Women of Power: Chapter 6 Excerpt

Stella stared ruefully at her reflection in the hall mirror.  The side of her face was still bruised and she had quite a shiner around her left eye.  She thought briefly about applying make-up over it, but decided against it.  She would probably end up making it look worse.  After all, she had never used make-up before.  Of course, she had never been this bruised up before.  Stepping into the living room, she plopped down on the sofa, and grabbing the remote from the cushion beside her, turned on the television.

“Can I bring you anything,” said Linda, suddenly beside her.

“No.”

“Are you sure?”

“Quit hovering over me.  I’m fine.”

“If you say so,” said Linda, sitting down primly in the overstuffed chair.  “You don’t look fine.”

“It’s just a bruise.”

“You saved my life, you know.”

“Yes, I know.”  Stella grabbed the remote again and turned up the volume. 

“… Find out if Airstream keeps his lead or falls to Madame Luna tonight on Dancing with the Supers, right after The Naked Truth and your local news.”

“Can I ask you a question?” asked Stella.

“Yes.”

“You know your dad?”

“Yes…”

“And um… your mom, I mean Doris Drake.”

“Doris Drake-Ford,” corrected Linda.

“Right.”

“What about them?”

“Did you ever see or… hear them?”

“What are you talking about?” wondered Linda.

“You know… did you ever see them or hear them having sex?”

“Eww!  That is so gross!  Those are my parents!”

“Well, sure,” said Stella.  “Only she’s a normal and he was…you know.”

“Oh,” said Linda with a look of recognition.  “You like a regular guy.”

“I just met… no!”

“Stella likes a normal,” sang Linda.  “Stella likes a normal.”

“Shut up.  Just never mind.  I don’t want to talk to you anymore.”

“We need to talk,” said Linda, and when Stella didn’t say anything, she continued.  “Don’t you think we should make some plans?  After all, the Atomic Jack-O-Lantern got away.”

“Are you saying that’s my fault?”

“No, of course not.”

“Just leave me alone and let me watch the news.”

Women of Power now available on iBooks! Still 99 cents!

Women of Power is now available at iBooks, as well as Amazon and Smashwords.  If you are an iBooks fan, please give it a try.  Don’t forget a little feedback love.  I really appreciate it.  For those lovers of B&N, Kobo, and Sony, I’ll let you know as soon as it’s available at those fine ebook stores.

Women of Power: Chapter 5 Excerpt

Stella relaxed at the sidewalk café just across the street from Turvy.  She was wearing jeans, a white top, and a Cubs cap and could have been any attractive young woman.  Her cell phone rang just as the waiter staggered out with a tray containing two chicken Caesar wraps, a steak quesadilla, two bacon double cheeseburgers, an Italian beef sandwich, a walnut-tuna salad sandwich, a cob salad, and a French dip.  As he began arraying the food around her, she pulled the phone from her pocket and slid it open.

“Hello Irving.”

“Stella baby!  Irving is so flattered that you’ve given him his own ring tone.”

“I didn’t give you your own ring-tone, Irving.  I just knew you were going to call me.  The Turvy people are pissed that I didn’t wear that suit, aren’t they?”

“Irving is not their people, baby.  Irving is your people.  Irving cares about what Stella cares about, and what Stella cares about is being on the New York Times list, and guess what?”

Stella waited a beat before asking “What?”

“All American Girl is on the list!”

“No fricking way!”

“Yes baby!  You are on the list my sassy mega-girl, and not at one hundred either.  No, you debuted at number ninety eight!”

“You’re fricking kidding me!  Wait, did somebody die?”

“Nobody died.  Well yes, some people did die, but that’s not why you made the list.  You made the list because you kicked the crap out of some power-suited baddies and saved America!”

“Did Skygirl make the list too?”

“Yes, Skygirl did make the list and that is what Irving really called about.”

“Where did she debut?”

“Skygirl is not important.  At least she should not be important, but you are making her important by letting her in on your turf.  Chicago is All American Girl’s territory.  Why are you letting her steal your thunder, my girl?”

Stella was silent for a moment.

“Did you hear me, Baby?  Are you still there?  Is Irving talking to a dead line?”

“Yes, I’m still here.  Where is she?”

“She’s number ninety seven.”

“Damn it!”

“Irving feels your pain, baby.  So why are you letting this chick hang out with you?”

“It’s just… well, it just kind of happened, Irving.  She sort of saved my life and then she was all nice and stuff, and the next thing I know I’m living with her.”

“Irving understands baby.  That’s how it was with his second wife.  But you cannot let her steal your thunder.  The thunder is yours.  It’s All American Girl brand thunder, with all the legal rights and privileges there-of.”

“Yeah, I get it.”

“You’ve got to get rid of…”

Stella closed her phone and then accidently crushed it in her hand.  Tossing the pieces down on the table, she looked at the vast array of food.  She really didn’t feel all that hungry now—maybe just the two cheeseburgers.

Women of Power: Chapter Four Excerpt

“No fricking way,” said Stella, looking around.

“This is perfect,” said Linda in a breathless whisper.

Linda was dressed in her secret identity—sensible shoes, socks, pleated skirt, sweater, and brown wig.  Stella had on a blue sundress, but she was hardly unrecognizable to anyone from Chicago.  The apartment agent, a middle-aged man in a very sharp grey suit ushered them past the entryway.

“As you can see, the entry opens into the dining room.  We have double doors here into the kitchen, which has an island bar and three stools.  This is all furnished of course, just like you see it.”  They moved through the kitchen and into the living room with a very high ceiling.  “Just the right size.  Plenty of room and yet still cozy.  The couch and a couple of armchairs, entertainment system, and a beautiful gas fireplace, and right through those doors is one of the two balconies.”

