Update: Patience is a Virtue

PatienceAs I’m writing this, it’s about 3:00 PM on Wednesday afternoon July 3.  I am exhausted.  About 2:00 this morning, I completed the first draft.  Now I just can’t find the energy to do anything.  Today, I’ll make some changes to the manuscript suggested by my writers group Tuesday evening, but I’m not going to seriously start the revision process until Monday (that’s tomorrow for you reading this.)

I have two main things that I will be especially looking at as I do my first revision pass.  The first is to make sure that I haven’t flipped from one point of view to the other.  This story is more from Patience’s point of view, but I know I’ve slipped in a few places and given the reins to Mike.  The second is to balance out how much sex is in the story.  In the first two books, there are some strong allusions to sex, but not a blow by blow, as it were.  This book has a couple of fairly descriptive sex scenes and one not so descriptive.  I have to decide how I’m going to play it.

Of course there are plenty of other changes I’ll have to make.  I need to get them all done before I start editing.

Keep an eye on this blog, because I will be giving out coupon codes for free ebooks as soon as it’s done.  Thanks to everyone who has stopped by or written to tell me how much they enjoyed the other books and how much they are waiting for this one.

The Value of Free

Mark Coker at Smashwords gave his yearly presentation about ebooks.  You can see it here.  One of the facts in the presentation was that free ebooks are downloaded about 91 times as often as ebooks that people have to pay for.  Therefore, free ebooks can be a great promotional tool for authors.  I can tell you from experience that this is the case.  So far, I have sold about 7,548 copies of His Robot Wife.  To date, His Robot Girlfriend has been downloaded 457,259 times.  I think that the downloads of His Robot Girlfriend help the sales of His Robot Wife, but I can’t be sure about that.  What I am sure of is that His Robot Girlfriend has pushed my name out there as a science-fiction author.  How else can I explain it when I see His Robot Girlfriend (undeserved as it may be) on lists of sci-fi books that include Fahrenheit 451, Hospital Station, I Robot, and other greats.

I have four books that are free downloads.  His Robot Girlfriend was written to be a free download.  I has between writing and editing the book that became Senta and the Steel Dragon books 1, 3, and 5.  I thought it would be a good idea to get my name out there and help drive interest in my writing.  That succeeded in spades.  Eaglethorpe Buxton and the Elven Princess was just written for myself.  I decided to post it later.  When the reception was positive, I wrote Eaglethorpe Buxton and the Sorceress.  I didn’t think about writing any more of his story for a few years.  Those three books are so widely available that they’ve kind of taken on a life of their own.  I wrote Brechalon as an introduction to Senta and the Steel Dragon, and though I’ve played with selling it for 99 cents, I’ve finally decided that it’s more valuable if it drives any sales of The Voyage of the Minotaur.

Over the years, I’ve offered other books free for limited times, just after publication or as part of the Smashwords biannual promotion.  I’ve been thinking about writing another free sic-fi book– a good possibility might be Nova Dancer– either free or free for a while.  Six months maybe or a year.  I have a while to think about that possibility, since Nova Dancer isn’t on my schedule yet.  The whole idea for me though is to make money in 8 to 10 years.  I certainly don’t mind making enough money to pay a bill or buy a new iPad now, but I’ve got a paycheck now.  Ten years from now I’ll be a retired teacher and a full time writer.  If giving away a book now, built up my reputation enough to ensure book sales in 10 years, that would be a really good thing.

Update: Patience is a Virtue

PatienceThur 6-27: I’ve been writing all morning, finishing chapter 13 and working my way through chapter 14.  Just two more after that.  Sometimes the number of chapters changes between the outline and the rough draft, but in this case, I think they will stay the same.  I’ve still got almost a week until my self-imposed deadline for the draft, and I’m feeling pretty confident about finishing.

I also just updated the Previews page with a better description of the book.  Of course, I’ll still have to work on that later, but the blurb is the last thing to worry about.

