Notes on Blood Trade

Blood TradeBlood Trade was the book I was never going to write– a vampire book.  I’m not even that interested in vampires.  I don’t find them sexy, intriguing, or usually even worth noting.  I appreciate what writers have done with vampires over the years.  I like Bram Stoker, Sheridan LeFanu, and Joss Whedon.  But I wasn’t going to write about vampires.

So every two weeks, on Tuesday, for weeks and weeks, I would go to my writer’s group– which at the time met at Border’s Bookstore.  They would give us a table and chairs in the middle of four counters filled with vampire books.  Finally I decided I would write a vampire book my way.  The vampires wouldn’t be sexy, or intriguing, or attractive.  They would be monsters– dark, scary killers.  I of course forgot that sometimes dark, scary killers have a sort of inherent attractiveness.

In the end, I finished Blood Trade and in some ways, it is my favorite book.  For one thing, I think it is one of my best plots.  Some of my stories have fairly simple plot lines and others don’t come off as well as I wanted.  Blood Trade does.  I also love the characters that I ended up with.  I say ended up with, because characters usually grow as I write them.  I think they almost always end up better than I expected.  If plots are my weak point,  I think characters are my strong point.

Xochitl McKenna: An Irish, African, Hispanic, Army Ranger turned stripper turned tattoo model turned private detective, with a deep hatred of vampires.  She started out pretty complex, but got more so as I wrote.  Anger, deep self-loathing, borderline alcoholism, and kleptomania.  And the best thing of all was that it fit so tightly in her back story that it made sense.

Lance Rizzello: Dirty cop, rapist, mob enforcer.  A complete and total sociopath who is out for no one but himself.

Dominic Zielinski: FBI Agent, former Navy SEAL, and someone with serious OCD.

I had three great characters, and I honestly thought about throwing out the vampires altogether, but I didn’t.  I started to write and the story got darker and darker with each chapter– so much so that I had to go back and rewrite the first four to make them fit the latter part of the book.  In the end, I couldn’t help adding a lovable vampire character.

Novelyne Cavendish: Vampire.  A tiny Irish woman, around 150 years old or so.  Hates drinking cow’s blood, so sticks with human.  Hasn’t killed any little children in months.

But to make my story work, even the good vampire had to be pretty evil– or at least pretty dark, at least sometimes.  So there you have some of my thoughts about Blood Trade.  I guess a writer telling you how much they like their own book is a lot like a cook telling you how they like their own food (I’ve been watching a lot of Gordon Ramsay this summer).  But if it sounds interesting to you, I would appreciate if you would read it.  You can find links in yesterday’s post, as well as the Books page.

And I would love to hear from you, what you thought of the book.  Drop me a line.  Thanks.

Blood Trade at iBookstore

Blood TradeVegas is going to hell– literally.  Werewolves run through the streets and the vampires are taking over.  Former army ranger/Goth tattoo model/private eye Xochitl McKenna doesn’t like it either, especially when it comes between her and her clients.  But are the vampires and werewolves the greatest threat, or is it something or someone much closer to her?  Warning: Adult Content.

Blood Trade is available wherever fine ebooks are found.  Get it now for your iPhone, iPad, or other iBooks device for just $2.99.  Follow this link for more info.

The Artificial Deadline

During the school year it was easy to explain whey I wasn’t getting as much writing as I wanted done.  I was working.  This summer, it’s not so easy.  That is not to say that I’m not getting more done than I was before.  I am.  I’m simply not getting as much done as I want. Some days I can sit down and whip out almost a whole chapter at one sitting.  Other days I struggle to get a paragraph done.  So, what do I need to do?

I’ve decided to give myself an artificial deadline.  I have a notebook in front of me, that has dates down the side.  In it, I keep track of what I’m working on and how much I’m writing.  I also keep track of book sales and story ideas in it.  So, I drew a dotted line across the page, just under 7-5-13.  I’m making that my deadline for finishing the draft of His Robot Wife: Patience is a Virtue.

I should be able to write that much.  I’ve only got about 12,000 words left.  I used to sit down and write that much in an evening back in college.  But then, back then, I had a deadline– a real one.  We’ll see if this gets me back on track.  Can’t hurt, right?

Women of Power for the nook

Women of Power NewThe life of a superhero is tough. All American Girl fights supervillains, alien invaders, and terrorists as she tries to get product endorsements and a magazine deal. That’s nothing compared to her private life though. She’s only just broken up with her super boyfriend Perihelion when he’s scooped up by Omega Woman, and now rival Skygirl has moved into her territory.

Women of Power is available for the nook digital reader and all nook apps at Barnes and Noble for just 99 cents.  Follow this link.

Broadband not so broad!

