Category Archives: Senta and the Steel Dragon

The Drache Girl: Graham Dokkins

Posted on by
3

Graham Dokkins is one of the major characters in the Senta and the Steel Dragon series.  Graham sort of came into his own in Book 2, but he remains extremely important in book 3.  Several plot lines revolve around him and his relationship with Senta.  Graham really compliments Senta and they work well together as a couple, even though they are kids.

One of the things that I’ve been struggling with is how much Graham appears in Book 4, which isn’t much.  In the rewrite, I think I’ll add a bit more of him.

The Drache Girl: Bessemer

Posted on by
Reply

It was the size of a small pony, covered in scales the color of polished steel.  Every step it took was a study in grace, and from the tip of its whiskered snout, past its folded wings, to the tip of its barbed tail, it seemed to just flow along.
“They look as though they’ve never seen a dragon before,” said the dragon.

Bessemer the dragon appears more in The Drache Girl than any other book in the series.  He is right there on the first page, and what’s more, he’s grown up enough to talk.  He’s a regular character in his own right.  Part of the story of the series is his growth of course, but I found him particularly fun to write in this book.

The Drache Girl: Senta Bly

Posted on by
Reply

Senta Bly is the title character for the Senta and the Steel Dragon series of fantasy books.  In The Drache Girl, book 3 of the series, she is twelve years old and has finally come into her own a bit.  In this book more than any of the others, we see Senta as a kid, with friends who adventure with her around the town of Port Dechantagne.

Spoiler Alert:

Though Senta is really quite a powerful sorceress at this point, people aren’t too afraid of her yet.  This is a major theme of books 4 and 5.  People know her and know not to cross her.  At least the people of Port Dechantagne do, and some visitors learn this during the course of the story.

Senta at age twelve was inspired by a string of skinny blond girls who came and went in my class.  One in particular came to school one day with her face all skinned up, and that inspired one of the chapters in this book.

The Drache Girl

Posted on by
Reply

Well, it’s time to discuss the characters in Senta and the Steel Dragon Book 3: The Drache Girl.  In a lot of ways, this is my favorite book of the series, which I suppose makes it my favorite among all the books I’ve written.  The thing about this book is that I like all the characters best at this point in their lives.  Senta is really fun at age 12, running around with her friends.  I had a great deal of inspiration for this, as I was (and still am) surrounded by 12 year olds all day.  Bessemer, the Steel Dragon, appears more in this book than any of the others. Yuah is at the high point in her story arc, sort of.  I also like Saba Colbshallow the most in this book.  It really is his story as much as anyone’s.

So, over the next few weeks I’m going to go through the characters roughly in the order they appear and hopefully give you some insights about them and how they came to be.  If you have any questions, let me hear them.

Update: The Young Sorceress

Posted on by
Reply

The Young Sorceress is dragging along.  I have to set it aside and work on Astrid Maxxim for a while because, quite frankly, this book is a hard one.  The real problem is that working a day job while I write, I can only manage a page or two a day, and it is hard to keep a complicated plot in my head from day to day.  Astrid is easy.  It’s all pretty straight forward.  The Young Sorceress follows seven major characters through their own stories and when I rewrite it, that number may increase.  Ideally I would really like to have this done before summer, but there is a possibility that I may not be able to get it done before then.  I’ll keep you informed here.

In the meantime, this is the latest version of the cover.  Same picture, but with a border to make it look more like the rest of the books in the series.

The Voyage of the Minotaur: The Steel Dragon

Posted on by
Reply

The last character in Senta and the Steel Dragon is the second title character for the series– the Steel Dragon himself.  In fact, when the series was originally planned as a single book, the title was going to be “The Steel Dragon.”

Spoiler Alert

The Steel Dragon goes through more change than any other character in the entire series.  In Book 0, he only appears as an egg afterall.  🙂  In The Voyage of the Minotaur he is little more than a pet for the sorceress Zurfina, though she saves the term “Pet” for Senta.  We don’t even learn the dragon’s name until the very last word of the book.

The Steel Dragon grows (a lot) and increases his intellect and various abilities a great deal from book to book.  In the final book of the series, Book 5: The Two Dragons, he is as large as a railroad car, though still tiny compared to the other dragon in the story– yes, he’s one of the two dragons mentioned in the title.