Sat 6-29: All right.  I’ve just finished chapter 14 and am already working on chapter 15.  It’s feeling pretty good.  Now I have to write “the big thing” that I have both been looking forward to writing and dreading at the same time.  It was supposed to be the end of chapter 14, but instead, it’s going to be near the front of 15.  Once I get that done, the rest will just fall together.

Mon 7-1: I’m already into the last chapter.  I finished 15 this afternoon and I expect to finish this chapter by the end of the day Tuesday.  Then it’s time for the first revision.

Notes on Blood Trade

Blood TradeBlood Trade was the book I was never going to write– a vampire book.  I’m not even that interested in vampires.  I don’t find them sexy, intriguing, or usually even worth noting.  I appreciate what writers have done with vampires over the years.  I like Bram Stoker, Sheridan LeFanu, and Joss Whedon.  But I wasn’t going to write about vampires.

So every two weeks, on Tuesday, for weeks and weeks, I would go to my writer’s group– which at the time met at Border’s Bookstore.  They would give us a table and chairs in the middle of four counters filled with vampire books.  Finally I decided I would write a vampire book my way.  The vampires wouldn’t be sexy, or intriguing, or attractive.  They would be monsters– dark, scary killers.  I of course forgot that sometimes dark, scary killers have a sort of inherent attractiveness.

In the end, I finished Blood Trade and in some ways, it is my favorite book.  For one thing, I think it is one of my best plots.  Some of my stories have fairly simple plot lines and others don’t come off as well as I wanted.  Blood Trade does.  I also love the characters that I ended up with.  I say ended up with, because characters usually grow as I write them.  I think they almost always end up better than I expected.  If plots are my weak point,  I think characters are my strong point.

Xochitl McKenna: An Irish, African, Hispanic, Army Ranger turned stripper turned tattoo model turned private detective, with a deep hatred of vampires.  She started out pretty complex, but got more so as I wrote.  Anger, deep self-loathing, borderline alcoholism, and kleptomania.  And the best thing of all was that it fit so tightly in her back story that it made sense.

Lance Rizzello: Dirty cop, rapist, mob enforcer.  A complete and total sociopath who is out for no one but himself.

Dominic Zielinski: FBI Agent, former Navy SEAL, and someone with serious OCD.

I had three great characters, and I honestly thought about throwing out the vampires altogether, but I didn’t.  I started to write and the story got darker and darker with each chapter– so much so that I had to go back and rewrite the first four to make them fit the latter part of the book.  In the end, I couldn’t help adding a lovable vampire character.

Novelyne Cavendish: Vampire.  A tiny Irish woman, around 150 years old or so.  Hates drinking cow’s blood, so sticks with human.  Hasn’t killed any little children in months.

But to make my story work, even the good vampire had to be pretty evil– or at least pretty dark, at least sometimes.  So there you have some of my thoughts about Blood Trade.  I guess a writer telling you how much they like their own book is a lot like a cook telling you how they like their own food (I’ve been watching a lot of Gordon Ramsay this summer).  But if it sounds interesting to you, I would appreciate if you would read it.  You can find links in yesterday’s post, as well as the Books page.

And I would love to hear from you, what you thought of the book.  Drop me a line.  Thanks.

The Artificial Deadline

During the school year it was easy to explain whey I wasn’t getting as much writing as I wanted done.  I was working.  This summer, it’s not so easy.  That is not to say that I’m not getting more done than I was before.  I am.  I’m simply not getting as much done as I want. Some days I can sit down and whip out almost a whole chapter at one sitting.  Other days I struggle to get a paragraph done.  So, what do I need to do?

I’ve decided to give myself an artificial deadline.  I have a notebook in front of me, that has dates down the side.  In it, I keep track of what I’m working on and how much I’m writing.  I also keep track of book sales and story ideas in it.  So, I drew a dotted line across the page, just under 7-5-13.  I’m making that my deadline for finishing the draft of His Robot Wife: Patience is a Virtue.

