“Two toy soldiers and three cold bottles of Billingbow’s sarsaparilla and wintergreen soda water. That’s one mark fifty two P on the Dechantagne account,” said Mr. Parnorsham.
The Drache Girl: Zurfina
Zurfina the Magnificent is a character in the Senta and the Steel Dragon series. In Book 3: The Drache Girl, as in Book 2: The Dark and Forbidding Land, Zurfina appears, but itsn’t around all that much. It is, after all, Senta’s story. When Zurfina is present though, she is really fun. She is one of my favorite characters because she is so seriously messed up. She’s self-absorbed to the point of being psychotic. She’s sexy and wild. And of course, she’s extremely powerful. She lives by a few basic guidelines. If you’re powerful enough, you never need to explain yourself. If you’re powerful enough you never have to do anything you don’t want to. Nobody is as important as she is.
Reviews and What to Say
Once you sell enough books to start getting reviews, it can be rough. I’ve had a lot of really nice things said about my writing, as well as some not so nice. It’s REALLY hard to respond to a review. It’s probably good that some forums don’t allow you to respond, but in the past, when I saw a blog review of my book, I would always jot off a note.
I never berated, insulted, or even disagreed with a bad reviewer. My standard answer was “I’m sorry my book wasn’t more to your liking.” Why? Why even respond. The answer is absolutely no good reason. It accomplishes nothing. It’s just so damn hard not to. But I’m going to try from this point. I’m going to thank positive reviewers and just ignore negative ones.
I won’t respond to negative reviews. You can bet your ass I’m still going to read them though. I’m going to sit and read, cross my arms, stick out my lip, and fume about it. Can’t help myself. 🙂
A Special Thanks to "Moe the Cat"
A special thanks to “Moe the Cat”, Mobile Read Forum member and frequent poster right here. Moe has been reading Senta and the Steel Dragon book by book and has uncovered a few too many long undiscovered typos which he has compiled into a list and sent to me. I really appreciate it Moe.
Update – Kanana the Jungle Girl
I just finished chapter 7 of Kanana the Jungle Girl. I’ve plotted out a story that is 18 chapters, 49,000 words, but that may change as I go along. I had a weird dream last night that I think might become a new chapter 12.
I’m having a lot of fun with this story and I hope people enjoy it. It’s very 1910-1920s pulp, but with quite a few surprises.
The Dark and Forbidding Land – Eamon Shrubb
Eamon Shrubb is one of my favorite characters. He’s just a big lovable lug. When I originally plotted out the story, he was only in the second and third parts (which became books 3 & 5). When I spread it out to five books, I didn’t really have much for Eamon in The Young Sorceress, but I got to write his meeting with Saba in book 2. I had a great time doing that.
Blogger Trouble
Wow, in their hurry to convert to their new interface (which I hate), blogger has totally screwed up my posting schedule. Two blog entries that I had scheduled didn’t appear and they budged up my logo and title too. Let’s hope this doesn’t continue.
The Drache Girl: Yuah Dechantagne
Yuah Dechantagne is a character in Senta and the Steel Dragon Book 3: The Drache Girl.
Spoiler Alert.
Book 3 is the mid-point for Yuah’s story arc. In many ways, it is for her, the high point in her life. She has married into a high position in an extremely wealthy family. What’s more, she actually has a position that puts her above Iolanthe in some ways (because she’s married to Iolanthe’s elder brother, and therefor first female in the family). This was a fun turn of events for me, because in the first book, Iolanthe is so horrible to her. On the other hand, Yuah’s low point comes at the end of the book as the only thing she has ever wanted is taken away from her.
Yuah appears only a little in book 4, not because her part isn’t important, but only because book 4 is very Senta-centric. In some ways her story carries on further than anyone else’s, but you’ll just have to wait for book 5 to see what I mean.
The Drache Girl: The Writers
Books play an important role in Senta and the Steel Dragon, and quite a few fictional authors and their books appear throughout the series. One author mentioned in a previous book actually is a major character in books 4 and 5. ::grin::
Phoebus Dodson is the author of several scientific works that we usually see Hero enjoying or Senta dreading. I imagine his books are huge, with heavy leather bindings, and are usually dusty because nobody wants to read them. His books include: Time and Space, Matter and the Elements, Gravity and Light, and The Contracting Universe.
Dillan Westmacott is the author of a racy novel entitled The Pursuit of Perfection. (Spoiler Alert) This is of course also a reference to the relationship between Terrence, Yuah, and a certain otherworldly winged woman. (End spoiler)
The most often referreed-to author is Kasia Garstone. She is a scandalous muck-raker (and some say socialist or communist. Her books include Steam, Revenge, Sacrifice, and Privilage and Sacrifice. Practically everyone reads her works, but almost nobody admits to it. My favorite line about Garstone actually doesn’t appear until book 5, but I’ll give you a little preview.
“Kasia Garstone says wizards are tools of the oppressors.”
The Two Dragons – Now Available!
After a marathon editing session over the weekend, The Two Dragons is now available at Smashwords https://www.smashwords.com/books/view/152056 or Amazon http://www.amazon.com/dp/B007UJED16 or of course, Amazon Britain https://www.amazon.co.uk/dp/B007UJED16.
I was making changes on the manuscript right up until the last minute, interesting since the first draft was finished in 2008. I also had to change the cover. The orange and red backgrounds had an awful bleed-through on thumbnails.
I am incredibly happy that Senta and the Steel Dragon is now done– happy, relieved, sad, tired, and about 27 other adjectives. I hope you all enjoy it.






