Astrid Maxxim and the Boardroom

Next Up: Astrid Maxxim and her Amazing HoverbikeThe Following is a bit I may or may not use in the next Astrid Maxxim Book.  In any case, I’m not getting started on it until I finish the next robot book, so I thought I would post it here.

A large chart on the boardroom wall compared Maxxim Enterprises’ competitors in space. It displayed each company name as a three letter code, it’s current plans and goals, and then compared how many launches each had made and thus far. It read as follows:

 

BOE ISS Transport/Satellite 0
BLH Suborbital Tourism 0
SRN ISS Transport Orbital Tourism 0
SPX ISS Transport/Satellite Exploration of Mars 8
VGL Suborbital Tourism 0
MAXXIM ISS Transport/Satellite Orbital Tourism 15

“It’s pretty clear who our real competition is,” said Roy Dillanson.

“Yes, it’s pretty clear,” agreed Carl Maxxim. “It’s not a surprise to me, since our friendly competitor here is also CEO of our biggest completion in the electric car industry.”

“Still, we’re way ahead,” said former US Senator Charles Bentlemore. “We’ve had almost twice as many launches and we have a waiting list of nearly ten thousand. That’s pretty impressive since we’re charging twelve times as much as our friends planning the suborbital flights.”

“Yes, but our space planes are too expensive,” Dillanson pointed out. “To recoup the cost, we’d have to fly each one nearly five hundred times.”

“That’s because they were not designed to fly rich people around the world,” said sixteen-year-old inventor Astrid Maxxim. “We should leave that to those that want to fly tourism. The space planes are for more.”

“We’ve had this discussion before,” said Bentlemore. “What you’re proposing isn’t realistic.”

“Look, it’s simple,” said Astrid. “Werner von Braun spelled it out in the fifties. First you need a cheap and efficient launch system. Our space planes are expensive to build but cheap to fly. Second, you need a space station, as a destination and a launch point. Third, you need a space dock, where you can build the vehicles and tools you need to explore the solar system.”

“You forget, my dear,” said the former senator. “The purpose of this company is not to explore and discover. The purpose is to make money.”

“Astrid hasn’t forgotten anything,” barked design chief Dennis Brown.

“Maybe I should have said ‘explore and utilize’,” said Astrid. “I won’t say exploit. Remember the settlers at Jamestown. They came trying to make money with their toehold in the new world. If it hadn’t been for John Rolf smuggling in tobacco, the settlement of America might have been set back decades. Now imagine that those settlers had come to Virginia with their own railroad, fortress, and machine shop. How much quicker would our America have come to be?”

“Bottom line it for us,” said Dillanson. “How much are we talking about?”

“Including the boosters needed, and the lauch costs, as well as the design, construction, and deployment—Seven hundred fifty billion dollars.”

There were more than a few gasps around the room.

“That’s insane,” said Bentlemore.

“There’s no way to raise that kind of capital,” said Dillanson. “It’s more than the market capitalization for the whole company.”

“Actually, it’s not,” said Maxwell Bauer, reading information from his phone. “We’re up thirteen and a third today. Somebody leaked the subject of this meeting.” He shrugged and smiled.

“We’ve got to stop thinking small,” said Astrid. “It’s time to leapfrog these other guys. They’re not the real competition and neither are the Russians. We’ve got to be ahead of the Chinese. They’ve got big boosters. They’ve got the beginnings of a space station. They’ve got a rover on the moon. Now they’re working on their own space planes.”

“Why don’t we just buy the ISS?” asked Carl Maxxim. “The government is begging someone to buy it. We could probably get it for a dollar and few promises.”

“To do what?” shouted Astrid, jumping to her feet. “It’s a tiny space lab with room for six. I don’t care how many inflatable bounce houses they attach to it. We have to think bigger!”

“All right,” said CEO Kate Maxxim. “This is a straight up and down vote. Do we allocate five million dollars for feasibility studies and planning.”

“I vote yay,” said Bauer.

“Yay,” said Martin Bundersmith.

“Nay,” said Dillonson.

“Nay,” said Bentlemore.

“I abstain,” said Astrid.

“I vote yay,” said Dennis Brown.

“My vote is yay,” said Penelope Maxxim.

“I vote yay,” said her brother Carl Maxxim.

“The chair abstains,” finished Kate. “The motion carries.”

 

A Plague of Wizards -Final Proofreading

A Plague of WizardsI’m doing the final proofreading for A Plague of Wizards.  The primary editing was done some time ago and then I set it aside to finish the last few chapters of Kanana: The Jungle Girl.  Now, it seems like I’m reading it again for the first time really.  I’m finding little nuggets that I had forgotten that I put in.

As soon as the final proofreading and formatting is done, it will be available for preorders.  Watch this space for more details.  It shouldn’t be more than a few days.  Remember the release date it October 28.

