The Drache Girl – The Lizzies

The lizzie characters don’t have much of a part in The Drache Girl, with the exception of Cissy.  This is because I wrote it before I wrote The Dark and Forbidding Land, and I didn’t yet realize how much I wanted them there.  Still, Cissy has a bit of a juicy part.

The reptilian hands pulled her back down the short end of the hall just in front of her bedroom.  Then they turned her around so that she faced the lizzie to whom they belonged.  It was Cissy.  Yuah had learned to recognize her, even without the ridiculous yellow skirt which she wore even now.  Cissy yanked open the door of the laundry shoot and pointed.

“In,” she said.

Yuah stuck Augie into the shaft, and still holding on to him, dived in after, head first.  Cissy lifted Yuah’s legs and gave her a push and she slid down two stories to land in the pile of unwashed clothing in the basement.  She rolled to her feet, quickly checking to see that Augie was unharmed.  She carried him across the room to the steps leading up and out into the side yard.  Poking her head out and looking both left and right, she didn’t see any of the cold-blooded intruders.

She ran quickly across the yard and out the front gate, just as more gunfire and a scream erupted from inside the Dechantagne home.  Yuah turned and looked at the front door as a single Lizzie, carrying a rifle, stepped out into the misty air.  It saw her, and with a look of evil determination started after her.  She ran, heedless of the sharp gravel on her bare feet.  She ran for the closest nearby house—Saba Colbshallow’s small home.

The reptilian hands pulled her back down the short end of the hall just in front of her bedroom.  Then they turned her around so that she faced the lizzie to whom they belonged.  It was Cissy.  Yuah had learned to recognize her, even without the ridiculous yellow skirt which she wore even now.  Cissy yanked open the door of the laundry shoot and pointed.

“In,” she said.

Yuah stuck Augie into the shaft, and still holding on to him, dived in after, head first.  Cissy lifted Yuah’s legs and gave her a push and she slid down two stories to land in the pile of unwashed clothing in the basement.  She rolled to her feet, quickly checking to see that Augie was unharmed.  She carried him across the room to the steps leading up and out into the side yard.  Poking her head out and looking both left and right, she didn’t see any of the cold-blooded intruders.

She ran quickly across the yard and out the front gate, just as more gunfire and a scream erupted from inside the Dechantagne home.  Yuah turned and looked at the front door as a single Lizzie, carrying a rifle, stepped out into the misty air.  It saw her, and with a look of evil determination started after her.  She ran, heedless of the sharp gravel on her bare feet.  She ran for the closest nearby house—Saba Colbshallow’s small home.

The Dark and Forbidding Land – And the Rest

There are a few other characters who appear in The Dark and Forbidding Land.

Professor Calliere: Calliere is Iolanthe’s husband and plays a bigger part in books 1 and 3, but he does play his part here as well.

Lon Fonstan: Lon is one of those guys who appears on maybe a page in each of the books, but he’s there and he has some fun interactions with others, especially Senta.  He really shines in book 3.

Mr. Brockton: Brockton is a wizard who appears in books 2 and 4.  He works in the War Ministry with Wizard Bassington, but isn’t nearly as powerful.

Miss Gertz: Miss Gertz is the mayor’s secretary.

Mrs. Godwin: An old household servant of the Dechantagnes, Mrs. Godwin lives in the family house.

Paxton Brown: Brown makes his appearance in The Dark and Forbidding Land, but doesn’t really become an important character until book 5.

The Young Sorceress – Chapter 5 Excerpt

Climbing down from the train’s caboose, Benny Markham turned and politely offered Senta his hand as she stepped down onto the station platform.  She was followed by Shemar Morris.  The station platform was empty except for them and the train’s fireman who stepped off with them, though a couple of station employees could be seen moving around in the office building.  The train from Mallontah wouldn’t arrive for several hours.  By then the station would be crowded with those getting on or getting off, and those meeting passengers.

“Remind me that I never want to sleep in a caboose again,” said Shemar.

“I slept very nicely,” said Senta.

“That’s because you had the bed.”

