As I write this, I just finished chapter 14 in the draft of The Price of Magic. It took me 14 days to complete which is more than most chapters have. This is for several reasons: 1) It’s a long chapter. Chapter 13 was short. This one is much longer than the others. 2) It was an important chapter. The words had to be just right, not the least of which because a major character dies. 3) I’m trying to tie up the school year and that’s taking a lot of my time. As I write this, I’ve still got 7 days of school left. I’m also on the leadership team, the academic vocabulary team, and the multicultural team. Lots of meetings. I’m also still taking post-grad classes. This week finishes up the third. Next week, the final three start– all at once! I may finish this book. If I don’t, it will be because I’ve died. Watch here for more details either way.
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His Robot Girlfriend: The Felicity Project
Larry Richardson is writing his own His Robot Girlfriend story and posting it on his blog. So far he has three chapters posted. His characters are interesting and quite different from mine. I can’t wait to see what happens next. Stop by and read it here. Be sure to leave him some encouragement in the comments.
It is springtime. The year, 2036. David’s life is about to be drastically changed when he becomes acquainted with two robots, the vivacious Victoria and the always calm and collected Coleman.
I guess this is a good time to publicly endorse Larry’s work and similar projects. Please feel free to create your own characters and stories set in the world of Daffodil. Create your own custom robots and tell their stories. I would appreciate a small mention in the notes, such as Larry has done– something along the lines of: This story is set in the world created by Wesley Allison’s His Robot Girlfriend. Have fun and happy writing.
Tesla’s Stepdaughters – Chapter 7 Excerpt
After breakfast, Andrews ordered a cab which drove them to a large park a short distance away. Atlanta was a beautiful city with white buildings and blue skies, a stark contrast to the smoky and black cities of the north. The city park was filled with trees and fountains, with a winding path wandering through them and eventually circling around to where it began. Just beyond the path was the playground with ten or twelve children spinning on the merry-go-round, sliding down the metal slide only to run around and back up to slide down again, or swinging in singles or pairs. Andrews watched for a moment, all the time it took to determine that all the children were girls.
“Shall we take a stroll around?”
Ruth nodded.
They slowly made the circuit of the park, enjoying the sun on their skin.
“This is kind of strange,” said Ruth.
“What is?”
“I haven’t seen any black faces since we arrived in Atlanta—not in the airport, not at the hotel, and not here at the park.”
“I hadn’t noticed.”
“Well, you wouldn’t, would you? In Chicago, maybe one in ten women was of African descent. Even in New York…”
“Well, there are black people in this region, right? They didn’t all move north during the Great War?”
“A lot of them did move, enough for historians to call it the Great Migration anyway. But yes, there should still be some here.”
They had just about completed the circuit and were approaching the playground again, when Andrews saw two Atlanta police officers walking across the grass toward them. Placing his hand on Ruth’s lower back, he altered their course slightly toward them. Both officers were women, wearing blue uniforms with six pointed stars and leather-billed eight point caps.
“Hold it right there, ladies,” said one of the cops, lazily laying a hand on her sidearm.
Andrews moved his hand to Ruth’s stomach and gently moved her behind him.
“Science Police,” he said, loudly.
The two officers stopped, their eyes opening, though whether startled by the tone of his voice or by the statement of his affiliation, it was impossible to say.
“Do you have some identification to that effect… um, sir?” asked the one who had spoken before in a pronounced southern accent.
Andrews carefully withdrew his wallet from his right breast pocket, and holding it open so that both the picture ID and the badge were in clear view, he stepped toward them.
“Alright, Agent Andrews. We were just checking out a call.”
“A call about what?”
“A citizen reported two suspicious-looking people in the park.”
“Suspicious-looking because they thought I was a woman dressed like a man, or because of her color?”
The officer looked like she had something foul in her mouth. She said. “The colored women usually frequent the park on the other side of the train tracks.”
“The other side of the tracks… how… cliché. Segregation is illegal. The Science Council outlawed it in 1963.”
