Kanana: The Jungle Girl – Origins

The Jungle GirlI’ve worked on the book Kanana: The Jungle Girl off and on for about five years.  The original idea was to write another homage to Edgar Rice Burroughs.  I wanted to recreate the enjoyment I got reading The Cave Girl, The Eternal Savage, and of course Tarzan of the Apes.  That gave me the basis.  Of course it was The Cave Girl that had the female primitive matched up with the modern male.  This has been kind of my approach too, with Princess of Amathar, and for that matter, His Robot Girlfriend.  I also wanted to set it in a historic and adventurous time, so the early 1900s.  This also let me use Theodore Roosevelt as a character.  But where to set it?

I was hesitant to place the story in any real world setting, not the least because it would have required a great deal of research.  I didn’t want to emulate ERB by placing tigers in Africa.  I also wanted enough empty territory to place the cultures and lost civilizations of my own imagining.  Then I read a book called A World of Difference by Harry Turtledove.  In it, the author simply replaced the planet Mars with his own world.  I thought, “That’s it. I’ll just replace a continent on Earth with my own.”  So I used the lost continent of Mu as a basis, but let it be discovered by Sir Francis Drake, who named it Elizagaiea (as Virginia was taken by then.)

I based the concept of Kanana on a (Sumerian, I think) mythological female, who was literally a woman from the forest.  I had also had a student whose first name was Kanana.

Kanana: The Jungle Girl is currently available wherever fine ebooks are sold for 99 cents.

 

Falling Behind

My nine-year-old niece commented recently that she thought I must love math, because I had a notebook that was full of numbers and she couldn’t figure out what they were.  It was my tally/notebook.  I’ve set a goal for myself to keep up with my writing.  I’ve boosted my goal every year.  Currently it’s eight pages per day.  I keep a tally of how many pages I finish and try to stay ahead.  I also use the same notebook for my ideas, so it’s full of character names and so forth.  At the end of August, I was about 204 pages ahead of my goal.  Such is the results from having a surgery that prevents you from getting up out of your chair.  Now I’m only about 123 pages ahead.  If I keep this up, I’m actually going to be behind.  Plus, I’m going to increase my goal on January 1st.  Fortunately, this post counts as a page.  🙂  Now back to Patience and Mike and Lucas.

 

Astrid Maxxim and her Amazing Hoverbike – Chapter 19 Excerpt

Astrid Maxxim and her Amazing HoverbikeAstrid moved carefully around the side of the building as she struggled to come up with a plan. She noted that there was a door near where she now stood and that it swung freely on its hinges, the lock long since gone. She reached the front corner of the building, and looked around at the three vans. None of the men seemed to have stayed out to watch them. They were probably all leaving by plane, and since they had no more need of the vans, they weren’t thinking about them.

Astrid thought that if she could only create a diversion, she might be able to enter through the door and lead Valerie to safety. She rounded the corner of the building and ran stealthily to the closest van. Ducking behind it, she thought about the possibilities. Having worked for years with internal combustion engines, Astrid knew that cars didn’t just explode like they seemed to on TV. But there was one easy source of ignition in any vehicle.

Astrid looked down at her sandaled feet. What a time to go without socks. Pulling her shirt up over her shoulders, Astrid unfastened her bra and took it off, and then pulled her shirt back down. She edged around the van and slowly opened the driver’s side door, reached down below the dashboard, and pulled the hood release. The thunk that the hood made as it popped up about two inches was horrifyingly loud to her, but she waited several seconds and no one from inside the building seemed to have heard it. Moving to the vehicle’s front, she lifted the hood and propped it open. She quickly located the windshield wiper fluid reservoir, and opening the lid, stuffed her bra into it so that it was completely soaked. She pulled the bra back out and tossed it over the two terminals of the car battery. It sparked. By the time Astrid turned to run, it was already smoking. As she rounded the corner of the building, the van’s engine compartment burst into flames. Engine parts popped and hissed as they were destroyed by the fire. She heard yelling from inside the building.

Reaching the door and carefully peering in the window, Astrid was almost bowled over by Valerie as she came running out.

“Astrid?” the robot girl cried.

“Shush,” Astrid ordered her. “Come on!”

Taking Valerie by the arm, Astrid ran straight into the darkness, rather than trying to get directly back to the hoverbike. She thought that if she could reach the desert, they could circle around to the spot where she had parked. They hadn’t gone more than twenty steps though when shouts of pursuit followed them. It had really been too much to expect, Astrid realized, to divert the attention of all those eyes for more than a few seconds. Behind the first large desert bush, she ducked down, pulling Valerie down beside her.

