Princess of Amthar – The City of Amathar

Princess of AmatharThe city of Amathar is huge– roughly the size of the continental United States or say, Australia. It is round and has a great wall around it. I have always been fascinated by city planning, especially when done long in advance of need. You can see analogs of Alexander laying out Alexandria in several of my stories.

I looked through the forward view port and felt my stomach drop away. Since coming to Ecos, I had come to expect things on a grand scale– seemingly endless plains, forests so dark and thick they seemed to block the sun, vast seas and broad rivers, huge flying battleships– but nothing had prepared me for the city of Amathar. Ahead of us was a wall that stretched to the left and right as far as the eye could see. Seemingly held within this wall was a city, straining to be free of its confines. It was a city of tremendously high buildings, tall towers, and massive constructions of bizarre shape and ungodly dimension, painted with a rainbow of pastel colors from red to blue with bits of silver and gold. The city seemingly went on forever into the distance, rising up into the horizon until it became a part of the sky.

“Just how large is Amathar?” I asked.

“The city wall is a circle two thousand five hundred kentads in diameter.”

That information took several moments to compute, and at least that long to comprehend. According to my admittedly incomplete knowledge of Amatharian measurement, twenty five hundred kentads was the equivalent of two thousand miles. This seemed beyond belief, and I questioned it, but the three Amatharians confirmed my figures. Here was a single city that would, had it been located on my home planet, have almost completely covered North America.

Princess of Amathar – Tular Maximinos

Princess of AmatharTular Maximinos is a relatively minor character from Princess of Amathar. He is a friend of Norar Remontar and the betrothed of Vena Remontar. He also turns out to be something of a rival to Alexander.

They all laughed again. I instinctively liked both these men– Bentar Hissendar was a friendly and happy fellow, and Tular Maximinos had an engaging wit, and a way of delivering a funny line with a straight face. I wondered for a moment if he could do the reverse, and deliver a sad line while smiling.

“It was very lucky for you that you came out of that tunnel when you did,” said Tular Maximinos. “We were just getting ready to leave the area.”

“Yes,” confirmed Bentar Hissendar. “We have been making surveys for the Hissendar Trading Group. They have been looking for new sources of edible plants and mineral resources, but the area where we found you turned out to have little promise.”

Princess of Amathar – Bentar Hissendar

Princess of AmatharBentar Hissendar is one of Norar Remontar’s friends and he becomes a friend of Alexander Ashton, the hero of our story as well. Bentar Hissendar is a happy-go-lucky jockular fellow and I didn’t get to use him as much in the story as I had originally intended, but hopefully I can rectify that if I ever finish the sequel.

Amathar – The Pell

Princess of AmatharThe Pell are spider-like creatures who live in a colony in the forests of Ecos. They range in size from a large tarantula to larger than a pony, the speak, and they eat any creatures they come across– including Amatharians.

Horrible alien monsters are of course a staple of pulp adventure tales and that is what I was going for in Amathar. The Pell make a brief but hopefully memorable appearance early in Princess of Amathar.

Senta and the Steel Dragon – Chapter Titles

With A Plague of Wizards out soon, I’m posting the chapter titles along with those of the earlier books in the series.  You can probably spot some familiar themes.

Senta and the Steel Dragon Chapter Titles

Brechalon

  1. The Greatest City in the World
  2. Distant Places
  3. Life in the City of Brech
  4. Memories
  5. Putting Plans in Motion
  6. Blood
  7. Victories
  8. Day One Thousand Nine Hundred Eighty-Four
  9. One Month Later

The Voyage of the Minotaur

  1. The Woman in the White Pin-Striped Dress
  2. At the Great Church of the Holy Savior
  3. The Head Butler
  4. The Sorceress
  5. The Steel Dragon
  6. The Minotaur Sails
  7. Augie’s Dirty Laundry
  8. Terrence’s Jungle Adventure
  9. Maalik Murty
  10. Yuah and Pantagria
  11. The Dance
  12. An Angry Angel
  13. Birmisia
  14. Founding the Colony
  15. The Result Mechanism
  16. Terrence’s Women
  17. The Refugees from Freedonia
  18. Zeah’s Proposal
  19. The Battle of Suusthek
  20. The Assault on the Town
  21. The Rescue
  22. The Wizard
  23. What Happened by the Stream

The Dark and Forbidding Land

  1. Winter
  2. The Lizzie
  3. Marriage
  4. Private Eamon Shrubb
  5. Spells and Potions
  6. Yuah and Cissy
  7. Powerful Magic
  8. Saba the Spy
  9. The Ruin
  10. The Drache Girl
  11. The Book
  12. Iguanodon Heath
  13. What Happened on the Third
  14. The Day of Daggers
  15. The Tea Party and After

The Drache Girl

  1. Senta and Bessemer
  2. On the Dechantagne Family Estate
  3. Staff
  4. A New Dress and a New Hairstyle
  5. Police Constable Colbshallow
  6. M&S Coal Company Ltd.
  7. Graham and the Constables
  8. The Return
  9. Life Among the Dechantagnes
  10. A Constable’s Duty
  11. Crime and Punishment
  12. A More Complicated Life
  13. In Search of Coal
  14. Yuah’s Trials
  15. The Glamours
  16. The Traitor
  17. Yuah and Honor
  18. The Paramour Chamber
  19. Senta and Graham
  20. What Happened That Morning Just Before Seven
  21. Revelations