“We don’t work for your Science Council…” the other officer started, but was silenced when the first raised her hand.
“There’s no segregation here. They just usually spend their time at the other park. You have a nice day now.” She turned and started back toward the black and white Packard beside the road. Her partner stood for just a minute, as though she wanted to say something else, then she too headed back toward the cruiser.
Tesla’s Stepdaughters – Chapter 6 Excerpt
The last known residence of Miss Athena Kesting was in Bolingbrook, which with traffic took almost forty minutes to reach. The quaint little village was covered by a large glass and steel dome to protect residents from the acrid smoke and acid rain that was the bane of the Midwest. The address in question proved to be huge house on a large, fenced estate.
“Not what I was expecting,” commented Loginova, as she pulled the car up the driveway, passed extensive gardens.
The two agents parked and got out. On either side of the front door were life-sized marble statues of women in long flowing dresses. Andrews knocked, using the brass door knocker, and when the door opened, he was surprised to find a woman who was the spitting image of the statue on the left.
“Good morning,” said Loginova, showing her badge. “We would like to speak to Miss Athena Kesting.”
“Oh. She doesn’t live here anymore.”
“Can you give us her forwarding address?”
“Won’t you come in please?”
The two agents entered a home that was as opulent inside as the outside had hinted. Passing through a foyer covered in rich wood paneling, they entered a stunningly decorated living room and sat down on a beautiful antique sofa. Two other women were seated when they came in, but both rose to their feet.
“Inga, would you ask Mr. Larkin to come down?” asked the woman with whom they had entered. “My husband will very much want to speak with you.”
A few minutes later, the gentleman in question entered the room. He was an average looking man, wearing casual though expensive clothes. He was slightly balding, something that he had chosen not to try to cover up by combing his hair over.
“Good Morning,” he said, shaking hands with both agents. “I’m Evan Larkin, and these are my wives Elke Lom-Larkin, Angelina Redmond-Larkin, and Inga Lom-Larkin.”
“Agent Andrews, and this is Agent Loginova.”
“So what can we do for you,” Larkin asked sitting down across from them. Elke sat to his right, while Angelina and Inga stood behind them.
“They are here about Athena,” said Elke
“Oh yes. Well, no surprises there. She was a troubled girl, I’m afraid.”
“What was your relationship with Miss Kesting?” asked Andrews.
“We were engaged. My wives thought that she might fit in with us here, so she moved in for a trial period. I’m afraid it was not to be though. She left, what has it been now? Six months ago.”
“Do you have a forwarding address?”
“Inga will find that for you. May I ask why you are looking for her?”
“I’m afraid we can’t say. It involves an ongoing investigation.”
“I see. Well, it’s no stretch of the imagination that it involves Athena’s strong feelings. She was brought up in a very religious community in Idaho.”
“They were very strict adherents to morality and believers in a patriarchal lifestyle,” said Elke. “That’s why we thought she might fit in here.”
“And you are all adherents to a patriarchal lifestyle?” asked Loginova.
“Not really,” replied Elke. “We’re more of a pragmatic family. We just thought that having grown up that way, Athena would fit in. It just didn’t work out. She was far too inflexible.”
“She thought that everyone had to believe the way she did,” added Angelina.
Andrews felt rather than saw Loginova cast a glance in his direction.
“Would you ladies mind if I spoke to Agent Andrews alone in my study?” asked Larkin.
Not waiting for a reply, he stood up and started for a door in the back of the room. He turned to see that Andrews was following him, and said. “Inga will get that forwarding address for you, Agent Loginova.”
The study was a spacious room with large windows looking out over a huge swimming pool and beautiful lawn behind the house. There was a large cherry wood desk near the back of the room and shelves filled with books along the wall.
“Would you like a drink?” asked Larkin.
“No, thank you.”
“Have you had a drink yet?”
Andrews grunted noncommittally.
“I was off the enclave for over a year before I took a drink. When was the last time you were there?”
The Voyage of the Minotaur – Chapter 10 Excerpt
“Kafira’s fanny. You look like crap,” she said.