“This is perfect,” said Linda again.

“It is perfect for two young and important ladies, such as yourselves.”  He gave Stella a wink.  “If you go right from the entrance, past the linen closet and the powder room, you find a guestroom, which of course could be made into an office or a study or an armory, and the smaller of the two master bedrooms.  It has its own bath with a combo shower-tub, a walk-in closet, and its own balcony.  The larger master bedroom is through here.”  He pointed at double doors leading out of the living room.  “It has a larger bath, with both a shower and a tub, as well as a walk-in closet, but alas, no balcony.”

Linda danced from one foot to the other as though she had to pee.

“Can you give us a minute?” asked Stella.

“Of course.  But one thing before I go.  People in, how shall I say it, a certain line of work, might well expect to provide a considerable security deposit, especially if their previous residence was completely destroyed.”

Women of Power: Chapter Three Excerpt

All American Girl looked up into the horrible, grinning face of the Atomic Jack-O-Lantern.  He didn’t speak.  He just stared at her with that frightful face and glowed with the radioactive energy that was even now, draining away her life energy.  Suddenly a blue and white streak hit the Jack-O-Lantern in the chest, knocking him away.  Stella took a deep breath and tried to refocus her vision.  She was so weak that it was difficult to even move up into a sitting position, but she could slowly feel the energy returning to her muscles.  A minute later the blue and white streak was back.  Standing over her like a blonde goddess was Skygirl.
“No fricking way,” said Stella.
“Here, let me help you up.”
“I can get up myself.”  Stella climbed to her feet.  Her knees felt like overcooked pasta.  “Where’s glow boy?”
“He’s gone.”  Skygirl brushed her honey hair back behind her ear.  “I hit him three or four times, but then he just kind of blinked and disappeared.”
“Yeah, he does that,” said Stella, looking sidelong at the other super.  “You don’t have your boots on.”
“I was just out for a walk,” said Skygirl.  “You know, in my secret identity.”
“Your what?”
“My secret identity.”
“You’re Linda Ford,” said Stella.
“Shh.  Not so loud.”
“It’s not a secret.  Anybody can Google you and find it.  It’s at the top of your Wikipedia page.”
“What are you so upset about?”
Stella put her hands on her hips. 
“Well first of all, my home got knocked down, and all my stuff is gone.  Then a glowing excuse for a Halloween costume tried to kill me, and you let him get away.”
“We’ll get him next time.”
“We?  There is no we.  There’s just me—me and Chicago—my kind of town.”

Women of Power: Now Available at Smashwords and Amazon

Women of Power is finished!  It’s already up at Smashwords and should be up at Amazon’s Kindle store by the time you read this.  You can follow the links at the bottom of this post and purchase your own ebook edition for 99 cents.  It should be available at iBooks, B&N, Kobo, Diesel, and Sony within the next two weeks.

Smashwords: http://www.smashwords.com/books/view/81899
Amazon: http://www.amazon.com/Women-of-Power-ebook/dp/B005HJR4TY/ref=sr_1_69?s=digital-text&ie=UTF8&qid=1313569849&sr=1-69

Women of Power: Chapter Two– Sort of…

As I mentioned the other day, Women of Power is almost done, so I’m just about ready to post some chapter excerpts. Rather than posting part of chapter two, I ‘m just going to give you the link to the original Women of Power Issue 2, which was the basis for chapter two of Women of Power, the novella. It’s gone under more revision that chapter one did, but you get the idea.  Check it out at Feedbooks.com by following the link:

http://www.feedbooks.com/userbook/7334/women-of-power-2

Women of Power: Chapter One — Sort of…

Women of Power is almost done, so I’m just about ready to post some chapter excerpts.  Rather than posting part of chapter one though, I ‘m just going to give you the link to the original Women of Power Issue 1, which with very minor change, has become chapter one of Women of Power, the novella.  Check it out at Feedbooks.com by following the link:

http://www.feedbooks.com/userbook/6018/women-of-power-1

Revision and Editing

As I work on finishing Women of Power, just a bit about the revision and editing process.  As I write, I solicite alpha readers (friends, family, and members of my writers’ group) to give me feedback as I go.  I make major changes as I go along– adding, cutting, moving sections around.  When the entire first draft is done, I have my beta readers (often but not always the same people) go back to it.  At this point, I’m not editing.  I’m revising.  I’m looking for changes to be made in the storytelling.

Once I’ve got the manuscript the way I want it, I give it a few editing passes.  Editing is much harder to do on your own manuscript because you know it.  You’re very likely to skip over errors because you know what’s supposed to be there.  If possible, I have my crack team of grammarians go over the manuscript again.  My final pass uses the program Text2Go to read the manuscript aloud to me as I follow along in the text.  I’ve caught many errors that I missed and many that editors missed.

Once all that is done and my story is ready to go out, it’s a quick trip through the formatting machine (That’s me.  I format it myself.) and then it’s available to ebook lovers everywhere.

Women of Power – First Draft Finished

Women of Power is done; at least the first draft is done.  In fact, as I write this, I’m about a third of the way through the first revision.  It’s going quickly for reasons I’ve mentioned before.  This will definitely be out before the end of August.  After that I can work on revising Blood Trade– a much bigger job, both because it’s longer and because it’s rougher.

In the meantime, I’m about a quarter way through the first draft of Astrid Maxxim and her Amazing Hoverbike.  More details to follow.