Update: Blood Moon

Update: Blood MoonI’ve been reading some of my partially completed manuscripts, trying to get a feel for what to work on next.  I’m really dedicated to getting the next robot book done and I was cruising pretty well through 89 Eridani before I sat it down to complete said robot book and Astrid Maxxim.  Still as I was reading through the first part of Blood Moon, I really felt it compelling me to get back to it.

I think the first chapter of Blood Moon may be the best chapter I’ve ever written.  It’s definitely the best first chapter I’ve ever written.  It’s not the language or the writing, but the story and the characterization and the ideas.  There is a lot of wow factor stuff in it.  A big surprise in where and how we find our heroine and what she’s doing, an immediate rush of action, and one of my favorite new characters that I’ve created in a long time.  Plus it’s got vampires, werewolves, and zombies right in the first chapter.

I definitely intend to get back to this book before the end of the year.  Of course, I’ll keep you posted of my progress right here.

What Needs to Get Done

Patience is a VirtueOne of my main goals is to be at least partially supported by my writing by the time I retire from teaching.  Last year, my wrinting was responsible for about 5% of my net income.  In some ways that’s more than I ever could have hoped for, and I can’t help but be very happy.  But I’m going to have to drastically grow that amount within the next six to seven years.

I’m going to do that by building my name as my brand,  following simple but effective marketing, and most of all by getting some writing done.  When people read a book and they like it, they need to be able to find another book by that author.  They also need to find one that they like as much as the first.  For that reason, I have to get writing.  I’ve gotten really good at getting caught up on the extra stuff that comes with writing– researching, edition, designing, promotion, this blog.  Now that I have some real time, I need to get writing.

So what are the dates I’m shooting for?  If I follow my current speed:

His Robot Wife: Patience is a Virtue — August 5, 2013

82 Eridani: Voyage — November 25, 2013

The Sorceress and her Lovers — April 14, 2014

That’s not good enough.  Not only was I expecting to finish The Sorceress and her Lovers in 2013, I was expecting to finish Blood Moon too.  I got to kick it into gear.  The writing is the thing.

His Robot Girlfriend at Smashwords

His Robot GirlfriendMike Smith’s life was crap, living all alone, years after his wife had died and his children had grown up and moved away. Then he saw the commercial for the Daffodil. Far more than other robots, the Daffodil could become anything and everything he wanted it to be. Mike’s life is about to change.

His Robot Girlfriend is a science-fiction love story.  It has been downloaded more than 450,000 times.  You can get your ebook (in a variety of ebook formats) free by following the link below to Smashwords.

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The Amathar Sequel

Princess of AmatharPrincess of Amathar was my first book and it took a long time to write.  It’s not my best work probably, but it gets more positive reviews than negative.  I’ve had a sequel in the works forever.  There are about five or six chapters done.  I decided to look them over today and found them in a mess.  The formatting is all crazy and the text is scrambled in some places.  I guess it’s been so long since I worked on it, that it’s moved across several different word processing programs and computer formats.  If and when I get back to it, it’s going to take quite a bit of work to get it into any kind of shape at all.

Originally, I had planned a whole series of Amathar books, patterned format wise after Edgar Rice Burroughs’ Mars series, for which Amathar is an homage.  This first sequel would be Knights of Amathar.  I don’t know what the others might be… Priests of Amathar?  Swords of Amathar?  Something like that.

The Rewritten Chapter

Patience is a VirtueI told you the other day how I lost (or wrote over) a chapter of my book in progress The Sorceress and her Lovers.  I felt like I had to rewrite that piece before I could go on to anything else, so I sat down and over the past three days, I’ve finished it.

The problem is, it’s not as good as it was.  I don’t have the original with which to compare, but I remember it as being better.  The new version is longer and has more characters.  It did what I wanted the scene to do.  But I just can’t help feeling it was much better before.

Well, I’m not going to work on it more now.  It’s set aside at least until I finish the His Robot Wife: Patience is a Virtue, and possibly until 82: Eridani– Voyage is done.  By then I’ll have enough perspective hopefully to rewrite it and make it as good as the original.

Dealing with Stress

It’s been a very stressful week.  It was so stressful that I thought I was having a heart attack and spent my weekend in the hospital… and then they told me I wasn’t.  And the worst part was that it was the weekend!  Just about everybody was surprised that I was back at work Monday, but the teachers out there know how it is.  I had a heart attack once (technically it wasn’t a heart attack, but I did have an angioplasty) and I missed one day of school.  You teach through the pain, through the tornado, through the gunfire.  You’ve probably heard many people talking with wonder at what teachers have done.  But you haven’t heard teachers talk about it much.  It’s just what they (we) do.

