Previews: Part 1

Astrid Maxxim book 2 is about 60% done.  Since these books are quite short, I’m still pretty confident that I will be able to finish this one before the end of the year.

I have a lot of plans for Astrid and her friends and I’d really like to be able to do one of these books a year for the next few years.  We’ll see.

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I am reducing my Facebook footprint a bit.  This is the result of several things, one of which is an upcoming law in Nevada regarding teachers and social networking.  I am limiting my personal facebook friends to close relatives and friends.  If you would like to keep track of me on Facebook, please do so by “liking” my Author Wesley Allison page.  You can find it by typing “Author Wesley Allison” into the search window at the top of any Facebook page.  Thanks.

My Favorite Bits: More Astrid Stuff

I’ve only just begun detailing Astrid Maxxim and all her friends in Maxxim City, but I have a very clear idea about what her world is like.  I am trying to evoke a world that is futuristic and yet is nostalgic, like the 1960s versions of the future from classic sci-fi, and of course my memories of reading Tom Swift.

When Astrid’s friend Austin (who is the only one of the gang who didn’t grow up in Maxxim City) stays over, he is surprised to find that Astrid doesn’t have his favorite video games– Killer Pimp Showdown and Cannibal Apocalypse.  She plays Tetris and Ms. Pacman.

When Astrid wants to plan an escape, she watches both Chicken Run and The Great Escape.  I thought this was pretty funny because of course, Chicken Run is a take-off of The Great Escape– and both are great movies.  (I love Aardman).  Astrid’s favorite move is Princess Mononoke.  (I love Miyazaki too).  I wouldn’t say Princess Mononke was my favorite movie, but it would be in my top ten list.

In case you’re interested, my list of 10 favorite movies might look something like this… in no particular order…

Lord of the Rings Trilogy (It really is one movie)

Star Wars Trilogy (The real one.  It’s not one movie, but oh well)

Snow Falling on Cedars

Princess Mononoke

The Incredibles

Romeo and Juliet (1962)

Love Actually

Silent Running

The Iron Giant

The Reader

The Young Sorceress Characters: Iolanthe

Iolanthe is such a great character.  I love it when people tell me what a bitch she is.  In a way, she and Zurfina are just alike– totally interested in their own machinations, unsympathetic toward anyone else, powerful, determined, and unforgiving.  On the other hand, while Zurfina’s goals  are always completely self-serving, Iolanthe’s are a bit more complicated.  She is determined to see her family rise to power.  And she and Zurfina fall at either end of the order/chaos scale.

In this book, Iolanthe plays a relatively small role, but we can see that she sees Senta for the first time as an asset at her disposal.  She also has to deal with Yuah’s problems.  Something that continues into book 5.

 

My Favorite Bits: From Astrid Maxxim

There are a lot of little bits that I had fun creating in Astrid Maxxim and her Amazing Hoverbike.

Rachel Carson High School: I wanted Astrid’s school to be named for a female scientist, but I wasn’t sure which one.  The first draft had Marie Curie High School, but that was a bit too on the nose.  There were several other possibilities, but I’m happy with the final version.  Rachel Carson is one of the great unsung heroes of the last millennium.

Bike Paths and Monorails: The kids in the story are too young to drive, but they get around on bike paths and in the Maxxim monorail.  This gave me the kind of 50s retro-futuristic feel that I wanted.  It’s just fun, too.

On the other hand, Maxxim City is supposed to be super-technologically advanced, so they can’t just use the same NEMA-1-15 and NEMA 5-15 electrical plugs you find in your walls at home (or the European equivalents).  I wanted them to have something like a thunderbolt plug, but one which would carry both high voltages as well as data, hence the Excalibur outlet.

When I originally wrote the story, the hoverbikes were all sleek and futuristic, but I loved the cover design done by Matthew Riggenbach at Shead Studios.  So, I rewrote it so that Astrid’s hoverbike was a retro-design in orange.  Now it matches the cover picture and it adds a little something to Astrid’s character.