As soon as the preorders are active, I’ll start posting some excerpts and bits of related information here as well.

Princess of Amathar – The World of Ecos

Princess of AmatharThe story of “Princess of Amathar” takes place in the world of Ecos.  Notice I said takes place “in”, not “on”, for Ecos is a Dyson Sphere. There is a lot of information on Dyson’s Spheres on the web and quite a bit relates to an episode of Star Trek: The Next Generation.  I however set Princess of Amathar in a Dyson Sphere long before that episode was shown, having read about it in a role-playing magazine (for the Traveller RPG).

Ecos is a giant hollow ball, about 180 milliion miles in diameter, with its sun in the center. The people walk around on the inside of this great sphere. Though the Ecosian sun is slightly smaller than ours, you can’t tell because it is slightly closer to the surface of Ecos than ours is to Earth. This vast shell provides a surface area that is billions (with a B) of times larger than the surface area of any normal planet.

Ecos was created ages ago by a race of beings known as the Elder Gods. They also populated Ecos with dozens, perhaps hundreds of alien races, who then developed their own civilizations and societies. No one knows what happened to the Elder Gods, but the many races of Ecos continue to thrive.

Princess of Amathar – Chapter 15 Excerpt

Princess of Amathar“Alexander Ashton! Alexander Ashton! You don’t understand!” she cried. “You don’t know! Once you cross into the Garden, you cannot come out again! To come out without your knighthood, is the greatest disgrace!”

I waved to acknowledge her. I could see a kind of fear in her face, even at this distance. I have often jumped into something without thinking, and I resigned myself to the fact that this was probably just such an occasion, though it didn’t quite seem fair that I should bear all of the burden, drawn as I was without my consent. I was compelled beyond my ability to refuse. I saw that Vena Remontar stepped over to speak with the group of templars, no doubt to plead that I was only an ignorant savage. I didn’t watch to see the outcome, but turned and made my way into the wilderness.

I had walked a mile or more, when I turned to look back. The gate was no longer visible, lying beyond a small hill that I had crossed without really thinking about it. In fact, I could no longer see the city in any direction, though I knew that it lay all around me. I didn’t know how large the Garden of Souls was, but there was a small mountain rising up ahead of me, so I headed toward it. I know it must have been a number of miles, but it seemed that I crossed the distance and climbed over the mountain, in no time at all.

When I reached the summit I looked down into a small valley surrounding a blue pool. It was not the most beautiful valley that I had ever seen, but is seemed a nice place to await my soul. I was unsure as to just what I was really waiting for. I knew that the Amatharians met their souls here, but just what was a soul? I could only think of the soul as a mystical force, as in the Judeo-Christian sense of the word, but I knew that the Amatharian soul was different. For one thing, not everyone had one. For another, I knew there was some physical manifestation. There was a force of some kind which made the remiant’s sword glow and cut through anything. I had seen it myself.

I sat down on the ground, below a small tree, beside the blue pool. Try as I might, I just couldn’t feel fearful about what I had done. Any sane person would, I suppose. I had stepped into a life or death situation without any thought at all. If I came out without a soul I would be disgraced and would be forced to leave the only friends that I knew in this world. If I didn’t come out at all, I would die where I sat. Still, I wasn’t sad or afraid or unhappy. I was fine. At least that’s how I remember it.

A slight breeze picked up, and blew low clouds in to block out the sun. I leaned on my right hand, and felt something smooth beneath my palm. Looking down to see what it was, I saw a partially buried skull grinning back at me. I slowly looked around, and for the first time noticed that the ground around the little pool was littered with bones, some with decomposing flesh still hanging upon them. Here were the remains of those who failed to find their souls. I suddenly felt my stomach sink and my loins tighten. Here was the fear that had failed to manifest itself up until this point. I should say two fears, for there were two distinct emotions, and I didn’t know which was causing me the most anxiety– the fear that I would die here, or the fear that I would prove unworthy and drag myself from the garden in disgrace.

These thoughts were still occupying my mind when I noticed a small flame directly in front of me. Something on the ground had caught fire. The fire was the size one would expect from a freshly filled cigarette lighter or five or six wood matches lit together, though I couldn’t quite tell what was on fire. Nothing seemed to be consumed by the blaze. Then the little fire hopped toward me, leaving nothing scorched in its wake, and stopped within arms reach. At the same time, I felt a tickling sensation on the surface of my scalp. I had the impression of thinking a thought, or smelling a smell, or reading a word which I could not quite identify.

“You are my soul,” I said, a feeling of awe coming over me.

The little flame burned and I continued to have the tickling sensation in my head, which continued until it became an itching and then an aching.