“I’m so glad to see you, Astrid,” said Valerie in a whisper. “Is Toby with you?”

“No. I was getting tired of him horning in on my rescues, so I made him stay home this time.”

“There are two of them coming this way,” hissed Valerie.

“I’ve seen this on a hundred TV shows,” said Astrid, as she picked up several small rocks. “It’s time to see if it really works.”

She threw the rocks as hard as she could into the desert. The sounds of the rocks crashing into the brush were followed by a squeal and even more rustling sounds. The two men ran off in that direction.

“You must have hit an animal,” said Valerie. “I wonder what it was.”

“Probably a rabbit or a fox,” replied Astrid. “I hope I didn’t hurt it. Come on.”

They ran through the darkness, dodging and sometimes tripping over rocks or brush until they reached the area where Astrid had set down, but she didn’t see the hoverbike.

“Is that your new invention?” asked Valerie.

“Where?”

“Right over here.” Valerie led the girl inventor right to where the hoverbike sat. “It looks pretty neat.”

“Of course,” said Astrid. “I forgot that you had night vision.”

“I do?” wondered Valerie.

A Great Deal of Patience – Trilogy

A Great Deal of PatienceI’m hard at work on His Robot Wife: A Great Deal of Patience.  I’ve just finished another chapter, which puts me at roughly the halfway part of the rough draft.  While doing so, I have been expanding the greater story enough that I can tell you, A Great Deal of Patience will be the first book of a trilogy.  This trilogy will wrap up my ideas for Mike and Patience and their world (though that doesn’t mean I won’t write another book if I think of an idea.)  The books in the trilogy will be A Great Deal of Patience, (You knew that one) Patience Under Fire, and Extreme Patience.  I’m dedicated to getting this book done and working on nothing else until it is.  After that, I’d really like to finish some stories that I’ve got partially done, such as 82: Eridani, Nova Dancer, Love and the Darkness, and a Time Travel book of which I’ve written about a third.  Heck, maybe I’ll finish one of the sequels I’ve started: Amathar, Tesla’s Stepdaughters, or Blood Trade.  But!  None until I finish A Great Deal of Patience.

Astrid Maxxim and her Amazing Hoverbike – Update Available

Astrid Maxxim and her Amazing HoverbikeAs I’ve been rereading and posting excerpts of Astrid Maxxim and her Amazing Hoverbike, it have given me a chance to do a proof-reading sweep, looking for typos.  I swear I’ve found some that weren’t there before.  In any case, I’ve uploaded new versions of the book to all retailers.  If you have already purchased this book, you can pick up an updated version for free.  If you haven’t, give Astrid Maxxim a try.

From the 180,000 acre campus of Maxxim Industries, fourteen year old girl genius and inventor Astrid Maxxim works alongside her father, Dr. Roger Maxxim, on projects to make the world a better place. Her latest invention is a flying scooter—the hoverbike. Is it the target of an international spy ring, or are they after secret Project RG-7, or Astrid herself? Astrid has something bigger on her mind though—high school. There’s a field trip coming, and the Spring Fling is right around the corner… And does Toby like her as much as she likes him?

Kanana: The Jungle Girl – Available Now!

The Jungle GirlIn a world substantially different from our own world in 1913, former Rough Rider and adventurer Henry Goode crosses the vast ocean to explore the unknown continent of Elizagaea. Spurred on into the wilderness by emotional trauma, he finds vicious creatures from a bygone era, savage natives, long lost civilizations, and a mysterious jungle goddess.

Kanana: The Jungle Girl is available now wherever fine ebooks are sold for just 99 cents.

Astrid Maxxim and her Amazing Hoverbike – Chapter 18 Excerpt

Astrid Maxxim and her Amazing HoverbikeAstrid raced out the door, around the pool, to the pool house. Opening up the door, she found the hoverbike right where Toby had parked it. She hopped into the seat and pressed the power button. The hoverdisks hummed to life, gently lifting her and the bike up about a foot in the air. Pushing her foot against the doorframe, she floated the bike out into the back yard. Then pressing the accelerator and pulling back on the controls, she shot up into the air.

The hoverbike flew faster and higher than it had with two riders. Astrid easily shot over the Maxxim home’s three stories and gable roof. Making three ever widening circles around her immediate neighborhood failed to give any indication where the kidnappers might have gone, so Astrid decided to check out the most obvious route out of town.