The Young Sorceress

  1. Spring
  2. The Blond Girl
  3. Nellie Swenson
  4. Birthday
  5. Birthday Part Two
  6. The Real Senta
  7. Predators
  8. Gods
  9. Sorceresses and Witch Doctors
  10. The Two Sentas
  11. Pirates and Princesses
  12. The End
  13. Mallontah and Hell
  14. All Your Fault

The Two Dragons

  1. The Social Event of the Season
  2. Zurfina’s Past
  3. Mayor Korlann
  4. Cousins
  5. The Problems at Home
  6. The Long Way to Tsahloose
  7. Beneath Ancient Stones
  8. Police Inspector Colbshallow
  9. City of the Dragon God
  10. Tsahloose
  11. War
  12. Troubled Times
  13. The Green Dragon
  14. Father and Grandfather
  15. Their Future Together
  16. Sabotage and Murder
  17. What She Thought was the Case
  18. Panic and Despair
  19. The War Comes to Birmisia
  20. What Happened at Iguanodon Heath
  21. Return to Brechalon

The Sorceress and her Lovers

  1. Bangdorf
  2. The God of the Sky
  3. Iolana
  4. The Bomb
  5. Peter
  6. The Creature Beneath the Fortress
  7. A Friendly Word
  8. An Adventure
  9. The Champion
  10. Angel and Demon
  11. Yessonarah
  12. The Hunt
  13. Zoantheria
  14. The King
  15. Chief Inspector Saba Colbshallow
  16. Friends and Relatives
  17. Tea
  18. The Machine
  19. Siefer Caldell
  20. Power
  21. Life in Birmisia Colony

The Price of Magic

  1. A New Year
  2. The Famous Writer
  3. The High Priestess
  4. Wizard Peter Bassington
  5. The Sorceress’s Family
  6. Child of the Sunrise
  7. A Meeting of Kings
  8. Of Opossums and Toast
  9. Dragon Fortress
  10. St. Ulixes
  11. Coup
  12. Something Special
  13. Bikindi
  14. The Yellow King
  15. The Crawler
  16. The Mystery of Wizard Bell
  17. Pest of the Sunrise
  18. Fallen Angel
  19. Tokkenoht and Suwasuwasu Zrant
  20. The Fall
  21. The King and I
  22. What Happened Later

A Plague of Wizards

  1. Vesterdein
  2. Lady Terra
  3. Allium
  4. Bryony
  5. The Calliope
  6. Alone Among the Lizzies
  7. Stands Up Tall With A King
  8. The Baxters and the Colbshallows
  9. The Prince
  10. Pestilence
  11. The Doll
  12. The Trial
  13. The Drache
  14. The Sorceress Returns
  15. The Battle of Dhu-oooastu
  16. Engagements
  17. Humanity
  18. What Happened in Yessonarah
  19. Appertaining to Magic
  20. Leaving and Arriving

 

Princess of Amathar – Norar Remontar

Princess of AmatharNorar Remontar is the second person that Alexander Ashton meets in the world of Ecos, and the first Amatharian. Norar Remontar is the son of an overlord and is a knight. He carries an Amatharian sword, inhabited by one of the strange energy beings known as souls. This life-form empoweres the ordinary metal of the sword with fantastic power.

The Amatharian knight is typical of his people– tall and handsome with deep blue skin. He is brave and at least in the beginning, suspicious of Alexander.

Princess of Amathar – Alexander Ashton

Princess of AmatharI really wanted “Princess of Amathar” to have that same feel that I enjoyed while reading Edgar Rice Burroughs’ Mars books as a boy. Consequently, my hero Alexander Ashton owes a lot to John Carter. He is brave to the point of foolishness. He is smart enough to quickly learn a slew of new languages, but not usually bright enough to clue in on what’s going on right in front of him. He was named Alexander right from the start, to evoke Alexander the Great’s wreckless personal heroism, if not his drunken fits of rage, but he didn’t have a last name until I was well into the manuscript. A young lady I worked with at the time, had the last name Ashton, which just seemed to fit so well.

Put Down Your Pitchforks

A Great Deal of PatienceOkay.  So you’re pissed off at me that neither of the new books is a robot book.  I get it.  I get it!  I’m back to work on A Great Deal of Patience, and if it is at all humanly possible, this will be then next book I finish.

As it stands right now, I’m in the middle of chapter seven.  The outline is twenty chapters, but that could end up being more or less.  In any case, watch this space for more information.

Princess of Amathar – Chapter 12 Excerpt

Princess of AmatharThe transport dropped lower as Bentar Hissendar guided in to a landing at a large installation just within the wall of the city. On a large tarmac, surrounded by several buildings, sat a dozen transports just like the one in which we were flying. When our craft came to a stop on the ground, a crew of Amatharian men and women ran out onto the field to service the vehicle. They were wearing bodysuits very much like those the knights wore, though these were light blue rather than black, and they were worn without the tabard over them. Bentar Hissendar turned and spoke to one of them.

