might know something about it, even that you might have been involved—you and a girl named Nellie something, arguing over your boyfriend?”

“Nellie Swenson.  Yeah, I met her yesterday down by the docks.  So we’re supposed to have yelled at each other or something?”

“Yes.”  Loana seemed to be losing some of her steam.

“People make up stuff about me all the time.  Mind you, if I found out Graham was spending too much time with her I might have something to say about it.  He gave me this you know.”  She held up the necklace.

“That reminds me,” said Saba, casting a glare at his wife and getting up from the table.  “Let me get your present.”

“You really shouldn’t have,” Senta told Loana.

“Oh Saba is very attached to you.  He thinks of you like a little sister.”

Saba returned carrying a small box with a bow.  Opening it, Senta found a pair of simple earrings decorated with tiny pieces of amber.

“They’re beautiful,” said Senta, pulling first one and then the other out of the box and fitting them into the holes in her earlobes.

“They weren’t expensive,” he said.

“When Saba told me you had pierced ears, I just knew we had to get them for you,” said Loana.  “I once thought of getting mine pierced, but I didn’t want to look like a tart.”

“You’re just as thoughtful and nice as everyone says,” replied the sorceress.

The Young Sorceress: Yuah Korlann

youngsorceressformobileread1Spoiler Alert.

The character than made me rethink even writing this book was Yuah Korlann.  She is at her high point in Book 3, and then is revealed in her lowest in Book 5.  I wasn’t sure I wanted to write the details of that fall.  In the end though, I think that it worked out.  In this scene we find that Yuah has become a user of the same drug that so afflicted her husband.

Yuah Dechantagne peered out through the large window at the front of Mr. Parnorsham’s Pfennig Store.  Her eyes narrowed as she watched Senta talking to her brother-in-law across the street.  That witch was evil.  She had seen it with her own eyes.  Yuah’s husband Terrence had been addicted most of his adult life to White Opthalium.  The drug was not readily available in Birmisia, and for a time Yuah thought that he had managed to defeat his addiction.  Then she had followed him and had seen Senta and Zurfina supplying poor Terrence.  What kind of person would sell such a horrible substance to another?  Now Terrence was dead, but Yuah’s hatred for Zurfina and her ward was alive and well.  And what the hell was she wearing?  That dress looked as though it was made from the same thing as steam carriage tires.

“Can I help you with something, Mrs. Dechantagne?”

Yuah started, but it was only Mr. Parnorsham.

“What?”

“I was just wondering if there was anything else you needed.  I have the toiletries and notions from your list all gathered.  What else can I get for you?”

“If there’s anything else, I’ll send a lizzie for it.”  Yuah’s tone sounded harsh in her own ears, and the look on Mr. Parnorsham’s face confirmed it.

She glanced quickly out the window again and saw that Senta had left.

“Good day.”

Outside her steam carriage was waiting.  Marzell Lance, her driver, had stepped to the rear of the vehicle to add coal to the firebox.  When he saw her, he quickly wiped his hands on a handkerchief and hurried around to help her climb up into the passenger seat.

“Be a dear and get my crate.”

Marzell dashed into the store and returned with a wooden crate filled with her purchases, which he put in the back seat.  He paused briefly before climbing into the driver’s side to look at a pair of teenage girls walking by.  This made Yuah click her tongue.

“Sorry Mrs. D,” said the chastened driver as he maneuvered the car out of the square and down First Avenue toward the Dechantagne estate.

Marzell drove through the open gate of the Dechantagne-Staff property.  The huge, stately house was still one of the largest buildings in the colony, featuring a large portico supported by four two-story columns in front, a double gabled roof, and more than a dozen stone chimneys.  Every side of the house was covered with large dual-paned windows.  The young driver brought the steam carriage all the way around the left side of the home, to the shed in the rear.  Jumping down, he helped Yuah to the ground.  She walked quickly to the back door.  Her snapping fingers were the only signal for the lizzie standing by—she thought it was Garrah but wasn’t sure—to fetch the crate from the car and to bring it inside.

In the kitchen two more lizzies were cleaning but the crowd that she had expected was not there.  Just past the kitchen, Yuah almost ran into Mrs. Colbshallow.  The former cook now occupied a position in the household akin to a dear aunt.

