The Dark and Forbidding Land – Chapter 4 Excerpt

The Dark and Forbidding Land (New Cover)“Colbshallow, right?”

Saba looked up to see a big man standing a few feet from him. Saba was six foot three and this fellow was just as tall, but with broader shoulders and a thick muscular chest. Though the man was a few years older than Saba, he was only a private.

“That’s right.”

“I’m Shrubb, Eamon Shrubb.”

“Nice to meet you, Shrubb.” Saba slowly stood up and stretched out a hand, which Shrubb took.

“What’s your Kafirite name, if you don’t mind my asking?” asked Shrubb. “Um… you are a Kafirite, aren’t you?”

Saba nodded.

“I’ve never seen so many zeets before.”

“I don’t much care for that word,” said Saba, icily. He was still thinking about Yuah and was predisposed to dislike anyone whom he thought might be aiming an insult even in her general direction.

“Quite right. Quite right. As I say, I’ve never met many zee… Zaeri. I don’t have anything against them though. I never understood that whole ‘killed Kafira’ thing anyway. I mean, didn’t she come back from the dead? That’s a big part of the church. How could she have come back from the dead if nobody killed her? All worked out for the best, as far as I can see.”

“Do you always talk this much?” asked Saba.

“No.” Shrubb looked pensive. “Quite uncharacteristic really.”

“Good. My first name is Saba. What would you say to some fish and chips?”

“I don’t generally talk to my food.”

“Come on.”

Saba led the way across the dirty patches of snow that still covered the militia grounds, stepping over the low fencing, and out into the gravel street. Then they started down the hill on Seventh and One Half Avenue toward the docks. The street was lined on either side with workshops and warehouses. Most of the workshops had open fronts and one could peer in as one passed to watch men working at lathes, saws, and other pieces of equipment. Most of the warehouses on the other hand had their massive doors closed, as there was no ship in the port at the moment.

“So, you’re a new arrival, are you?” asked Saba.

“That’s right. Arrived two weeks ago on the Jaquesville.”

“Family?”

“No. Left home when I was just a lad. I was working on the docks in the city and heard about opportunity.”

At the bottom of the hill the road ended at the broad expanse of the dockyard. Though there was little work to be done here, there were several gangs of lizzie dock workers who were being trained by their human foremen so that they would be ready for the arrival of the next big transport. Saba kept up with the ship schedules from boredom as much as anything else, so he knew the next arrival was supposed to be the S.S. Windermere on or about the twenty ninth.

“So, you’ve been here since the beginning?” asked Shrubb.

“That’s right.”

“I was told you were the one to ask about things.”

“Who told you that?” wondered Saba.

“Willy Cornish.”

“Oh, well. As long as you don’t ask him about anything, you’ll be fine.”

In the center of the dock yard, two food carts had been set up and several patrons were queued up to purchase their lunches. Mrs. Gopling sold some very nice smoky sausages from her stand and Mr. Kordeshack sold fish and chips from his. Just this week, the Finkler boy had begun setting up his own cart to sell tea and biscuits, but he had not as yet arrived this morning. When the ships came in, these three carts would be joined by another: Mr. Darwin selling locally made leather products. Saba and his new companion stepped into the fish and chips queue and waited their turn.

“What will you have?” asked Mr. Kordeshack, a man of middle years with thin hair but bushy side whiskers.

“How about cod?” replied Shrubb.

“Um… we haven’t any.”

“How about a lovely haddock?”

Mr. Kordeshack shrugged. “Only Birmisian fish.”

“What do you have today?” asked Saba.

“We have some Birmisian swordfish. If you’ve eaten swordfish before, it tastes very much the same, though they don’t look much alike when they’re swimming. We have fillets of some of these common small fish that people are calling ‘clubbies’. It’s very nice and flaky. Then we have Xiphactinus, which is a bit like tuna.”

“I’ll have the clubbie,” said Saba.

“Me too,” said Shrubb.

Mr. Kordeshack handed each of the militiamen a large cone made of newsprint and filled with crispy golden chips, topped with three small battered fish fillets. They found a pair of crates next to one of the dock building and sat down to enjoy their meals. Dozens of workers from the nearby shops were now making their way to the food carts for lunch. About half of them chose fish and chips and about half of them chose Mrs. Gopling’s sausages. The Finkler boy pushed his cart out next to the other two. It was covered with breads and small cakes.

