My Writing: 2014

In early 2014, I finished and published The Sorceress and her Lovers.  This book had a lot of set up for an additional volume in the series, so I immediately got to work writing an outline for the next story.  It is the most complete outline that I’ve ever written for a book, with much more detail than I usually include.

I started immediately on the next Astrid Maxxim book: Astrid Maxxim and the Antarctic Expedition.  I got about three quarters of the way done, very quickly, and then ran out of steam a bit.  I struggled to get back into it.  I tinkered with 82 Eridani and The Jungle Girl for a while.  When I went back to Astrid, I found that I had totally goofed around my outline and the book was going to be way too long.  I reordered my chapters and trimmed out a lot of what I didn’t need.  Then I finished it.  Consequently it has one fewer chapter than all the other Astrid Maxxim books.

As I was editing Astrid Maxxim and the Antarctic Expedition, I decided that I would publish a book of poetry.  I have about 1,000 poems I’ve written over the years, so I gathered up those I had already decided were my best and put them in a single volume.  I struggled to come up with a name, eventually deciding on Desperate Poems.  Of course, as an unknown poet, it would have to be a free volume.

Once Astrid was finished, I started on a horror story called Love and the Darkness.  When I finish, its going to be a free story.  I got about 75% done, and is so often the case, ran out of gas.  I’m not overly thrilled with the story, so when I get back to it, it will have to be much revised.

While doing Love and the Darkness, I sat down and wrote a dream sequence for an Astrid Maxxim story.  I didn’t really even have a story in mind, I just wanted to get down this idea.  I was so thrilled with the little bit I wrote, I decided to continue on and wrote Astrid Maxxim and her Hypersonic Space Plane.  I think this may be the quickest book I’ve ever written, but I really like the story.  I contacted Matthew Riggenbach at Shaed Studios to do a cover for the book and went ahead and had him do one for the following in the series too.

About this time, I had a great idea for a robot book.  It wasn’t a Mike and Patience story, but could work in the same universe, so that’s where I set it.  This too was an easy book to write and I finished His Robot Girlfriend: Charity just before the end of the year.

Characters: Patience D. Smith

His Robot GirlfriendOf all my characters, none has gone through as much of a change between first draft and published work as has Patience Smith from His Robot Girlfriend. Originally she was a rather Amazonian figure, physically very imposing, but much more submissive. Some might argue that Patience is still submissive, but I think she’s not so much. When I rewrote the short pieces into a long story, she needed to have much more force of personality so that she could advance the storyline of forcing Mike to change. A college professor once told me the main character is the one in the story who changes the most– and that would be Mike.

When I started rewriting, I just wasn’t happy with her physical description, so I started completely from scratch, using a young woman I knew as a model– so yes, there really is a Patience out there. I observed her as carefully as possible (without seeming too creepy) so that I could describe her movements and gestures– like when Patience bounces on her tip-toes or incorporates dance moves into everyday movement. Since then, I’ve tried to find a human being to at least think about when I write my characters. Yes, I still know the young woman I patterned Patience after, and no, I never told her she was an inspiration.

My Writing: 2013

PatienceThe year 2013 was a tough one, in that I didn’t have as much time to write as I wanted.  Right after the first of the year, I started in on the second Astrid Maxxim book.  Looking back, it seems as if books 1 and 2 were right next to each other, but there was actually almost two years between writing the two.

As with the first book in the series, Astrid Maxxim and her Undersea Dome came relatively quickly.  The books are short, and though I try to make them more complex than they might at first seem, they aren’t overly complicated.  I was very happy with the final story though.

As soon as I was done with Astrid Maxxim, it was time to get back to Mike and Patience in the new robot book.  This one took me quite a while to write.  It was originally plotted at 80,000 words, but it was really slow.  Revising it took it down to just under 50,000 words. Many people wanted a new Patience story, so that’s what I was writing, but when I was done, I really wished I had focused more on the new robot Wanda.

When I was done, I spent months working on a new book series 82 Eridani.  I got about half of the first novel done, but kind of ran out of steam in it.  I really like what I’ve written so far, so I will get back to it.

Finally in the last part of the year, I started working on The Sorceress and her Lovers.  My wife asked me again and again to change the title, but I just liked it and thought it fit the story.  Of course it doesn’t have a great deal of sex in it, so it might be a bit misleading there, and the reader has to figure out who the other lover is.

