Lucas Smith is a character in His Robot Girlfriend. He is the son of Mike Smith and his deceased wife. While I was writing His Robot Girlfriend, my son was participating in Jr. ROTC at his high school. Because of this, I made Lucas a soldier. Other than that, he bares no real resemblance to my son at all. In fact, Lucas has a relatively small part to play in the story, so his character isn’t really all that fleshed out. He doesn’t appear in His Robot Wife at all. On the other hand, I have a big part planned for him in a future robot book.
Category Archives: Writing
Characters: Patience
Patience is the Robot in “His Robot Girlfriend”. Just as you might expect, she’s perfect. What I find interesting is that so many people tell me they love Patience– both male and femal readers. I guess she’s so pleasant that she’s just hard not to like.
Though her hair was covered with a clear plastic cap, he could see it was jet black. It matched two dark, carefully arched eyebrows and a set of long eyelashes. She had no other body hair. Her face could best be described as cute, with large blue eyes, a button nose, and thick voluptuous lips. She had the kind of slender and yet curvy body that was just not possible on a real woman. Breasts the size of apples just kind of floated there above a perfectly flat stomach. Mike tilted his head down. She looked anatomically complete.
Of all my characters, none went through as much of a change between first draft and published work as did Patience Smith in His Robot Girlfriend. Originally she was a rather Amazonian figure, physically very imposing, but much more submissive. Some might argue that Patience is still submissive, but I think we find out in His Robot Wife that she really isn’t. When I rewrote a series of short pieces into a long story, she needed to have much more force of personality so that she could advance the storyline of forcing Mike to change. A college professor once told me the main character is the one in the story who changes the most– and that would be Mike.
When I started rewriting, I just wasn’t happy with her physical description, so I started completely from scratch, using some of the actresses that fit that body type: Christina Ricci, Natalie Portman, Alyson Hannigan, as well as a young woman I knew as a model– so yes, there really is a Patience out there. I observed her as carefully as possible (without seeming too creepy) so that I could describe her movements and gestures– like when Patience bounces on her tip-toes or incorporates dance moves into everyday movement. Since then, I’ve tried to find a human being to at least think about when I write most of my characters.
Her personality couldn’t be based on a real person or even a person that I though up. She’s a robot. Her personality couldn’t be readily apparent. It had to be very subdued. It had to sneak up on the reader as it sneaks up on Mike. For that reason I think, quite a few readers find her a dull automoton– Imagine finding a robot as such. I think this is a failure for me as a writer. Still of all the fan letters I’ve ever gotten, I would say that easily 40% (written about any of the books) tell me how much they love Patience.
I mentioned before that the robot books are not my favorite Wesley Allison books. That being said, they are my most popular, so I will soon write another. Oddly, I have the hardest time thinking up plots for Mike and Patience, when plots just seem to pop up for my other books. The next book is planned to be a longer one, involving multiple characters from the previous books. Hopefully, that will work out well.
Characters: Mike Smith
Over the past several weeks, I’ve talked about the characters in Blood Trade, Women of Power, and finally Astrid Maxxim and her Amazing Hoverbike. Now it’s time to move on to His Robot Girlfriend and its sequels.
The story that became His Robot Girlfriend consisted originally of some short flash fiction and the characters were not very well developed. When I decided to turn it into a book, I completely rewrote it, adding an ending. I had to turn some cardboard people into real characters. In the case of Mike Smith, I just decided to make him– me. This was pretty easy, because the original was from the first person point of view. He was a school teacher, about five years older than me, when I started, and instead of being happily married with two kids, he was a widower with two surviving children. Personality-wise, language-wise, and description-wise, he’s about as close to me as I could get. As I neared the end of His Robot Girlfriend, I started feeling a little uncomfortable that he was so much like me, and I began working in little things that made him at least somewhat different. In the end, physically at least, Mike changes quite a bit. Patience really gets him into shape. I started at the gym, just in time to injure first my knee and then my achilles tendon. In His Robot Wife, Mike has a similar knee injury.
By His Robot Wife, Mike has become a fairly sharp-dressed, in shape retired fellow. This was a natural progression from the end of the first book. So, he’s no longer really very much like me physically, but he’s still pretty snarky.
Rachel Carson High School
Part of the setting for Astrid Maxxim and her Amazing Hoverbike, as well as the other Astrid Maxxim books, is Rachel Carson High School. It actually went through several different name changes. I wanted a female scientist and I didn’t want to go with the obvious Marie Curie. She needed also to be an American. I think Rachel Carson is the most important woman (maybe person) that most people don’t know.