I should be able to write that much.  I’ve only got about 12,000 words left.  I used to sit down and write that much in an evening back in college.  But then, back then, I had a deadline– a real one.  We’ll see if this gets me back on track.  Can’t hurt, right?

Update: Patience is a Virtue

PatienceI finished writing chapter 12, and just like the last chapter, it took me five days.  That is it took me five days, if you consider writing away at 2:30 in the morning of the sixth day, to still be in the fifth day.

Unlike the last chapter, everything that was supposed to happen in this chapter did.  Well, almost.  A little dialog planned for chapter 12 has gotten pushed back to chapter 13.

I was also lying in bed last night and came up with a different way to do a particular plot point.  I had originally envisioned something happening a certain way, and now I’ve decided to change that.   Looking back on it, I think the original idea was kind of stupid– even though I was basing it on real events.  I think I would have been ‘jumping the shark’ for Patience and Mike, and I don’t want to do that, because lately I’ve been coming up with some other story ideas for them.

Anyway, three to four more chapters to go, depending on how they play out.  I’ll keep you updated.

The Indie Book Movement

Saffina Desforges is a writing team that I have been following for a while; a pair of now successful indie authors.  Follow the link to the Saffina Desforges website to read the story of how indie authors (or any authors) are treated by traditional publishers and agents.  You will quickly see why the indie author movement has been gaining steam.

And here is a link to the UK’s Register, describing how in indie books account for 12% of the ebook market.  It goes on to say that most are rubbish.  I would not dispute that there is a lot of crap in the indie book market.  On the other hand, traditional publishers have given us (at least) three books about Snookie.  Well done indeed!

Update: Patience is a Virtue

PatienceOkay, so at the pace I’m writing now, it’s five days to finish a chapter.  I just finished chapter twelve.

The funny thing (maybe) is that after I finished chapter 11, I looked at my outline and found that I hadn’t included anything that was supposed to happen in chapter 11.  So that means they happen in chapter 12, along with what was already going to happen in chapter twelve.  This is actually a good thing for me.  I sometimes feel that I don’t have enough going on in the story.  So, this next part should be good.

I’ll post an update when I finish chapter 12– hopefully in 5 days or less.

You can also see that I’ve tweaked the cover a bit, with a new font and by increasing the size of my Patience model.

Senta and the God of the Sky?

The Sorceress and her Lovers

I’ve been thinking about the next Senta book.  All right, I’ve even got a few chapters written, though I’m trying to get Patience done before I get sidetracked.  But I’ve been thinking about the series name.

As you know, if you’re reading this, Senta and the Steel Dragon is a five book series (plus a novella book 0).  It tells the story of Senta Bly, a girl who grows up to be a powerful sorceress and the steel dragon who grows up to be a powerful… you know, dragon.

I’ve plotted out a new series of five books.  I’m still playing with the individual titles, but the first will be The Sorceress and her Lovers.  This new series tells about the next phase of both Senta’s and the steel dragon’s lives.  Therefore I came up with the series title Senta and the God of the Sky.  I’ve been having second thoughts about the title though, not because it’s not a good or appropriate title, but because readers might be more likely to read the book if I just made it Senta and the Steel Dragon Book 6.

So what do you think?

Update: Patience is a Virtue

Patience is a VirtueI finished chapter ten of His Robot Wife: Patience is a Virtue today.  It’s plotted out at 17 chapters, so I’m well past the halfway mark of the draft.  I mentioned the other day that if I continue working at the present pace, I’d have it done near the end of August.  I certainly don’t expect to take that long.  I really want to kick it into gear.

I’m getting up each morning and getting some writing done.  Then during the day, I’m trying to get something else done each day– like work on cleaning my garage  or exercising.  Then at night, I do a bit more writing.  It seems to be working pretty good so far.  I’ll update again when I get to the end of chapter eleven and we can all see how long it took.

Of course, after I finish the draft, there is the inevitable editing, revision, and rewrite.  Still, it’s all good.