One of the big themes in A Plague of Wizards is isolation. Many characters have to deal with some form of isolation. Senta is isolated from everyone that she knows and loves for a long time, and even when she returns, she feels an emotional distance from them. Esther is isolated in that she is the only lizzie on a continent of humans, and likewise, Terra is the sole human living in a city-state of lizzies. Both Baxter and Saba feel isolated because of the broken relationships in which each finds himself.
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A Plague of Wizards – Chapter 5 Excerpt
Esther continued down the hallway, hissing happily, which might not have been such a good thing on the balance. She turned to start down the sweeping staircase and came face to face with Finley, the underbutler. Almost running into her hissing snout apparently startled him so badly that he dropped the silver tray loaded with the morning post, and leaned precariously backwards. He made an “eeep” sound when she grabbed him by the collar, but at least he didn’t topple down the stairs.
“Kafira! That was close,” said Esther, as she steadied him on the step below her. “Are you all right?”
“Nothing a couple of liver pills won’t fix,” he said, bending down to pick up the dropped letters.
“If you’re sure then,” said Esther continuing down the stairs. At the foot of the staircase, she turned back around to see him still watching her. Esther gave him a little wave and, turning right and then right again, entered the dining room.
Two women, both in their early twenties, sat at the immense table, enjoying a breakfast feast. Esther sat down across from them. Fodora Epps and Regina Elipton were guests in the house rather than residents, at least nominally. Both had been staying there for almost a month. Besides being members of the aristocracy, and obnoxious twits, they were acquaintances of Lady Iolana’s from University.
“Good morning,” said Esther, taking a serving spoon and adding two slices of bacon, two large pieces of black pudding, and one basted egg to her plate. “Would you pass the ssscones, please?”
“Imagine letting that thing eat at the table,” said Fodora, looking from between the brunette ringlets that framed her face and down her long nose.
“Where is your owner?” asked Regina, a blonde with big eyes but no appreciable chin.
“I don’t know where Lady Iolana is,” said Esther, taking a bite of black pudding. “Ssso no ssscones then?”
Fodora pushed the plate of scones three inches toward the lizzie. Esther had to stand up to reach them. Taking a scone in one hand, she picked up the dish of lemon curd in the other and sat back down.
“I am ssso happy that you two are staying,” she said. “It would pain me if your families’ current financial sssituations forced you to live on the ssstreets.”
“My family is richer than yours,” snarled Regina, forgetting for a moment to whom she was speaking.
She had either forgotten or never bothered to commit to memory the fact that Esther had been adopted by Iolana Staff at a very early age. She had no proper lizzie family, and among the lizzies, even village chieftains would have been poor compared to the Eliptons of Brech. On the other hand, if one considered her part of the Dechantagne-Staff family, as Iolana did, there was no question that the Eliptons would have suffered in any comparison of wealth.
Lady Iolana Staff swept into the room. At nineteen years of age, she had reached her full five foot seven inches height, and developed what among Brech women was considered the perfect figure. She was not particularly buxom, nor was her bottom, without a bustle, particularly large, but her waist was quite thin even without a corset. She was stunning, with waves of golden hair falling well past her shoulders and the same aquamarine eyes as her mother. She was already dressed to go out, in a rose and pink velvet day dress with a matching hat.
“Good morning, all.”
“It’s not been such a good morning,” said Regina. “Your lizzie has insulted my entire family.”
“How could you?” Iolana hissed at Esther.
The lizzie shrugged and ate her egg.
“You will have to excuse Esther. Obviously I have been lax in her education regarding etiquette. She will need, perhaps, some remediation.”
“You’ve done remarkably well with her,” said Fodora, “considering she is a member of an inferior race. Is it a good idea to have her at the table though? I’m afraid she might pass on some horrible pestilence.”
“That is highly unlikely for a number of reasons,” said Iolana. “I’m on my way out. I have several errands to run and would enjoy some company.”
“I’ll get my hat,” said Esther, starting to get up.
“I had planned on you being with me, but considering your behavior toward our guests, it would only be rewarding you to take you now.”
“In that case, Regina and I will accompany you,” said Fodora.
“Excellent,” said Iolana. “We’ll have luncheon at The Clarkson House.”
“Tonahass ssotook, ssisthusso,” said Esther, giving the two women a friendly wave as they left the table.
“Khikheto etehos,” snapped Iolana, who then turned and followed the other two women from the room.
Esther let out a very human sigh and then looked over the rest of the food. She was satisfied that she had enough protein but she ate several pickles directly from the relish tray. She noticed one of the maids peeking in and waved for her to go ahead and clear the table.