Being a teacher, one of the things I enjoyed was playing with the school environment. All of the meals at Rachel Carson are gourmet meals. They have a Michelin Star chef. Every child is dedicated to learning. The students stay after to maintain the school and keep it clean. Every student is on a specific program– designed to lead them in a different direction in life. Some of these are revealed in the books.
Characters: Austin Tretower
In Astrid Maxxim and her Amazing Hoverbike, Austin Tretower is the new kid at school, but by the second book, he is firmly fixed as part of Astrid’s gang. He came to live with his grandmother in Maxxim City when his parents were killed in a car wreck. Austin is a little on the ungainly side and he is frequently distracted, losing his possessions and getting lost. He is very excited to have a friend who is a real live Maxxim, as his grandmother, a former Maxxim employee, has told him many tales of Astrid’s father when he was a boy.
By book 4, Austin is in the beginnings of a relationship with Robot Valerie. Only time will tell whether the two of them will make it work.
Characters: Christopher Harris
Christopher Harris is Toby’s best friend and is the only student at Rachel Carson High School who’s grades and test scores match Astrid’s. They both expect to contend with each other for valedictorian. Christopher, like Toby is also a licensed pilot.
Christopher, who doesn’t like to be called Chris, is an African American with short dark hair. Both his parents work at Maxxim Industries– his father as an engineer and his mother as a chemist. I wanted an African American kid among Astrid’s gang, to represent students at a typical school. I certainly didn’t want a stereotype, so Christopher is not into any sport involving balls, and he is most proud of his grades and his computer skills. He is in fact, an amalgam of several students I have had over the years.
In books two through four, Christopher has an on-again off-again relationship with Denise, though he’s popular with quite a few girls at school.
Kanana the Jungle Girl – Update
They say that everything has its time. I posted in April 2012 that I was hard at work on a story called Kanana the Jungle Girl. In September 2012, I posted that I was putting on the back burner. In March 2013, I went back and rewrote the outline for the project. Well, this past week, I pulled the manuscript out and started writing. It was plotted as a eighteen chapter book. In the past four days, I’ve written three chapters and combined a fourth into one of the three I finished. At this point I’ve only got five more chapters to go. I don’t want to jinx myself, but I feel like I can polish these off pretty quickly.
As I mentioned the other day, this story is a sort of reverse-Tarzan type story with a couple of differences. It takes place on a mysterious unknown continent on a vastly different alternate Earth (in fact, it’s a ringworld), around 1913. It features alternate world versions of a few historical individuals, notably Teddy Roosevelt. I optimistically said I thought I could finish it off in a month or two. At the rate I’m going now (knock on wood) it might be days. Watch this space.
Fabulous Los Angeles Part II
I’m still here, doing my damnedest to try and enjoy being away from home. It’s not horrible. The food is pretty good, and I don’t mind being alone, but I get the feeling that when I get home Monday night, I’m not going to feel like getting up early the next morning to be Mr. Teacher again. Fortunately, this is a short week.
Just a reminder that The Price of Magic is available for preorder at Amazon, Smashwords, Barnes and Noble, and iBooks. The release date is December 4th. Thanks to those of you who’ve already ordered it.
Characters: Robot Valerie
If you read yesterday’s excerpt, then you have a good idea of where Robot Valerie comes from. She was designed and built by Astrid and programmed using Valerie Diaz’s memories. This works spectacularly well– too well. It creates a living thinking version of Valerie that is a robot. Robot Valerie is quickly adopted into the Diaz family and the two Valeries end up acting much like twins.
Robot Valerie has a great deal to deal with in negotiating her way through life. People see her differently than she expects them to. She ends up being closer friends with Astrid than Regular Valerie is, since Astrid is always coming up with upgrades for her. Then of course there are those out there who would like to capture such a valuable piece of hardware, so Robot Valerie is under almost constant threat of kidnapping.
Fabulous Los Angeles
As I write this I am at a training program for the International Baccaloreate program in Los Angeles. And as you read this, I’m still here. Four days away from home. Add that to the fact that it’s the end of the quarter, with grades and everything else, and I haven’t had a chance to get much written lately.
I do get the afternoons and evenings off, so I’m planning to get some writing done them. What’s pissing my off right now though, is that even though I was promised free in-room wifi by the IB programs guide, the hotel want to charge $17 a day for it. Total bullshit. So I’m using my iPhone as a hotspot right now. Fortunately, now that I’ve fixed my home wifi, I have more data available on my 4G.
Well, I’m exhausted. Hopefully I’ll have something positive to tell you in a few days.