The Two Dragons: Chapter 9 Excerpt

“Great Leader Khassna, Lord of Tsahloose, son of the Lords of Tsahloose unto a dozen generations, chosen of Hissussisthiss for his worthiness, leader of warriors and august in his citizen’s eyes.  I show unto you, your guests Radley Staff, general of the colonial guard, former under-leader of a great ocean vessel whose name is Ghiosa, and chosen of the Governor of their colony.  He has conveyed his finest traders and scholars to dialog with yours.  And he has conveyed Senta the great sorceress, consort of the witch-demon Zurfina, and High Priestess of the false god Yessennar.”

“Figures I’d get left out of the introductions,” whispered Wissinger.

“You’re not left out,” replied Manring.  “You’re one of Staff’s finest scholars.  What am I—chopped liver?”

“I’m happy not to be mentioned at all,” said Bratihn.  “Especially not in association with a ‘witch-demon’.”

The Great King stood up from his throne and slowly stepped down from the dais to stand before Staff.  He was tall and massive, as indeed all the dominant lizardmen seemed to be.  Unlike every member of his species ever seen by the humans from Port Dechantagne, his skin was not mottled and bumpy, but was perfectly smooth.  In those few places that were not completely obscured by body paint; his skin was a uniform shade of emerald.  The rest of it was painted in zigzag designs of teal and red and pearlescent white.  Around his wrists and ankles were dozens of bands of gold, silver, and copper, around his neck many necklaces of precious stones.  He wore a headdress with bright red, white, and teal feathers poking up and long braids of colored strings hanging down behind his head.  He placed his hand on his throat, palm out, in greeting.  He spoke in the native language.  Though the envoy translated, most of the humans already recognized it as a greeting.

Staff raised his hand in a similar gesture and bowed as well.

“On behalf of the King Tybalt III of the United Kingdom of Greater Brechalon and the Governor Iolanthe Staff of Port Dechantagne, thank you for your welcome.  We have come hoping that our peoples can share knowledge, wealth, and prosperity.”

Khassna spoke again, and the envoy translated.  “You shall stay as our guests while here.  Your cousins originating in the ancestor land also have arrived at Tsahloose to share their great skills.”

Staff nodded thoughtfully.  Then he reached into his backpack and pulled out a small oak box with brass fastenings.  He carefully opened the box, folding its top back on its hinges.  Inside sat a bird, covered with real feathers and with a sprightly green tail, but with a golden beak and lifeless eyes.  Senta marveled.  It was not exactly like the little mechanical bird she had seen so long ago in the toy store window, but it was alike enough to have been made by the same craftsman.  Staff handed the opened box to Khassna.  As the chief took it, Staff whispered something.  The bird began to whistle and flap its wings.  A low hiss was heard around the room.

“I thank you for this gift,” said Khassna, through his translator.  “Wait here on our left.  Later, you shall go to your house in Tsahloose, where you can relax.  When the sun rises, we will talk again.”

Staff, Senta, and the others gathered in a group at the left of the dais.  They watched as other groups of visitors, one after the other, stepped forward from their places on either side of the hall.  Each group presented the great king with its own gift.  Most of what was said between subject and king went untranslated for the humans from Port Dechantagne, though they could pick out most of the unusual dialect.  The gifts were uniformly magnificent.  There was gold jewelry, studded with precious gems.  There were ornate silver goblets and platters.  And there were long robes and capes fashioned from feathers.  Each time a group of lizzie notables presented the king with a gift, he formally thanked them.  Only once, when he was presented with a small golden box filled with some kind of spice, did he react on a more personal level, embracing the giver.

After all the lizardmen present had given their gifts and paid their respects, the men from Freedonia stepped forward.  With the same stiff military posture they had shown when saluting Staff, they greeted the king.  The lizzie envoy who had translated lizard speech to Brech, now translated Freedonian to lizzie.  Between her studies and her friendship with Hero, who had been born in Freedonia, Senta had learned quite a bit of the language.