A Plague of Wizards – Chapter 3 Excerpt
Police Chief Saba Colbshallow opened the front door of his home and stepped inside. He was immediately almost knocked over by an eighty-two pound projectile hitting him right in his center mass. Grasping it below the shoulders, he hefted it up to find that, as he suspected, it was his daughter DeeDee. It was already apparent, despite the gangliness of eleven-year-olds, that she would grow up to be a beautiful woman. She had inherited the heterochromia of both eyes and hair from her mother, as well as her flawless skin and near perfect facial features. Saba looked into her eyes, one deep brown and the other hazel.
“Hello, My Dearest. How are you today?”
“Fine, Daddy.”
“Where is your sister?”
“She’s in her room.”
“Playing?”
“I don’t think so. I think she misses her home.”
“This is her home now,” he said. “Where’s Mummy?”
“She’s in her room. She’s dicky.”
“How about Nan?”
“In the garden. I was just going out to join her.”
“Go upstairs and check on your sister. Bring her out in the garden, if she’s able.” He ran his hand through her hair, each strand seemingly a different shade from very light blond to coppery red, and then pushed her gently towards the staircase.
Saba made his way through the parlor, the dining room, and the kitchen, finally stepping out onto the back porch and then out to the garden. Here he found his mother, on her knees, planting flower bulbs around the base of the tree.
“You’re about nine months too late to plant those, Mother. It should have been done back in Novuary. Either that, or you’re four months too early for next year.”
“I’m sure they’ll grow and be quite lovely.”
“Oh, they’ll grow, but they wont’ blossom. I was expecting tea.”
“I’m too old to fuss with such things.”
“But not too old to crawl around in the dirt,” he said. “I would think that the lady of the house would see to tea.”
“She’s not feeling well.”
“She never feels well.”
“Well, what do you expect, with the way you treat her?”
He pulled a wrought-iron chair away from the outdoor table and sat down, crossing his legs. “What do you mean, Mother?”
“You know what I mean. It’s bad enough that you’re wandering the town like an alley cat, without you bringing her the results of your imprudence.”
“That was one time, and it was a long time ago.”
“So, you don’t think there will be any more little bastards showing up on her doorstep?”
“I can guarantee it. And that little bastard is your grandchild.” He turned to the back door to see DeeDee standing with her arm around a smaller girl. The younger girl’s thin blond hair partially covered her face, which appeared puffy. “Come here, Sen.”
She shuffled across the cobblestone to stop in front of him. He brushed the hair back from her face. She had been crying.
“What’s the matter, Sweetie?”
“I miss my Daddy.”
“I’m your Daddy… but I know you miss Mr. Baxter.” He lifted the girl up and placed her on his knee. “You remember why you came here?”
“Uh-huh. My other Daddy was sick.”
“That’s right. He couldn’t take care of you because he was so sick. Now you live with us and we love you very, very much. You like it here, don’t you?”
“Yeah. DeeDee is nice to me.”
“Everyone is nice to you, aren’t they?” he asked, glaring at his mother.
“Uh-huh, but I miss my Dad… my other Daddy, and he’s better now.”
“Yes, he is. I’ve asked… your other Daddy… over for dinner next week, so that you could visit with him. How does that sound?”
“Could I go home with him?”
“No, Dear. You live here now, with us. I love you too much to let you go, and so does DeeDee.” He gave her a hug, and waved for DeeDee to come to him. “Would you two like some salt water taffy when I come home this evening?”
The two girls nodded.
“All right. Now go play.”
The two started toward the back door, but Sen stopped and turned back around.
“Allium is sad because she doesn’t have anyplace to sleep.”
“DeeDee, would you help your sister make a bed of blankets in the corner of her room for Allium?”
DeeDee rolled her eyes, but said, “Yes, Daddy.”
“You shouldn’t encourage that,” said his mother when the girls were gone.
“Once she feels better about her new living conditions, it will all go away. Until then, an imaginary friend will do no harm.”
A Plague of Wizards – Characters
Like the earlier books in Senta and the Steel Dragon, A Plague of Wizards has a rotating cast of characters through which we experience the action. One of them is a new character. I’m not going to talk about the new character because I think it’s too much of a spoiler, but the others are old friends.
Senta Bly – At this point, Senta is almost thirty years old, and is by far the most powerful magic-user in the world. This might seem the cure for many ills, but it is the cause of many problems too.
Saba Colbshallow – Saba is thirty-six years old, is an established family man, and is the Chief of Police for Port Dechantagne. He must deal with an influx of wizards into the colony, who cause all kinds of troubles.
Terra Dechantagne – Terra is the daughter of Terrence and Yuah Dechantagne. She is fifteen years old and very quiet. Terra has a great deal to learn when she is sent to live among the lizzies of Yessonarah.
Esther – Speaking of lizzies, Esther has traveled with Iolana to the old world of Greater Brechalon, where she is the only cold-blooded being within thousands of miles. How will she cope with being so isolated from her kind?
