Some Thoughts

Astrid Maxxim and her Hypersonic Space PlaneI’ve been reading the Astrid Maxxim books and in a totally biased opinion, I think they have some of my best writing in them.  I particularly love the first few chapters of Astrid Maxxim and her Hypersonic Space Plane.  2017 is the year I’m committing to finishing books that I’ve already started, but at some point, I’ve got to write the next Astrid Maxxim.  Probably over the summer.  They are short and usually only take me a couple of months.  I can see myself in twenty years or so, as an old man (older) writing nothing but Astrid Maxxim books.

On another topic, I took chapter seven of the new robot book to my writers group this past week.  They gave it very favorable marks, as they did chapter 6 two weeks earlier.  This might be because they are two of the most humorous parts of the story.  Other parts are downright serious.  Well, back to work.

 

Astrid Maxxim and her Undersea Dome – Chapter 5 Excerpt

Astrid Maxxim 2Just after five, she pulled her phone from her pocket and called Mrs. Purcell, the office manager.

“What do you need, Astrid?”

“Can you get both Mr. Gortner and Mrs. Trent from Production for me?”

Mr. Gortner was first on the line.

“Good afternoon, Astrid,” he said. “You caught me just as I was leaving.”

“Well, I don’t want to keep you; just one quick question. Do we have a supply of hydrophobic sand on site?”

“I’m sure we have some. How much do you need?”

“I’d like about a hundred pounds, if possible.”

“I’ll have it sent over first thing tomorrow.”

“Thanks, Mr. Gortner,” said Astrid. “And how is the battery facility coming?”

He laughed. “Don’t be too impatient, Astrid. We won’t even break ground till next month.”

Seconds after Astrid said goodbye to Mr. Gortner, Mrs. Trent was on the line.

“How is the hoverbike production going?” asked Astrid.

“We’re producing 200 a day,” replied Mrs. Trent. “Nobody seems to know how many we need though. Some of our accounts people are predicting an initial order of 10,000. But I think it could be ten times that many.”

“Well, I have a couple of other things that I need,” said the girl inventor. “I want to build a second undersea dome, with thicker Astridium panels. I’ll send you the measurements tomorrow. In the meantime, I’d appreciate it if you could send me a hundred pounds of ground Astridium.”

“I can send you all the ground material you want,” said Mrs. Trent. “I can just grind up some parts that aren’t up to spec. As for building another dome, Astrid, I’m afraid that’s out of the question.”

“What?”

“We don’t have the capacity or the man-hours. I’ve got to finish this run of hoverbikes, and then your father has three different projects waiting in the queue. His work takes priority.”

“Oh, um, all right,” said Astrid.

She ended the call and stuffed the phone back into her pocket.

“Are you still here, Astrid?” Mr. Brown stepped into the lab.

“Yes, I’m here.”

“What’s the matter, Astrid?”

“Um, nothing. Why?”

“You look like somebody just shot your dog.”

Astrid laughed. “Nothing that horrible. I’m just not used to not getting my way. I guess I’m spoiled.”

“You are the least spoiled girl I know,” he replied smiling. “What are you not getting your way about?”

“Oh, nothing.”

“Are you working on something new?” he asked.

“I was thinking about how hydrophobic sand was originally designed to clean up oil spills, and I thought that ground Astridium might work equally well. And since we might have extra after making hoverbikes, it could be repurposed to help the environment.”

Astrid Maxxim and her Undersea Dome – Chapter 2 Excerpt

Astrid Maxxim 2Early Monday morning, the four young Americans arrived at the airport. Their plane was awaiting them, all serviced, fueled, and ready to go. The Maxxim Starcraft 170 was a sharp, if unusual looking aircraft. Designed by Astrid’s father Dr. Roger Maxxim, the 47 foot long Starcraft featured a long pointy fuselage with a small canard wing just behind the nose. The main wing was at the back of the aircraft, and carried twin turboprop engines, with the propellers facing rearward. These were known as push-props. The cabin, which could accommodate up to nine passengers, was more than spacious with just Astrid and Denise and their carryon luggage. Dennis and Toby took their places as pilot and co-pilot respectively.