Characters: Senta Bly

The Price of MagicSenta Bly is the title character from the Senta and the Steel Dragon series.  The funny thing about Senta is that I never intended to write a book about her, let alone make her the main character in a series. Here now, I’ve chronicled her life from age 6 to 24, in eight books.  I originally wrote a description from her viewpoint that was supposed to showcase the setting of Brech City. When I eventually plotted out the trilogy that would become books 1, 3, and 5 of the Senta and the Steel Dragon Series, she took on more and more importance. When I added books 0, 2, and 4 to the mix, the entire story really became her story.

I’m looking forward to completing The Price of Magic summer and am already thinking about the next book in the series.  I won’t get started on that until at least next year, but I’m already feeling the bug to write it.

Senta is precocious and self-confident. As she grows up she learns more and more magic and discovers that she is a powerful sorceress. One of the most fun things about writing this series is that the characters are so inter-connected. Senta has relationships of one sort or another with more than a hundred major and minor characters. Hopefully this diversity makes her as much fun to read about as she is to write about.

My Writing: 2012

The Young Sorceress (New Cover)I had been putting off writing the book to go between the already completed volumes three and five of Senta and the Steel Dragon.  But at the end of 2011, I finally started.  I varied the formula a bit from previous books.  Instead of following a single character for an entire chapter, I flipped back and forth within a chapter.  The result was that I went wildly off my outline, and by the time I was done, I was exhausted and not very pleased with the final product.  Going back and reading The Young Sorceress though, I like it better than I thought I did.

Once The Young Sorceress was done, I revised the long-finished The Two Dragons.  I changed very little except for the final chapter which was entirely rewritten, and the long epilog I had originally written was removed.  I had decided by this time that I might want to continue the series at a later date, so the epilog had to go.

By the time I finished these two Senta books, I was feeling quite heavy.  I thought I would write something light. I dusted off my manuscript of The Jungle Girl and wrote several new chapters.  I even created a new cover for it.  Then I just became unhappy with it.  I went back and changed it from a first person story to a third person narrative, but in the end, I put it back in the proverbial drawer.

I had long thought about writing another Eaglethorpe Buxton story.  I started in on Eaglethorpe Buxton and the Queen of Aerithraine, which is kind of a continuation of the two previous stories.  By the time I was done, I had not only thought of two more stories, but I decided to publish them all together as a five book set.  The Many Adventures of Eaglethorpe Buxton was published just before Christmas.

 

Characters: Mike Smith

His Robot GirlfriendThe story that became His Robot Girlfriend consisted originally of some short flash fiction and the characters were not very well developed. When I decided to turn it into a book, I completely rewrote it, adding an ending. I had to turn some cardboard people into real characters. In the case of Mike Smith, I just decided to make him– me. He was a school teacher, about five years older than me, when I started, and instead of being happily married with two kids, he was a widower with two surviving children. Personality-wise, language-wise, and description-wise, he’s about as close to me as I could get. As I neared the end, I started feeling a little uncomfortable that he was so much like me, and I began working in little things that made him at least somewhat different. In the end, physically at least, Mike changes quite a bit. Patience really gets him into shape.  Sadly, this has not been a case of life imitating art.

My Writing: 2011

I knew that if any of my books was likely to capture attention, it would be His Robot Wife. His Robot Girlfriend was being downloaded by the thousands each month, despite not being my best work. So I really worked to finish a book that was much better written than the original. I also for the first time had letters from over a hundred people who had questions or suggestions about a sequel to His Robot Girlfriend. That was pretty strange– that kind of feedback was definitely new to me. I spent the end of 2010, and the beginning of 2011 finishing it.  I hoped that by the end of the year it would have sold 8,000.  The sales were a little short of that– just over 4800.

One of the fun things that I noticed at the beginning of the ebook revolution was that people were making and publishing their own superhero stories in series form.  They created covers for them and used existing DC and Marvel heroes.  I thought I would try my hand at it, but wanted to create my own characters.  I wrote the first two chapters and posted them on Feedbooks in 2008, but stopped as I got busy with other projects.  Then in 2011, I picked them up and turned the story into a novella, which I finished and published.  Women of Power was a play on the term “women of color” which was in the news a lot at the time.  Women of Power was a lot of fun to write.

I had been meeting every two weeks with my writers group.  At the time, we met at Borders.  They set up a table for us in the corner of the store.  Then one day, they moved us to between two massive counters of vampire novels.  One of the members suggested I write a vampire story.  I said that my type of vampire story wouldn’t sell.  The more I thought about it though, the more I wanted to write it.  I started on Blood Trade and got more and more dark as I went.  About halfway through, I went back to the beginning and just went totally dark.  And as I predicted, it doesn’t sell.