Senta and the Steel Dragon – Characters
Each of the Senta and the Steel Dragon Stories rotates through the eyes of several characters– usually four. One is always the titular Senta. The others change as the story goes on. Here are the viewpoint characters for each book.
Brechalon
Terrence Dechantagne, Senta Bly, Iolanthe Dechantagne, Yuan Korlann, Nils Chapman, Arthur McTeague, Ssissiatok, Zeah Korlann
The Voyage of the Minotaur
Senta Bly, Terrence Dechantagne, Iolanthe Dechantagne, Zeah Korlann
The Dark and Forbidding Land
Senta Bly, Ssissiatok, Yuan Korlann, Saba Colbshallow
The Drache Girl
Senta Bly, Yuan Korlann Dechantagne, Radley Staff, Saba Colbshallow
The Young Sorceress
Senta Bly, Isaak Wissinger, Yuah Korlann Dechantagne, Kieran Baxter, Ssissiatok, Hsrandtuss
The Two Dragons
Senta Bly, Zeah Korlann, Iolanthe Dechantagne Staff, Saba Colbshallow, Radley Staff
The Sorceress and her Lovers
Senta Bly, Kieran Baxter, Saba Colbshallow, Hsrandtuss
The Price of Magic
Senta Bly, Kieran Baxter, Iolana Staff, Tokkenoht, Peter Bassington
Princess of Amathar – Chapter 29 Excerpt
“Stand where you are!” a voice shouted from nearby.
Out from behind a nearby shrub came an Amatharian warrior, carrying a light pistol which was leveled in our general direction.
“Put your weapon down,” said the Princess. “I am Homianne Kurar Ka Remiant Noriandara Remontar.”
“Of course you are, Princess,” replied the warrior. “I recognize you now, as well as Kurar Remiant Alexander Ashton. It is such a great pleasure to see you. I am Remiantar Kolbin Perrenios.”
I am not ashamed to say that I rushed forward and gave the fellow a great hug. It had been such a long time since I had seen any other person besides the Princess that I had almost given up hope of ever doing so. Kolbin Perrenios for his part, though he did not shy away from a friendly greeting to me, was far more interested in looking at the Princess. Not that I blamed him, she was incredibly beautiful, even having journeyed across the wilderness. She of course, remembered where she was better than either the swordsman or me.
“What are you doing way out here?” she asked.
“Our battle cruiser sustained heavy damage during the assault on Zonamis. We were forced to crash land a short distance from here. I have sentry duty in this area. Come, I will lead you back to the encampment.”
It was not quite a mile from where we had been found to the site of the crashed cruiser. The great ship, its cannon still pointing skyward, lay upon the plain like a vicious dog who had been run over by the wheel of a car, it’s back broken but its teeth still curled back in a snarl. Around the remains of the vessel, in military formation, were numerous tents, and beyond those, fox-holes and make-shift battlements. Hundreds of Amatharians were going about their business in the camp, chopping wood, repairing mechanical equipment, stacking supplies, and cooking meals.
As soon as the crew members of the ship caught site of Noriandara Remontar, they began to crowd around us, and by the time we reached the great mass of the battle cruiser, we had a sizable group of onlookers with us. Though they were clearly excited to see their princess, they became silent when Norar Remontar stepped from the hatch of the vessel and looked upon his sister for the first time since I had met him. The grandson of the Overlord rushed forward and lifted his sister in his arms and spinning her around in the air. Then, setting her down, he pressed his dark blue cheek to hers and began to weep.
Working Sucks
Working sucks. I’ve been back in the classroom for a few weeks now, but I haven’t gotten back in the groove. Maybe its because I didn’t have a proper summer, instead recovering from knee-replacement surgery. Maybe it’s because I’m too old to work and I need to retire. I’ve got a few years left before that happens.
I have a good job, and thanks to a recent contract, they’re finally paying me something approaching what I’m worth. I’m proud of what I do. I get it. I shape young minds and all that crap. Still, I’m ready to be out of the classroom for a while. Working sucks.
Amathar – Meznarks and Oindrag
The Meznarks and Oindrag are two races of beings who lived in the great hollow world of Ecos long ago. Although the Amatharians study them, they don’t know exactly what they look like because both races are extinct. They in fact, wiped each other out. Being young and idealistic when I came up with the story of Amathar, I wanted to showcase two such mutually homicidal races as my own little bit of commentary on the then present Cold War.
We had not walked too many miles when Noriandara Remontar called to me. As I looked up, she pointed to a large object in the sky. I thought at first that the object was an Amatharian or Zoasian battleship, since it was about the same size. It was not one of the air vessels. It was instead a floating city. While the bottom was far from smooth, with openings, windows, and protrusions, the top was a jagged skyline of tall buildings shooting up toward the noon day sun.