An hour later, the Starcraft was soaring westward over the Atlantic Ocean. Though no jet, its cruising speed of 320 mph would carry them back in Maxxim City in under ten hours, even allowing for a short refueling stop in Atlanta. The girls carried on a spirited game of Toad Town using their MX-360 PDAs.

“Do you want to go sit up front?” asked Dennis, walking back down the aisle. “I’ve got to make a pit stop. Toby’s got the stick.”

“I told you that you shouldn’t drink so much orange juice right before takeoff,” said Denise.

Her brother ignored her and continued on toward the diminutive restroom at the rear of the cabin. Astrid unbuckled her seatbelt, walked to the cockpit, and carefully climbed into the pilot’s seat, strapping herself in.

“This is cool,” she said.

“I know,” said Toby. “By the time we get home, I’ll have enough hours to pilot one of these babies myself.”

“Good, you can fly us to Hawaii in two weeks.”

“I don’t know if I can go,” he said. “I haven’t asked yet. I know my dad will be fine with it, but Aunt Gerta thinks that I spend too much time away from home.”

Toby’s great aunt had come to live with him two years before, when his mother had passed away after a long struggle with cancer.

“What the heck is that?” cried Toby, as a loud beeping rang out in the small compartment.

“It’s the SAR,” said Astrid. “Somebody’s fired a missile at us.”

She pointed to the round radarscope at the bottom center of the control panel. It showed a blip coming up toward them from behind.

“What do I do?” asked Toby.

“I’ve got it,” said Astrid.

Taking the control stick in her left hand, she grabbed the twin throttles with her right, shoving them both forward. The engines screamed as they pushed the aircraft toward its maximum speed of 400 mph. Astrid didn’t take her eyes off the radar. The blip, indicating the missile, came closer and closer toward the center of the amber screen. At the last moment, she jerked left on the stick as she stamped down of the corresponding foot pedal and the plane rolled over onto its back. She and Toby watched as a missile shot past them, below the plane, and from their upside down perspective, just above their heads. It flew right through the space where the Starcraft had been.

Astrid flipped the plane back right side up and banked right in a climbing turn.

“What in the world is going on!” shouted Dennis behind them. “Are you trying to crash us?”

“There was a missile,” said Toby. “She just saved all of our lives.”

“Now let’s see if we can find out who shot at us,” said Astrid.

They spotted several recently made contrails high up in the sky, but no other aircraft in their vicinity.

“I’m sure that was an air-to-air missile,” said the girl inventor. “Our attacker must have high-tailed it as soon as they fired.”

“Just a couple of weeks ago they were trying to kidnap you,” said Toby. “Now they’re trying to kill you.”

“Yeah,” mused Astrid. “I wish they would hurry up and make up their mind.”

Kanana: The Jungle Girl – Origins

The Jungle GirlI’ve worked on the book Kanana: The Jungle Girl off and on for about five years.  The original idea was to write another homage to Edgar Rice Burroughs.  I wanted to recreate the enjoyment I got reading The Cave Girl, The Eternal Savage, and of course Tarzan of the Apes.  That gave me the basis.  Of course it was The Cave Girl that had the female primitive matched up with the modern male.  This has been kind of my approach too, with Princess of Amathar, and for that matter, His Robot Girlfriend.  I also wanted to set it in a historic and adventurous time, so the early 1900s.  This also let me use Theodore Roosevelt as a character.  But where to set it?

I was hesitant to place the story in any real world setting, not the least because it would have required a great deal of research.  I didn’t want to emulate ERB by placing tigers in Africa.  I also wanted enough empty territory to place the cultures and lost civilizations of my own imagining.  Then I read a book called A World of Difference by Harry Turtledove.  In it, the author simply replaced the planet Mars with his own world.  I thought, “That’s it. I’ll just replace a continent on Earth with my own.”  So I used the lost continent of Mu as a basis, but let it be discovered by Sir Francis Drake, who named it Elizagaiea (as Virginia was taken by then.)

I based the concept of Kanana on a (Sumerian, I think) mythological female, who was literally a woman from the forest.  I had also had a student whose first name was Kanana.

