Women of Power: Chapter Three Excerpt

All American Girl looked up into the horrible, grinning face of the Atomic Jack-O-Lantern.  He didn’t speak.  He just stared at her with that frightful face and glowed with the radioactive energy that was even now, draining away her life energy.  Suddenly a blue and white streak hit the Jack-O-Lantern in the chest, knocking him away.  Stella took a deep breath and tried to refocus her vision.  She was so weak that it was difficult to even move up into a sitting position, but she could slowly feel the energy returning to her muscles.  A minute later the blue and white streak was back.  Standing over her like a blonde goddess was Skygirl.
“No fricking way,” said Stella.
“Here, let me help you up.”
“I can get up myself.”  Stella climbed to her feet.  Her knees felt like overcooked pasta.  “Where’s glow boy?”
“He’s gone.”  Skygirl brushed her honey hair back behind her ear.  “I hit him three or four times, but then he just kind of blinked and disappeared.”
“Yeah, he does that,” said Stella, looking sidelong at the other super.  “You don’t have your boots on.”
“I was just out for a walk,” said Skygirl.  “You know, in my secret identity.”
“Your what?”
“My secret identity.”
“You’re Linda Ford,” said Stella.
“Shh.  Not so loud.”
“It’s not a secret.  Anybody can Google you and find it.  It’s at the top of your Wikipedia page.”
“What are you so upset about?”
Stella put her hands on her hips. 
“Well first of all, my home got knocked down, and all my stuff is gone.  Then a glowing excuse for a Halloween costume tried to kill me, and you let him get away.”
“We’ll get him next time.”
“We?  There is no we.  There’s just me—me and Chicago—my kind of town.”

Women of Power: Now Available at Smashwords and Amazon

Women of Power is finished!  It’s already up at Smashwords and should be up at Amazon’s Kindle store by the time you read this.  You can follow the links at the bottom of this post and purchase your own ebook edition for 99 cents.  It should be available at iBooks, B&N, Kobo, Diesel, and Sony within the next two weeks.

Smashwords: http://www.smashwords.com/books/view/81899
Amazon: http://www.amazon.com/Women-of-Power-ebook/dp/B005HJR4TY/ref=sr_1_69?s=digital-text&ie=UTF8&qid=1313569849&sr=1-69

Women of Power: Chapter Two– Sort of…

As I mentioned the other day, Women of Power is almost done, so I’m just about ready to post some chapter excerpts. Rather than posting part of chapter two, I ‘m just going to give you the link to the original Women of Power Issue 2, which was the basis for chapter two of Women of Power, the novella. It’s gone under more revision that chapter one did, but you get the idea.  Check it out at Feedbooks.com by following the link:

http://www.feedbooks.com/userbook/7334/women-of-power-2

Tesla’s Stepdaughters now just $7.79 in Trade Paperback

Tesla’s Stepdaughters is now discounted in Trade Paperback format. Originally $9.99, now you can pick up your copy for only $7.79. There is no time limit and you don’t need a coupon, but you must purchase it directly from City of Amathar Press in order to get the discount. Follow the link below to the City of Amathar Press Print Shop.

http://www.lulu.com/spotlight/Amathar

Women of Power: Chapter One — Sort of…

Women of Power is almost done, so I’m just about ready to post some chapter excerpts.  Rather than posting part of chapter one though, I ‘m just going to give you the link to the original Women of Power Issue 1, which with very minor change, has become chapter one of Women of Power, the novella.  Check it out at Feedbooks.com by following the link:

http://www.feedbooks.com/userbook/6018/women-of-power-1

The Drache Girl– Now just $11.19 in Trade Paperback

The Drache Girl is now discounted 30% in Trade Paperback format. Originally 15.99, now you can pick up your copy for only $11.19. There is no time limit and you don’t need a coupon, but you must purchase it directly from City of Amathar Press in order to get the discount. Follow the link below to the City of Amathar Press Print Shop.
http://www.lulu.com/spotlight/Amathar

The Dark and Forbidding Land– Now just $9.79 in Trade Paperback

The Dark and Forbidding Land is now discounted 30% in Trade Paperback format. Originally 13.99, now you can pick up your copy for only $9.79. There is no time limit and you don’t need a coupon, but you must purchase it directly from City of Amathar Press in order to get the discount. Follow the link below to the City of Amathar Press Print Shop.
http://www.lulu.com/spotlight/Amathar

Revision and Editing

As I work on finishing Women of Power, just a bit about the revision and editing process.  As I write, I solicite alpha readers (friends, family, and members of my writers’ group) to give me feedback as I go.  I make major changes as I go along– adding, cutting, moving sections around.  When the entire first draft is done, I have my beta readers (often but not always the same people) go back to it.  At this point, I’m not editing.  I’m revising.  I’m looking for changes to be made in the storytelling.

Once I’ve got the manuscript the way I want it, I give it a few editing passes.  Editing is much harder to do on your own manuscript because you know it.  You’re very likely to skip over errors because you know what’s supposed to be there.  If possible, I have my crack team of grammarians go over the manuscript again.  My final pass uses the program Text2Go to read the manuscript aloud to me as I follow along in the text.  I’ve caught many errors that I missed and many that editors missed.

Once all that is done and my story is ready to go out, it’s a quick trip through the formatting machine (That’s me.  I format it myself.) and then it’s available to ebook lovers everywhere.

Women of Power – First Draft Finished

Women of Power is done; at least the first draft is done.  In fact, as I write this, I’m about a third of the way through the first revision.  It’s going quickly for reasons I’ve mentioned before.  This will definitely be out before the end of August.  After that I can work on revising Blood Trade– a much bigger job, both because it’s longer and because it’s rougher.

In the meantime, I’m about a quarter way through the first draft of Astrid Maxxim and her Amazing Hoverbike.  More details to follow.

Matt Damon Knows

Matt Damon defends teachers and knows what the hell he’s talking about.  I will be going to every movie he ever makes (I already see most of them).