Princess of Amathar – Alexander Ashton

Princess of AmatharI really wanted “Princess of Amathar” to have that same feel that I enjoyed while reading Edgar Rice Burroughs’ Mars books as a boy. Consequently, my hero Alexander Ashton owes a lot to John Carter. He is brave to the point of foolishness. He is smart enough to quickly learn a slew of new languages, but not usually bright enough to clue in on what’s going on right in front of him. He was named Alexander right from the start, to evoke Alexander the Great’s wreckless personal heroism, if not his drunken fits of rage, but he didn’t have a last name until I was well into the manuscript. A young lady I worked with at the time, had the last name Ashton, which just seemed to fit so well.

Princess of Amathar – Chapter 14 Excerpt

Princess of AmatharAs I said this, I swung down. I knew that were we really engaged in battle, her sword would have glowed with power, and sliced through the mundane metal of my own, but for now, the soul was asleep, and we were on equal terms. Actually, I had an advantage of superior strength. She blocked my swing, but was unprepared for the added power, and it knocked her from her feet. Without hesitation, she swung toward my knees. I jumped up, and the blade passed harmlessly below me. The young knight rolled to her feet.

I could see by the half smile on her lips that she was enjoying herself. With a flick of her left wrist so quick that I almost didn’t see it, she whipped her short sword from its sheath and grasped it like a dagger. I chopped down with my blade in an attempt to catch her off balance, but she wasn’t off balance. She blocked my blow with the shorter blade and began to attack with the longer. Then she attacked with both swords, forcing me to defend, and I am sure, hoping to wear me down. Unable to attack for the moment, I began to leap quickly to either side, and then to the back, forcing her to chase me. I knew that it was I who would be able to wear her down first, and after several dozen parries, I could see in her eyes that she was coming to the same realization.

Here was the advantage I needed. I rained a series of blows at her head, then swung with power at her side. Like she had before, Vena Remontar spun around with her back to me and swung her sword, tip down, outward to meet mine. I expected to have a quick shot at her exposed back and left side, but even as she blocked my attack, she had with her left hand, driven her short sword straight back under her arm, and into my stomach.

“Umph!” I grunted in surprise. I expected that I had been cut through, but the tip of her sword merely pricked my skin.

Vena Remontar wiped the tiny drop of blood from her sword tip onto her tabard, then sheathed her sword. With the drawing of first blood, the contest was over.

“I’m satisfied,” she said. “I thought that perhaps Norar Remontar was being overly generous. But you are quite skilled.”

“Still, you defeated me,” I said, still holding a hand over my wound.

“It could have gone either way.”

Put Down Your Pitchforks

A Great Deal of PatienceOkay.  So you’re pissed off at me that neither of the new books is a robot book.  I get it.  I get it!  I’m back to work on A Great Deal of Patience, and if it is at all humanly possible, this will be then next book I finish.

As it stands right now, I’m in the middle of chapter seven.  The outline is twenty chapters, but that could end up being more or less.  In any case, watch this space for more information.

Announcing Two New Books

A Plague of WizardsAvailable Oct. 28, 2016

A Plague of Wizards (Senta and the Steel Dragon Book 8)

Senta Bly, the most powerful sorceress in the world has disappeared and no one knows where or why. What happens to Port Dechantagne and Birmisia without her protection for four years? Wizards with all sorts of their own agendas descend on the colony, and the citizens must cope the best they can. Nineteen-year-old Iolana Staff lives the life of a famous author, far away in the capital city, but how does her friend Esther, the only Birmisian lizzie on the continent deal with human society? Meanwhile Iolana’s cousin Terra has made the journey to the lizzie city of Yessonarah, to learn what living in the palace of a reptilian king is really like.

The Jungle GirlAvailable Nov. 25, 2016

Kanana: The Jungle Girl

In a world substantially different from our own world in 1913, former Rough Rider and adventurer Henry Goode crosses the vast ocean to explore the unknown continent of Elizagaea. Spurred on into the wilderness by emotional trauma, he finds vicious creatures from a bygone era, savage natives, long lost civilizations, and a mysterious jungle goddess.

Princess of Amathar – Chapter 12 Excerpt

Princess of AmatharThe transport dropped lower as Bentar Hissendar guided in to a landing at a large installation just within the wall of the city. On a large tarmac, surrounded by several buildings, sat a dozen transports just like the one in which we were flying. When our craft came to a stop on the ground, a crew of Amatharian men and women ran out onto the field to service the vehicle. They were wearing bodysuits very much like those the knights wore, though these were light blue rather than black, and they were worn without the tabard over them. Bentar Hissendar turned and spoke to one of them.

“Send word to the Kurar Ka, that we have returned with his grandson,” he turned to Norar Remontar. “It is best to send word before you go showing up at the door of your home. Give everyone a chance to realize you are alive.”