“So… the lizzies,” said Shrubb. “Trouble?”

“Can be.” Saba took another bite of fish. He noticed that Shrubb was already down into the chips. “Fast eater.”

“Boarding house,” said Shrubb. “Never lived by yourself?”

“Um… no. I grew up in the Dechantagne house. My mother was the cook.”

“The Governor?”

“Uh-huh.”

“She’s a tidy looking lady,” opined the private.

“Um… yes, I suppose.”

“You fancy her,” said Shrubb, turning to look at Saba head on.

“No I don’t.”

“Sure you do. I’ve seen that look on many a young man’s face.”

“And you’re so old and wise then?” asked Saba.

Shrubb shrugged. “She’s a bit scary though, eh?”

“Not really,” said Saba.

“I told you you fancied her. What about the Mayor?”

“I don’t fancy him either.”

The Crushing Weight of Summer School

The Price of MagicWell, I’ve just finished my second week of five doing three post-grad classes at the same time, and it is tough.  But I’ve only got three more weeks to go.

I’ve have a particularly hard time finding time to write this past week.  Available time goes first to classes.  Then we had family visiting and that took a bit too.

When school let out for summer, I cranked out chapter 15 of The Price of Magic in 11 days.  Chapter 16 took only 4 days.  Chapter 17 only 3 days.  But I’m barely into chapter 18, and it’s been 6 days already.  Maybe I can crank it up now.

The book was originally plotted to be 25 chapters, but I’ve combined two already.  Books 2, 5, and 6 were all plotted out at 25 chapters and they ended up being 21.  Book 1 was going to be 25 and ended up 23.  So we’ll just see.  In any case, if I can get going, I should be done with the draft soon.

Smashwords is now offering to put books up for preorder, even before they are finished, but I think I need to at least have my first draft done before I decide its delivery date.

The Dark and Forbidding Land – Chapter 3 Excerpt

The Dark and Forbidding Land (New Cover)Yuah Korlann turned away from the street and made her way up the stone walkway, through the large snow covered yard of the Dechantagne estate. In a way it seemed odd that she wasn’t living there. She had lived in one Dechantagne house or another all her life. She had grown up with the three Dechantagnes of this generation, gone to school with them, worked for them. She paused to hyperventilate for a moment before starting up the steps to the portico. She had a white fur coat over a new pale pink dress and a new, extra tight corset beneath that. Standing at attention outside of the front door was a lizardman, naked except for a yellow ribbon with a gold medallion around its neck. As she approached, the creature suddenly moved. She flinched, but it was only reaching back to open the door for her.

“Um, thank you,” she said, stepping hesitantly through the doorway.

Inside was a maze of boxes and furniture heaped up against the walls. She navigated through them and into the parlor, surprised to find it clear of any such obstructions. A large comfortable sofa and several stuffed chairs had been set up around a small table. There was even a hutch against the wall with a full bottle of sherry and several glasses upon a silver tray. A fire was burning in the fireplace. There was no drapery in place yet, but two large trees outside kept the light from being too harsh. Above the mantle was the only picture hanging in the room—a portrait of General Augustus Q. Dechantagne, the younger brother of Iolanthe’s and Terrence’s grandfather. “Good morning Yuah.”

Yuah turned to find Terrence standing in the doorway. He looked good. He had gained a bit of weight, though he was still too thin. He was neatly groomed and dressed in a black suit. His bandaged eyes were hidden behind a pair of dark spectacles. With his left hand, he held onto the door frame. Terrence had been captured, tortured, and blinded in the lizzie city of Suusthek, along with Corporal Bratihn. Ordinarily a magic user of Zurfina’s skill could have restored their sight, but they had been cursed by a lizzie witch-doctor and there was no priest in the colony powerful enough to remove the curse.

“How did you know it was me?”

“The smell. With all those potions and lotions you use, it had to be either you or a group of a dozen other women. And since I didn’t hear any chattering, I decided it couldn’t be the latter.”

“Very astute. I was just admiring the portrait.”