I finished Blood Trade and wasn’t quite ready to jump back into Senta and the Steel Dragon, so I was looking around for something to write.  I was telling someone that Princess of Amathar was based on the Burroughs books that I loved.  Then I mentioned that before them, I was reading Tom Swift Jr.  I thought I should write my own books like that.  I sat down and thought about all the things I loved about Tom Swift and all the things I didn’t like about the stories.  Then I plotted out the characters and came up with about twenty possible story lines.  Astrid Maxxim was born.  I sat down and wrote Astrid Maxxim and her Amazing Hoverbike in almost no time at all.  I hired Matthew Riggenbach at Shaed  Studios to create a cover (Astrid Maxxim books are the only covers I haven’t done myself).

Finally, I couldn’t put it off any longer.  I got back to Senta and the Steel Dragon

Characters: Norar Remontar

Princess of AmatharSince Princess of Amathar is very much an homage to A Princess of Mars by Edgar Rice Burroughs, it’s no surprise that the warrior alien is very much inspired by Tars Tarkas. Norar Remontar is a proud knight of the city of Amathar and befriends Alexander rather grudgingly. But once befriended, he is true till the end. I created the Amatharian names with an idea that they would be very difficult to say aloud– I’m not really sure why.

My Writing: 2010

Tesla's StepdaughtersBy 2010, I had mostly given up on traditionally publishing the Senta and the Steel Dragon books. I entered the Voyage of the Minotaur in the Amazon Breakthrough Novel Contest, and though it made it to round two, it was very disappointing. I was very unhappy with the feedback I got from the publishers who were evaluating the books for that contest. Some of the criticism was valid, but some I felt was very mean and some was just incorrect.

I decided to publish it myself and did. I also decided that Senta and the Steel Dragon shouldn’t just be a trilogy, but a series. The three books I had written (as one long one) took place three to five years apart. I thought I should write books to fill in the void. So my original three books became:

Senta and the Steel Dragon Book 1: The Voyage of the Minotaur
Senta and the Steel Dragon Book 3: The Drache Girl
Senta and the Steel Dragon Book 5: The Two Dragons.

The titles were fairly easy.  The Voyage of the Minotaur is exactly what most of that book is about.  It’s also a bit of a tribute to The Voyage of the Dawn Treader.  Likewise, The Two Dragons featured two dragons, and was a bit of a tribute to The Two Towers.  Of course, when I later revised it, I added a dragon so there are more than two dragons in the book.  But then, there are more than two towers in The Two Towers.  The hardest title was the middle book.  For a long time, it was The Sorceress’s Apprentice, but my wife thought it might be confused with The Sorcerer’s Apprentice.  I like The Drache Girl as a title, but I might reuse the original in a later book.

I sat down and wrote Senta and the Steel Dragon Book 2: The Dark and Forbidding Land. It was a real challenge making it fit between two already completed books, but I think it worked well.  It is one of my favorite books I’ve written.

I finished it and published book 2, then revised book 3 again and published it.

I also decided that I would write a quick and short little prequel and so Senta and the Steel Dragon Book 0: Brechalon, was done.

I started in on a book very much in the vein of Edgar Rice Burroughs called The Jungle Girl.  I got about a fourth of the way in and just lost focus.

In the meantime, I was playing a lot of Rock Band on my Wii. This inspired a story that just popped right out of me, seemingly without much effort on my part. It became Tesla’s Stepdaughters.  Originally the band in the story was named Tesla’s Stepdaughters.  I later changed it to The Ladybugs, so I had to come up with something to explain the title, so Tesla’s Stepdaughters became a song The Ladybugs sing.

So, I had five books published in 2010, and I started having visions of dozens of Wesley Allison books or even scores. It was then that I created a new goal for myself: write as many books as Edgar Rice Burroughs before I die.  23 Down, 61 to go.

I spent the last part of the year working on His Robot Wife, a book that I had high hopes would sell well, due to the popularity of His Robot Girlfriend.

Characters: Alexander Ashton

Princess of AmatharI thought I would spend some time talking about my characters over the coming weeks. My first character was Alexander Ashton. It’s been so long ago, I don’t remember where his first name actually came from, but I think it was probably from Alexander the Great. His last name was from a young lady I used to work with, who was one of my first beta readers.

Alexander is a hero in the vein of John Carter and other Edgar Rice Burroughs heroes. He is strong and rediculously formidable in battle, and also very intelligent, but makes the occassional rediculous mistake or assumption that leads to him into danger.  He is very fun to write, and Princess of Amathar is from his first person viewpoint.  Although he frequently expresses doubt about himself, one gets the impression that he seldom really doubts.

I started on a sequel to Princess of Amathar, but at this point I don’t know if I’ll ever finish it or not.