“Greetings to Great King Khassna from His Imperial Majesty King Klaus II of Freedonia.  We have seen that Khassna is held in great esteem for he has received many wonderful gifts, but we of the fatherland wish him to know that we respect him the most.”

The officer snapped his fingers and six men in the white duck jackets, trousers and vests that were the uniforms of seamen in the Freedonian navy ran out into the room, carrying three large wooden crates.  They sat the crates down in front of the king, opened them, and pulled pieces of equipment from the straw packing within.  One crate contained a black metal tripod, which was quickly set up to serve as a stand for the contents of the second crate—the latest model Freedonian water-cooled machine gun.  The third crate turned out to be full of ammunition belts, one of which the sailors removed and fed into the gun, pulling back on the lever action.

Khassna fairly jumped up and down with excitement, hissing out orders.  According to his apparent instructions, a group of five lizardmen ran out into the hall, near the door through which Senta and the others had entered.  The lizzie King sat down behind the machine gun and aimed it at his own warriors.  For their part, the warriors were either remarkably disciplined or unaware of what was coming, for they did not flinch or move.  With a flick of his clawed finger, Khassna sent a burst of machinegun fire which mowed all five warriors down in a bloody spray.

“Oh Kafira,” muttered Mr. Vever.

Tesla’s Stepdaughters: The Details

Speaking of Tesla’s Stepdaughters, as  I was the other day, got me thinking about the Ladybugs and their world.

One of the things I’ve learned (I hope) is that even though you go to a great deal of trouble to create the details of a fantasy or sci-fi world, you shouldn’t go showing it off unless it benefits the story.  I think this is one of the weaknesses of His Robot Girlfriend that makes me want to rewrite it.

There is a pretty large amount of detail about the Ladybugs and their music in Tesla’s Stepdaughters, but I tried to use only what I needed to be descriptive.  In editing, I cut back on the details of their concert playlists.  However, I created WAY more detail than is shown in the book.  I created every album of the Ladybugs career, every song on every album, who wrote each song, and who played what instruments on those songs.  I posted the details long ago on the blog, and if anyone is interested I’ll post them again.  I even put it out there in ebook format, but I took it down, as I didn’t want people to be disappointed that they weren’t getting a story.

All this is something that I’m being very mindful of as I write His Robot Wife: Patience is a virtue.  I have maps and diagrams and lists, but for the most part they will be for my own reference.  When I’m done with the book, I may post some of them here, but hopefully I’ve learned enough that I’ll just show off the important part (for the story) in the story.

The Young Sorceress Characters: Zurfina

One of the things about the sorceress Zurfina, who is Senta’s mentor, is that she is frequently gone.  Senta ends up raising herself to a large degree.  But in book 4, because we get to see where she is going this time, we actually get to see quite a bit of Zurfina.

I love Zurfina.  She’s one of my favorite characters.  She’s completely amoral, self-absorbed, vain, slutty, and extremely powerful.  Some of my favorite moments in all the books are scenes with Zurfina, and this book is no exception.

A cloth-bodied doll with a porcelain face lay back on the pillows at the top of her bed.  It looked remarkably like her, though it was not dressed as she was, instead wearing a flowery print dress with a straw hat that matched exactly what Senta had worn the previous day.  The doll shrugged, and getting up to its feet, wobbled its way to the foot of the bed.  The young sorceress went to the window and looked out at the birds while she ate her sandwich.  The branches of a large maple reached almost right up to the side of the house and a family of microraptors had built a sloppy nest just three or four feet from the window.  Soon it would have two eggs in it, but at the moment it was empty.  Before she even realized it, Senta had finished her meal and turned back around.  The doll, seeing her hands free, stretched its arms up in the air to signal it wished to be picked up.  The girl obliged and tucked it into the crook of her arm.