The interstate highway ran north from Maxxim City toward the major metropolitan areas of the southwest. Astrid zipped over the tops of the carefully cultivated trees that covered the entire town and then over the low brush, scrub, and cacti that covered the desert. In the dark night, with only a sliver of moon showing, the cars on the highway were the only light sources. The highway wasn’t busy. It usually wasn’t. And most of the cars on the road were heading south rather than north. There were however three large vehicles in the distance, possibly vans, driving so closely together that they looked like they formed a convoy.

Astrid checked the speedometer. She was flying through the chilly night air at almost 50 miles per hour, a speed which made her a little queasy just thinking about it. Still, the three vans, like all the other cars on the highway would leave her behind in no time. Then, as she was watching, the three vehicles shot down an exit ramp and turned onto one of the roads running perpendicular to the highway. Astrid steered the bike toward the road ahead of them, realizing that she could make up some ground by taking the proverbial crow’s route.

The wind in her face had forced her to squint as she traveled at the hoverbike’s maximum speed, but as she turned east it lessened considerably. She decided she must now have a tailwind. Reaching into her pocket, she pulled out her phone and hit the preset speed dial for Toby.

“Astrid?” he answered. “Where are you?”

“I’m just east of the highway. I think I’m heading for state route 11. I’m following three vans that just turned onto the road. It’s got to be them. I can’t figure out why anybody else would be heading this way. There’s nothing but cattle ranches and open land out here.”

“The police are here, Astrid. They…”

There was a pause and another voice came on the line.

“Astrid. This is Police Chief Gillespie. You don’t need to do this…”

“Ack!” shouted Astrid, as something smacked her right in the forehead. She lost the grip on both the phone and the hoverbike controls. The bike dropped down about ten feet, but the automatic gyros stabilized the vehicle. Her phone though went tumbling down into the darkness below.

Astrid felt her forehead, and then felt herself start to gag as she wiped it off with her hand. A large bug had splattered against her, leaving most of its remains on her face and hair.

“Oh my gosh,” she said. “This is disgusting. Boy, am I glad I didn’t turn on the headlight.”

Astrid Maxxim and her Amazing Hoverbike – Chapter 17 Excerpt

Astrid Maxxim and her Amazing HoverbikeAstrid looked over at Toby.

“I’m sorry, but I don’t really feel like going to the dance,” she said.

“That’s alright. Neither do I. Maybe we could just hang out and watch a movie.”

“Well, you kids suit yourselves,” said Dr. Maxxim. “Mr. Toulson is here, so I know you’ll be fine.

Fifteen minutes later the Maxxims had gone. Astrid had changed into a clean shirt, jeans, and sandals and had joined Toby in the family room.

“I suppose everyone else is at the dance,” said Astrid. “I mean, except Austin.”

“Denise is going with Christopher,” replied Toby. “Bud Collins asked Valerie and I think she said yes.”

“What about Robot Valerie?”

“I don’t know. I don’t think anybody asked her. Maybe they’re afraid of her laser beam eyes.”

“Now I feel doubly bad,” said Astrid. “I feel bad for Austin because he’s in the hospital and I feel bad for Robot Valerie because nobody asked her to the Spring Fling.”

“Why don’t we invite her over here?” said Toby. “We could watch a movie.”

“Alright,” replied Astrid, taking out her phone.

She called and invited Robot Valerie over. Valerie promised to come and within twenty minutes, Mr. Diaz had dropped her off at the front door. Valerie’s’ skin and hair was the same shiny metallic as always, but she wore a grey sweater and a cute black and yellow striped skirt.

“Thanks for inviting me,” she said. “I was feeling kind of lonely. How come the two of you aren’t at the dance?”

Astrid and Toby took turns telling her of the day’s events.

“That’s terrible,” she said, upon hearing of Austin’s injury. “I hope he’s alright.”

“Me too,” said Astrid. “So anyway, that’s why we didn’t feel like going to the dance.”

“I didn’t really expect anyone to ask me,” said Valerie. “I was kind of surprised when Bud asked me… the other me… I mean, Regular Valerie.”

“Come on in the family room,” said Astrid. “We’re going to watch a movie. What do you guys want to watch?”

Raiders of the Lost Ark,” voted Toby.

“I was going to say Toy Story,” said Valerie.

“Okay,” said Astrid. “We’ll compromise and watch Princess Mononoke.”

“How is that a compromise?” asked Toby.

“It’s animated like Toy Story,” explained Astrid. “It’s also got fighting and mystical stuff like Raiders.”

“I suppose it doesn’t hurt that it’s your favorite movie,” said Valerie.

“Well, yeah. But that’s not why I suggested it.”

They all sat down on the big sofa and Astrid searched through the entertainment menu for Princess Mononoke.

“You don’t mind if I plug in while I’m here, do you?” asked Valerie.