He grabbed a towel and threw it around his waist and then stepped over to look in the hanging mirror on the cabin wall. He did look like crap. He looked thin and pale and weak. His cheeks were sunken and his face was pasty white. Most grim of all were his eyes. The whites of his eyes no longer deserved of that name. They were beyond bloodshot. The blood vessels had completely ruptured and every bit of surface outside of his irises was solid, uninterrupted red. He felt unsteady. His knees wobbled slightly.
“What day is it?”
“It’s exactly one week since anyone on the ship has seen you. That’s what day it is. Have you eaten anything in the last week? Have you had a drink, and I mean of water?”
Terrence looked over at the nightstand—at the pitcher of water, now empty, and drinking glass, now lying on its side.
“I had some water…earlier. Yesterday, I think.”
“Bloody hell, Terrence. I can’t believe you’re doing this again.”
“On a first name basis now, are we?” he asked.
“Don’t give me that crap. Who took care of you last time?”
“You’re not my sister.”
“No,” she agreed. “And you’re not your sister either, so shut the hell up. Get some clothes on. I’m going to get some water.”
Yuah picked up both the pitcher that had held drinking water, and the pitcher that matched the wash basin in the corner of the room and left the cabin. Terrence quickly moved the tiny blue bottle to the ammunition pouch of his pistol belt. The dressing maid returned after a few minutes with both pitchers full of water. She took the first and filled the glass from the nightstand, handing it to Terrence. The second pitcher she poured into the matching washbasin on its stand. Then she left once again. Terrence drank the water in the glass and then washed his face. Yuah entered again, this time with a plate containing a crumpet with jam and a glass of milk, both of which she handed to him.
Terrence sat down and ate, though this made his stomach a bit upset. Yuah stood over him and watched as he downed every single bite. Then she pulled a small brown bottle from her pocket.
“Lie on your back,” she ordered. “I nicked this from your sister.”
She pulled the stopper from the bottle and poured a little bit of the liquid within into his right eye.
“Owe, dammit! Are you trying to blind me?”
“Shut up. This is a healing draught,” she said, pouring more into his other eye. “You’ve got a lot of nerve, asking if I’m trying to blind you, when you’re rubbing that crap into your eyeballs.”
“What do you know about it?”
“I know it all,” she said. “Go ahead. Ask me anything. White Opthalium. Visio. See Spice. Made from rare enchanted lotus blossoms and blue fungus from Southern Enclep, whipped together with a little bit of witch-doctor magic. All designed to take you away from your problems in the real world.”
“How do you know all that?” Terrence sat up.
“I did my research a long time ago. Someone had to take care of you, you know.”
“Yes. I remember. So why did you take care of me… then, I mean?”
“I had quite a big crush on you then, not that you ever noticed.”
“Why would I notice? You were a skinny little kid.”
“Yes, well…”
“So why are you helping me now?” he asked. “Do you still have a crush on me?”
“Don’t you wish? You’re important to this expedition. Whether you believe it or not, your sister needs you.”
“Are you going to tell her about this?”
“Are you kidding me?” asked Yuah. “She would be right pissed if she found out about this. Not to mention, half the colonists would want to pack it in if they found out you were off your trolley.”
“You think I’m mad, then?”
“Yes, I do,” she said.
They sat in silence for a moment.
“It doesn’t matter anyway,” he said. “I’m all out. I didn’t even realize we had left port. I was planning to go back and get more at the marketplace.”
“That’s for the best then. Your sister wants to see you. She was trying to find you this morning and couldn’t. When I went to get her healing draught, I told her you had food poisoning, and wouldn’t be about for a few hours.”
“Thanks,” said Terrence.
“Come over to her cabin and I’ll draw you a bath. You need it. Then you can shave and have something more to eat and whatever else.”
“What about Iolanthe?”
“She was just leaving to go up to the observation deck and meet Lieutenant Staff. I doubt she’ll be down for hours. I think she’s going soft for him.”