Kanana: The Jungle Girl is currently available wherever fine ebooks are sold for 99 cents.

 

Falling Behind

My nine-year-old niece commented recently that she thought I must love math, because I had a notebook that was full of numbers and she couldn’t figure out what they were.  It was my tally/notebook.  I’ve set a goal for myself to keep up with my writing.  I’ve boosted my goal every year.  Currently it’s eight pages per day.  I keep a tally of how many pages I finish and try to stay ahead.  I also use the same notebook for my ideas, so it’s full of character names and so forth.  At the end of August, I was about 204 pages ahead of my goal.  Such is the results from having a surgery that prevents you from getting up out of your chair.  Now I’m only about 123 pages ahead.  If I keep this up, I’m actually going to be behind.  Plus, I’m going to increase my goal on January 1st.  Fortunately, this post counts as a page.  🙂  Now back to Patience and Mike and Lucas.

 

Astrid Maxxim and her Amazing Hoverbike – Chapter 19 Excerpt

Astrid Maxxim and her Amazing HoverbikeAstrid moved carefully around the side of the building as she struggled to come up with a plan. She noted that there was a door near where she now stood and that it swung freely on its hinges, the lock long since gone. She reached the front corner of the building, and looked around at the three vans. None of the men seemed to have stayed out to watch them. They were probably all leaving by plane, and since they had no more need of the vans, they weren’t thinking about them.

Astrid thought that if she could only create a diversion, she might be able to enter through the door and lead Valerie to safety. She rounded the corner of the building and ran stealthily to the closest van. Ducking behind it, she thought about the possibilities. Having worked for years with internal combustion engines, Astrid knew that cars didn’t just explode like they seemed to on TV. But there was one easy source of ignition in any vehicle.

Astrid looked down at her sandaled feet. What a time to go without socks. Pulling her shirt up over her shoulders, Astrid unfastened her bra and took it off, and then pulled her shirt back down. She edged around the van and slowly opened the driver’s side door, reached down below the dashboard, and pulled the hood release. The thunk that the hood made as it popped up about two inches was horrifyingly loud to her, but she waited several seconds and no one from inside the building seemed to have heard it. Moving to the vehicle’s front, she lifted the hood and propped it open. She quickly located the windshield wiper fluid reservoir, and opening the lid, stuffed her bra into it so that it was completely soaked. She pulled the bra back out and tossed it over the two terminals of the car battery. It sparked. By the time Astrid turned to run, it was already smoking. As she rounded the corner of the building, the van’s engine compartment burst into flames. Engine parts popped and hissed as they were destroyed by the fire. She heard yelling from inside the building.

Reaching the door and carefully peering in the window, Astrid was almost bowled over by Valerie as she came running out.

“Astrid?” the robot girl cried.

“Shush,” Astrid ordered her. “Come on!”

Taking Valerie by the arm, Astrid ran straight into the darkness, rather than trying to get directly back to the hoverbike. She thought that if she could reach the desert, they could circle around to the spot where she had parked. They hadn’t gone more than twenty steps though when shouts of pursuit followed them. It had really been too much to expect, Astrid realized, to divert the attention of all those eyes for more than a few seconds. Behind the first large desert bush, she ducked down, pulling Valerie down beside her.

“I’m so glad to see you, Astrid,” said Valerie in a whisper. “Is Toby with you?”

“No. I was getting tired of him horning in on my rescues, so I made him stay home this time.”

“There are two of them coming this way,” hissed Valerie.

“I’ve seen this on a hundred TV shows,” said Astrid, as she picked up several small rocks. “It’s time to see if it really works.”

She threw the rocks as hard as she could into the desert. The sounds of the rocks crashing into the brush were followed by a squeal and even more rustling sounds. The two men ran off in that direction.

“You must have hit an animal,” said Valerie. “I wonder what it was.”

“Probably a rabbit or a fox,” replied Astrid. “I hope I didn’t hurt it. Come on.”

They ran through the darkness, dodging and sometimes tripping over rocks or brush until they reached the area where Astrid had set down, but she didn’t see the hoverbike.

“Is that your new invention?” asked Valerie.