“I slept fine too,” said Benny.  “I think it was the rocking.”

“I think it was the aftermath of an adrenaline rush,” said Shemar.  “I’ve never seen someone so afraid for so long.”

“I wasn’t afraid.  I’m just a cautious man.”

“There’s nothing wrong with being afraid,” said Senta, “if you have something to be afraid of.”

“I think gorgasauruses and achillabators qualify,” said Benny.

“When do we need to report in to M&S Coal,” asked Shemar.  “I’ve got the map marked with where you found the coal.  Here.”

Senta accepted the map.  “We should probably take it right over.”

“Let’s do it then,” said Benny.  “I want to get home, get something to eat, take a bath, and then sleep.”

“A man after my own heart,” said Senta.

The three young people made their way across the growing town.  Lizzie workers were thick.  On Bay Street, not only were they paving the way with red brick and pouring cement sidewalks, they were also laying down gas lines and putting up gas streetlamps.  The general impression was that the town had grown while they had been gone, even though they had only set out the day before.  They saw the triceratops, Harriet, pulling the trolley down Pine Street, but at the moment, she was travelling in the opposite direction they were.

“You know it’s about tea time,” said Benny when they approached Town Square.  “We could stop at the Bakery Café on our way to M&S.”

“I could eat,” said Senta.

The three headed for the entrance to the bakery but were intercepted at door by Gaylene Finkler.  She held up her hand like a cop directing traffic.

“Sorry Senta, you’re not allowed in.”

“What?  Why not?”

“You may have gotten the Justice to drop the charges, but we can’t have you assaulting our customers.”

“What the hell are you talking about Gaylene?”

The Drache Girl – Iolanthe Dechantagne Calliere

Iolanthe is one of my favorite characters and one of the most important in the series.  She’s so fun to write because she’s such a bitch.  She plays an important part in The Drache Girl, even though she is not one of the four main characters in this part of the story.

A second later, around the corner stepped Iolanthe Dechantagne and Yuah Korlann.  Iolanthe Calliere and Yuah Dechantagne, Staff mentally corrected himself.  Iolanthe was wearing a green velvet dress with at least seven ornately ruffled layers, and a white lace collar with a black bow.  Yuah wore a gold dress with a broad band of blue at the knees and a waterfall of lace draping from the shoulders and down over the bustle.  Both women wore hats covered in flowers that matched each of their dresses and carried matching muffs.  The two women saw Staff at the same moment and both stopped dead in their tracks.

“Radley,” gasped Iolanthe.

Then the three of them stood silently gaping at each other.  At last Yuah stepped forward.

“Mr. Staff, how lovely to see you again,” she said, removing one hand from her muff and offering it to him.

“Mrs. Dechantagne, you look more lovely that I remember.”

“Oh, pish-posh.  I’m getting to be an old lady.”

“That madam is sacrilege.”

She smiled.

Iolanthe still stood where she was.  Her face had gone from the pale of alabaster to the pale of ash.  Her mouth was agape, and she looked as though she was unable to breathe.  Staff stepped forward, taking her right wrist in his hands, pulling her hand from her muff and enfolding it in his own.

“Mrs.… It’s very nice to see you again.”

“Commander Staff,” said Iolanthe, at last, taking an audible breath.  “I didn’t realize you were in the country.”

“I had always planned to return.”

Iolanthe bit her lip.

“I’m here on business,” he said, releasing her hand and turning back to Yuah.  “I just spoke to your father and he was very helpful in offering me advice on how to get everything off the ground now that I’m here.”

“He does excel at giving advice,” conceded Yuah.  “What business will you be running.”

“Coal.”

“Oh?”

“Yes, I have some very wealthy backers and a complete staff ready to go to work.  I will need the royal governor’s office for all the permits and tax papers and what not, but I’m sure you may offer me some insight into the governor’s state of mind.”

“I… Oh, I….permits…”  Iolanthe swayed just for a moment.  Yuah took her by the shoulder and held her upright.

“I’m sure that my sister-in-law will be able to offer you all the assistance that you need.  What do you require first?”