Norar Remontar replied, but I was too busy looking around to pay much attention to their conversation. The wall over which we had passed to come to this airfield was about two hundred feet tall, and was constructed or at least covered by a copper-colored metal. It looked to be thick enough for a truck to drive over. If fact, as I stared at it, some sort of vehicle running slowly along the top of the wall, passed by. The way it sat on the top, hugging the sides, reminded me of the monorail at Disneyland, though this vehicle was a single unit rather than a train, and had no windows, so therefore did not appear to be a passenger craft.

“That is the automated sentry,” said Norar Remontar, breaking into my observations. “Come, you have much to see.”

Malagor and I joined the returned son of Amathar, as he walked across the tarmac to one of the buildings at its edge. Inside, we were greeted by more Amatharians wearing bodysuits in a variety of colors. I asked Norar Remontar about the difference in clothing, and he informed me that different occupations within the city had traditional colors associated with them. Among those colors were black for soldier, light blue for mechanic, white for food preparers or servers, grey for doctors, and red for record keepers. The tabard was essentially an Amatharian uniform, worn by none but soldiers.

I was still thinking about this system of color coding, when the familiar black suit with white tabard appeared before me. A young woman, dressed in that very garb, stood with arms folded beside a desk just inside the terminal building. Her tabard bore the same crest that Norar Remontar’s did– a flaming sun with wings. When I looked up into her beautiful flawless face, for a moment I was in shock. She was my princess, rather I mean, she was Norar Remontar’s sister. But the impression lasted only a moment. This young woman had much shorter hair, a slightly smaller nose, darker skin, and larger, rounder eyes, that made her look much less serious. Admittedly the only time I had seen the Princess was during the height of battle. When the female knight saw Norar Remontar, she smiled broadly and reached out to grasp his hand.

“Word of your return precedes you, kinsman, though not by much,” she said, in a melodic but surprisingly strong voice. “I have just heard the good news, and here you are.”

“You are as beautiful as ever, Vena Remontar,” replied my friend. He then turned to Malagor and me.

“This is Remiant Vena Remontar, my cousin.” He used the word for mother’s sister’s daughter.

“I am soon to be related to you in other ways as well,” the young woman said. “I have agreed to let Tular Maximinos announced our intention to marry.”

Princess of Amathar – Chapter 11 Excerpt

Princess of AmatharMalagor, Norar Remontar, and I stepped out of the elevator and into a room lit just like the one from which we had left. This room had no geometric video controller in it however, and it was triangular in shape, with the elevator opening in the middle of one of three equal sides, and an open doorway on the wall to our left.

“This is peculiar,” said Norar Remontar.

I nodded my head at the understatement. “I would be willing to bet that this elevator, these rooms, the lighting, and the controls for the video images, are all artifacts of the Elder Gods, or whomever it was that created Ecos.

“I am inclined to agree,” said Norar Remontar.

We looked around this new room for several moments, but found nothing of interest. Finally Malagor voiced the opinion that we really had no other alternative but to head down the hallway and see where it led us. I was toying with the idea of suggesting that we try our luck one more time in the mysterious elevator, but I decided that Malagor was probably right. It was time to continue on our way. That is just what we did.

The dark hallway beckoned us like a gaping maw, but I tried not to think of it that way. It really doesn’t take too long to adjust to continual daylight. I think it would be much harder to adjust to continual darkness. Norar Remontar turned on his small flashlight; I unsheathed my sword, and the three of us with a quiet look between us, started down the long hallway. This time the hallway continued straight for what must have been five miles before opening into any type of room what so ever. At last it did, and as soon as we stepped into the room, I knew we were in for trouble.

A sudden wave of stench assaulted my nostrils. It was the smell of several dozen bodies which had not seen a bath in a long time, mixed with the smell of bodily waste accumulated over a period of several generations. I wasn’t the only one to smell it. Malagor immediately began coughing and gagging, to the extent that I feared he would pass out. A look of disgust crossed Norar Remontar’s face, but otherwise he remained characteristically stoic.

Malagor had just regained his own composure, when a horde of creatures burst screaming toward us from the dark. There were a score or more of the short, bipedal, four armed rat-like creatures, and they attacked using stone axes and razor sharp teeth. Screaming like banshees, the Kartags literally fell upon us.

I skewered the first creature to reach me on the end of my sword, turned, and threw my shoulder into the next one, sending it flying backwards into its fellows. At that moment the entire room was lit up by the incredible brightness of the Amatharian sword unsheathed. It sizzled and sparked as Norar Remontar used it to cut through the bodies of three of the Kartags. At almost the same moment, Malagor let loose with a burst of light rifle fire which cut a nice round smoking hole in the chest of another rat. This display of destruction was all that was necessary to convince most of the beasts to retreat. I quickly lopped off the head of one who apparently was having difficulty making that decision.