It's All Fun and Games until Someone Loses and iPad

At my house, we have the fastest/widest broadband pipeline that our local cable provider offers.  We need it.  We’ve got three computers, three tablets, two smartphones, two game machines, and two set-top boxes that all need internet connectivity.  And usually, it’s pretty good.  That doesn’t help however when there is a slowdown for the entire area.

We’ve been experiencing such a slowdown this weekend.  Our Netflix and Hulu plus keep stopping to buffer.  My pages don’t load completely on my web browser.  All that is bad enough, but local businesses are affected too.  It took forever to get gas the other day and at Subway, their register just completely gave up trying to take my gift card (a present from a student who says I’m “the bestest teacher ever”).  I ended up getting three footlong subs for free, but it didn’t make me happy.  I just felt kind of embarrassed about it.

Boy, I hope they get whatever transmitter or wire or server or whatever that is down, fixed soon.  I’m not afraid to admit it.  I don’t want to live a simple unplugged life.  I need running water and I need broadband!

Update: Patience is a Virtue

PatienceI finished writing chapter 12, and just like the last chapter, it took me five days.  That is it took me five days, if you consider writing away at 2:30 in the morning of the sixth day, to still be in the fifth day.

Unlike the last chapter, everything that was supposed to happen in this chapter did.  Well, almost.  A little dialog planned for chapter 12 has gotten pushed back to chapter 13.

I was also lying in bed last night and came up with a different way to do a particular plot point.  I had originally envisioned something happening a certain way, and now I’ve decided to change that.   Looking back on it, I think the original idea was kind of stupid– even though I was basing it on real events.  I think I would have been ‘jumping the shark’ for Patience and Mike, and I don’t want to do that, because lately I’ve been coming up with some other story ideas for them.

Anyway, three to four more chapters to go, depending on how they play out.  I’ll keep you updated.

Tesla’s Stepdaughters for Kindle

Tesla's StepdaughtersIn a world where men are almost extinct, someone is trying to kill history’s greatest rock & roll band. Science Police Agent John Andrews must negotiate a complicated relationship with Ep!phanee, the band’s lead singer; drummer Ruth De Molay, bassist Steffie Sin, and the redheaded clone lead guitarist Penny Dreadful, as he protects them and tries to discover who wants to kill the Ladybugs.

Tesla’s Stepdaughters is available at Amazon for the Kindle and all Kindle apps for just 99 cents.  Follow the link to Amazon.

Princess of Amathar at the Sony Reader Store

Princess of AmatharMysteriously transported to the artificial hollow world of Ecos, Earth man Alexander Ashton finds himself in the middle of a millennium-long war between the reptilian Zoasians and the humanoid Amatharians.  Adopted by the Amatharians, Ashton must conform to a society based on honor and altruism, ruled by Knights whose power comes from the curious energy forms known as “souls” which inhabit their supernaturally powerful swords, and rife with its own peculiarities and prejudices.  When the Princess of Amathar, whom Ashton has longed for since first seeing her, is captured by the Zoasians, he must cross an alien world, battle monstrous creatures, and face unknown dangers to save her.  Princess of Amathar is a sword-swinging novel of high adventure in the tradition of Edgar Rice Burroughs.  It is the story a strange world filled with alien races, aerial battleships, swords and energy weapons, amazing adventures and horrible dangers, and the man who must face them all for the love of a woman he has never met.

Princess of Amathar is available at the Sony Ebook Store for $2.99.  Sony ebooks are epub format, suitable for Sony Readers and other digital book readers that use epub.

The Indie Book Movement

Saffina Desforges is a writing team that I have been following for a while; a pair of now successful indie authors.  Follow the link to the Saffina Desforges website to read the story of how indie authors (or any authors) are treated by traditional publishers and agents.  You will quickly see why the indie author movement has been gaining steam.

And here is a link to the UK’s Register, describing how in indie books account for 12% of the ebook market.  It goes on to say that most are rubbish.  I would not dispute that there is a lot of crap in the indie book market.  On the other hand, traditional publishers have given us (at least) three books about Snookie.  Well done indeed!

Details and Layers

The Sorceress and her LoversOne of the things I’m doing this summer is going back through the Senta and the Steel Dragon series and creating an encyclopedia of the world.  I’m going to include this as an appendix in future editions, and I’ll post it here too.

While doing that today, I discovered something in Book 1: The Voyage of the Minotaur that I had forgotten.  Senta (the nine year old sorceress’s apprentice) appears in two scenes with Lieutenant Baxter (young naval officer).  I had remembered one of them and used it in a flashback scene in Book 4: The Young Sorceress.  The other, I had completely forgotten about.

Why is it important?  In The Sorceress and her Lovers, Senta ( the 21 year old sorceress) is involved in a sexual relationship with Baxter (the thirty something former naval officer).  Plenty of women in their twenties are married or engaged to men in their thirties, but it adds a different (uncomfortable) element, when they knew each other when she was 8 and 9.  That’s something worth exploring.