“I send you on an important errand and here you are, playing with dolls.” 

The sultry voice came from Zurfina, who was standing naked at the landing.   Senta couldn’t help noticing that her mistress possessed what she thought must be the perfect female form.  Curvy and bosomy, she might have been a model for a famous statue had it not been for the constellation of five large star tattoos, two below her clavicles, one around her navel, and one above each hip bone.  And one…”

“Fina!  There’s another star on your knee!”

“So there is,” said Zurfina looking down.

“Is there even a tattooist in Port Dechantagne?”

“Don’t be stupid, and don’t change the subject.  I count on you to take care of things here in Birmisia for me.  You’re thirteen years old now and you should be able to handle that.”

“I’m almost fifteen.”

“Really?  What year is this?”

“It’s the year of our Lord nineteen hundred five.”

“Really?  What month?”

“It’s Treuary 25th—just six days till a very important date.”

“Treuary… 1905…”  Zurfina looked up at the ceiling and tapped her chin with her fingers.

“Did you hear me?  Six days?”

“I have to go away for a while, Pet,” the elder sorceress announced.  “I’ll try to be back before the end of spring.”

Senta stared open-mouthed as Zurfina turned and ascended the stairs.  She could hear her climb two flights of stairs and she could hear the door to Zurfina’s study open and shut.

“Six days!” she called up.

My Favorite Bits: Maxxim Industries

I enjoy reading my own books.  I guess most authors do.  I’ve been blogging, and still am, about characters in the various books, but I thought I would start writing about all my favorite “bits” that I’ve put in my books– events and people inspired by things that happened in my life, things meant to illustrate a character that someone might have missed, and inside jokes (some there for the reader and some just for myself, until now).

My first item up is Maxxim Industries– the home of Astrid Maxxim’s lab and workshops.  Maxxim Industries has two inspirations– Swift Enterprises in the Tom Swift Jr. books, and Disneyworld.

In the Tom Swift Jr. books, Tom worked on the grounds of Swift Enterprises, a four mile square (as opposed to four square miles) complex of factories and airfields and laboratories.  Since Astrid is a Tom Swift-like character and the story is essentially my take on that type of book, she needed someplace similar.

I remember being fascinated by Disneyworld when I watched Walt Disney talk about it on TV when I was little.  Disneyworld, unlike Disneyland, is not just a theme park.  It’s basically an entire county in Florida (80,000 acres) run by the Walt Disney Company, with theme parks sure, but also private residences, a Disney police force and Disney fire department, and undeveloped land.

I wanted something more like Disneyworld for Astrid– some huge county-sized place, dotted with installations, so I sat down and mapped out 180,000 acres of the southwest, in a nondescript part of an undisclosed state.

Motivations: Blood Trade

I never really wanted to write a vampire book and I’m not a fan of Twilight (I read the first book and thought it was okay, but didn’t love it.)  Urban fantasy really isn’t my cup of tea either.  But my writers’ group used to meet in Borders and they would seat us right between two massive shelves of vampire books.  We would always joke with each other that we should all be writing one.  I always commented that my vampires wouldn’t be lovers.  They would be the bad guys.  I did finally relent and have a slightly good vampire, but she wasn’t really that good.

I started writing Blood Trade and got to the third chapter, when it took a really dark turn.  I was describing not the Vegas that I knew, but one that was in rapid decay as the forces of darkness took over.  I liked it.  So I went back and rewrote the first two chapters and the whole book got much darker.

I had originally planned my heroine Xochitl to be a goth girl, but as with the rest of the story, her background and character got MUCH darker.  I have to say, I really like how the story came out, but it is DARK.  I actually have the first two chapters of a sequel already written, but who knows when I’ll get to it.  After all, I’ve had the first few chapters of the Amathar sequel done for years.  I will say this though, the sequel to Blood Trade (assuming I ever finish it)  will be even darker than the first one.