Anyway, back to the stress.  My last big duty as Yearbook Advisor is tomorrow: The Yearbook Signing Party.  Once that is over, I have just one more day of teaching and then three days of Exams.  Fortunately for me, that pressure is over– I’ve already had my exams approved weeks ago.  Some others aren’t so fortunate.  Now the stress is for the kids.  A group of them was taking it far too easy, not studying.  I told them that in four years they were going to wonder how come their GPA was so low, and that they should remember this day.  I said I wouldn’t remember, because by then I would be on an island beach somewhere eating pineapple off the brown skin of a mostly naked woman.  One smart alec asked “What about your wife?” I told him that she was welcome to come too.

That little story should tell you that I’m just a wee bit off the rails, but by this time next week, I’ll be relaxing (alas, no beach, no mostly naked woman– maybe some pineapple).  I’ll be relaxed enough and have free time enough to get some writing done.

DMCA Takedowns

It seems like every week anymore that I am contacting some web hosting site or another, asking them to take down copies of my books that are available for illegal download.  Usually it’s His Robot Wife, but not always.  This week it was The Dark and Forbidding Land.

The really upsetting thing about it is that I don’t think they are even really downloading my books.  I would take that as a sort of compliment.  But in most cases, it seems to just be a way to load up people’s computers with malware.  I don’t know what it is about my books that makes them a good choice for this, but as I really hate any type of malware, it’s upsetting.

And here is the call to action part of the post: get some anti-virus on your computer.  In the past, I’ve used and liked both Norton and McAfee, but my favorite is Kaspersky.  I had it on my PC and I bought the Mac version as the very first software purchase when I got my iMac.  If you don’t want to buy something, google “free anti-virus.”  There are some good programs out there free of charge.  For God’s sake, don’t go on the internet without a digital condom.

Astrid Maxxim and her Undersea Dome – Chapter 18 Excerpt

Astrid Maxxim 2The Hawaiian waters were crystal clear and even at a hundred feet below the surface the visibility was excellent.  Astrid looked down at the undersea dome, suspended on massive cables from the ship above, as she dove her mini-sub in a sweeping downward spiral.  She noticed a shadow passing her just as the radio popped to life.

“Astrid!” called Toby.  “Look up.”

The girl inventor leaned forward and looked up through the Plexiglas canopy of the mini-sub, to see the massive form of a humpback whale swimming above her.  The great beast paused for a moment and rolled over onto its side as though giving the strange man-made devices a good once-over, and then with a kick of its great tale, it swam away.

“That makes you feel tiny, doesn’t it?” said Toby.

“It sure does.  I didn’t expect to see any humpbacks.  Their season is just about done.”

They continued descending until both mini-subs reached the bottom edges of the dome, which thanks to preplaced guide wires, now rested snuggly in place on its foundation.  Astrid flipped on the external spotlight, even though at this depth it was still just light enough to see.  Using the manipulator arms, she withdrew a large nut from a container on the foundation and threaded it onto a massive bolt sticking up from the concrete through a hole in the dome’s titanium frame.  She did this twice more and then maneuvered to the next attachment point.  Toby did the same thing, starting on the far side of the dome, and between them they connected all twelve points.

“This thing is huge,” said Toby over the radio.

“It does look pretty giant down here, at least from the outside.  I’m wondering how big it’s going to seem from the inside.”

“All right.  Shall we go on up?”

“Let’s.”

They began spiraling upward, their propellers leaving a double helix of bubbles in their wake.  Halfway to the surface, a shadow passed overhead, and Astrid looked up expecting to see their humpback whale once again.  It wasn’t the whale though.  It was another submarine.  This craft was not a huge vessel like a US Navy sub, but it wasn’t a small one man sub like Astrid’s either.  It was about fifty feet long, longer than the humpback, but not quite as big around.  It was painted flat black, making it difficult for anyone on the surface to see it.  Suddenly as she watched, the unknown submarine tilted its bow down.

“What is that guy doing?” she said aloud.

“What was that, Astrid?” called Toby.

“Toby!  Look out!”

She realized what the strange submarine was doing, but it was too late to do anything about it.  The dark vessel’s turn had sent it on a collision course with Toby’s mini-sub.  Astrid could hear the loud crunch as the nose of the black undersea boat smashed into the little yellow vehicle.  The mini-sub flipped over as a huge cloud of bubbles burst from it and shot toward the surface.

Astrid steered toward the other two submersibles, watching in horror as Toby’s slid sideways toward the ocean floor.  The dark-colored sub accelerated away into the fading light.  Toby’s propeller came to a stop and the little vehicle finally came to rest in the silt on the bottom.  The girl inventor maneuvered next to him and, using her vessel’s manipulator arms, flipped him right side up.  Astrid’s heart leapt into her throat.  The Plexiglas canopy of Toby’s mini-sub had been cracked and water was quickly filling up the compartment.

“Toby, can you hear me?” she radioed, but she almost immediately realized that he couldn’t.  The incoming water must have shorted out the electrical systems.  That meant no radio and no power.

“Astrid to Toronto,” she called the construction ship.  “Toby’s in trouble.  His sub is disabled.”