“Iolanthe? Don’t be stupid. She’ll never go soft for anyone.”
Writing Speed
Wonder how long it takes to write a novel? I’m hard at work on The Price of Magic. Here’s how its been going so far. Bear in mind that I’m working full time and taking 18 credits of college classes at the same time.
March 28 Begin
April 1 Chapter One Done
April 3 Chapter Two Done
April 7 Chapter Three Done
April 13 Chapter Four Done
April 16 Chapter Five Done
April 20 Chapter Six Done
April 25 Chapter Seven Done
April 26 Chapter Eight Done
April 28 Chapter Nine Done
May 2 Chapter Ten Done
May 9 Chapter Eleven Done
May 15 Chapter Twelve Done
May 16 Chapter Thirteen Done
Here I am at work on Chapter Fourteen. The chapters are averaging 4100 words. Some are longer and chapter thirteen is much shorter. My outline is 25 chapters. Watch this space for more info including a release date.
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Tesla’s Stepdaughters – Chapter 5 Excerpt
The lobby of the Grace Coolidge international building, though Spartan, was large and it took a minute for Andrews to find his appointment waiting by feet of the statue of Justice. He almost didn’t recognize Ep!phanee. She was dressed in faded jeans and a Nehi Blue Cream Soda tee shirt. Her hair was tucked up under a black military cap.
“Is somebody here with you?” he asked.
“Nope. I ditched the cops back at the hotel. Buy me a hotdog.”
“You shouldn’t be running around town without an escort.”
“Well I have one now. Besides, I just want a hotdog. There’s a hotdog cart just down on the corner. I saw it on the cab ride over here.”
She took him by the arm and led him to the glass enclosed front of the building, holding the door open for him. The hotdog vendor was stationed just where she had described, a chubby little woman with a striped shirt, a large stain covering most of the front.
“Two dogs,” Ep!phanee ordered, then turned to Andrews. “What do you want on yours?”
“I don’t know; whatever’s customary.”
“Haven’t you ever had a hotdog before?”
He shook his head. “German food’s not very popular in the enclaves.”
“Hotdogs are as American as apple pie. Alright. Bacon, beans, avocado, catsup, and mayonnaise. Do you want jalapenos?”
“Yes please.”
“So you don’t have street food in the enclaves?”
“Sure. Tacos– usually fish tacos, but sometimes grilled shrimp.”
The vendor handed her the hotdogs already loaded with beans and avocado. Stepping to the end of the cart, she scooped on the jalapenos and then squirted on squiggly lines of red catsup and white mayonnaise. Handing one of the dogs to Andrews, she watched as he took a tentative bite. She then opened her mouth wide and shoved in about a third of hers.
“Good huh?” she asked, her mouth full.
He nodded and then took another bite. Ep!phanee began strolling down the sidewalk and even though she was moving slowly Andrews had to take a few quick steps to keep up. He was still eating his hotdog as they walked, being careful not to spill the condiments on his jacket. She finished first and dropped the little paper hotdog caddie in a trashcan beside the street.
“I should get you back to the hotel.”
“I’m staying in this hotel now.”
Andrews looked skyward to find that they were in front of the Palmer House. When he looked back down, Ep!phanee was already going through the revolving door. He stuffed the last bit of hotdog into his mouth and dropped the paper waste in a can beside the door, following her. The lobby was huge, with a tiled vaulted ceiling that looked like it belonged in a cathedral. Andrews felt self-conscious even walking on the rugs.
“Why are you staying here now?”
“We have two more days in Chicago. I’ll go crazy if I’m cooped up with the girls the whole time.”
“You have two entire suites at the American. And it’s under complete police protection.”
“I’ve got my own suite here.” She twirled around a few times but kept on course for the elevator. “It’s the same one Ulysses S. Grant stayed in. He used to be on money, you know.”
She skipped into the elevator and he followed. An attendant, a small woman in a tight red uniform, was waiting inside.
“Twenty fifth floor,” said Ep!phanee.