“Shouldn’t they be preparing tea, Yadira?” she asked.

“It’s already on the table.  I was just about to summon everyone to the dining room.  How was your shopping trip?”

“Barely acceptable.”

Mrs. Colbshallow paused and peered over her glasses.  “Then I’m barely glad to hear it.”

Neither Iolanthe nor Radley were at home for tea.  Yuah had expected as much of course, since she had just seen the latter in town and seldom found the former at home during the day.  Mrs. Colbshallow was seated on one side of the table next to Iolanthe’s daughter Iolana.  Yuah, between her two children, sat opposite them.  Augie was now almost two and a half and had mastered the intricacies of family dining, though he had to sit on a stack of books to reach the table.  He looked so much like his father it made Yuah’s heart ache to look at him.

“Good afternoon Mama,” he said.  “Did you bring me a tin soldier?”

“Of course I did.  You may play with it after you eat.

“Mine?” asked Augie’s little sister Terra.

The girl was a less than a year younger than her brother.  She had a round little face framed by thick black hair and brown eyes.  She was unusually thin for a child her age.  This along with her pale skin and scratchy little voice made her mother constantly worried for her health, despite the best medical opinions which said she was completely fine.  She, like her brother, was quite advanced for her age.

“I brought you some blocks.”

The girl tipped her head back, opened her mouth, and shrieked.

“I want a soldier!”

“Girls don’t play with soldiers,” said Augie.

“I want a soldier!”

“No they don’t,” said Yuah, brushing the little girl’s hair.  “Boys play with soldiers because they grow up to be soldiers.”

 Terra shrieked again.

“What is it now?”

“I don’t want to be a block!”

“Quit crying!  You’re going to grow up to be a princess.”

“The warrior-priestesses of Ballar were soldiers,” offered Iolana from across the table.

“You be quiet,” snapped Yuah.  “I won’t have any of that nonsense in this house.  You’re five years old.  How come you talk like a college professor?  No man’s going to want to marry a know-it-all.”

Iolana slumped down in her chair.  Terra climbed out of her high-chair, still crying, and into the lap of the seventh diner, who was quietly sitting on the other side of her from Yuah.  Though many humans might not have been able to tell Cissy from the other lizzies in the Dechantagne home, she occupied a special place there.  She was slightly less than six feet in height, about average for members of her sex and species.  Her skin was smooth, without the mottling and scars of many of the reptilians.  Her face and the top of her head were a deep forest green which down her back, punctuated with darker stripes just below her shoulders.  Beneath her long powerful jaw, on her dewlap, and extending down her front, was a lighter, pale green.  Her chair had been modified so that she could sit without discomforting her long, powerful tail.  She reached out a scaly hand and picked up a cucumber sandwich, which she fed to the tiny human now curled up in her lap.  Terra was forced to stop crying to eat.

Yuah scarcely paid attention to what she ate, but not because the food wasn’t good.  Mrs. Colbshallow was known far and wide for her culinary skill, and while she no longer cooked herself, she still supervised the kitchen.  There were cucumber and cress sandwiches, chips, sliced tomatoes, a cold noodle and cheese dish, and no less than three types of fruit salad.  But Yuah cared less about food now than she ever had, and she had never cared over much about it.  She picked at her food and then got up, throwing her napkin on the table.

“Children, take a nap when Cissy tells you.  I’m going to go lie down.  I have a headache.”

“Help with your dress?” asked Cissy.

“No, I’ll get one of the lizzies.”

At the top of the stairs, Yuah found one of the new lizzie servants, a female named Narsa.  She had already been trained to help the women don and doff their clothes and now she helped Yuah remove her dress and then to unlace her corset, though once loose, Yuah left it on.  She shooed Narsa out of her bedroom and locked the door after her.  Lying down on the bed, she took three deep breaths, and then retrieved a small wooden box from beneath her mattress.  Opening the box, she pulled out one of three small indigo bottles and pulled off the stopper.  She could just detect the florid smell of the contents.  Placing a finger on the tiny open mouth, she overturned the bottle to moisten her finger with the milky white liquid inside.  Then she reached up and rubbed it directly onto her left eyeball, and then her right, quickly recapping the bottle and tossing it next to her on the bed as the room suddenly drained of color. 