“Great Uncle Augie, is it?”

“Yes. Isn’t he the one that… um…”

“Lost his manhood to a musket ball. Yes. I think Iolanthe is trying to send me a message, but I don’t know what it is.”

“I’m not certain I would want to know.”

Terrence made his way to the hutch, stepping confidently but following along the wall with his left hand.

“Brandy?”

“It’s way too early for me to drink,” replied Yuah.

“Fortunately, it’s not too early for me.” He poured himself a glass and took a sip. “To what do I owe this pleasure?”

“I was hoping I could get you to take me somewhere. You really should get out.”

“Get out? I’ve just gotten in here.”

“You know what I mean. You’ve been cooped up inside, first in the apartment and now here, since the first snow fall.”

“Where do you propose that I take you? Birmisia isn’t exactly known for its lively social spots and it’s too bloody cold to do anything out of doors.”

“Well, we could take a stroll to Mr. Parnorsham’s Pfennig Store.”

“More lotions?”

“Notions actually,” Yuah replied pertly. “I need a bit of thread and a needle.”

“Of course you realize that you passed Mr. Parnorsham’s on the way over here.”

“Of course.”

He took another sip of his brandy, and then set the class down next to the others. “I’ll have to get my great coat.”

While Yuah waited, she pulled a hand from her fur muff and primped her hair. Within five minutes Terrence had returned, dressed for cold weather. Yuah took him by the hand and led him through the mazes of boxes and furniture to the front door. The lizzie opened it just before they got there.

“What do you think about all these lizzies your sister is hiring,” she said as they made their way across the front yard.

“I prefer not to think of them at all.”

Princess of Amathar – 1,000th Copy Sold

Princess of AmatharThe week I’m celebrating the sale of the 1,000th copy of Princess of Amathar, my first book.    I started writing Princess of Amathar many years ago– about 1986 or 87.  Like everything I was writing back then, I set it aside and didn’t touch it for many years.  After I started teaching, I pulled it out and started in to finish it.  That was about 1996.  It took me a year or so to finish and then a year to edit.  Then I spent several years trying unsuccessfully to get it published.  Then I set it in a drawer.  One day a friend and colleague suggested I publish it myself, and pointed to Lulu as a place I could do so without a large initial investment.  I published it in paperback in 2007.  I sold a copy to everyone I know– about 69 of them.  The following year, I discovered Smashwords.  I published His Robot Girlfriend first, and then Eaglethorpe Buxton and the Elven Princess— both of which were free.  Then I decided to publish Princess of Amathar.  This was early on in the Smashwords story (Princess of Amathar was the 2,287th Smashwords book).  Since then, it has sold moderately well as an ebook.  In many ways, it is my weakest book, and I think I’ve grown as a writer since then, but I still have a fondness for it.  It is after, the book that started my writing career, and it’s a book that I wanted to read.

You can purchase Princess of Amathar as an ebook for $1.99 wherever fine ebooks are sold.

P.S. I’ve also sold my 16,000th book overall this week.  I’m pretty jazzed about that.

Tesla’s Stepdaughters – Chapter Titles

In an alternate 1975, where men are almost extinct due to germ warfare, someone is trying to kill history’s greatest rock & roll band. It falls to Science Police Agent John Andrews, only recently arrived from the distant male enclaves, to protect them. As the band continues their come-back tour across North America, Andrews must negotiate a complicated relationship with Ep!phanee, the band’s lead singer; drummer Ruth De Molay, bassist Steffie Sin, and the redheaded clone lead guitarist Penny Dreadful, as he protects them and tries to discover who wants to kill the Ladybugs.

Chapter One: Shea Stadium
Chapter Two: The Science Police
Chapter Three: The Rosalie Morton
Chapter Four: Chicago Stadium
Chapter Five: The Palmer House
Chapter Six: Bolingbrook
Chapter Seven: Atlanta
Chapter Eight: Oxford
Chapter Nine: Doric House
Chapter Ten: The Northwestern Wilderness
Chapter Eleven: Portland
Chapter Twelve: The Interview
Chapter Thirteen: Lars
Chapter Fourteen: The Hollywood Bowl
Chapter Fifteen: Pearl Kerrigan
Chapter Sixteen: San Francisco
Chapter Seventeen: Mercy General
Chapter Eighteen: Central Park West and Beyond

Tesla’s Stepdaughters – Chapter 10 Excerpt

Tesla's StepdaughtersThe group dispersed, leaving Penny and Andrews alone.