The attendant nodded, and then turned the lever sending the car gliding swiftly upwards.
“Ulysses S. Grant died in 1885,” said Andrews. “There weren’t any twenty five story buildings in Chicago then.”
“I think I feel his presence though.”
The Voyage of the Minotaur – Chapter 9 Excerpt
“I don’t feel good,” said Senta.
“Too much wine?” asked Mrs. Marjoram, pointedly.
“I think I’m going to overflow.”
“Not in here,” said Miss Dechantagne, sternly.
“Why don’t you go up on deck and get some air, Pet,” said Zurfina.
Senta got up from her chair and found that her legs were decidedly wobbly, her Vision was wiggly, and the two helpings of trifle in her stomach were not getting along with the toad-in-the-hole. She started for the door, but found her feet making an inexplicable turn toward the wall. One of the waiters took her by the shoulders and guided her back on track, opened the door for her, and closed it once she was in the outside corridor. It was a short trip from Miss Dechantagne’s cabin to the main deck, which was a good thing; because Senta didn’t think she could have made it much further. She grabbed hold of the railing and walked twenty or thirty steps until she came to the steel dragon, still in his animal carrier box. She sat down on top of it, and scooted down so that she could lie back across it. She closed her eyes on the bright myriad of stars looking down upon her.
She didn’t know how long she lay there, but eventually she had the feeling that someone else was there with her. She opened her eyes to see a pasty-faced man with a very round face and horn rimmed glasses looking down at her. His hair was slicked down and oily looking and he had a pinched expression on his face that made his mouth look unnaturally small. She looked at him for several moments and he looked back and blinked several times.
“Hello,” said Senta.
“Hello,” he replied. “Are you all right?”
“I don’t know.”
The man smiled without showing his teeth. His smile reached from his chin to the middle of his nose. His eyes, magnified by glasses, stayed the same. He had no facial hair or sideburns, but he had several small cuts on his face as if he had injured himself while shaving. His suit was charcoal colored, and slightly shabby; something that Senta wouldn’t have noticed a few weeks before.
“Do you want to try getting up?” he asked.
“Alright.”
Senta sat up and immediately threw up at the man’s feet. Most of the vomit splattered across the wooden deck, though a bit of it ended up on his shoes and pants cuffs.
“Gawp,” said the dragon within his carrier.
The man’s mouth twitched to one side, but all he said was, “Feeling better?”
Senta nodded.
“Good,” he said. “We should get you somewhere where you can get washed up. Do you know how to get to your cabin from here?”
“No.”
“Then, I’ll take you to my cabin.”
“Um, I don’t know.”
“You wouldn’t want anyone to see you with vomit all over your shoes, would you?”
Senta looked down and, sure enough, she had gotten vomit on her own shoes too. The man took her by the hand and pulled her to her feet. She was still pretty wobbly. He began to walk slowly along the deck, pulling her along with him.
“Gawp,” said the dragon, louder.
They went in the doorway just behind the one through which Senta had exited, and walked down the corridor. Senta started to feel a little better. At the end of the hallway, a set of narrow steps led down to the lower deck. Senta didn’t really want to go down, but the pasty-faced man had her hand firmly in his.
“Senta!”
Senta and the man both turned to see Miss Lusk walking down the hallway toward them. Though she was the shortest of the women that had been at the dinner party that evening, Miss Lusk was almost the exact same height as the oily-haired man. Her hat, which was a large straw affair covered in pink chiffon with a flower accent, made her seem a bit taller than him.
“Where are you going, Senta?” asked Miss Lusk.
“We were just going to get her cleaned up,” said the man. “The poor thing got sick on deck and lost her dinner.”
“Good evening, Mr. Murty,”
“Good evening, Miss Lusk.”
“It was very kind of you to help out with a sick child.”
“Oh, it was nothing,” he replied. They stood looking at each other for a very long moment. Senta looked from one to the other.
“Well, we’ll go on and get the child cleaned up,” said Mr. Murty.
“I think I should take it from here.”