“Send word to the Kurar Ka, that we have returned with his grandson,” he turned to Norar Remontar. “It is best to send word before you go showing up at the door of your home. Give everyone a chance to realize you are alive.”

Norar Remontar replied, but I was too busy looking around to pay much attention to their conversation. The wall over which we had passed to come to this airfield was about two hundred feet tall, and was constructed or at least covered by a copper-colored metal. It looked to be thick enough for a truck to drive over. If fact, as I stared at it, some sort of vehicle running slowly along the top of the wall, passed by. The way it sat on the top, hugging the sides, reminded me of the monorail at Disneyland, though this vehicle was a single unit rather than a train, and had no windows, so therefore did not appear to be a passenger craft.

“That is the automated sentry,” said Norar Remontar, breaking into my observations. “Come, you have much to see.”

Malagor and I joined the returned son of Amathar, as he walked across the tarmac to one of the buildings at its edge. Inside, we were greeted by more Amatharians wearing bodysuits in a variety of colors. I asked Norar Remontar about the difference in clothing, and he informed me that different occupations within the city had traditional colors associated with them. Among those colors were black for soldier, light blue for mechanic, white for food preparers or servers, grey for doctors, and red for record keepers. The tabard was essentially an Amatharian uniform, worn by none but soldiers.

I was still thinking about this system of color coding, when the familiar black suit with white tabard appeared before me. A young woman, dressed in that very garb, stood with arms folded beside a desk just inside the terminal building. Her tabard bore the same crest that Norar Remontar’s did– a flaming sun with wings. When I looked up into her beautiful flawless face, for a moment I was in shock. She was my princess, rather I mean, she was Norar Remontar’s sister. But the impression lasted only a moment. This young woman had much shorter hair, a slightly smaller nose, darker skin, and larger, rounder eyes, that made her look much less serious. Admittedly the only time I had seen the Princess was during the height of battle. When the female knight saw Norar Remontar, she smiled broadly and reached out to grasp his hand.

“Word of your return precedes you, kinsman, though not by much,” she said, in a melodic but surprisingly strong voice. “I have just heard the good news, and here you are.”

“You are as beautiful as ever, Vena Remontar,” replied my friend. He then turned to Malagor and me.

“This is Remiant Vena Remontar, my cousin.” He used the word for mother’s sister’s daughter.

“I am soon to be related to you in other ways as well,” the young woman said. “I have agreed to let Tular Maximinos announced our intention to marry.”

Princess of Amathar – Chapter 11 Excerpt

Princess of AmatharMalagor, Norar Remontar, and I stepped out of the elevator and into a room lit just like the one from which we had left. This room had no geometric video controller in it however, and it was triangular in shape, with the elevator opening in the middle of one of three equal sides, and an open doorway on the wall to our left.

“This is peculiar,” said Norar Remontar.

I nodded my head at the understatement. “I would be willing to bet that this elevator, these rooms, the lighting, and the controls for the video images, are all artifacts of the Elder Gods, or whomever it was that created Ecos.

“I am inclined to agree,” said Norar Remontar.

We looked around this new room for several moments, but found nothing of interest. Finally Malagor voiced the opinion that we really had no other alternative but to head down the hallway and see where it led us. I was toying with the idea of suggesting that we try our luck one more time in the mysterious elevator, but I decided that Malagor was probably right. It was time to continue on our way. That is just what we did.

The dark hallway beckoned us like a gaping maw, but I tried not to think of it that way. It really doesn’t take too long to adjust to continual daylight. I think it would be much harder to adjust to continual darkness. Norar Remontar turned on his small flashlight; I unsheathed my sword, and the three of us with a quiet look between us, started down the long hallway. This time the hallway continued straight for what must have been five miles before opening into any type of room what so ever. At last it did, and as soon as we stepped into the room, I knew we were in for trouble.

A sudden wave of stench assaulted my nostrils. It was the smell of several dozen bodies which had not seen a bath in a long time, mixed with the smell of bodily waste accumulated over a period of several generations. I wasn’t the only one to smell it. Malagor immediately began coughing and gagging, to the extent that I feared he would pass out. A look of disgust crossed Norar Remontar’s face, but otherwise he remained characteristically stoic.

Malagor had just regained his own composure, when a horde of creatures burst screaming toward us from the dark. There were a score or more of the short, bipedal, four armed rat-like creatures, and they attacked using stone axes and razor sharp teeth. Screaming like banshees, the Kartags literally fell upon us.

I skewered the first creature to reach me on the end of my sword, turned, and threw my shoulder into the next one, sending it flying backwards into its fellows. At that moment the entire room was lit up by the incredible brightness of the Amatharian sword unsheathed. It sizzled and sparked as Norar Remontar used it to cut through the bodies of three of the Kartags. At almost the same moment, Malagor let loose with a burst of light rifle fire which cut a nice round smoking hole in the chest of another rat. This display of destruction was all that was necessary to convince most of the beasts to retreat. I quickly lopped off the head of one who apparently was having difficulty making that decision.