“So…” she said.

“Yes?”

“We’re supposed to get to know each other.”

“Yes.”

“I really don’t see the point. It’s not like we’re going to find many things in common.”

“You don’t think so?”

“Well, no. You’re a man and I’m a woman, you’re a Science Police agent and I’m a musician.”

“Maybe we have other interests in common.”

“Like what?”

“Do you like hotdogs?”

“I prefer hamburgers.”

He shrugged.

“That’s just it though. We don’t need to have everything in common to get along. Two people can share time together without needing to do the same thing all the time. If I want to sit around all day reading H. Rider Haggard…”

“I love H. Rider Haggard.”

“Really? Which is your favorite?”

“King Solomon’s Mines.”

“That’s a good one. I like She. Well, I guess there was bound to be something we both enjoyed.”

“I suppose,” said Andrews.

“I’m sure we would both enjoy making out.”

“Making out what?”

“Making out… kissing? You do know what kissing is, right?”

“Of course.”

Penny moved close to him and then turned so that she was draped across his lap, looking up at him. “We kissed some the other night, just not on the mouth.” Placing her hand on his cheek, she guided his face to hers. He felt his lips pressed against hers and then they were parted by her tongue.

Andrews suddenly pulled back and looked at her. She stuck out her tongue, revealing a silver ball attached to a stud which pierced the middle of it.

“Oh…” recognition dawned upon him. “That’s what that was the other night.”

Free at Last, Free at Last!

The day before yesterday was my last day of the school year.  Although I start my next set of five post-grad studies on Monday, as of right now, I am a professional writer for the summer.  Now I can actually spend some real time writing.

This year wasn’t a bad year, but I’m a lot older than I was when I started.  Finishing up the year really took a lot out of me.  It took me 11 days to write chapter fourteen of The Price of Magic, and it was a long chapter.  But I’ve been working on Chapter 15 for 11 days, and I’m just now getting close to the end.  Hopefully, now I’ll be able to knock out the rest of the book quickly.

Senta and the Steel Dragon – Uuthanum

Brechalon (New Cover)

 

How do you pronounce “Uuthanum”?

Oo-uh-than-um

 

 

 

 

 

 

Voyage of the Minotaur (New Cover)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

The Price of Magic

 

 

The Yellow King

The Price of MagicAs I write this, I just finished chapter 14 in the draft of The Price of Magic.  It took me 14 days to complete which is more than most chapters have.  This is for several reasons: 1) It’s a long chapter.  Chapter 13 was short.  This one is much longer than the others.  2) It was an important chapter.  The words had to be just right, not the least of which because a major character dies.  3) I’m trying to tie up the school year and that’s taking a lot of my time.  As I write this, I’ve still got 7 days of school left.  I’m also on the leadership team, the academic vocabulary team, and the multicultural team.  Lots of meetings.  I’m also still taking post-grad classes.  This week finishes up the third.  Next week, the final three start– all at once!  I may finish this book.  If I don’t, it will be because I’ve died.  Watch here for more details either way.

Writing Speed

The Price of MagicWonder how long it takes to write a novel?  I’m hard at work on The Price of Magic.  Here’s how its been going so far.  Bear in mind that I’m working full time and taking 18 credits of college classes at the same time.

March 28  Begin

April 1  Chapter One Done

April 3  Chapter Two Done

April 7  Chapter Three Done

April 13  Chapter Four Done

April 16  Chapter Five Done

April 20  Chapter Six Done

April 25  Chapter Seven Done

April 26  Chapter Eight Done

April 28  Chapter Nine Done

May 2  Chapter Ten Done

May 9  Chapter Eleven Done

May 15  Chapter Twelve Done

May 16  Chapter Thirteen Done

Here I am at work on Chapter Fourteen.  The chapters are averaging 4100 words.  Some are longer and chapter thirteen is much shorter.  My outline is 25 chapters.  Watch this space for more info including a  release date.