Monthly Archives: April 2012
Visiting the Scene
The other night, I was visiting downtown Vegas for the first time in a while, and decided to stop at the locations in my book Blood Trade.
The top picture is not the location of Xochitl’s office on First and Harding (because there is no Harding in Vegas) but it is close to the area where the story takes place and is the kind of block described in the book. There used to be lots of such blocks downtown, but they have mostly been torn down now.
The second picture is Third and Carson, where Xoxhitl disposes of vampire bodies by dropping them in the sewer manhole. I labeled the manhole location for you. It was also a full moon that evening (this was taken at sundown), so I labeled that too.
I didn’t get a picture of the Catholic Church in front of which Xochitl fights a werewolf, though I did look at it as I drove by. Unfortunately it doesn’t have the beautiful garden full of wolfsbane in real life.
Kanana: The Jungle Girl — Cover Reveal
I’ve started working again on The Jungle Girl, which now has a new title and cover. The new title is Kanana: the Jungle Girl. I originally chose The Jungle Girl for its Burroughsesque quality, as it is a very Burroughsesque story and The Jungle Girl was one of the few of that type of titles that Edgar Rice Burroughs didn’t already use. However, there is always the possibility that this could become a series and the name Kanana has possibilities for a number of titles.
This story (or any jungle story) naturally borrows from Burroughs, but I’m trying to make it my own. The mythology of the background and the science fiction nature of the setting takes it in a very different direction than any such story and I think my main character is of a different character (and has a very different motivation) than the usual pulp heroes. His part of the story is one that Burroughs would never have written.
This is also a bit of an historical novel, with several historic people appearing as supporting characters. This includes, but isn’t limited to Theodore Roosevelt, whom I’ve always wanted to write about. I hope people will find him very lifelike, and I am making every effort to make him so. Most of his dialog in the book comes from the historic Roosevelt’s own words, either written or spoken.
The Drache Girl: The Finklers
Ada Finkler and her son Aalwijn are, like Hero and Hertzel, escaped Zaeri from Freedonia. Mrs. Finkler, a renowned cook, has set up a bakery and cafe in Port Dechantagne. She is mostly a background character, seldom actually seen but often referred to. Aalwijn on the other hand, becomes a fairly important character by the end of this book.
These characters did not appear in my orignial draft of the series. As I was writing The Voyage of the Minotaur, I threw in a single line about Mrs. Finkler supplying food for Zeah Korlann. Later, when I needed an eating establishment, I fleshed them out and they became regular characters. You will probably get a hint of why Aalwijn becomes important toward the end of this book, but you will clearly see it in the next.
The Dark and Forbidding Land: Terrence
This book covers part of the story that, when I originally plotted out the series, I had not intended to write. For Terrence it was both the time of his blindness and his marriage to Yuah. That being said, when I got around to writing it, I really had fun.
It was only a few minutes later when Zeah unhappily began the civil marriage ceremony for his daughter and Terrence Dechantagne, framed on either side by his secretary Cadence Gertz and young Saba Colbshallow. There wasn’t much to it, really. He asked Terrence if he would love and cherish, and then he asked Yuah if she would honor and obey. They both replied “I will”.
The Young Sorceress: Chapter 1 Excerpt
This human being was a teenaged female, and though biologists still debate whether velociraptors can distinguish between the sexes of mammals, others of her kind could immediately recognize her gender by the long flowing deep violet velvet dress, made more expansive by an extensive bustle over her rear end, and the long flowing blond hair held back by the deep violet velvet ribbon fastened on the side. Tens of thousands of other human beings could in fact identify this particular human female, because this particular human female was the young sorceress Senta Bly. She was hurrying home from the Hertling house where she had enjoyed afternoon tea. When she noticed the brightly feathered creature standing directly in her path, she flipped her hand toward it and muttered a single word under her breath. A bright blue ball of energy flew from her fingers to the velociraptor, which exploded into a puff of yellow, green, and black feathers. Its comrades disappeared into the forest.
The Drache Girl: Hero and Hertzel
Hero and Hertzel Hertling are twins who appear in Senta and the Steel Dragon. They first made a small appearance in The Voyage of the Minotaur, and by The Dark and Forbidding Land, they had become Senta’s good friends. The twins, along with Senta and Graham, form a core of characters for The Drache Girl.
In addition to watching the relationships of kids at school, I think I owe a debt to J.K. Rowling for the way these kids connect in the book. Of course in the later books their relationships change as they do for all of us in real life.
I have always like the name Hero for a girl, no doubt from my love of Shakespeare and A Midsummer Night’s Dream. I picked out Hertzel’s name from a baby name website. I just needed something to go with Hero. The twins are Zaeri, which is my fantasy stand-in for Judaism and they have escaped Freedonia, which is my stand in for the Third Reich. Hero is shy and delicate and I had plenty to draw on for her. I don’t know where I got the idea for Hertzel to be mute, but it just seemed to fit.
The Dark and Forbidding Land: Yuah
Terrence unwrapped his arms from her and took the gun, putting it back in the pocket of his great coat. They continued down the road. As they walked, he put his arm around her shoulder and pulled her close. Yuah looked back once to see that the deinonychus, now six, were still sniffing at their dead companion’s body.
The Dark and Forbidding Land is a high point for Yuah. As I’ve mentioned before, she has the most drastic story arc of the major characters and this is still just the beginning, but I so enjoy writing about her.
The Young Sorceress Now Available
Senta and the Steel Dragon Book 4: The Young Sorceress is now available for $2.99 at Amazon for the Kindle.
http://www.amazon.com/dp/B007QYA2P6
and at Smashwords for every other device.
https://www.smashwords.com/books/view/147884
You should see it appearing at Barnes & Noble, Kobo Books, iBooks, Diesel eBooks, Sony Bookstore, and other fine ebook sellers within the next two weeks.
The Dark and Forbidding Land: Mrs. Colbshallow
I was just telling my wife how much I love the minor characters in Senta and the Steel Dragon. Mrs. Colbshallow is one of those. She starts in Brechalon as the cook for the Dechantagne Family. In the first draft of The Voyage of the Minotaur, she was just called “Cook”. By The Dark and Forbidding Land, Mrs. Colbshallow has come to be the lizzie wrangler of the household.
“Excellent. You will make a fine majordomo. You may explain to the others anything that they might not understand.”