“No, go right ahead.”

The robot girl opened the panel in her arm, pulled out the power cable, and plugged it into the wall near where she was sitting.

“What does that feel like?” asked Toby.

“It feels kind of good,” she said. “I get a warm feeling in my tummy, like I just ate some of Mama’s tamales.”

“I was going to suggest making some popcorn and having some soda,” said Toby. “I didn’t want to be rude though, since you don’t eat or drink.”

“Oh, go ahead,” said Valerie. “It won’t bother me.”

“May I use your kitchen then, to whip us up a movie snack?” Toby asked Astrid.

“Sure. The sodas are in the fridge, and the popcorn is in the cabinet right above the microwave.”

Toby stepped into the other room.

“He did at least ask you to the dance, didn’t he?” wondered Valerie.

“Yes he did,” replied Astrid. “He was really sweet. He even asked me what color my dress was so that he could get me a corsage.”

“Well, there’s always the Junior Prom for you to look forward to,” said Valerie. “I don’t guess I’ll ever get asked to a dance. I don’t think there’s any boy who wants a robot girlfriend.”

“I bet you there are…. Oh, here we go—Princess Mononoke.”

Astrid Maxxim and her Amazing Hoverbike – at iBooks

Astrid Maxxim and her Amazing HoverbikeFrom the 180,000 acre campus of Maxxim Industries, fourteen year old girl genius and inventor Astrid Maxxim works alongside her father, Dr. Roger Maxxim, on projects to make the world a better place. Her latest invention is a flying scooter—the hoverbike. Is it the target of an international spy ring, or are they after secret Project RG-7, or Astrid herself? Astrid has something bigger on her mind though—high school. There’s a field trip coming, and the Spring Fling is right around the corner… And does Toby like her as much as she likes him?

Astrid Maxxim and her Amazing Hoverbike is available on iBooks for just 99 cents.

Astrid Maxxim and her Amazing Hoverbike – Chapter 16 Excerpt

Astrid Maxxim and her Amazing HoverbikeAstrid mounted the bike and Toby climbed into his same spot behind. She drove to the lab entrance and he hopped down to hold the door open as she drove through. He did the same thing at the elevator, and again downstairs. They had to use the side entrance, since the hoverbike wouldn’t fit through the revolving door in the front.

“Making another break for it?” asked Mr. Toulson, intercepting them just outside.

“Charles, get your van and follow us,” said Astrid. “We may need your help.”

Minutes later, they were shooting across the Maxxim campus, Astrid and Toby cruising over the desert on the hoverbike and Toulson on the road that ran in the same general direction they were traveling. Toby looked down to gauge their height and then over Astrid’s shoulder to check their speed.

“I’d say we’re about two feet high and we’re going twenty-five,” he pointed out. “That’s a bit more than you expected wasn’t it?”

“Yes,” replied Astrid. “I’m not giving it full power either.”

“Well, open it up and let’s see what it can do,” said Toby.

Astrid pressed her foot down all the way on the throttle and pulled back on the controls. The hoverbike rose up into the air about twenty feet before leveling off and the speedometer moved slowly up until it wobbled around the 40 mph mark.

“And this is with two people on it!” said Toby excitedly. “I am definitely getting one of these!”

“Don’t tell any of the others,” said Astrid, “but I’m having them made for all seven of us.”

“Seven?”

“Yes, Austin is one of the gang now.”

“That makes six… oh yeah. I keep forgetting there are two Valeries now. They seem so much alike.”

They flew above the desert floor. Toulson was sometimes closer and other times farther away as the road wound in and around the dry rivers and rocky hills, but with the van’s superior speed he managed to keep up with them. Some forty minutes after they had left the R&D parking lot, they arrived at the Saguaro Cactus Garden, the site of the school field trip. This was, according to the website, the location of Austin’s MX-360. Starting at the monorail platform, Astrid began spiraling out in an ever-widening circle as both she and Toby looked for their friend. At last, Toby tapped Astrid on the shoulder and pointed down toward the ground. Slumped against a boulder was a body.

Astrid dropped the hoverbike so quickly to the ground that it smacked into a small sand dune. When she and Toby jumped off, it rose back up to hover a foot in the air. They ran to the side of the crumpled form and found that it was indeed Austin. His clothing was covered with sand, his face and arms were sunburned, and his lips were chapped.

“Austin,” said Astrid, brushing the sand off his face. “Austin, are you okay?”

“I don’t want to go to school, Mom,” he said, dreamily.

“Austin, wake up.”

The boy opened his eyes.

“It bit me,” he said lifting up his right arm. “A snake bit me.”