“Your father has pointed me in the direction of an office building with apartments, though I may need somewhere to live until I secure it.”

“Well, that’s easily settled,” said Yuah.  “You simply must come and stay at the Dechantagne home.”

Iolanthe moved with what seemed like hesitation toward the front steps of the temporary city hall and sat down on the wooden planks so hard that it appeared she might fall back.

The Dark and Forbidding Land – Streck

In The Dark and Forbidding Land, I had to create a number of new characters that I new would not appear later on.  Streck was probably the most important and interesting of these.

“Hey!”  Half a dozen men were running in their direction from the east.  By the time they reached the two children, Graham had thrown his gun over his shoulder and pulled a very long turquoise feather from the utahraptor’s tail, which he handed to Senta.  The men stopped next to the fallen creature.  Among them were Sergeant Clark and a couple of armed militiamen, as well as Mr. Darwin and Mr. Fonstan.

“Look Clark,” said Mr. Fonstan.  “These children killed the utahraptor that you and your men couldn’t even find.”

Clark shot him an evil look.

“If you don’t have any use for the carcass,” said Mr. Darwin to Graham.  “I’ll gladly give you two marks for it.”

While the man and boy were negotiating, with Mr. Fonstan looking on, Clark and his two men followed the trail of the second creature into the trees, leaving Senta standing near the sixth man in the group.  He was a stranger, a young man wearing a black greatcoat over a charcoal suit.  His blond hair was cut short beneath a furry cap.  He examined the girl with steely eyes.

“So who would you be?” he asked, his voice thick with a Freedonian accent.

“She would be the Drache Girl,” said Fonstan, turning around.

“Ja?  This little bit?”  He was looking neither at Fonstan nor Senta, but was scanning the edge of the trees.

“That’s right,” said Senta saucily.  “What’s that?”

She pointed to a small, round black and red pin on the lapel of his coat.  It was something like a cross, with each of the four legs broken off at right angles.  The man sneered.

“You Brech call it a gammadion, but its proper name is fylfot.”

“Yeah?  What’s it for?”

“It is the symbol of the Die Wahre Kunst von Zauberei,” he said, turning his attention back to her.

“Um… painting with wizards?”

“The true art.  Wizardry.  Ignorant girl!”

“Watch your mouth buddy!”  Graham was at Senta’s side.  “I’ll give you what for!”

“Come on children.”  Mr. Fonstan, stepping around the Freedonain, took the children by their shoulders and guided them past him.  “Let’s not bother Mr. Streck anymore.”

Streck went back to looking around, while Mr. Fonstan led the children down the road toward town square.  Graham kept turning to look over his shoulder at Streck.  When he started to slow a bit, Mr. Fonstan pulled him along.

“Don’t go looking for trouble, lad,” he said.  “I don’t like the look of that one and it ain’t just because he’s foreigner.”

Update and Cover Reveal: Eaglethorpe Buxton

I’ve been working really hard on Kanana the Jungle Girl, and I’m well past the halfway point of the draft, but I took a couple of days off this week to work on a new Eaglethorpe Buxton story.  The new Eaglethorpe book will definitely be out by the end of the year, so it seems like a good time to show off the cover.

The plan is to combine the original two Eaglethorpe stories with three new ones, so that there will be five tales in this book.

Eaglethorpe Buxton and the Elven Princess

Eaglethorpe Buxton and the Sorceress

Eaglethorpe Buxton and the Queen of Aerithraine

Eaglethorpe Buxton the Day of the Night of the Werewolf (not a typo) and

Eaglethorpe Buxton and the Unicorn Hunters
There is a possibility of a sixth story as well, but I haven’t Eaglethorpe hasn’t drafted it yet, so it might not appear.

The Young Sorceress – Chapter 4 Excerpt

Isaak Wissinger bent down and picked up a paper from the street.  At least he was still able to do that.  Many of the people he saw passing him on the street seemed barely able to lift their own feet.  He was still in the ghetto of Zurelendsviertel.  He had been unable to get out.  During the past eleven months, Wissinger had been forced to use the money that his guardian angel had given him to buy scraps of food.  She had been right.  When push had come to shove, the other Zaeri had helped themselves and their families, and not the famous writer they knew of, but didn’t really know.