“Where?”

“Right over here.” Valerie led the girl inventor right to where the hoverbike sat. “It looks pretty neat.”

“Of course,” said Astrid. “I forgot that you had night vision.”

“I do?” wondered Valerie.

A Great Deal of Patience – Trilogy

A Great Deal of PatienceI’m hard at work on His Robot Wife: A Great Deal of Patience.  I’ve just finished another chapter, which puts me at roughly the halfway part of the rough draft.  While doing so, I have been expanding the greater story enough that I can tell you, A Great Deal of Patience will be the first book of a trilogy.  This trilogy will wrap up my ideas for Mike and Patience and their world (though that doesn’t mean I won’t write another book if I think of an idea.)  The books in the trilogy will be A Great Deal of Patience, (You knew that one) Patience Under Fire, and Extreme Patience.  I’m dedicated to getting this book done and working on nothing else until it is.  After that, I’d really like to finish some stories that I’ve got partially done, such as 82: Eridani, Nova Dancer, Love and the Darkness, and a Time Travel book of which I’ve written about a third.  Heck, maybe I’ll finish one of the sequels I’ve started: Amathar, Tesla’s Stepdaughters, or Blood Trade.  But!  None until I finish A Great Deal of Patience.

Astrid Maxxim and her Amazing Hoverbike – Chapter 6 Excerpt

Astrid Maxxim and her Amazing HoverbikeThey went up a hill and the bicycle built for two shot ahead. Austin caught up with Astrid and rode beside her.

“My grandma told me this story all about how your dad built a motorcycle and rode all over the country on it,” he said.

“Really? I wonder why he said I wasn’t allowed to have one then?”

“Maybe you could invent something even better, like a flying bicycle.”

“That’s a really good idea, Austin.”

Astrid’s mind was spinning ideas the rest of the ride, and when everyone was done, Astrid had Austin bring the bike he had been riding up to her lab. Then she got on the phone.

“Mrs. Purcell?”

“Yes, Astrid.”

“Do you have any idea how many hoverdisks my dad has?”

“He had at least fifteen made up,” she replied, “though a few of them were broken in testing.”

“Could you have someone send a couple up to my lab please?”

“I’ll get them right over, Astrid. Bye.”

By the time a lab technician arrived with a rolling cart holding two of Dr. Maxxim’s hoverdisks, Astrid had the bicycle up on her workbench, had removed both wheels and had built a pair of simple brackets in their place. The hoverdisks were two and a half feet in diameter and six inches thick. She attached one hoverdisk to each bracket. Finally she connected one of her large test batteries to the two levitation devices, securing it to the bike frame with duck tape.

“Alright Austin,” said Astrid, with Robot Valerie’s help, setting the bike on the lab floor. “Would you like to be the first person to ride on a flying bike?”

“You bet!” he shouted, climbing into the seat. “What do I have to do?”

“Just try to keep your balance,” said Astrid. Then she turned on the hoverdisks.

The bicycle immediately rose from the floor, at first just a few inches, then a foot, and then it continued upward.   The girls shouted excitedly, but no more than Austin, who looked to be thoroughly enjoying himself. The hoverdisks were humming quietly, slowly pushing the boy higher and higher. Then suddenly he was at the ceiling and he had to tilt his head to the side. Immediately the bike flipped over. Austin flailed his arms, as the now inverted hoverdisks drove him into the floor.

Astrid quickly jumped forward and disconnected the battery.

“Are you alright?” she asked the boy.

“Did you see me? I was flying!”

Astrid Maxxim and her Amazing Hoverbike – Chapter 5 Excerpt

Astrid Maxxim and her Amazing HoverbikeAll nine members of the Maxxim Board of Directors were seated around a very large oval table. Astrid’s mother left her to take a seat at the far end, leaving Astrid to face the entire group, and she was feeling very small. The girl inventor knew how it worked. Those at the table didn’t own all the shares of Maxxim Industries. In fact, she herself had quite a large block inherited from her grandmother. But these nine had been chosen by the shareholders to oversee the operations of the company, so they had tremendous power.