The Young Sorceress: Iolanthe Dechatagne-Staff

youngsorceressformobileread1Iolanthe is in the background far more in The Young Sorceress than in any other book, but she’s a presence that can’t be denied.  Here Iolanthe is visited by Senta, who is standing in for Zurfina as the colony’s magical power.

Not hungry, despite not having eaten since the previous day at noon, she grabbed the small black purse that had been her previous year’s birthday present from Zurfina, and set out.  The colonial government was constructing a new office building about halfway between Town Square and the train station.  Though only the foundation and part of one wall had been completed thus far, it was clear that it would be a massive building.  Just behind it was a small single story structure that had been designed as a carriage house, but which temporarily housed the Governor and her administration.  Once inside, Senta spotted Governor Dechantagne-Staff immediately, but was intercepted before she could reach her by the Governor’s secretary Mrs. Melody Wardlaw.

Mrs. Wardlaw, an attractive woman in her thirties had arrived in Port Dechantagne two years before as Mrs. Lanier.  She had been a widow and remained single only a few months before marrying a law clerk turned ornithologist.

“Are you here to see the Governor?”

“I can see her now,” pointed out Senta.  “She’s right over there.”

“And did you wish to speak with her?”

Senta narrowed her eyes.  She raised her finger to her lips and then slowly pointed it at Mrs. Wardlaw.  “I don’t know… I could just talk to you.”

The secretary paled.

“I’m sure she has some time for you.”

“There you are,” said Mrs. Staff when she saw the young sorceress.  “I suppose you’re given to sleeping in all day.  No doubt Zurfina has failed to provide you with the structure of which young people are so in need.”

“No doubt,” said Senta.  “What was it that you needed?”

“Come walk with me.”

Mrs. Staff led Senta out of the building and down the cement sidewalk.  A lizzie work crew was paving the road.  Back in the great city of Brech, most of the streets had been paved scores or even hundreds of years before and so cobblestone was the norm.  Here, streets were covered with a layer of red bricks, carefully pieced together.  A single human foreman leaning on a shovel quickly stood erect when he saw the Governor.

“That’s one of the things I need you for,” said Mrs. Staff.

“Punishing lazy employees?”

The Governor pursed her lips. 

“The lizzies.  As you are no doubt aware, hundreds have moved into the city limits and are occupying that land just west of the train depot.  People are already calling it…”

“Lizzietown,” interrupted Senta.  “And it’s more like thousands.  I’m surprised you allow it, considering what happened two years ago.”

“One should keep his friends close and his enemies closer.  I want you to make sure that there is nothing going on there that would threaten us.”

“All right.  What else?”

“I’m concerned that we may have agents of Freedonia in the colony again.  Zurfina has in the past performed security checks for us.  I believe we need something along that line again.”

“Any idea exactly what she did?”

“You’re the sorceress, not I.”

“Seems like pretty much the same kind of job—just a matter of which direction I’m looking.  I’ll give it my best shot.”

“Of course you will,” said the Governor.

“I’ll be on my way then.”

“One more thing.  My husband was interested in hiring someone to magically look for coal—just as your Miss Jindra did.”

“She’s not my Miss Jindra.  I barely know her.”

“As you say.  In any case, with Zurfina indisposed as you say, you seem to be the only purveyor of magic at our disposal, so you should stop and see him.”

“Zurfina isn’t already being paid for that too, is she?” asked Senta.

“No.  This would be business between you and Mr. Staff’s coal company.”

“Ace.”

Mrs. Staff said goodbye and turned back toward her temporary offices.  Senta cut through the block, still forested but now criss-crossed with pathways made by people and lizzies.  The offices of M&S Coal Company were just outside of Town Square on the south side, across the street from Mr. Darwin’s shop.  She was less than fifty feet away when she suddenly ducked behind a tree.  Coming out of the front door of M&S Coal was Mr. Radley Staff, and with him was a fifteen year old blond girl.  With the exception of her clothes, which consisted of a long, confining rubber dress that went to her ankles and matched a pair of long black gloves, she was an exact copy of Senta.

“Kafira’s fanny!  She snaked that job right out from under me!”