“Have you ever seen a floating city like that?” Noriandara Remontar asked.
“No,” I replied. “You?”
“I have heard of them. They were built long ago by the Meznarks, contemporaries of the Orlons. They built hundreds of floating cities and sailed all over Ecos, until they angered a race of beings far away known as the Oindrag who hunted the Meznarks down and destroyed them. There are numerous artifacts from a fallen Meznark city at the Tree Clan Museum in Amathar, but I don’t think anyone has ever come across a city still in flight.”
“Are the Oindrag still around?”
“I believe they are also extinct.”
Princess of Amathar – Chapter 28 Excerpt
There were six more of the monsters standing around me, and they lunged for me as a group. I swung my sword through the body of the closest, while pushing the next back with my left hand. I recoiled as I felt the thick coating of slime which covered the thing’s body. At that moment, three others rushed forward and I was knocked back against the tree. I began hacking with abandon, chopping here and there into the bodies of my attackers. This caused them to step back a few feet. At least those who were still able to step back did so. One was lying on the ground unmoving, and two others were flopping around as they tried to get back to their feet.
While they took a moment to decide who would be the first among them to die, I prepared myself for their next assault. When they lunged forward, I jump up, tucking and rolling forward, to land behind them. Then with a spinning cut, I decapitated two in one blow. When I say decapitated, I mean that I sliced off at least the top half of what I would call the head, for I repeat it was difficult to say just where the body ended and the head began. There was no neck. The single remaining unscathed amphibian turned toward the river, and it was with fierce satisfaction that I noted none of those who remained would ever swim again. I ran after the last remaining man-frog, the anger born of being taken from peaceful sleep into bloody battle hazing over my better judgment. I could have easily overtaken the flopping limping gate of the slimy entity, even with out my gravity enhanced speed.
Before I had gone more than two steps, I stopped in my tracks. Stuck into the ground was Noriandara Remontar’s sword. I pulled it out of the ground and looked at it. It was quiet. There was no sign of the soul within, and I felt my heart ache, even though I knew this really signified nothing. The soul would have been quiet even if I had been using it in battle. The soul only awaked when used by its chosen knight. I put the Princess’s sword in my sheath, and continued.
My scum-covered adversary was gone, but I knew approximately where it had entered the river. On the bank were a great many tracks. This was apparently both the point of egress and entrance. The water here was fast and deep. Before I could think too much about it, admittedly something that is usually not too much of a problem, I took a deep breath and dived in.
The water was not too cold, though the temperature was lower than the air had been. I swam deeper and deeper– the river was far less shallow than I had supposed. I reached a level at which my ears began to hurt. The water was muddy though well lit by the noon-day sun. It seemed to me that I was able to hold my breath longer than I had whenever swimming on my home planet. Perhaps this was due somehow to the gravitational conditions of Ecos, or perhaps it just seemed that way because of all the adrenaline pumping through my system. Still, I was just at the point when I thought that I would need to surface for a breath, when I noticed an opening in the rocky bed of the river.
I swam down into the large hole and discovered a tunnel, which went downward some twenty feet and then turned. I realized that I didn’t have enough air in my lungs to last much longer, so I returned to the surface and took several deep breaths. I then hyperventilated for ten or fifteen seconds to fill my blood with oxygen. Now I was as ready as I could be. I dived back to the bottom of the river only to find that I had been swept down stream. I tried to go against the current, but it would have been impossible even had I not been encumbered by equipment and clothing. In the end I was forced to swim to the shore and walk upstream to the place where I had jumped in and do it all again. This time I went right to the bottom and into the submarine passage. At the bottom of the shaft, I gave myself a strong push off the wall and into the tunnel, and then swam for all I was worth. I didn’t know how long that passage might be, for I suspected that the creatures that regularly used it, while air breathers, were able to remain submerged for a long time. It was certain that they were far better designed for life under the water than I was. It wasn’t long before I was wishing that I had taken off my boots.
Amathar – Recycle and Repair
A reader pointed out a feature of Amatharian society that I had actually forgotten about– recycling. Everything in Amathar is recycled from the clothing they wear to the massive aerial warships. I honestly don’t think a society of billions of people is truly sustainable in the long run if they don’t figure out how to recycle or reuse their waste products.
In addition, the Amatharians repair everything. We forget that just a few years ago, almost every town in America had an appliance repair shop that fixed everything from electric fans to toasters. In 1955 you might pay $25.00 for a new toaster, but you could get yours repaired for 50 cents. Today you can buy a similar product (not exactly, because toasters were made much better in the 50s) for $20.00 but it would cost you $125.00 to get it repaired. The Amatharians don’t have that problem. They don’t have money. Young Amatharians learn how to repair things as training for later making things and inventing new things.