“These will be the new line of Maxxim Supercell Batteries,” Astrid started, lifting the cover off of the cart full of mock-ups. Mr. Brown had outdone himself. There were more than 30 different battery sizes represented—everything from tiny button batteries to large, square lantern batteries.

“Aren’t there already lots of battery manufacturers?” asked Astrid’s aunt Lauren, usually her harshest critic on the board. “Why would we want to get into a such a crowded business.”

“Our batteries will change the marketplace,” replied Astrid. “They will change the world. First of all, since they are made with our own, patented Astricite, their charge will last much longer than any other batteries. Secondly, again because of the Astricite, they can be made for far less. Finally, and perhaps most importantly, they will be far less toxic than batteries made with lead, mercury, or cadmium.

“Every year Americans alone dump 180,000 tons of batteries into landfills where toxic contaminants leach out into the soil and water. Every year dozens of children are hospitalized because of ingesting tiny batteries, from which corrosive or poisonous chemicals are released.”

“Our batteries would be safe to swallow?” asked former Senator Charles Bentlemore.

“No,” Astrid replied. “There is still the problem of liquefaction necrosis, which occurs because sodium hydroxide is generated by the current produced by the battery.”

“But our batteries won’t leach into landfills?” asked board member Saul Smith.

“Correct. Astricite has a relatively short life, on the order thirty to forty years depending on the sample size. After that, it degrades into its component compounds, all of which are non-toxic.”

“How much money can we make on this?” asked Astrid’s uncle Carl, her father’s brother and Aunt Lauren’s husband.

“As my mother can confirm,” said Astrid, “batteries are a $64 billion dollar business.”

“How soon can we get these to market?” asked Mr. Roy Dillanson.

“I’ve talked to Mr. Gortner in production, and he says we can have a factory in place in fourteen months.”

“Why don’t we just use an existing factory in China or Mexico?” asked Aunt Lauren.

“We will discuss that after Astrid has gone,” said her mother. “You are finished, aren’t you Astrid?”

“Yes, Mom.”

Astrid Maxxim and her Amazing Hoverbike – Chapter 3 Excerpt

Astrid Maxxim and her Amazing HoverbikeTuesday at school wasn’t all that different from Monday, with the exception that Astrid had a presentation to make in US History class. Her subject was Robert E. Lee. She was a little miffed that Mr. Hoffman gave her an A-, saying that she could have used more creativity in her PowerPoint.

“Substance is more important than style,” she said under her breath.

At lunch, which was Asian lettuce wraps with soy dipping sauce, vegetable stir-fry, steamed rice, and strawberries, Austin joined their table in the quad. There was no trouble from Mark McGovern.

After school they all stepped into the monorail train traveling deeper into the Maxxim campus, rather than the train the other students took heading home. It wasn’t a straight shot to the R&D section. The track stopped at the Business Offices Complex, before continuing on, following along the shores of Pearl Lake, through the Saguaro Cactus Park, and finally to the Research and Development Department.

“So, I don’t get it,” said Austin. “If thousands of people are working all the time to make better batteries, how come it takes a fourteen year old girl to do it?”

“I’ll bet they don’t want to make batteries better,” said Christopher. “You make them last longer and you don’t sell as many.”

“I have an advantage over anyone else,” said Astrid. “I have Astricite. It’s a relatively inexpensive, superconductive alloy that I developed when I was six. We’re already using it in our microprocessors.”

They arrived in the lab and Astrid examined the readings on her experiment.

“I think this might make it till the week-end.”

“What’s in this box?” asked Toby, from across the room. “What’s Project RG-7, and why is it top secret?”

“I was going to show you guys next week,” said Astrid, leading the others to where Toby was standing beside the crate. “I guess you can go ahead and take a look now.”

Reaching up, she flipped open a latch and opened the side of the crate. Inside, packed with straw, was a metallic girl. She had bright silver skin, but was otherwise quite human looking. Her hair was the same metallic material as the rest of her, a solid hair-shaped mass rather than individual fibers, but she was wearing regular clothing. She had on a pink jacket over a blue t-shirt, jeans, and sneakers.

“Oh my gosh!” squealed Valerie. “She looks like me!”