The angel had not come back since that night.  If Wissinger had not had the money to spend on moldy bread and mysterious meat, he would have thought that he had dreamed the whole thing.  Of course there were also the stories.  Stories had come into the ghetto from the outside world—stories about a mysterious woman.  A blond woman had attacked Neuschlindenmacht Castle, burning it to the ground, though nobody knew exactly how.  A powerful witch had fought and killed a dozen wizards of the Reine Zauberei on the streets of Kasselburg.  A blond sorceress had freed hundreds of Zaeri prisoners held in a work camp and had killed or frightened off a company of soldiers guarding them.  Wissinger carefully listened to the stories without adding his own experiences.  There was nothing to indicate that these stories were about the same woman, or that they were even true.  But Wissinger believed them.

“You’re thinking about me right now, aren’t you?” asked a sultry voice right by his ear.

Wissinger jumped.  The woman was back.  He looked up and down the street and realized that there was no one else to be seen.  This was unusual.  It was almost mid-day.  He looked back at her.  Yes, it was the same woman.  She was dressed at least this time.  Sort of.  He tried to think where her black corset and leather pants would be everyday dress, but could imagine no such place in the world.  She tossed her hair back and then took a pose with her chin held high, like a statue.

“Um, you’re back,” he said.

“Oh my.  Here I was told that you were the greatest writer in Freedonia, and this is your introductory line?”

“What are you doing here?”

“Well now you’re just being thick,” she said.  “I came back for you.  You were supposed to be gone, out of the ghetto and to the coast at least.”

“I couldn’t get out.  The Kafirite, Kiesinger, the one who smuggled some Zaeri out for money.  The day after you were here, I mean in my room, he was arrested.  He wasn’t arrested in my room, he was arrested… wherever they arrested him, but no one else took his place.  There was no one else who would help, to smuggle me out.”  Wissinger stopped speaking and realized he was out of breath.

“Relax lover.  We’re leaving now.”

“Now?”

“Yes.”

“Wait.  We have to go back to my room.”

She smiled seductively.  “What a wonderful idea.  I thought you might be more welcoming this time.”

“No, it’s just… it’s the middle of the day.”

“Yes?”

“Well, um… I… Aren’t we in a hurry?”

“You’re the one who wants to go back to your room.”

“I have to get my book.”

“What book is that?”

“My book.  It doesn’t have a title yet.  It’s about life here.  It’s hidden in the wall.”

“Then let’s go get it.”

Wissinger led the woman down the cobblestone street to his apartment building and upstairs to his room.  His building had been a fine middle class apartment twenty years earlier.  Now it was rapidly falling apart from neglect.  Holes had appeared in the walls and the floor.  In one spot just outside his apartment door, he could see completely through to the floor below. In a way this was all fortunate.  The crack in the wall next to the loose board, behind which he hid the tools of his trade, didn’t look out of place.  Removing the board, he pulled out the tablet and pencil.

The tablet was the type children used in school.  He had started at the beginning and had used every page.  Then he had turned it over and had written on the backs of each sheet, in ever smaller script as the pages had become scarce.  The pencil was the last of a package of twelve.  Oh, how he had wasted his pencils at first, insisting on a sharp point, whittling each one back with his knife.  When he had gotten to the sixth one, he had stopped such foolishness.  He let the lead become as dull and round as a turtle’s head and had only cut back the wood around it, when it, like the turtle’s head, had become hidden inside.  That was all over now.

He felt the woman press against his back.  She wrapped her arms around his shoulders and licked the back of his neck.  He turned around and kissed her deeply.  She pulled him toward the cot, and he let her.  He spent the last hour that he would ever spend on that horrible, worn, bug-ridden mattress making love to a beautiful woman.

“I don’t even know your name,” he said, as they dressed.

“It’s Zurfina.”

“Like the daughter of Magnus the Great?”

“Yes, exactly like that.”

“You’re not her, are you?”