“Oh?”
“I’m sure it wouldn’t be appropriate for you to take the child below.”
“Wouldn’t be appropriate?” he asked. “Why not?”
“Taking care of children isn’t a man’s job.” Miss Lusk took Senta’s other hand and pulled until the child had both arms stretched out in either direction.
“I really don’t mind. I love children,” said Mr. Murty.
“You’ll make quite a father one day, I’m sure.”
“Let me take her.”
“I’ll take care of her,” said Miss Lusk. “I am a woman.”
“Yes, I keep forgetting,” said Mr. Murty, letting go of Senta’s hand. “Um, what with your, um, mathematics skills and all.”
“Good night, Mr. Murty!” Miss Lusk hurried down the hall with the girl in tow.
Miss Lusk led Senta forward and then down a different set of narrow stairs. They went quickly down three flights and then up the corridor a short ways to a door, which Miss Lusk unlocked and entered, pulling the girl in after her. It was a small room, only half the size of that in which Senta and Zurfina stayed. It held a single chair and a single bed. The red-headed woman set Senta on the mattress and had her lie back.
“Didn’t your mother tell you not to talk to strangers?” she asked.
“No.”
“Well, she should have. Somebody should have.” Miss Lusk bit her lip. “You are an orphan, aren’t you?”
Senta nodded.
“Zurfina should be watching out for you. And stay away from Mr. Murty. Do you understand? Mr. Murty is not a good man.”
Tesla’s Stepdaughters – Chapter 4 Excerpt
The drum beat continued and the all three took their places to begin Under the Heel. That’s when Andrews saw it. There was a flash of light high up in the rafters above the audience. It wasn’t the flash of a camera bulb, but of reflective light bouncing off a pane of glass—like the end lens of binoculars, or of a rifle scope.
Ducking around the back curtain and running through the cluttered backstage, he found scaffolding with a metal ladder at one end. Grabbing hold of a rung, he pulled himself upwards. By the time he was twenty feet above the ground, the scaffolding began to sway dangerously with every step, and he still had more than fifty feet to go. When he reached the top he was sure the swaying structure would go crashing to the ground at any second, but he was able to clamber off of it and onto the catwalk that ran the length of the stadium.
The stadium lights were out. All spots were on the performing band. Even if they hadn’t been, Andrews probably wouldn’t have been able to see anything. The catwalk ran above the lighting tracks, and the centermost section, where he had seen the flash, was a long way off. He ducked lower and grabbed the rail, but he didn’t have the luxury of watching from where he was, or even of taking it slow. Hunched over, he ran the length of the clattering, swaying metal walkway. The Ladybugs were playing the last chords of Artificial Man when he saw a human figure, not on the catwalk he was on, but one which intersected it. He stood up and ran faster.
When the song ended the screaming applause continued but it, unlike the music, was not amplified up near the ceiling. Andrews stood up straight, but didn’t slow down. As he ran, he pulled the pistol from his shoulder holster. As he flipped on the power, it began to whine as the solenoid charged.
“Hold it!” he yelled.
The person turned, saw him, and ran, the catwalk taking away her at a diagonal. Andrews stopped and took aim, but didn’t fire. There was something in the shadowy figure’s hand, but he wasn’t sure it was a weapon. He raced forward to where the two catwalks intersected, then turned and followed the other’s path. By that time, whoever he was following was a tiny figure half lost in the darkness. Andrews ran on, even when he could no longer see the person he was pursuing, secure in the knowledge that they had to be on the catwalk. But then he reached the end of the building to find a short ladder leading to a roof access door. Climbing up the stairs, he put his left hand on the hatch, his right still holding his gun. He quickly opened the door and stepped out onto the roof.
The moon, fully obscured by smoky clouds, did little to aid him, but Andrews carefully made the circuit around the rooftop, stepping around air conditioning units and other equipment. Suddenly a figure in black jumped up right in front of him.
“Freeze!”
“Don’t shoot! Don’t shoot!”
“Hands in the air!”