I hoped the 25 regular readers of this blog have enjoyed a look at the characters in this book.  In the next few days, I’ll start my way through Book 2: The Dark and Forbidding Land.

The Voyage of the Minotaur: The Clergy

Posted on by
Reply

When the Minotaur sails toward the new colony in a faraway land, there are several members of the Church of Kafira who are along to see to the worship needs of the colonists.

Spoiler Alert

Father Ian:  Father Ian is the priest on the expedition and he is really only there as cannon fodder– or in this case, dinosaur fodder.  From the very beginning, he was intended as a T-Rex milkbone.  I actually had a little fun writing him to be more or less incompetent and a bit goofy, knowing that I was going to kill him off later.

Sister Auni: Sister Auni is an acolyte (since in the Church of Kafira, priests and acolytes are both male and female, she takes the place of a nun).  She is competent and helpful and a source for healing magic.  I made her really skinny to make her a bit distinctive.  It’s all the more so because, unlike the laywomen, she doesn’t wear a bustle. 

Brother Galen: He is the other acolyte and barely makes an appearance in the story, though he is a bit more important (though not much more visible) in the later books.

The Voyage of the Minotaur is the first book in the Senta and the Steel Dragon series, and is available wherever fine ebooks are sold.

The Voyage of the Minotaur: The Wizards

Posted on by
Reply
There are two wizards who appear in The Voyage of the Minotaur—Dudley Labrith and Suvir Kesi.  Wizards differ from sorcerers in the world of Senta and the Steel Dragon.  One may learn to be a wizard.  It involves mathematics.  One must be born a sorcerer.  It involves being able to communicate with the magical plane.  Dudley Labrith and Suvir Kesi are nominally friends and served in the military together.
Spoiler Alert

Dudley Labrith is a Brech wizard.  He would love to steal some of Zurfina’s magic, but otherwise is not that bad a chap.  I named Dudley in honor of J. K. Rowling.  Her Dudley is one of the few nonmagical characters in her Harry Potter books.  Dudley Labrith is an insect collector and loves killing them and pinning them to his mat, which foreshadows his own demise.

Suvir Kesi is a Mirsannan.  Mirsanna is the third major country on the continent of Sumir and somewhat takes the place of France in our world.  It is a bit more exotic, with the men wearing fezzes and coats made of ferret skins and the women running around in Arabian Knights-ish silky things.  I found the name Suvir on a baby name web site and immediately chose it for Kesi, because it sounds like “severe.”   He is a bad guy and the extent of his evil plans should be a surprise for the end of the book, so I won’t spoil them now even though I put up the spoiler warning.

The Voyage of the Minotaur: Old Ladies

Posted on by
Reply
There are quite a few older characters in Senta and the Steel Dragon, but here are a couple that I would term “old ladies.”

Spoiler Alert

Mrs. Gantonin is the woman who lives in the same tenement as Senta and her relatives.  When Senta’s granny dies, she goes to live with Mrs. Gantonin, because no other relatives will take her.  As I mentioned before, this idea comes from a similar situation that my own great-grandfather found himself in.  He was raised by neighbors when his parent died, even though there were plenty of relatives who probably should have taken him in.

Mrs. Phillida Marjoram is a nosy neighbor type who makes the journey on the HMS Minotaur to the new colony.  She is present mostly as a foil to other characters at whom she can act displeased.

The Voyage of the Minotaur: Maalik Murty

Posted on by
Reply
Maalik Murty is a character in The Voyage of the Minotaur

Spoiler Alert

Although mentioned briefly in book 0, Maalik Murty really only appears in The Voyage of the Minotaur.  He is a child molester, but with a name like Maalik, you knew he was bad, right?  Murty is one of the few characters that I’ve written that I had a real idea of what he looked like.  Right from the beginning, I pictured the Jeffrey Combs (a truly wonderful character actor) character from The Frighteners (a great pre-Lord of the Rings Peter Jackson movie).  Of course Murty comes to a sticky end, because he comes across both Senta and Terrence, either of whom could and would kill him—and of course one of them does.