“Yes.  Yes I am.”

She slipped back into her boots and headed out the door.  Wissinger stuffed his pencil in the pocket where he kept his penknife and tucked his tablet under his arm.  A quick look around reminded him that he had nothing else of value.  Quickly catching up with Zurfina, he followed her downstairs and out into the street.  Even though the sun was still high, there was nobody to be seen.  It was as if they were the only two people in the world.  Down the street and around the corner, then down the main thoroughfare, they finally reached the twenty foot tall wooden gate to the outside world.  It was standing open and the guards who had always been there were gone.

“What’s going on?” Wissinger asked.

“It’s just magic.”

Once outside the gate, they wound their way through the city streets of Gartow.  It was much nicer here.  The buildings were in repair.  The shops were open.  But here the world was just as devoid of life and humanity as it had been inside the ghetto.   In no time at all they were past the edge of town.  They stepped off the road and crossed the first field of many that filled the space between the city and the distant edge of the forest.

“Zurfina, how is it… oh… um.”

“What is it?”

“I just remembered that according the Holy Scriptures, Zurfina… that is the daughter of King Magnus, was burned at the stake.”

“Fine, I’m not her then.”

“But your name is Zurfina, isn’t it?”

“I’m tired of all your questions,” she said, stopping and glaring at him.  “It’s been nothing but questions with you since I got here.  What’s going on?  Who are you?  Can I be on top?”

“I’m sorry.”

“One more question and I’m leaving.”

“No.  I’m sorry.  No more questions, I promise,” said Wissinger.  “Just tell me which way I am supposed to go.”

“That’s it!” she snapped, and with a flourish of her hands, she disappeared with a pop.

“I didn’t… that wasn’t a question… I phrased it…”

A sound drew Wissinger’s gaze to the sky.  A flock of small birds flew overhead, twittering as they went.  Then he heard the sounds of voices, and looking toward town, he could see people.  A steam carriage chugged down the now distant road.  It was as if the world had suddenly come alive.  Dropping
to a crouch, he looked around to see if there was anyone close.  He could detect no one.  Staying hunched over, he made for the forest as fast as he could.

Hello All!

After four years at Blogspot, I have decided to switch over and give WordPress a try.  There are too many changes making blogging too difficult at the old place.  Hopefully everything will work out better here.  It will take me a while to get this blog up and running, so keep an eye on this spot.

The Drache Girl: Iolanthe Dechantagne

When I originally plotted out the story of Senta and the Steel Dragon, Iolanthe was one of the primary characters.  However when I started writing The Drache Girl (the working title was The Sorceress’s Apprentice), for some reason I used Yuah instead.  Because of this Iolanthe fell into the background a bit in The Dark and Forbidding Land and The Young Sorceress.  She returns to prominence in The Two Dragons though.

Turning away from the street, Yuah Dechantagne made her way up the stone walkway to the family’s home.  The huge, stately structure was the largest building in the colony, and had taken the better part of two years to construct.  Featuring a large portico supported by four two story columns, a double gabled roof and more than a dozen stone chimneys, every side of the house was covered with large dual-paned windows.  Walking through the gardens and past the large reflecting pool, the fountain, and the sundial surrounded by white roses, she paused to hyperventilate for a moment before tackling the six steps to the portico.  Standing at attention outside of the front door was a lizardman, naked except for a yellow ribbon with a gold medallion around its neck.  As she approached, the creature reached back and opened the door for her.
“Thank you, Tisson,” she said, sweeping in through the doorway.
Once inside, she walked through the foyer and into the parlor, just in time to see her sister-in-law, the Colonial Governor, slapping her hand across the protruding snout of another lizardman.  The creature wore a similar medallion and ribbon as its counterpart outside, though it was a silver medallion on a green ribbon.  The reptilian was also slightly shorter and had darker green skin.  Even so, it towered over the woman that faced it in the olive green herringbone dress.
“One more time and I’ll cut off your tail and send you back to that mud hut you came from,” she snarled at the lizardman.  “Do you understand?”
“Yess,” hissed the reptile.
“What was that all about?” asked Yuah.
Iolanthe rolled her aquamarine eyes.  “How many times have I explained?  They still don’t get it.  When the flower petals fall off, the flowers are replaced.”
“I think they like the flowers better when they are wilted,” replied Yuah.  “It must be a lizard affectation.”
“Well, I’m not going to put up with it.  Say, where have you been all morning?”
“New dress.”
“Oh yes.  Very pretty.”  If there was one thing Governor Iolanthe Dechantagne Calliere could appreciate, it was a new dress.  “The baby was crying a little while ago.  I had Cissy feed him.”

“Sirrik!” called Yuah.  Another lizardman, mottled yellow with brown stripes, stepped into the parlor from the doorway which led to the library.  “Go have Cissy bring down the baby.”

The Dark and Forbidding Land – Saba Colbshallow

Throughout the series, it certainly seems that Saba Colbshallow gets around.  He’s had his hands in just about everything.  I have chapters entitled PC Colbshallow and Inspector Colbshallow, and this one– Saba the Spy.

The S. S. Windemere didn’t arrive until Festuary eighth.  It had been waylaid in the Mulliens with a damaged boiler.  Still, Saba Colbshallow had been at the docks to meet it and one passenger in particular.  Mr. Brockton didn’t look like a secret agent, not that Saba knew what a secret agent looked like.  He was a short, slight man in his mid-forties with a brown handlebar mustache and thinning hair beneath a brown bowler hat.  He looked over Saba for a moment then shook hands.
“Governor Dechantagne Calliere asked me to meet you and see that you have a place to stay,” said Saba.
“Very good,” said Brockton in a thin nasal voice.  “She indicated in her correspondence that she would send a representative that had her complete trust.”
Saba tried not to let his surprise show.
“I’ve got you an apartment on the militia base.”
“Won’t that be suspicious?”
“Probably less than rooming anywhere else, unless you want to spend the next week in a tent,” said Saba.  “Those are basically the two options for new arrivals.  We don’t have a hotel or rooming house yet, though there are a few people who let rooms.  The apartments and rental houses have quite a long waiting list.”
“The militia base it is then,” said Brockton with a thin smile.
Saba led the way up the hill from the dock yards.
“I’m going to need a day to get my land legs back,” said Brockton.  “Why don’t we plan on meeting tomorrow and I’ll go over what the Governor needs to know with you then.”
Saba nodded.  “Fine.  I’ll have some supper sent over if you like?”
“Good.”
The following afternoon just before tea, Saba met Brockton outside the building that had been designed to eventually be part of the base’s barracks but which, since its construction, had been divided into ten small apartments. 
“The best place to eat is back at the dock yard,” he said.
Brockton raised an eyebrow.
“They have food carts.”
Making their way down the hill, they took their place in the queue for sausages.  Then they sat down on a bench at the northern edge of the gravel yard and ate the thick sausages, which were served on a stick.
“Not much in the way of dining in Birmisia, eh?” said Brockton, then waved off Saba’s reply.  “I expected as much really.  I ate so much on the voyage that I probably gained ten pounds anyway.  This is fine, and so were the fish and chips you sent up last evening.”
“Good.  So what is the information you want me to relay to Governor Dechantagne Calliere?”
“She is aware, though you might not be, that I am with His Majesty’s Secret Service.  We have people working around the world, but right now our focus is in Freedonia.”
“Aren’t we at peace?”
“Ostensibly.  But a great many things can happen.  And I don’t mean war, at least I don’t mean just war.”
“What else?” asked Saba.
“ Klaus II fancies himself a wizard and he’s immersed himself in the wahre kunst von zauberei.  As a result, the wizards of the Reine Zauberei have replaced most of the non-wizards in key positions in the Freedonian government.”
“Don’t we have quite a few wizards of our own?” asked Saba.  “Yourself for instance?”
Brockton smiled a thin smile. 

“Well spotted young Corporal.  I’m a first level journeyman from Académie Argei.  But you have to understand, these Reine Zauberei are not just wizards.  They have their own peculiar ideas.”